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PostPosted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 12:53 pm


[I have t be off for a bit. Sorry. I'm watching the new M.Night Shyamalan movie. :The Happening.]

Descartes, Than chuckles as he sees his new perticapent activate their Sharingan. "That's not going to help you here.... These are clan techniques..." He says, laughing once again as he uses the same technique, Haunting, to appear directly before Shun. Once again draining chakra from as soon as he was before him. Though a slightly larger quantity this time. Grinning, he waits for the male's response.
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 1:16 pm


"Why would I need to copy your moves" he said with a smile, the sharingan had the ability to not just copy a mans moves, but predict them as well, with the combination of shuns speed he knew that this man was going to try that drainage technique on him. So he simply moved out the way by moving back. "You want to scare people" he said with a smirk on his face, sending one of his techniqes at the man. The man would be filled with fear now, so much fear that he wouldn't be able to move and change back to his usual form. This would be an easy way for shun to finish this bout up.


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PostPosted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 2:37 pm


"Scary scary~" Than says, as he stays still. Even with this technique that Shun was using, he still seemed to manage to be able to speak, though unable to move. His form never changed, keeping to it's ghostly transparent form as he breaks into laughter once again. The same laughter to which chills the bones of those that hear it. "You cant really think... That scaring me, is goign to make you win?!" His echoing voice declares, as suddenly his movement was granted again, having broken out of such a fear installing technique, he then moves towards his current player. Still, this was a game, and a fun one at that. This Uchiha did not really stand a chance, for the rules of the game stated that Than is the only one allowed to win. Vanishing without a trace, he once again appeared before his prey. This time, combining the Haunting attack. To which he literally appeared before his opponent in a blink of an eye, draining them of chakra without even a touch, with his Phantasmal Grip technique. To which he plunges his hand, at the moment he appears, into his prey's torso, draining of both chakra and energy, even at the second of contact.
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 2:48 pm


Shun smirked. "Fine, since you seem so willing to drain me" he said, Shun let the man put his hand into him but that wasn't really a smart move to get so close. The two tomoe in his eyes began to spin as a more advanced version of the techniqe took hold."Since you seem to be so persistant on draining me" he said looking at the man, the fear would return but this wasn't simply fear, it was havoc, panic, death. This technique would cause the mans neck musles to tighten and fall in on themselves, not instantly, but when shun weileded it. Since the man was quite predictable with his drainage. This technique itself could kill him. If the man did this again Shun would cause his neck to cave in, strangling him. It didn't matter if he was invisible or not, he could do such a thing.


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PostPosted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 2:58 pm


"You forgot to back up kid..." He says, shaking his head slowly as he moves his hand around inside of Shun. Nothing happened, no stranglation of his throat, since the technique was already broken as far as freezing him in place. There was no outcome. "What are you trying to do exactly? You didn't dodge... You didn't strike back... And all you're doing is threatening me as your energy is quickly drained away... Soon you'll be knocked out from lack of energy.." He laughs almost demonicly once again, shaking his ethereal head slowly as the white hair on his head fall to cover one of his inverted eyes. So only one white pupil, within the blackness of his socket could be seen on only one eye. Once again, he was waiting for a response as he stood there stealing what he could of this kid's energy and even some chakra to disrupt whatever techniques he planned next. This kid will learn soon enough, about what he's trying to fight.
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 3:09 pm


*ok so you become invisible right, but that's just invisiblity, not intangiblitiy,*

Shun backed up, he was getting a bit tired so decided that was enough of that. Quickly he moved with what seemed like super speed, slashing at the mans torso, he had forgotten that shun had blades in his hand. He then slashed down with the blade in his mouth. "Your hold didn't mean much, now your so damn close, how do you expect to get away. "He said to him, if the man didn't move he'd be sliced. Shuns speed was fast, beyond fast it was godly, he'd have to be careful if he didn't want to get hit by his blade.


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PostPosted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 3:17 pm


[ Descartes - An odd group of people, to be sure, this clan has no body, literally. Merely phantasms, they are still able to remain in the world of the living thanks to a grudge or pent-up desire. ]

Than remained where he was, chuckling darkly. This game was not as amusing as his last, but it was till funny by how naive this kid was. "You cant be serious? Plain old weapons and taijutsu?! How pathetic can you get..." Than asks, as he shakes his head slowly. Each slash simply passed right through his Ethereal form. Not one even making so much as a scratch against something that was only partially part of this world of the living. Than remained where he was, his hand held out, since the boy had still not moved away, it mearly meant that he could continue taking both chakra and energy from his current toy.
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 3:22 pm


Shun sighed. "Seems like I lose" he said with a smirk on his face, the man had drained some chakra from shun, a bit of it. So he disappeared, moving at such an increadible speed. But he wasn't finished, not yet. Quickly his eyes sped into action. "strangle him" he said looking down at him, this time this man wasn't connected to him, the vision was different for this man. Since he had no body it wouldn't affect his non existant body but his spirit instead.

((Meh, done if this does'nt work*


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PostPosted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 3:29 pm


[ I haven't a clue how you strangle a spirit... So I'll just freeze him in place again... ]

Than pauses a the point of looking up in the direction he believed that Shun had headed. Still having not lost any energy, or chakra for that matter thanks to the constant drain of him having been touching his ethereal form. "Are you done now? I'm getting a little bored again..." He calls, though unable to move, once again he had gained the ability to speak. He wasn't really trying to break free this time either since he could see that his opponent did not exactly have the abilities to stop him.
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 3:35 pm


Shun sighed, his sharingan gone. "I give" he said to him, he had nothing, nothing left to fight him with. With a stretch he walked off in the opposite direction. "Thanks for the fight, I needed to test myself against someone tough " he said walking down a road in hidden Wind.


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PostPosted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 3:41 pm


"Maybe you'll win when I gain a physical form~" He calls, raising a ghostly hand to wave at the departing game player. Obviously, he had won. That was not too big of a surprise. But now what was there for him to do? Turning around, he floated away towards the docks to explore a new place to which he could find another game to play. This was all an interesting ploy for him. Since being practically immortal now, he really had nothing better to do with his otherworldly time. Boarding a boat, with the slight yelps of the passengers within. He takes a seat and then demands that they get a move on towards another village.
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 10:47 am


Hidden Federation: Hidden Fire


Saosin Teres


Saosin wanders around an oddly hot village before falling to her knees. “Damn this weak body! Why didn’t He give me a stronger one? Does He plan on making me fail at taking over this world… in destroying this world? Damn you Adam!” Saosin screams at the sky before lowering her head to stare at the ground. Both of her hands grip the warm dirt beneath them as she glares at it.



“I shall not do as you tell me Adam! I am my own person! I do not need a man to control me!”

“I am not trying to control you entirely. All I ask is that you try and do what women do. Cook or clean sometimes. The only thing you MUST do is to help me in populating this world. I want to fill Eden with our beautiful children.”

“To Hell with what you want Adam! If I say I do not wish to reproduce then that is that!” “Lilith.”

“Do not call me by such a name. I no longer want to hear my or even your name… I am leaving Eden.”

“Li-”

“I said to not call me by that name!”

“Where will you go? This place is paradise. You cannot leave it. There is no better place.”

“Perhaps a better place is not what I search for. I despise this place. It is boring. Nothing happens here. We must live here forever and I cannot remain in such a common place any longer. I want to see something different. Maybe see a cloudy sky or feel rain upon me. I have read of such troubling things. Yet we have the same boring pleasant days. I want a rainy day so I can see why it is so wonderful to be without them. I want to feel pain. I want to experience something new. I wish this place were no more!”

“Stop this foolishness!"

“And… I wish to leave because of Eve. I cannot stare at that woman any longer. I cannot watch you gaze at her. You grow bored too Adam. You long for something new. You think she is prettier than me? Go and have her then.”

Adam falls quiet. His gorgeous golden eyes trailing over the fair black haired maiden before him and then the beautiful white haired woman dancing in the fields pass the brush he and the woman were hiding behind. “I cannot stray from you… no matter how much my heart aches for her.”

“Yes you can. You may choose who you want, now. Me or Eve.” Again Adam falls silent. Without another word, the black haired female is gone and Adam is left gazing at Eve.




“On that day I left Eden and denounced my name. I was Lilith no more and became nameless. After ages of searching I found a crude place. A place known as Edom. It was not in the form of a building in the beginning. It was a huge span of land that stretched out as far and wide as all of Eden. It was hidden from the garden by dark magic and the darkness in my heart permitted me entry. From that day I watched as Eve and Adam became one and slowly began to create offspring. Now and then a child would long for change and stumble upon Edom. Then I would take them in and sculpt them. My children were their children. I needed not to reproduce. Though, the more children I gained the more I longed for one of my own… one that I could call mine. One that didn’t have to change their hair or tear out their eyes to hide that they were Eve’s offspring. Eventually I left Edom and sought out Adam,” Saosin murmurs as she stares at the ground with less anger.



In the meadow where Eve often danced the black haired female found Adam alone. He was awaiting yet another child of Eve’s so he was alone. “Adam,” she croons as he turns to face her.

“Li- I haven’t seen you in ages.”

“It has been far longer than that.”

“How did you get here?”

“How else? I asked to return and so I came for you. I have been thinking and… I wish to bear your child.”

“How can I give you a child when I am with Eve? How am I to love one without a name? You took far too long to return to me.”

“If I give you a name for me then will you?”

“I do not know.”

“You may call me Lilith for now but until I have found a new name for myself, do not speak it to anyone but me. Not to the wind in my absence, not to the trees, and NEVER to Eve.”

“Lilith.”

“Adam.” Centuries pass and after being reincarnated time and time again, she still found no name for herself. “Adam,” Lilith calls out as Adam sits in the meadow.

“Lilith. I have been waiting for you.”

“I have returned yet again without a new name.”

“I have a name for you. I have been turning it over in my mind sometime now. You are my mistress so I will call you Mistress.”

“That is a fair name but merely a nickname. That does not suit me well. Not when I will soon have you in my arms again.”

“Wait no longer,” Adam cries out turning and lunging into Lilith.




“He gave me the thing I wanted most for so long after leaving him. He gave me a child; a child with hair unlike mine or his; yet, somehow, like mine and his. Unlike any hair or eyes I had ever seen. I gave him no name for years. Eventually, after calling him babe and boy for so long, I named him.”



“You shall be named Sai. You have a name now. Do not forget your name and you will forever be my son. If you ever forget your name I will not claim you. And if you should tell anyone your name but Adam and I then you shall no longer be my son and will no longer be welcomed here.” The small boy with dead gray eyes nods to his mother. Though he was nearly 121 years of age, he did not show it. His face was quite child-like yet his deep gray eyes held much knowledge. He did not play with the other children and hardly spoke. He was gloomy much of the time. One day, Sai leaves his home in Edom and wanders into the Garden of Eden. He sits by a large pool of water and breathes heavily a while before a shadows casts itself over him. He turns around to see Eve’s white eyes close to his face. He pushes away from her and splashes into the water as Eve laughs.

“What a strange child,” she laughs as Sai seems to smirk a bit.



“I watched as she slowly took my child from me. He would leave any time of day to go to her. Where ever she was he knew. He could find her without even thinking on it. For me it was sickening but yet a very good tool. Little did I know that my scheming to destroy Eve would lead to the loss of my son.”



“Oh boy with hair so long and fair; with white and black locks; who has an unknown mother and unknown father; who has no true home; what is though name,” laughs Eve as she is chased by Sai. He suddenly stops and looks down at his feet as Eve stops as well. “What is the matter?”

“Eve… I cannot tell you now. I will tell you of me once you have the child you carry.”

“Why? What is it?”

“What I tell you… you may not like. I do not want to put you both at risk if I should shock you… when I shock you. I wish it would not be that way but it will. I may very well harbor a secret that might tear this place apart.” Eve stares at Sai with both hands on his shoulders.

“Do not tell it… keep it hidden.”

“I cannot… I must tell you why when I come here… why it hurts me so much.” Eve’s eyes fly open. “That day when I met you by the pool of water for the first time… I could hardly breathe. It felt like the air here was suffocating.”

“The air here? The air is the same everywhere.”

“Where I live the air is also suffocating but it is exceptionally different.”

“Then… then… what can I do? How can I ease your pain?”

“You can’t,” Sai cries running from Eve. After Eve has her child, Sai finally returns to Eden. “Eve.” Adam glowers at Sai who winces away. Usually, Eve was alone when Sai visited but ever since he told her about the special thing he needed to tell her, Adam clung to her.

“Go home boy.”

“Adam,” Eve cries out.

“I must tell her. I told her I would. Do not be angry with me.”

“You moron! How can you do this? What about your mother? How can you do what you are planning on doing?”

“Because I do not love my mother! I do not care for my father either! I don’t even know him well! I’ve only heard about him…” Tears begin to fall down Sai’s cheeks as Eve gazes at him. “Eve… I am… that man… Adam is my father…” he whimpers as Eve looks at Adam. She did not remember having a child with black and white hair. She did not ever see the boy but by the pool of water. “My mother…”

“Stop it!”

“My mother is…” Adam runs over to Sai and slaps him across the face. At that moment, the sky turned dark.




“I was not around at that time or else I would have intervened. But I was trapped inside the body of a male by the name of Eric Donavan since a few years after Eve and Sai met. I did not know. If I knew… I would have stopped him.” Saosin sits upward and wraps her arms around her waist as she stares up at the red sky.



“Lilith is my mother…” Adam begins hitting Sai as Eve hollers inaudible things. Seeing as Adam and Eve were soul mates, she held the same level of power as him. With a burst of chakra from her hands, Adam is sent flying from on top of Sai. Eve then runs over to the boy and places a hand on his forehead. “My name… is Sai.” Sai cringes and then falls limp in Eve’s arms.

“Sai! Sai! Hold on! What is happening to him? What is wrong with him? Have I not pleased you Adam?” Eve continues screaming but Sai was long gone. He was no longer allowed in Edom and so part of him died. Without his other half he could not sustain life in Eden either. He was allowed life but in the Land of the Living where his mother was. He was not permitted a body.




“When I returned I found that my son had died and I was pained. That was when I decided to destroy Eden. I attacked with all of my children but even without Adam fighting on either side… I lost that fight. Edom was soon taken over. I was then exiled into a very large building in the distance of Eden. There I began planning again. My children were all dead and I was trapped. That was when Adam came to me.”



“Lilith… this is all that boy's fault.”

“He is not to blame. The same charm Eve used on you… she used on him. It was Eve’s fault that our child died.”

“I shall grant you another child. If you bore more than just that one child then I shall leave Eve but if you bore the one then I shall stay with Eve and mend what is broken.”

“Come then Adam.”




“Time passed and I bore not just one son but two. Adam destroyed and then rebuild the building that I was imprisoned in. We called the huge building Edom and our sons we named Rafael and Tybalt. For a long time I kept them within the building and would not allow them out but… I always felt something was missing and I also had the feeling that the one to give me a name truly of my essence was awaiting me. So I left Edom and went to the Land of the Living again. Eventually I returned empty handed. I did not find my son Sai nor my name.



“I love her!”

“I love her more!”

“Don’t be a fool, Rafael! I love her far more than you ever could!”

“What is this talk of love?” The two boys turn to Lilith and then lower their heads.

“Lilith.”

“Yes, it remains my name. What has happened?”

“Well… your boys… have fallen in love.”

“Wonderful! Rafael with Nimta and Tybalt with Crentua.”

“No, love. Rafael and Tybalt both have fallen in love with the same female.”

“Which one?”

“Neither of the ones you name.” Lilith stares at him and then looks at her sons.

“Who did you two fall in love with?”

“Angelle Herculaise…” murmurs Rafael as Tybalt’s gaze flashes to him.

“Why would you blab like that? Don’t you know how awful this is? Mother will banish us both!”

“See! You do not even love her enough to claim her!”

“I do! But I also love my mother!”

“That is why you should tell her the one you love! Whether she understands or not she wishes to know! So you would lie?”

“Silence,” calls out Lilith as they both silence and turn to her. She clinches both fists shut and stares down at the ground. “She could not stop at taking Sai from me… she had to take my only sons away as well? Not only that but through love? You have fallen for her daughters trap? You fell in love with that wench?”

“She is not a wench! She is Angelle and as her name suggests, is an angel!”

“Rafael,” gasps Tybalt as Lilith flashes in front of him.

“Go to your room and I shall punish you once I have spoken to your level-headed brother.” Rafael looks at his mother and then at Tybalt before running off to his room.




“I was naïve to have done such a thing. I should have sent Tybalt to his room and spoken with Rafael. Or maybe I should have sent Adam up to talk to him. I shouldn’t have let them out of my sight but I did. I spoke to Tybalt then found that Rafael had run off. Tybalt heard my furious hollers and fled from the building. I could not follow because I was exiled and Adam could not leave or be exiled too. Only they could leave.”



“Tybalt!”

“Rafael!” Tybalt and Rafael fight with swords as Angelle looks on in terror.

“Stop! Please! You are brothers!”

“I will win your heart, Angelle. Tybalt shall die on this day.”

“Cease this fighting brother! She has chosen to have neither of us! We must forget!”

“I told you you didn’t love her as much as I!” Rafael knocks Tybalt back when suddenly a portal opens beneath them. They fall through as Angelle yells from above.

“They are not permitted here,” announces a voice as Angelle sets eyes on a small boy.

“Brother!” A flash of light and then the portal was gone.




“I hoped that by the time I reached the Land of the Living that they would have appeared and I could scold them. I didn’t know they were fighting to the death. The two of them, since they were fighting in Eden were transported into two males fighting over a woman. Tybalt was the one killed while the other male got away. I was trapped inside of a woman named Juliet and so I had to wait for her to die before I could return. When I did I did not find Tybalt. The thing with souls is that you must wait for that soul to cross over before you can return to the realm of the living. Tybalt’s soul was vengeful and stayed behind while the soul of the male Rafael had been in, Romeo, died and was sent to the afterlife with mine, Juliet.”



“Where is Tybalt? Where is my son,” Lilith cries as Adam consoles her.

“He is trapped in the Land of the Living. He may not return until the wandering soul does.”

“Curse Eve and her daughter.” Rafael walks into the room with his head hung low as Lilith stands upward and flashes before him. She slaps him straight across the face and then states something to him, “You shall forget everything. You shall no longer remember Angelle nor Tybalt nor your father and I. You shall forget everything about yourself and become hollow until your brother has returned.” After stating that, Rafael collapses onto the ground.




“After that day, Adam wondered how I was capable of doing such things. I never told him but it didn’t matter. He and I both knew that my powers didn’t match his. I am stronger than him because I am stronger than Eve… but… am I stronger than Angelle? At any rate, I returned to the Land of the Living again but this time I got what I wanted. I was placed inside of a young Mizu girl and that is where I got what I wanted for so long. Naomi suited me. It had no link to anything. And the name was nice because the girl was almost the first to grant me the power I needed. If only her will weren’t so strong then I would have been able to release myself from her. Not too soon after her death I was sealed within a mystical power and so I did not return to Edom. The power was then sealed in her reincarnate. Harboring the name Naomi, I was nearly able to take control of her but she died. Actually, I was beginning to see interest in the Land of the Living. Thanks to Reina I have realized that I want this world for myself. This world that was shared by Edom and Eden. I want it for myself. I will take everything from Eve if I can. But… can I take out Angelle? As well as my sons? Rafael… and Sai…” Finally Saosin looks back down at the ground and stands. As soon as she does, she collapses. After a few hours, a woman notices her laying on the ground and lifts her into her arms.

“There, there young one. I will have you in better health soon.”




Saosin awakens in an entirely red room and cries out, “Hell!” She then feels warm hands gently pushing her down onto the bed. She turns her head to the woman and lets out a sigh. “What happened? Where’s Reina and the others?”

“I don’t follow.”

“Who are you?”

“Lady Mere. My, do you know where you are?”

“No,” Saosin’s voice cracks. “Can I have some water? It’s fairly dry here.”

“Yes.” The woman swiftly leaves the room as Saosin sits up.

“Where is this place? Where are the others? Did I…” Saosin was fairly confused. She didn’t understand any of it. How was this happening? She was so easily being taken over and left in the dark.

“Here you are.” Saosin smiles at the woman and takes the cup hastily. She then guzzles down the water and extends it to the woman.

“Please.”

“Yes. I will bring a pitcher this time.” Saosin couldn’t understand how she got so dehydrated. After drinking three pitchers of water Saosin sighs. She was replenished.

“Thank you Mere.”

“Lady Mere.”

“Erm, Lady Mere.”

“Not a problem deary. Will you be staying here long? Or are you just passing through?”

“I honest'y do not know what I plan to do. My memory seems to have escaped me.”

“Well, waizu child, I shall allow you to stay here for however long you feel necessary.”

“Waizu?”

“That is Japanese for wise or better put, wiser beyond years.”

“Ah.”

“Well then. I must be off to the deli, you will be fine alone?”

“Yes, Lady.”

“Lady Mere, every time. Fine then.” Saosin nods as the woman exits.



It had been days since Saosin had arrived in Hidden Fire and with each day her troubles seemed to fade. One by one. She slowly makes her way through the marketplace before stumbling upon the grocery portion of the market. “Hello, sir. Might I obtain some ham from you today?”

“Growing more and more everyday.”

“But sir, I am the same height as yesterday.”

“These eyes don’t lie, little missy. You have grown, you just can’t tell.” Saosin stares into the crimson and black eyes of the man before her and smiles. She remembers the first time she’s seen his eyes. At first they frightened her because she believed they were Uchiha eyes. So she never peered into them. After he told her they were not the ones she often gazed into them. She wanted strange eyes like the man’s. “Shall I finally tell you what eyes I have?”

“Oh yes, please do.”

“These are Ryuugan eyes.” Hearing this, Saosin drops her bundle. She places both hands over her ears as she stares at the worried man. For the first time in a long time, she saw it. The man reaches to touch her when suddenly, he freezes. A woman runs to his side and he instantly slices off her head. In the same swift swing, he slashes a man approaching from behind.

“With those eyes… I will be unstoppable,” thinks Naomi as Saosin cries out.

“No,” she cries as she slumps to the floor. The man places both hands on her shoulder and looks her in the eyes.

“What’s the matter.”

“Don’t touch me… please stay away from me. I don’t want to hurt you,” she bellows pushing him away and running. She runs for a good distance before the village is far behind her. With some distance, it would be hard for what she saw to come to pass, right? She wraps her arms around herself before turning from the village and continuing onward.




Hidden Wind


Saosin sits high above a village atop a hill. She had no intention of wandering into the village. She planned to suppress the being within her the best she could. “You cannot contain me. Once I ease the aching in my heart… I shall take the reins.” Saosin covers her ears again as laughter echoes in her head.

“I will kill myself in that case.”

“Trust me. You cannot kill yourself. And even if you do then I will just seal myself within someone else.”

“I will grow stronger to keep you in.” Naomi echoes a laugh as Saosin gets to her feet. Unknown to Saosin, she was doing just as Naomi wished. Saosin’s body was one of the best so far. Naomi began to believe that Adam was all for her taking over this place. He gave her a weak body that she could easily control and a naïve one. The girl was going to train and grow stronger and Naomi just had to sit back and continue sending images to the girl.

Saosin makes her way down the hill a ways before finding a forest. Her stomach growls as she looks around for nourishment. She find a grape vine, an apple tree, and a bush full of berries and takes from each. She clean the fruits before quickly devouring the fruits, literally, of her labor. She sits beside the small stream and stares into it. How could she get stronger? She didn’t even learn a single clan move. She then remembers her parents and lower her head. They were dead. She’d killed them in cold blood. Sure she could blame Naomi but if she were stronger or maybe if she’d left then things would have worked out. Maybe if she’d told her family what was wrong with her she would have been locked up and experimented on? Her father and mother would still be alive. She wondered for a long time how they died before understanding. The visions showed how they died. Soon the man with the beautiful eyes would be in Naomi’s clutches. And what about Reina and the others? Would they kill her then? Would they be able to? She wished Reina would have killed her… no. She wished Shaneko would have taken her life after seeing her so soon after those ninja had attacked. If only someone would have killed her… no. She couldn’t run from Naomi. She had to get stronger and fight Naomi back. She had to keep Naomi from taking control of her. She stands up and takes a diamond shaped hair pin from her hair and looks around through it. She spots a squirrel and snorts loudly. It looks over at Saosin who collapses onto the ground.

“Well, I can take control of creatures with my technique. How far can I go?” The only thing that emerged from Saosin’s lips was odd squirrel noises. First Saosin runs two villages from her body then she runs back. After that she releases the squirrel only to find that she couldn’t link with it again after releasing it. She then targets a bird and takes control of it as it flies through the air freely. Eventually, Saosin grows tired and falls asleep near the stream.


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PostPosted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 8:03 pm


Wind, Summit, Flame, Volcano, Mask, and Tree(Read in first few lines)


Raiken arrived on the coast line of the hidden federations Mask village. "Jutsu from this area would be quite unfamiliar to myself. I must familiarize myself with a jutsu from every part of this ninja world. Off to the halls." Raiken said as he began to trot down to the village library. After about a good hour or so he fled from the Hidden Mask and headed for the Federation's Hidden Tree Village.As he entered the village of the hidden Tree, Sinobi noticed that the vegetation in this area were extremely large. A normal forest tree stood like a towering building. "These moves will come in good use. The Hidden Tree's sword techniques and Earthen Based techniques will prove worthy in the future." Raiken said as he visited the library. And of course he then fled the village and headed for the nearby Wind village.Raiken quickly traveled to the scroll house and studied up on some quite relevant jutsu. After about two hours he left the library and headed for the Volcano Village.It was now night fall and Raiken had arrived in the hot natured village. As he walked around, he could feel he immersing from the ground, causing him to break out into a heavy sweat. "Let's make this quick." He said as he opened the scroll house door and studied until midnight that day. He would leave in the minuscule hours of the night and head for the village docks.Raiken arrived in the storm village seeking even more jutsu. He ventrued to the village library, but on his way he thought of a title for himself when he would go missing ninja,"Raiken Sinobi, The Storm Ninja." Raiken thought as he entered the library and studied upon some things that would help him control the skies and try to live up to his "Storm Ninja" title.As Sinobi stepped off the boat and onto the dock that lead to the small, Hidden Wind Village, he allowed a grin to spread across his face. ‘Gian is too…Tiring, to use constantly…At least until I get a proper heart!’ he had declared during his time on the boat. That was the conclusion he had come to after his battle with Onishi. Thus, the need for othis techniques arose – and while he could’ve gone to any of the othis villages, he chose to improve upon his forte – the blade. And that was what leader his hise to the Hidden Federation, or more precisely, one of the smaller villages that focused more upon the sacred styles of the blade. his thoughts were put on hold however as he noticed a shadow suddenly loom over his.“I take it you’ve come to learn about the Sword?” A voice asked, vigilant and somewhat strong-willed. Eithis way, Sinobi merely nodded. “Then let us begin,” The voice answered and the Sinobi boy extended a hand behind his to draw out his cleavers only to hear a firm ‘No!’ from the form in front of him. “You’ll learn the way properly first, with a REAL sword,” he said and a moment later, a katana in a black heath was handed to his.Frowning, Sinobi took the sword, drawing it out to examine the silver blade before heathing it once more. “What’s your name?” he asked, looking back towards the shadowed figure with a curious glance.“Shichi'nintai Bankotsu,” The form answered as he stepped into the creaturelight, thus revealing himself. “Also, before we begin, I would like to ask if you have any intention of visiting the Hidden Tree Village?” He added and upon seeing the shaking of the blonde’s head, he smiled. “Then we shall begin,” He cooed and in an instant, had his blade drawn and was upon Sinobi in an instant, who had swiftly brought up the scabbard to block the blow. “Very good! Already utilizing every part of the sword is one part of proper swordsmanship; your stance however, is lacking!” He shouted and kicked the blonde in the stomach, sending his stumbling back.Gasping, the boy panted for several moments before rising to his feet, his hand now reaching for the blade of his own katana which he drew out, dropping the scabbard as he held the blade out in front of his, a smile now decorating his face. Already, he was beginning to like this man’s style of teaching. Hands-on work always was the best way to learn in his eyes, and with several swift steps, ruhed forward, sending the katana forward in a strong thrust, with Bankotsu parried with some effort.With a loud bump, the base of the ferry landed on the fertile land of the creature village. He stepped onto the plateu, smelling the burnt ground. He was the only incoming passenger, and by the looks of it this place wasn't a really visited village. With a slight sign he slowly walked off towards the centre of the city, which looked like a ghost town where all the ghosts left long ago. As he walked around he felt a presence around him. THe boy chose to ignore it as he kept heading over to the village. Finnaly when he reached it the boy began to feel really weird and non-understanding. The village was flooded with shinobi. It wasn't even funny as to ammount that everysingle person was INSIDE the village and only him, and maybe another man that was leaving just now was outside. The boy kept walking until he finnaly sensed the presence once more, Sinobi felt strangely focused on it as he saw a large man walk out in fron of him, blocking his pathway. You aren't from around here....get out of here boy, we dont take kindly to the likes of you around here (i love that expression xD). The man slowly uttered the words as thought he believed that Sinobi was mentally retarded. The boy didn't show any expression, instead he slowly lifted his hand, bringing it up to his eye and almost immidiatly muttering the words Junsei Kokoranguke No Jutsu, with that he felt his free mind leave a picture of the man's death straight into him. He saw his eyes blur, slowly turning white, his skin turned pale, and he slowly withdrew and started to run away. Sinobi slowly smirked, he was finished with the silly hateful stalker but strangely he didn't feel the presence lift, and instead the boy felt that someone just noticed the whole conflict and was now more interested in the newcomer then ever. Finnaly he heard the follower sound off something as apparently he himself walked out of a nearby building. Weird genjutsu, what did you use the man uttered. He rather looked weak and brittle, compared to Sinobi who was buff and mean looking, but that didn't stop from the boy sensing a strange presense of power around him. " what do you want from me" Sinobi answerd straight forwadly, he didn't want new friends he just needed jutsu's, a special one that was written to be exaclt yin this village. Dont play cold with me boy, im not your match, i know exactly what you came for and i tell you that its impossible to achieve without an *overseer* in the village, we don't like toursits, expecially shinobi who look forward to steal our technuiqes, im only talking to you instead of attacking because you have a sence of worth, and you aren't cocky enough to be weak. It's simple i will allow you to learn one technuiqe from us, and then you will leave. End of discussion With that the man threw a scroll at him. As Sinobi gazed down he read Burning Daydream: allows the user to appear as an avator upon the target, expsoing their natural fear of fire. Genjutsu level A. Sinobi grinned and slightly looked up to thank for the generous gift, but soon enough noticed that the man was long gone, as much as there wasn't even a sign of his chakra around. The boy felt alone once more, and started to head out of the village to find a proper place to examine the technuiqe. As he left the village, the boy felt a rising sensation crawling up the spine, with a weak smile he understood that he had an unsatisfied thrist for training and learning. And with that in mind he noticed a giant molded rock, that looked almost too good to be true. Sinobi swiftly ran up to the rock, examining it from all directions, it looked good enough to appear as an avatar, seeing as how this jutsu first required something enourmous to appear as an avatar, like a training wheel for the follow through. As he showed his back to the rock, the boy looked at the handsigns, immidiatly imagining the following chakra use and flow and started his first try at the jutsu. With a long sign, Sinobi focused all of his chakra around his spine, made 10 seals total and let out the name of the jutsu. His body suddenly felt strange as the chakra simply evaporated creating a smoky effect around the back of his body, a small burst of fire appeared and then it suddenly stopped. Sinobi muttered a curse as he remembered a passage in the scroll that he forgot about. He should try to lean against the rock, or any basic physical contact for the technuiqe to work *well*....at first at least. It sounded like a splendid idea, so Sinobi without any regrets leaned against the rock and prepared himself for try number 2. The rock was seemingly hot, but then again everything else, even Sinobi seemed about the same temprature. Finnaly, the boy blocked all of the annyoing thoughts out, imagining his chakra flow once more. It was quite perfect concidering that up to now he could manipulate it almost perfectly. He just needed a few more paractises and soon enough he could do wonders with his chakra manipulation...Sinobi growled, as he caught another useless thought, but finnaly he got himself together and imagined the flow once. As he pictured the small rivers, as the appeared and sent most of them towards his spine. Once more he let out his chakra, imagining pure fire flowing out of his body, the rock started smoking, and soon started showing signs of combustion all around the surface. Sinobi struggled slightly as the chakra was still not fast enough, so he started another effect that was appropriate for this jutsu. The boy forced the chakra in the rock to grind against each other, forcing sparks and speed around itself. The rock started evaporating, beads of water began running down around it. It slowly but definetly appeared to start to burn, and soon enough the fire started spreading all around the rock, enveloping it in flame. Sinobi concetrated on the ammount of flow he let in, increasing it when appropriate and cutting it short as needed fit. Finnaly the rock was evenly burning, and with another slight struggle, Sinobi forced the fire to rise up, mimicing a metereor that was entering earth's space. Finnaly Sinobi felt that it was appropriate enough and immidiatly after began to shape the fire into a person. His chakra struggled for the right to be lazy and remaing the current shape it was now, but Sinobi's iron will was too much as he started to make an arm, and soon enough a leg. That was the hard part, after that he could just copy the shape and spread the apart. But the difficult just bumped up as Sinobi was forced to control the fire, as to make burning process to appear as ONLY the avatar and nothing else. The boy, after grinning enough to show mos of his teeth started to manipulate fire towards the top of his body, creating a mishapen head. With some artistic skills Sinobi sculpted the head, and desided that he need not put the hair in, that gave the fire appearance of a true god or a impersonation of fire and stupid stuff like that to men that were afraid of elements. He didn't even put any other physical features like a mouth or a nose to force the same effect on everyone else. Finnaly he copied the legs and the arms, and allowed the rest of the fire to connect everything and make a really noticable torso. Sinobi looked up at his creation, noticing that it looked quite the part, the overall shape of it looked just plain petryfying and the ability to manipulate its moves and even sounds Sinobi felt complete control over the jutsu. He let the fire burn out, and decided that it was time to try it without the help of a solid, stable base for the avatar. The boy closed his eyes, he figured out his base for this genjutsu He was going to imagine this exact rock standing behind him as an imaginary physical help, and he would manipulate the chakra around it, creating the nessesary avatar. Sinobi immidaitly started picturing the rock around in his mind, shaping it as he desired and finnaly making a nessesary solid look about it and placing it behind him...in his mind. The boy felt the so called solid appearance of the boulder and started to force the chakra behind him, as he felt the warmth of the fire that was forcing out of his body Sinobi started to feel more inclined towards completion. The boy started to force the blue substance to grind against each other, making the the exact same combustion, and immidiatly letting the chakra turn into the flaming appearance it needed to have. After a while the boy began to shape the flame into the avatar, he felt the fire lazily move into place, building up the avatar eventually. The shinobi widened his eyes, looking up at his creation, it looked stable enough. With a nod the boy had but one thing left aobut this technuiqe, its speed of production. And with that in mind, he started to create and uncreate the avatar over and over again, shaping the exact same kind of fire god, or so it would appear until Sinobi had memorized the follow up COMPLETELY. With a final try Sinobi noticed that his total time of making the jutsu was just udner 5 seconds. That was a great time concidering such a difficult move was almost impossible to produce even under 10 seconds by most genin and even jounin had to take sometime to bring their chakra up to the nessesary point. With that Sinobi made an imaginary bow towards himself and walked off towards the coming ferry he had another bunch of stops towards a bunch of villages form the federation.“Your offense isn’t lacking, though your defense needs some work,” He commented as he Fura’s blade off with his own then sent a slash towards his, which in return, Sinobi blocked, then puhed off before returning his own swipe. For several minutes, their blades collided in the creaturelight, creating sparks and causing the noises to resound for miles. Attack! Defend! Counter-attack! All occured time and time again. After what felt like hours, both forms still stood facing one anothis, their swords drawn. However, neithis was exactly unscathed; Bankotsu had one flamey line across of his forehead while Furan’s body was covered by a multitude of smaller cuts hise and thise. Evidently, but until now, Bankotsu had been merely playing around with his ‘prey’ though that had been his undoing in this situation or at least, it was how he got the gash on his head. It was then that Bankotsu opened his mouth to speak:“You’re certainly improving as we go along,” He admitted as he paced around the blonde, who never for a moment let his back face him. “But you still make to many unnecessary movements,” the swordsman advised as sighed. “You make so many steps whise only several distinct moves will get you the same result. Of course, when you’re running about throwing knives and stuff, that’s fine and dandy, but when you’re wielding the sword in close spaces, you don’t want to move carelessly!”Thise was the sound of shuffling steps and an instant later, Sinobi had his blade pressed against his current mentor’s. “I do thank you for that tip!” he cried shrilly before beginning to apply a greater amount of force, thus beginning to push back Bankotsu’s blade before raising his leg and sending his foot directly into his gut, just as he had done to his previously, thus effectively sending the man stumbling backwards and a then Sinobi was standing above him with his blade pointed directly at his face. "Is this enough for you?" he inquired as he then heathed his sword upon receiving a brief nod. he then strapped the scabbed to his side then took several steps back. Apparently it was now that the 'real' training was set to begin.“It will suffice, I suppose,” Bankotsu murmured as he dug his sword into the ground, pulling himself up to his feet. heathing his own blade a moment later, he looked towards Chiho. “You’ve proved yourself worthy enough to learn our ways,” He said as he smiled, but paused, as Sinobi was about to turn away. “However, thise are still a few things that I can teach you. They don’t really deal with sword fighting, but in their own way, they’re far more potent than one would think,” he said as he grinned. “But, I’ll show you some othis time when we’re a little furthis from the village…for now however, you should put your swordsmanship to good work! Thise’s dozens of warriors hise that would probably have something to teach you, and thise’s one I know that can teach you a rathis interesting technique,” Bankotsu said as he slung an arm around Sinobi in an affectionate manner.“Look for the woman known as Hwang Melast – trust me, you cant miss his, and thise’s no shortage of info on his in the village eithis.”Sinobi seemed silent for several moments as he heard this, shifting the kiseru in his mouth that he had placed thise several moments previous. “And exactly what kind of person is this Melast woman?” he asked, a curious brow rising as he exhaled a small puff of smoke in front of his.“Well…you know those Dominatrix kind of chicks? The ones that love tight clothing have a whip and are usually a b***h to most people? Yeah, he’s that kind of woman – at the same time however, he’s damn good with the sword and his style fits his in a way I suppose. Now I hope you’re not intimidated now,” Bankotsu said with a snicker as he released Fura then nudged his forward. “Now go.”Nodding slowly, the blonde turned then started off towards the village; though his thoughts on this Melast figure remained rathis mixed. Less than an hour later, after questioning several individuals, the Sinobi boy found hisself standing in front of a rathis lavish mansion. Apparently, this Melast person was far from poor. Grinning, he took several steps forward and a moment later a blade shot from somewhise in front of his and shot into the ground in front of his, and the blade soon retracted, and as Chiho’s eyes followed it, he saw it reform into a sword. his gaze then moved from the blade to the hand holding it and his eyes widened. Thise, standing before his stood a rathis scantily clad woman, wearing what seemed to be no more than patches of purple fabric and string…The steel pauldron on his shoulder was probably the most ‘covering’ thing he wore."Oh yes, dominatrix was the perfect description for this woman."“State your business!” The woman shouted, one hand moving to his hip as he stared at Chiho."“You’re Melast, right? Bankotsu told me you’d be able to teach me something,” Sinobi started as he withdrew the Japanese pipe from his mouth, smiling."Melast frowned for a moment then moved a hand to his forehead. “I don’t have time for this…That man should know better than to send me pupils without notice,” he muttered to hisself, but eventually stared at the stitched boy. “But then again, if he sent you to me, then you must be a capable boy…Fine. I’ll give you my time. First, let’s see your sword.”Nodding slowly, Sinobi drew out the weapon as he held it out in front of his, watching as Melast stepped forward to examine the weapon. “While it’s a little better to use something with a straight edge, I suppose a katana will work just as fine,” he said as he ran a finger along the metal blade. “I know this may sound rathis odd, but I want you to break down the sword with your chakra…No…” he said pausing for a moment to rethink his words. “Rathis than break down, allow your chakra to run through the metal and break it into segments and once you have that done, don’t allow everything to fall apart. Instead, keep the blade linked togethis with your chakra…just divided, you see?” “I suppose…” Sinobi nodded slightly as he merely nodded his head. he then focused the flow of his chakra, allowing it to move through his hands, and eventually, to the blade itself....
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..Soon, the blade began to vibrate and shift, several fissures in the metal forming, and with final burst, the sword’s blade broke into cleanly-cut slates, levitating weakly for several moments falling to the ground in a clatter. In a rathis dumbfounded fashion, the blonde merely stared at the broken-down blade. “It broke.”“Obviously!” Melast muttered in a matter-of-factly way. “You didn’t focus enough chakra…Well, you managed to break down the blade, but you couldn’t keep the separated parts linked togethis,” he said as he then drew out his own sword, swinging forward so that it extended. “See? While my blade itself extended and in separate chinks, you can see that thin line of chakra that keeps every bit connected, right?”Holding the handle of his sword, Sinobi gathised up the pieces again and upon focusing his chakra, managed to get them to link back togethis. Ready to take anothis attempt, he sent his arm forward, and in effect, the sword and upon releasing a burst of chakra, the sword extended and bent almost like some manner of metal whip. With a flick of his wrist he drew the handle back and the blade retracted, soon forming togethis again as a whole.Did ya hear? Thise's some legendary strong guy training at the Hidden Arts!" A pair of passing maids gossiped to one anothis as they walked by the courtyard, glancing at Melast for several moments then at the boy training with his before moving on. A moment later however, the Sinobi boy whirled about on his heel, rushing for the docks."O-Oi! Whise the hell are you going!?" Melast scowled as he frowned."I just want to check something out! I'll come back to finish my training anothis time, alright?"As he took a step off the boat, Sinobi noticed that this village more resembled kohona than a wasted, burnt forest of volcanoes. This new background appeared more friendly to Sinobi as he walked into the seemingly quiet village and noticed a bunch of scrolls on a stand. They looked like trash, but Sinobi had a lot of luck with the paper trash that was thrown out from the members of the village. As he took the 3 scrolls, the boy chose to dissapear into the outside area, to understand them more carefully. As he took a step out of the village Sinobi suddenly noticed that below him was...earth. Why was earth at least 30 feet below him instead right below his feet was a very strange thought. He remembered the ferry slowly drift up as he was sleeping durring the trip, but he jsut thought they were going up river or something...Sinobi quietly burted out something unreasonable and countinued to walk away from the village. Finnaly where he found a nice quiet cirlce of a forrest, Sinobi left his other thoughts in the dephs of his mind and began to focus on the task at hand. The boy grabbed one of the scrolls and began to read. Ascention: allows the user to fight on a higher plane of inteliigence. Also as a side effect is able to read chakra surges anywhere near him. Sinobi was surprised over at this technuiqe, he felt that this was one of the jutsus that he had to learn, no matter what and so he began to read the basics of this jutsu. basicly it was more of a state of mind then an attack or defensive jutsu. As Sinobi read on he understood the chakra pattern and the follow thrugh of it Apprently after activation it was almost permanent. And with the pattern in mind the boy began to force his chakra outside, creating the nessesary state of personality for this jutsu. As the paper said, the user was suppoced to force some chakra into his brain, permantly leaving it there, making it expand the power of the brain and also show what the brain doesn't let you see. The shinobi began to slowly but definetly flow the chakra in, letting it enter his mind. Sinobi felt an urge to stop, seeing as how he felt heavier and slowly started to feel dizzy. His vision began to blur, and his head felt like it was about to melt. The boys eyes began to dim, while focusing on the same point, as he slowly drifted into a sort of a trance. As he kept allowing the chakra to walk into his brain, Sinobi felt more and more disturbed. Even as his mind slowly drifted into insanity the boy began to feel dead and decayed. Suddenly he stopped out of plain numbness and mental pain. But whatever he was doing to his body was working well. Sinobi felt more control over his body, and started to feel chakra enveloping around him, he remembered a passage of the scroll. This was the first step, the user was to be able to feel his own chakra as it would appear in its true colour. As he looked around himself he noticed that the colour appeared to be simple grey, but it only appeared to his eyes, if he was to go back to the normal vision of his eyes, the chakra would not even show and when let out would appear the same normal colour as it always did, bright blue. Finnaly he poured a little bit more, and immidaitly stopped as he started to feel blurry and felt like passing out. That was his own limit and as he stopped the boy felt the true version of this jutsu. It was this incredible feeling that kept on for a while longer, the feeling of control. His grey aura slightly glowed brighter as he felt happyness. Sinobi was ready to move onto the next technuiqe. And so he opened the scroll and began to read. Fear me: Allows the user to stop the a genjutsu canceler, allowing his own genjutsu to keep working. . Another technuiqe that the shinobi was obligated to learn, or at least he felt that he had to. And thankfully enough the boy had a perfect training condition for this excersize, his seal of flame. Sinobi moved his left hand, the one that had the markings of the seal on them. As he looked over it, remembering all the training he had in the hidden flame, Sinobi placed the hand on his owns chest, finnaly forming the flame flow towards the open the wound. Exactly at the same time his chakra flow let out a bunch of the substance towards the palm, creating the nessesary mix underway and making the flame flow out fo the wound, as soon as enough of the flame was done, Sinobi felt that the mark was placed, and immidiatly felt the druggy feel of the mark clutching him. With that Sinobi touched the mark, slightly mudging it, only slightly so itll allow him to retreive it. Finnaly Sinobi started concetrating on his flow, pouring it all onto the mark. For the restoration process, he was suppoced to send the ammount of chakra equal to the ammount lost into the genjutsu if it was on him, and if it wasn't on him like the same exact seal of flame. He needed to make a mind connection with it before hand, and then making it spread itself out tighter making it exact again. So Sinobi decided to orginally activate all of his genjutsus with more chakra the required so that he will be able to restore them using the extra chakra as backup. UNfourtinatly he could only pack enough chakra in each technuiqe for only one maximum fix, and after that he couln't access it no more but one was quite enough seeing as how the opponent will be confused enough, and while he is dispelling the same jutsu again Sinobi would have a sufficient enough ammount of time to strike down the opposition. And after that small thought the boy began to countinue the flow fo chakra into the seal. As he felt his chest glow up with the substance, the boy began flowing energy into the seal, slowly fixing the flame smudge, by making the chakra force the true form of the seal, magnetizing the flame towards it, and elminiating anything else that could screw up the current seal. With a slight glance onto his chest, Sinobi noticed that the seal was slowly falling into place, and as soon as he completed the contraction of it the boy started to struggle with the effects of the seal once more. With a quick wave of hand the boy let go of the dizzying clutch of the seal of flame and started to move on towards the second part of his training, fixing the genjutsu that has alerady been placed on an object. As the boy stood up, he placed the seal of flame onto a nearby tree. Leaving the flamey mark on its trunk. He felt that it was harder to parctise this without a partner but he slowly moved the thought away, smudged the seal, took three steps back and began to regain contract with the broken mark. Finnaly he eased his mind, entering the state of Ascention, and began to notice the connection line between him and the drawing on the oak. Sinobi followed thorugh the line towards the seal, and let out the hidden chakra, making the energetic part of the seal begin to glow ocne more. With that Sinobi alloowed the flame to crawl and slide back towards the chakra with the great process of magnetizm and soon enough began to see that the chakra marking started to colour red, as needed. Finnaly the boy walked up to the trunk, noticing that his mark was completely and utterly formed, almost as he never even touched it. With that the kid kicked the tree slightly, enveloping his success and countinuing on towards the last scroll...Divine Punishment:Able to cause the person to go threw an intense genjutsu that allows them feel all the evil that is in their hearts. If the person is pure however, it will not work at all. Sinobi read. This wasn't really needed but he felt that this jutsu should be learned also, as he was bound to find some interesting characters that would suffer from this technuiqe. As he kept rading on, he found out that this was quite a weird chakra blueprint required for this jutsu. Supposivly he needed to imagine god or any kind of signs of god's presence like a lightning or a halo, while activating this jutsu. Sinobi went with lightning. And so first he started to imagine a giant lightning bolt crashing down from the creatures, and impaling the ragged earth with its unimaginable power. That was all he needed, as he memorized the picture, the boy felt a person behind him as he turned around, he noticed a greedy looking shinobi admiring him. You kid, he said smirkingGive me all your money, you clothes or i will kil youhe yelped loudly. Sinobi let out an angered sign, what was up with the hidden federation villages not liking outsiders. Sinobi, looking VERY pissed off walked up to the man and placed his hand right in the middle of his forehead. Wh-What the hell are you doing he blurted as Sinobi yelled out the name of the jutsu, while imagining the same giant bolt hitting the ground. The man suddenly went pale and screamed in searing pain as he imagined his deed lay bare to the pure judgment that was to come sooner or later...Sinobi smiled slightly as the petty thief sprinted away, falling and stumbling at each step whyile the genjutsu still flashed in his mind. With that Sinobi looked over at the three scripts, imagining that someone else needed them, and after a small travel the boy arrived back at the place he found them. With a swiftl gaze around, Sinobi put the scrolls back and walked off towards a nearest ferry, he had somewhere else to be... As Sinobi stepped off the dock he noticed a diffrence in the background that he saw the last time he was here. It was much...hotter. A lot of volcaninc eruptions happened here durring his absence, and so begin the only one out he took a step onto the molten earth, and headed out towards the village. The boy noticed that there was a little bit more population outside now as all of them conjure fire or cleared the molten lava off the cracks, doing some kind of...cleaning process. Sinobi was quite surprised by such a way of saving their earth from burning down, but he had no time to stay around and watch. There was training to be done, and he wanted to finish up this village as soon as possible. As the boy found his old place he noticed something strange. Apprenalty the vilagers chose this training spot to show off their jutsu's. But seeing as this place was hidden, this place is suppoced to be unknown to outsiders. THis gave a breath of fresh air to Sinobi, he could finnaly get his training done witohut getting into any kind of trouble in this crazy village. And so he began to search for a good genjutsu to boost his attacks. Double Vision: Forces the target to get into a state of seeing doubles of every single thing their eye catches. Useful against low rank shinboi, seeing as how in their early rank they do not do much hand eye coordination training, or any protection from genjutus.. With that Sinobi stood up, it was fa irly simple technuiqe that didn't take even any preparation. Simply said, the boy got a hold of his chakra flow, and slowly forced it upwards, towards his eyes. As the river of chakra reached his head, the boy felt a little bit dizzy, but prepared nonetheles. Soon enough the boy let out a small chakra bolt that slowly but defiently touched a nearby tree. The boy sighned, this was almost impossible to do without a human body...And with that thought in mind, the boy slowly carwled over to a hiding spot and started spotting one of those magma cleaners. The boy quietly did the prrocedure and muttered double vision as he sent the bolt towards the man. immidiatly he noticed that his target slighty stumbled, and soon enough fell. Luckily it wasnt in the pummeling magma, but just on the hard, solid rock. With a happy sign the boy stood up and countinued his reading for the next jutsu. With a slight glance onto the paper he already spotted his next jutsu. Cauterize: a regeneration jutsu that would be active at all times, it stops the loss of flame almost immidatly and basicly prevents any internal bleeding.. The boy read on and shortly stopped after understanding the basic build of the jutsu. It wasn't such a hard work after training in the flame village where he had to mutilate himself just to get the hang of the technuiqe but here he really thought only a small cut would do a sufficient trick. With a small wince, the boy made a horizontal cut along his wrist, and began to force out chakra. He shaped it into a giant round ball or a disk of steaming substance and began to force it into a liquid. After that the boy began to imidatly heat it, allowing to evaporate enabling steam to exit throguh Sinobi's wound. As the steam poured out, the wound was the centre of a massive pressurized heat, and so the steam molded his skin, and stopped his flame loss by confining all of the flame that was jsut about to flow out together, by first heating them and then letting them stick together. As the intense heat drew back the boy coughed slightly, and began to examine the process. It was pretty well drawn together but still not fast enough to actually matter. And so the shinobi commenced his work on this technuiqe once more, increasing the speed of the cauterizing to higher speeds and soon enough the progress lead him to believe that it was fast enough. The flame was heated and melted onto each other almost instantly after a cut, and as the boy regrew some skin he walked over for his nexte jutsu. But suddenly he stopped, winced in pain and slid down onto the soft, puffy ground. Apparently he understimated the easyness of this technuiqe as his perfection of it wouldn't be that easy. The boy slightly stood up, still glaring at small bursts of temporare pain that just kept coming and coming. He needed something to work as an antibiotic that would cancel out the burning sensations that would come after the cauterizing. And so the boy focused his anger to work as an antibiotic, once the pain would come he would force his chakra towards his muscles temporarily increasing his speed and power, thus cancelign out the pain. When your mind is paying attencion on hitting the opponent, and also blurred out by adrenaline it would be impossble to pay attencion to the small bursts of searing pain that would come after stopping the flow. With that Sinobi tried it out as he finnaly got the time of the period before the pain kicked in. Exactly one minute after forging the flame together the sensation would come and so he should remember to count down the timer before charging the chakra boost. And so after cauterizing once more the boy counted down the final 3,2,1 and swiftly punched a rock beside him, using explosion fist as a *slight* help. The rock soon shattered, rolling off its base in heaps of molten landscape, and soon enough melding with the rest of the background. The boy wiped his hands against the jacket that he was currently wearing and moved on to his final jutsu in the creature village...As the boy came up he read the second to last block of writings which read Foot Trap: By sending chakra to one's foot the fighter stomps on his opponent's foot. The fighter's chakra propels the opponent's foot to be stuck to the ground, disabling him from moving his foot from the ground.. Sinobi found this move to be incredibly useful, or at least sound useful to him, and so the boy read all about the technuiqe all the way to the name of the creator and went on to pracitce. As Sinobi brought his foot up, he began to focus on his chakra flow, imagining it slowly crawling towards his lifted foot, and imidiatly as it reaches starts to spin around creating a vortex. The boy puled off a smirk as he felt the proper whirlwind of chakra surround his foot, he slowly concealed it inside, and used the space to enlarger the vortex creating some kind of a hurricane of chakra inside his foot. As the chakra enlargened he felt that it was sufficient enough to commence the first tryout. The boy looked around and noticed a strange-looking animal staring right up at him from the cover of a cooled magma. The boy slowly stepped on it, and as it tried to back away the boy saw the grueling pain it needed to escape (yea i know...). The boy sighned, finnaly noticing the animal gone, and realasing that the jutsu didn't work well. He needed something to drill the vortex into the foot...like his batista effect! The shinobi smiled brighter then the suin as he set up the same vents around his leg as he did on his arm not too long ago in the hidden flame village. Sinobi imagined the convenour belt once more and placed two exact copies of them into his left leg. Finnaly when everything was set the boy brought up his chakra into the exact same spot and commenced try number two. His foot built up a chakra surge as the boy noticed another good target, yet another strange animal. This one had a shape of a wolf only with flamey red fur, much bigger fangs and looking closely a VERY small patience...

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 8:09 pm


The boy didnt stutter in movement and as the wolf like creautre sprinted towards him, the boy raised his foot higher, now facing the height of the animal's head. And as soon as its fangs were about to collapse on Sinobi neck, he dodged the attack by swiftly sidestepping and bringing down his charged foot hard onto the paw of the raged opponent. The wolf winced in pain, and jsut as he was about to bring up a counterattack the poor creautre noticed that it couldnt move. Not the whole body was paralyzed but his paw, the one that the man touched with his feet was immobilized and thus rendered useless. The boy slightly smiled, took a step back and bent down looking straight in the wolf's eyes "better luck next time.." he whispered and after waiting a while he commenced counting the period of time this technuiqe will hold at this current leve. After 30 seconds the wolf felt his paw being bearable again and charged wildly towards Sinobi once more. By that time Sinobi already developed a second go, and as soon as the beast's hard teeth tried to sink into the boy he sidestepped once more, now using more chakra and creating a faster whirlwind the boy gave a hard step onto the back foot of the wolf and started to count once more. The beast yelped in agner and howled after of what seemed like every single second but soon enough his courage drew in and he bowed down, waiting for his foot to be belonging to him once more. As the boy counted a minute and a half the wold freed himself and attempted to run away but Sinobi wasnt done yet, he wasnted to bring it up to two minutes and as thw animal attempted to run away the boy stepped onto his front paw, and allowed him to be stuck in the same position. Poor wolfy started to whine and whimper as he attempted to move his paw away from the position it was currently in but having failed once more he just lay down on the ground, absolutely admitting his defeat and commecning the wait for the 3rd time. The boy finnaly counted 2 minutes and even an additional 5 seconds and slowly looked up, the flamey red beast stared at him in petryfication before finnaly standing up and limping away. At that moment Sinobi thought that he was a little bit hard on the animal but it would no doubt give him good as he now knows what its like being the victim... After getting lost in The hidden creature village forest, Sinobi Walked around to find that he was in a new area. Sinobi walked around in awe at how vast the are was and even though the place was so big Sinobi wondered why he hasn’t seen anything that moved besides him. Almost exactly when his thought was over he was greeted by a ambush of 3 dessert bandits one was a higher rank than Sinobi and the two others they obviously was just there to get the scraps. Sinobi feeling at full power decided to fight them and he started with a kick to the jaw to one of the weaker ones but then was smacked as hard as he ever been hit and flew almost slamming into a rock wall but as soon as he got p the bandit was already charging. he noticed that even though the bandit was a rank higher he was slow which means he concentrated on attack only that made it a little easier on Sinobi. Sinobi ran at the bandit as the bandit’s ran at him but right before contact Sinobi leaped over its back and shot it with 4 shurikens simultaneously making the bandit only stumble but that gave Sinobi time to use cero and the small dark bombs made the bandit loose balance and fall when the bandit fell it gave Sinobi an idea he knew that he probably wouldn’t be able to kill it so he turned and ran for the weak ones grabs one by its mask and smashed it into the other then throwing it into a rock wall where he punched into the bandit’s mask making him fade away farther into the wall he looked over to the higher class bandit who was still getting up due to his speed Sinobi had about another 30 seconds to kill the last weak one so he ran as fast as possible and jumped along with kicking it sending the bandit a few 100 yards away but it didn’t die but Sinobi's goal was to even the odds a little by taking away the stronger bandit’s minions. The bandit had regained its balance and came at Sinobi with rage. it was time for Sinobi to put his plan to work so he made one big leap and as he expected the bandit followed . Sinobi made one maneuver to end up on the bandit’s back and held the bandit close to him as Sinobi started to spin rapidly then he let the bandit go as he used cero with full power. the bandit hit the ground but didn’t look to effected bye the fall but that wasn’t Sinobi's plan the blast he sent not only hit the bandit but made deep wholes all around the area. Sinobi came down and kicked the bandit, the bandit quickly responded with a punch sending Sinobi flipping uncontrollably backwards. Sinobi regained his balance by skidding on the floor until friction stopped him then Sinobi ran around in a circle making sure to miss the wholes. As Sinobi ran in circles he started to hit the bandit with ceros. the bandit looked as if it wasn’t being effected at all so Sinobi ran in to it and as it swung he barely dodged it by diving to the floor. as Sinobi was on the floor he flipped up and just got a kick off to the hollows face then shot him with a cero making him fall backwards.''damn!'' Sinobi missed his goal to knock the bandit into a hole so now he has to get the hollow to lose his balance again so he can knock him into a hole. The bandit now angry from constantly being bombarded bye Sinobi's blows Started to charge at Sinobi with its mouth wide open starting to charge for a fire style jutsu. Sinobi leaped up as to escape the range of the bandits flames, as the bandit performed the hand signs and fired his fire style jutsu. it quickly reached Sinobi but Sinobi moved just in time but got two of his left fingers scorched. Sinobi ignoring the pain stood there shocked that a blast could reach him from that hight Sinobi knew he had to end this now because he might not be able to dodge the next one so Sinobi ran to the hollows side and started to punch him rapidly the bandit swung but Sinobi dodged it as his punches had so much power in it took the bandit awhile to swing knowing what just happened the bandit charged for another blast and just missed Sinobi as Sinobi rolled away Sinobi got another plan and again got up close but this time jumped on the bandit’s head , the bandit not being to smart shot a phoenix flower jutsu straight up into the air just as Sinobi predicted. Sinobi jumped off the bandit’s head and started to maneuver around him to keep it in the same spot. Just dodging blows and blast Sinobi waited until finally. Sinobi looked up and there it was Sinobi then kicked the bandit once to get some speed an jumped away quickly as the bandits own flames that he shot up earlier had fallen back down and hit the bandit dead on it head. But he did not die which made Sinobi wonder how he was going to beat it. but as all hope seemed lost the bandit, extremely weakened by its own blast, fell to its knees steaming from the power of its fire. Sinobi, not missing this perfect opportunity, kicked the bandit at full speed run making the bandit fly 1 foot back into one of the previously made holes and it was stuck in the hole not having enough energy to jump up Sinobi thinking h would die from the fall thought of one more thing he could do to kill it Sinobi shot a full powered cero at the nearby cliff making large rocks and boulders start to tumble down Sinobi then shot another cero around the hole making it bigger The rock and boulder then fell into the enlarging whole crushed the bandit inside. Sinobi was not positive the bandit was dead but he knew that enough time down there it would starve to death. Sinobi now needing some energy leaped onto the highest point he could find and looked around for awhile and found the cave he had come from to get here and went inside back to the hidden creature village.Sinobi walked into the hidden creature dessert again with the single purpose of training in solitude, and sense this area was not to popular it gave Sinobi the chance to. Sinobi began to summon all his chakrs and poured it out planning for all the nearby rouge ninja and dessert rouges to come looking for him. As Sinobi predicted a small army of scavenger dessert rouges huddled around him behind rocks and all. Sinobi smiled than just as quick as he smiled he frowned and dashed at a rock formation going right through it and grabbing two dessert rouges behind it than throwing them into the air where he summoned his shadow destruction which went right for the rouges in the air coliding with there bodies and making not only some small energy bombs rain down but also the gliding rouges. Sinobi, not saying a word quickly side stepped and avoided the charging rouge that went right by Sinobi and hit a wall. Sinobi than appeared behind the bandits, grabbed them, rolled ,and kicked it up into the air but making it go at such a high velocity it went to far for him to catch without leaving the area in which the rouges gathered. Sinobi than turned and shot a cero from his mouth at a nearby rock wall making small bug like rouges, who used some kind of shirking jutsu and had weird armor that made them like bugs, fall from the rock they where hiding behind than attack him. Sinobi saw the rouges and dashed at them not caring about there numbers. As each rouge jumped Sinobi was already kicking it away. Sinobi ducked and crushed another one as two others jumped from behind but Sinobi rolled and kicked them with both his feet just to roll back up than back flip on top of two others, than punch another that was coming at him Sinobi than slammed his hands down and jumped going high enough to see all the bug like rouges. Giving the opportunity Sinobi shot four ceros from his mouth at the group of rouges killing most if not all of them. Sinobi than landed and saw a small pack of wolf-dressed rouges and quickly ran over to them. The rouges jumped as a counter to Sinobi's changing but Sinobi then jumped up as well and grabbed one swinging it by its foot hitting the rest from the air, Sinobi than threw the one in his hand down at the wolf-dressed rouges that had fallen before. Sinobi then landed on the wolf-dressed rouge’s head shattering its skull than running up to the rest and in a blink of an eye kicking them punching them and throwing them into one another untill he broke all of there bones or skulls. Sinobi then sensed a sky attack and moved just in time to avoid energy bombs raining from the sky. Sinobi looked up and saw roughly 6 rouge gliders flying overhead. Sinobi leaped up high as he can just grabbing one of them and as they where forced down by gravity Sinobi added to the impact by spinning down then right before contact slamming the rouge into the ground breaking almost all the bones in its lower body. Sinobi then saw more bombs and picked up the barly alive rouge as a shield and blocked the bombs coming at Sinobi killing the rouge. Sinobi than threw the rouges dead body at another gliding rouge hitting it than makign it fall into another rouge and the rouge it fell into was so startled it let of another energy bomb onto the rouge on it blowing them and the dead rouge up, The remaining gliding rouges flew away. Sinobi began to breath hard, he may have take on more than he could chew, but it was to late for him to turn back. Sinobi still had some fighting to do and his only hope was to go all out and finish them quickly. Sinobi looked for the next set followed him and he saw two humanoid rouges, they were the only ones who weren’t dressed as animals or had animal attributes coming at him both roughly the same size but slower and stronger than Sinobi. Sinobi dashed at one hollow than moved to one side too swipe it feet from under it and it worked as the hollow fell Sinobi kicked it into the other hollow but the other hollow jumped over his flying companion and shot 3 fire balls at Sinobi, Sinobi dodged two and just barely dodged the third getting a faint hit on his shoulder. Sinobi ran at the rouge and kicked it than as the rouge's head jerked back Sinobi back flipped off its head landed in front of it and started to punch the rouge rapidly in the gut multiple times making the hollow stunned for a few seconds , that where just enough for Sinobi to upercut the rouge with a jump punch and making the rouge fly into the air where Sinobi grabbed the rouge and threw it at it's companion. Sinobi landed and watched as the two humanoid rouges climbed to there feet. Sinobi than ran as fast as he could at the recovering rouges and punched the both of them in there masks, not breaking the masks but sending them both into a rock wall. Sinobi then started to bombard them with ceros and shurikens at the same time. The blast caused great dust to come to which Sinobi could not see the two rouges. But the Hollows had both used a substitution jutsu just in time to avoid the blasts and still come speeding through the dust. Sinobi used his casshern armor So Sinobi easily was still faster. As he saw one come through the smoke he kicked it up into the air with great velocity sending the rouge far into the air. Sinobi looked as the next rouge came and hit Sinobi but the blow somehow astoundingly hard and sent Sinobi rolling backwards until he regained his balance and landed up right in a kind of slouch. he looked and realized they didnt increase there speed but one increased it strength, Sinobi then wondered what the other rouge must have increased and as the other rouge hit the ground and caused a great crater got up without even spending more than 30 seconds on the ground he realized. The rouge had increased its defense. Sinobi than had already had devised a plan and started to run around in a circle examining the rouges. Sinobi jumped in front of the one who increased its strength and started to dodge all the blows it threw at him and moving it as he moved back . Sinobi then started to punch and kick the hollow making it so mad that it made a big swing at Sinobi. Sinobi ,knowing that that was what it was going to do, he ducked making the stronger hollow hit the other right in the mask cracking it’s skull and sending the hollow flying. The stronger rouge froze for a few seconds from its mistake and that gave Sinobi the chance to roll under him and kick him right in the chin sending him flying up with great velocity. The rouge on the floor with the great defense slowly rose with a glare at Sinobi that looked like it actually killed. The rouge ran at Sinobi with flame coming from the crack in its mask and skull. Sinobi moved to the side and kicked the rouge in the back of the head making it stumble than twirling around to kick it from the other side in its face then sliding under the rouge and kicking the back of its knees than the front of them making its knees give out. Sinobi than seeing the rouge fall from its knees giving out , kicked the rouge once more as hard as he could in the rouges skull breaking it and sending the rouge rolling backwards with no look of it trying to stop itself, the rouge was indeed dead. and as Sinobi finally saw the rouge in the air falling with no control, Sinobi jumped up kicked the rouge in the gut then kneed it in the face, than finally switched his position making the rouge point straight down head first and placing his elbow on the rouges chin. As they impacted with the floor Sinobi's elbow had crushed the rouges head from the chin up making its flame splatter all over Sinobi's arm. As Sinobi arose ,with the look of flame lust in his eyes, the rest of the surrounding rouges scattered. Sinobi looked at his hand covered with the rouges flame and said...my goal is drawing near i can already kill without remorce Sinobi tightened his hand into a fist than turned and walked away as the dust surrounded him and went over all the bodies of the rouges he had killed, Sinobi's eyes had turned red, red with the flame of his enemies.Sinobi knew that his goal was coming near so for the first time sense he got it he drew with his two swords in hopes of battling with them. Sinobi ran to the area in which he had battled the great deal of bandits , and just as he expected, there where an abundance of scavenger bandits, taking the items and such from the bodies Sinobi had killed. Sinobi than, thinking this was the best training for him with his first time using his swords, ran at the bandits at full speed. There where a few wolf-dressed bandits, bigger than he had ever fought before so he went after them first. The wolf-dressed bandits charged at him as two others leaped at him from the sky. Sinobi gripped his blades tightly and first slashed the bandits from the sky hitting them in the bulk of their chests. Sinobi then jumped on top

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