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 Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2007 9:12 am
hideyyo ((Ok, that sentence was full of grammatical and spelling mistakes and went through the timeline too fast)) dont care just like every 1 els the internet is a esxape from techers and parints and i dont need u to help them
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Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2007 12:56 pm
((If you make too many errors in that sentence nobody can understand you. If we can't understand you, we don't know what you are saying))
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Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2007 6:20 pm
hideyyo ((If you make too many errors in that sentence nobody can understand you. If we can't understand you, we don't know what you are saying))
[[i side with with this guy ^
its not fun when u cant understand wat other people are saying or when they fly through the time like that]]
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Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2007 6:29 pm
Hin was still a bushfire, going through the halls as fast as a fire can devour a forest. He was speeding as fast as he can, going nearly 200 miles per hour in a cramped hall.
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Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2007 8:14 am
((new rule you have to speak literate,ok?))
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Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2007 8:18 am
Almsivi Yune, who was trying and failing to find Room 258, where she would be rooming with a girl named Mira, noticed the strangest thing on the ground - a trail of blood. "What in the world?" she murmured, hurrying to find the source. Not long after, she saw another girl, whose wings and feet were bleeding. "Hey, are you alright? I probably have a potion on me that can stop the bleeding. Just give me a sec." She rummaged through her purse for the potion. "Oh,um....thank you but don't worry about me this happens all the time, i'll be alright, i mean I'm use to the pain" she said as she tried to hide her try feelings with a quick smile.
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Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2007 2:04 pm
Hin's true form, a giant fire, was starting to float in the air. He was going faster than he ever could, now at over 300 miles per hour. "THIS IS SWEET!" said Hin, but not the voice of a human, but the voice of a raging fire. "Nobody can go faster than me!"
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Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2007 8:05 pm
[tORN_sEAmZ] hideyyo ((If you make too many errors in that sentence nobody can understand you. If we can't understand you, we don't know what you are saying))
[[i side with with this guy ^
its not fun when u cant understand wat other people are saying or when they fly through the time like that]]well tuff luck
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Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2007 11:21 pm
norby51 [tORN_sEAmZ] hideyyo ((If you make too many errors in that sentence nobody can understand you. If we can't understand you, we don't know what you are saying))
[[i side with with this guy ^
its not fun when u cant understand wat other people are saying or when they fly through the time like that]]well tuff luck ((Yeah, well the person who made this post said to spell correctly. Listen to her or you will end up on blacklist.))
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 12:21 pm
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 6:38 pm
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 6:45 pm
Aurora_Wilkes Oh,um....thank you but don't worry about me this happens all the time, i'll be alright, i mean I'm use to the pain" she said as she tried to hide her try feelings with a quick smile. Yune frowned, concerned. "Why do you bleed all the time? That can't be natural. Unless it's an angel thing...?"
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 6:46 pm
Hin was a bushfire and stopped at Yune. "Hi," said the fire. "I am Hin."
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Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 3:58 am
Almsivi Aurora_Wilkes Oh,um....thank you but don't worry about me this happens all the time, i'll be alright, i mean I'm use to the pain" she said as she tried to hide her try feelings with a quick smile. Yune frowned, concerned. "Why do you bleed all the time? That can't be natural. Unless it's an angel thing...?" "I bleed all the time because I have no shoes and my family would beat me everyday but then I just kept on bleeding at whatever time" she said.
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Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 5:01 am
Red will be her speaking
Momoko stood her ground, looked up, and saw the beautiful school. She put down her bag and her metal cello case to gaze at the new school she would go to. Her skelekitty, Coco, came out from her bag. Momoko whistled in acception,"Wow, this school is beautiful. It's above an ocean! Don't you like it, Coco?" Coco mewed in acception. She walked into the school, with Coco trailing along beside her, What dorm am I in...? Should I ask a teacher? She started to walk around the school, it was huge! She soon entered a big garden, it was full of beautiful flowers. She walked towards the end of the garden, grabbed a chair and placed it in the middle of the garden. She opened her cello case, prepared her cello, and began to play. Coco laye on the grass, listening. Her beautiful instrument could be heard throughout the school, her music was simply wonderful.
After playing for a while, she gave the garden was last gaze, grabbed her bag and her cello case, and left. She began to search for the office, she needed to know her dorm room. She soon found the office, she entered it and walked up to a lady typing away on a computer at a desk. "Erm, excuse..? Would you know what dorm I'm in?
What's your name, sweetie?
Momoko Takaeshi. The woman began to type away at her computer, then said,
Your dorm room will be room 13 and your room mate is Satomi Hatakeda. Momoko bowed, said her thanks, and walked out of the office. Coco continued to follow, mewing at some times
She walked around the school, looking for her dorm room, Satomi Hatakeda... I wonder what she's like. I guess I'll find out soon enough. She walked through some hallways, made some turns, and declared, I think I'm lost... She continued to walk through hallways and began to see room numbers close to 13. "25.... 24... 23... 22... 21..." She turned a corner and saw a group of people talking, Coco mewed in confusion of why Momoko stoppped, I'll just walked by them...
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