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 Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 1:39 pm
Ryns wings hung limply behind him, saying quietly, his voice rasping," I'll need something high in protein. Don't care what as long as its edible, and you would actually be willing to eat it."
He turned, his eyes drooping, to Izzy, and said," We better find a place to stay for a bit. I need some rest while we can get it."
He resisted yawning widely, though only barely, before peeking out of the alleyway and stepping into the street, looking around for possible dangers, as well as possible places to rest.
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 1:50 pm
The person Masaru had scratched caught up with her and spun her around angrily, yelling obscenities. Not wanting to cause a scene, but feeling it was unavoidable, Masaru punched the man hard in the gut while digging her long, strong nails into his shoulder hard enough to cut him. He was left crouching in the street as everyone in the vicinity who had watched her actions stared. As she walked away, though, they continued what they had been doing previously. She wiped her fingernails on her pants roughly.
[[filler]]
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 1:51 pm
They were both so damn quiet. But Nendir expected it of them both, seeing how Ryn was working with a minimal amount of energy, and Izzy appeared to have just realized she had not fallen to her death. He turned on his heels and headed for a local restaurant. The name of it, he didn't catch, but the smells coming from behind it's doors was sensational, and sent his mouth into a terrible water almost instantly.
He knew he would be out of place with his clothing, but he didn't care, he was beyond caring at this point. He entered the doors, pushing them open simultaneously with each palm and walked over to the hostess. "I need 3 pounds of broiled fish, I don't care what kind as long as there aren't any bones, and put any high protein sides along with it. A couple of large salads, some sandwiches, something to drink, surprise me, and some bottles of water. Just throw it all into a box and let me know when it's ready."
He took a seat next to a Mortal couple and flashed them a smile, they cringed and began to scoot away from him. The hostess seemed dumbfounded, but Nendir waited for the food patiently, which took the better part of an hour to prepare. He paid the hostess and took his boxed dinners in his left hand, opening the door with his right.
It didn't take long for him to find Izzy's trail, and as he walked through the lobby he simply said "Big...big guy, small women." The man behind the counter tossed him a key, he looked ash white, there was no doubt Ryn had been through here. He found the room on the fifth floor and worked with the electronic card to open it. "Two beds..great." He said, placing everyones food beside them with the drinks and silverware as well. "I got a lot of sandwiches and salads for us Izzy, there's a few different kinds of each because, well, I didn't get specific with the girl who took my order."
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 2:04 pm
Ringo, Kimiyoshi placed her finger on the index page of her book, letting out a loud sigh. "How can I ever find one stinking summoning spell in this book without it taking days? Ugh.." Her sister smiled at her and gave her a pat on the back. "You know...maybe I'll just give up on being a summoner! Look at the size of this thing!!!" Her face started to turn a darkish red as she slammed the book closed, throwing it with a thud against the wall of the hotel.
Asaka looked worriedly toward her sister but didn't feel she could do anything to make the girls anger go away, 'How could I? I can't speak.'
"You don't have to speak, did you forget I can hear you?" Kimiyoshi's arms were crossed over her chest now, her face turning back to it's normal color. "There's no need to be worried, I'll find that money summoning spell again."
'Can I get new clothes if you do? Some accesories?' Asaka happened to tell her sister without the slightest bit of speach.
"I'll think about it," Kimiyoshi replied then turning away. "We better get out of here though before they come asking for their hotel money." She grabbed her sister by the hand, pulling her over to where her book lay. "At least I remembered the wing summoning spell." She opened the book to a certain page and mumbled a few words as large wings started to grow out of her back.
A few seconds later Kimiyoshi landed in an abandoned alley with her sister tightly held in her arms. "The city, it's kind of ..scary at night, sis." She whispered.
'We'll be okay.' Asaka stared down at her sister and gave her a tight hug. 'I'll protect you!'
"Sure that makes me feel a WHOLE lot better," she replied in a sarcastic tone. "Anyways.." She sighed. "We'd better get moving..."
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 2:05 pm
(( Who are YOU??? evil
I don't see your application in the accepted applicatiion sections.
@ Hippi))
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 2:18 pm
((gah! ment to post! So I is now back tracking..)
Izzy walked along the street, trying to find some hotel or other. She didn't have to worry about weaving through a crowd, everyone moved to the other side of the street. No doubt because of Ryn, and it probably didn't help that she was walking with a slight limp. When they found a hotel everyone cleared out of they're way, and the guy behind the desk looked so scared. She casualy walked up to the desk and asked quite kindly for a room perferably with a balcony. The man hended her a key and stutered a price. She handed him the money and started to walk away but stopped before they had even pass the desk, and told the man that a they're friend would be joining them later. He just nodded, and Izzy made her way to the room.As soon as she entered the room, she flopped onto one of the beds.
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"kay." she replied as Nendir set some food beside her. She picked up what looked to be a ham sandwich, and unwraped it carefully, and took a bite. Yup. definetly ham. And cheese.
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 2:20 pm
((Gah! It's a barage of OOCs! >_> No wonder the OOC thread was established. And oh, I did not realize that it was actually my turn to post, and ignorantly waited for Saki. sweatdrop ))
"Er... what just happened?" Kin, clueless as always watched the wolf clumsily crash into a wooden structure, which inevitable roused up some nearby settlers. His light gaze eventually landed on some angry hairy men, their axes readied upon their hands, snarling. Yet Kin could well feel the apprehension in their eyes, and chuckled softly upon this. Still, he WAS losing his interest upon the mortals. He wanted something more of a challenge. He yawned indifferently as one of the men blared out,
"Do you guys know what you just did, punks? That's where we store our antiques to sell for the summer! Now you've got to pay every cent each broken piece is worth!" Yet despite the man's loud and deep talk, Kin knew fairly well that they could sense some abnormalities about the strangers that they were. "Dante, there's some crazy things going on in the other side of town! Come on! Hurry!" A lean adolescent called out to the big lad, who reluctantly agreed, and left the spotlight, leading several others with him. Only a few men remained, cold sweat flowing out of their temples, and practically shivering in the cold of dawn.
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 2:43 pm
[[I was talking about a telephone pole, Kind sweatdrop ]]
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