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 Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2008 10:51 pm
Bethany's heart raced as the door suddenly opened. She wanted to run, oh, she wanted to run faster than the wind, but a strange mix of fear and curiousity held her firmly in place, much like a deer when it spots the headlights of a car and freezes. She clutched her book tightly to her chest, as if it would protected her somehow from whatever had opened the door. She could practically feel her heart beating in a frantic pace in her ears.
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Posted: Fri Aug 22, 2008 11:24 am
The lights within the manor slowly began to pulse, "Come..." a disembodied voice beckoned to the woman, "Come inssside..." it seemed to be coming from everywhere and nowhere at once.
Bethany felt something willing her across the street, before she knew it, she was within the manor's gate and nearing the front door.
Lightning struck and the gate closed behind her. A strange, creepy laughter rose up among the voices.
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Posted: Fri Aug 22, 2008 11:41 am
[Bethany sis still across the street. But it was so wonderfully creepy! Maybe just a minor edit? I don't mind if he somehow pushes her all the way past the front gate! LOL]
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Posted: Fri Aug 22, 2008 11:42 am
((Oh...my bad! Lol, thanks, I'll fix it. *editediteditFIXED!*))
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Posted: Fri Aug 22, 2008 11:55 am
Bethany did what any normal human girl would do... with her heart racing, she screamed just like a girl from a horror movie and tore across the grounds to the front gate, dropping her book on Quantum Physics.
She pulled on the locked gates to no avail, screaming at the top of her lungs, "SOMEONE HELP ME! THEY'RE GOIGN TO EAT MEEEEEEEEEEEEE!"
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Posted: Fri Aug 22, 2008 12:03 pm
"We wooon't eat yooou...yet" the voice said, seeming to get closer and closer to Bethany.
Lightning struck again and the front door suddenly slammed fully open, a cloaked figure stood in the light, it was me, "Look behind you!" the voices beckoned, "He's right behind you! Look out!"
I slowly made my way towards the girl, laughing sinisterly, the laugh getting louder the closer I got. My figured disappeared whenever lightning struck and returned once it settled. Once I was directly behind the girl, I grabbed her shoulder and pulled her to face me directly. Once she was fully facing me, lightning struck and I disappeared from her sight. I was now on the other side of the gate, waiting for her to turn back around, my eyes glowing red and for the first time, visible to an extent, though they weren't my eyes from my life before.
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Posted: Fri Aug 22, 2008 12:14 pm
[LOL! You are going to give her some kind of psychosis!!]
When he turned her around, she got a brief glimpse of him before the lightning flashed. She screamed again, no words, just a god-awful blood-curdling scream of terror.
Her heart racing, she looked to her left and right, trying to see where he went. Her body stiffenned when she didn't see him, as she slowly turned around, certain that it was an agent of death, out to kill her. She whimpered as she slowly turned around to face the gate, terrified of what she might see there.
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Posted: Fri Aug 22, 2008 12:19 pm
((Lol, hmmmmm, maybe! lol smile ))
When she turned around, I leaned forward, phasing my head through the gates. I leveled my now glowing eyes to where hers would be. Once she made eye contact, I slowly, and quietly said: "Boo." before disappearing again and laughing wildly.
The voices began to beckon her again, "Come inside! Inside! It'sss sssafe inssside!"
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Posted: Fri Aug 22, 2008 12:24 pm
When he said 'Boo', she jumped and stumbled backward, falling on her a**. Even though the voices said it was safe inside, she was /not/ about to take the chance, not after seeing what she was damned certain was an agent of death face to face. Even though the gates were still lock, she was bound and determine to get out of here some how. She get up and ran back to the gate, trying to pull herself up with only her hands on the metal bars so that she could go over the top. Unfortuantely, she was not succeeding. And she had forgotten all about her book laying on the ground near the door.
[Damn, someone needs to come out here and calm down the scardy-cat! LOL, and someone that doesn't look like the Grim Reaper!]
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Posted: Fri Aug 22, 2008 12:47 pm
((LOL, TheD0cter should be posting soon about that.))
I continued to laugh, standing menacingly on the other side of the street staring at the girl as she tried to climb over the gate with no avail, the voices continued to beckon her.
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Posted: Fri Aug 22, 2008 12:53 pm
[That would be good. I think his character woudl get along good with Bethany, if he can get her to calm down long enough to stop runing around screaming like an idiot. LOL]
Bethany didn't care. She was getting out of here one way or another. She would get about halfway up the tall wroght iron gates before she would start sliding back down again. Her hands were even starting to get torn up a little, tiny specks of blood forming on her hands.
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Posted: Fri Aug 22, 2008 1:03 pm
The laughing began to echo all around before suddenly ceasing. My form disappeared from across the street and the voices also ceased, even the lightning had stopped. Now it began to rain.
((Lol, that would be good. I'm not so sure your character is gonna get along so well with Haimon after this little incident, lol))
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Posted: Fri Aug 22, 2008 1:11 pm
[No, probably not. I may have to send Heartache an extra to my char sheet-- Terrified of Wraiths! LOL.]
As he and the voices suddenly disappear, she freaks out even more. And then... it starts raining. Her book was going to get ruined if no one found it soon. She tried a few more times to climb the gate, but it was no use. And she couldn't climb the brick walls surroundign the estate either. As the slow rain started to turn into a pounding thunderstorm, she walked to one of the furthest corners of the brick and mortor wall, praying that no one came to kill her. She huddled upm her back to the wall, her knees tucked up under her chin as she cried and whimpered while the storm thundered on.
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Posted: Fri Aug 22, 2008 1:20 pm
I was right....Mr. Spyridon wanted to have some fun. Sadly though whenever a wraith wanted to have fun it was normally at anothers expense. Walking outside into the pattering rain I found what I was looking for a terrified looking human female. "Excuse me miss I'm terribly sorry for Mr. Spyridon.....if you would like to get dry than please follow me into the manor. Oh and here take this." I said pulling one of my many overcoats out of my pack and holding it out to the young woman.
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Posted: Fri Aug 22, 2008 1:32 pm
She looked up at him. It was obvious she was still quite scared of this place after what she had just been through. Shaking from the cold rain, and from fear, she hesitantly took the overcoat and put it on. "Y-you aren't g-going to eat me, are you?" she asked in a squeaky voice. She then blushed when she realized what she had asked.
[Mah Hero! LOL]
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