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 Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 5:26 pm
Xanatavian Xavier really i mostly need to get used to gaia forum so how do you subscribe to a thread i dont know how to eiether on here i haven't subscribed anything in a while
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 5:28 pm
alliballi52 Cattra Nightblade alliballi52 Cattra Nightblade Snake311 alliballi52 ok -aah who could this be...- ((Your posts need to be longer, you can do a lot for each post.)) ((im going to jump in here as well, sorry snake if i mess something up, Try to throw in some description as well, what does the room look like, is it big or small, etc, or even just say it is a wooden door.)) well what about my second post or did that not have enough detail? I want to work on what ever i can to be better! ((It could use some work, lets see, try something like this, this is a lil advanced but it might give you a better idea As I woke up hearing the knock on the door at the center of the room I reach over to the wooden book case beside my bed and pull down the alarm clock and look at it. "ehh.... one in the morning?" he looks up and puts the clock back and sits up, slides on a pair of sandals and takes a few steps to the door and opens it a bit. As you can see I put a bit of description into my post, it brings it more to life and gives a little atmosphere to the room and shows where objects are, which might be a key part later on in the story, who knows, I want to see you give this a try, Be creative)) ok ill try something -I hear the knocking as my slowly open my eyes i stare at my alarm thinking do I really have to get up. Gets up out of bed grabs some shoes and gloves *because im cold*and slowly walks to the door. ((thats a little better, but the *because im cold* part should possibly be in brackets depending on the type of RP your playing, some of mine you dont use *'s its more or less story telling. If you can try to fit some more detail in there, what color are the gloves and shoes possibly, but you have improved a bit so far, also when you get into some rp's like I said there will be no *'s, so it will be like what I posted above, all speech would be in "...insertexampletexthere" and thoughts are in 'imthinkingofsomething' type of formats try to use the format i did above, this is just a little test so dont get discouraged.))
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Xanatavian generated a random number between
1000 and 222200200 ...
63362900!
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 5:43 pm
i really hate to sound in patiant
but how do i subscribe to forums
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 5:49 pm
Xanatavian Xavier i really hate to sound in patiant but how do i subscribe to forums (I acually have not tried to subscribe to forums for in guilds, i have a folder under favorites for it so i just open a new window in firefox and open the file and select where I want)
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 5:56 pm
alright can i try a new theme or should i keep trying the first one
1st one ok
-I hear very loud knocking fall out the otherside of my bed onto my alarm clock and wine to my self i put on my slippers my robe over my pajamas they better have a pretty darn good reason for being so loud and being hear at 1 in the morning as i walk over to my door.
how was I?
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 5:59 pm
alliballi52 alright can i try a new theme or should i keep trying the first one 1st one ok -I hear very loud knocking fall out the otherside of my bed onto my alarm clock and wine to my self i put on my slippers my robe over my pajamas they better have a pretty darn good reason for being so loud and being hear at 1 in the morning as i walk over to my door. how was I? Very good! ((a few spelling mistakes but thats oke)) Lets try something new. Your friend calls you on the phone and wants to see if you want to go see the late show at midnight, your parents say no so you decide to sneak out. Its 11:45
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 6:09 pm
Cattra Nightblade alliballi52 alright can i try a new theme or should i keep trying the first one 1st one ok -I hear very loud knocking fall out the otherside of my bed onto my alarm clock and wine to my self i put on my slippers my robe over my pajamas they better have a pretty darn good reason for being so loud and being hear at 1 in the morning as i walk over to my door. how was I? Very good! ((a few spelling mistakes but thats oke)) Lets try something new. Your friend calls you on the phone and wants to see if you want to go see the late show at midnight, your parents say no so you decide to sneak out. Its 11:45 ok i'll try -im calling my friend my parents are asleep but, my little brother isnt he got in behind my seat and he has his cell phone so if i call... im dead so we got to do what he sais or else my parents will call your parents and then were seriosly going to pay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Xanatavian rolled 20 100-sided dice:
72, 31, 99, 28, 79, 67, 26, 8, 70, 14, 6, 29, 61, 33, 99, 40, 91, 43, 94, 89
Total: 1079 (20-2000)
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 6:16 pm
my question stands but i might as well start learning to roleplay
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 6:16 pm
was there anything i needed to do to make it better? becuase if so how about this one:
-shhhhh were going to get caught hold on let me shut the door. ok they check on me at five so i have to be here at four toget everything off and into messy clothes so okay! walks to theater. this place is amazing! look at the sealing it looks as if it was you. hurry hurry i got to get home before my parents check on me! as im walking in my mom see's me as she has her midnight snack im busted!!!!!!
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 6:20 pm
Xanatavian Xavier i really hate to sound in patiant but how do i subscribe to forums To answer you're question, you can't subscribe to threads in the guild. Try to book mark them in the favorites tab. To subscribe to a thread there should be a "subscribe" button on the bottom of the thread, so click that and there ya go! You can't subscribe to guild threads, so dont bother looking for the button in the guilds.
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 6:22 pm
Xanatavian Xavier my question stands but i might as well start learning to roleplay y So you want to learn how to role play huh? Well I can teach you when you are ready.
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 6:23 pm
alliballi52 was there anything i needed to do to make it better? becuase if so how about this one: -shhhhh were going to get caught hold on let me shut the door. ok they check on me at five so i have to be here at four toget everything off and into messy clothes so okay! walks to theater. this place is amazing! look at the sealing it looks as if it was you. hurry hurry i got to get home before my parents check on me! as im walking in my mom see's me as she has her midnight snack im busted!!!!!! This one was a lot better, but try this, watch what I do with your post: Shhhhh were going to get caught hold on let me shut the door, Ok they check on me at five so I have to be here at four to get everything off and into messy clothes so okay! *walks to theater.* This place is amazing! look at the sealing it looks as if it was you. hurry hurry i got to get home before my parents check on me! *as im walking in my mom see's me as she has her midnight snack* oh no im busted! The way you RP try to put *'s or -'s on your actions and keep what your saying normal.
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 6:26 pm
Oh I see your point so what is my next theme?
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 6:27 pm
Cattra Nightblade alliballi52 was there anything i needed to do to make it better? becuase if so how about this one: -shhhhh were going to get caught hold on let me shut the door. ok they check on me at five so i have to be here at four toget everything off and into messy clothes so okay! walks to theater. this place is amazing! look at the sealing it looks as if it was you. hurry hurry i got to get home before my parents check on me! as im walking in my mom see's me as she has her midnight snack im busted!!!!!! This one was a lot better, but try this, watch what I do with your post: Shhhhh were going to get caught hold on let me shut the door, Ok they check on me at five so I have to be here at four to get everything off and into messy clothes so okay! *walks to theater.* This place is amazing! look at the sealing it looks as if it was you. hurry hurry i got to get home before my parents check on me! *as im walking in my mom see's me as she has her midnight snack* oh no im busted! The way you RP try to put *'s or -'s on your actions and keep what your saying normal. Ok, I have a problem with you're post, after you have snuck out at night, why would you want to get back into you're messy clothes? "to get everything off and into messy clothes so okay! " Why would you want to get back into you're messy clothes?
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 6:30 pm
veinkiller Cattra Nightblade alliballi52 was there anything i needed to do to make it better? becuase if so how about this one: -shhhhh were going to get caught hold on let me shut the door. ok they check on me at five so i have to be here at four toget everything off and into messy clothes so okay! walks to theater. this place is amazing! look at the sealing it looks as if it was you. hurry hurry i got to get home before my parents check on me! as im walking in my mom see's me as she has her midnight snack im busted!!!!!! This one was a lot better, but try this, watch what I do with your post: Shhhhh were going to get caught hold on let me shut the door, Ok they check on me at five so I have to be here at four to get everything off and into messy clothes so okay! *walks to theater.* This place is amazing! look at the sealing it looks as if it was you. hurry hurry i got to get home before my parents check on me! *as im walking in my mom see's me as she has her midnight snack* oh no im busted! The way you RP try to put *'s or -'s on your actions and keep what your saying normal. Ok, I have a problem with you're post, after you have snuck out at night, why would you want to get back into you're messy clothes? "to get everything off and into messy clothes so okay! " Why would you want to get back into you're messy clothes? possibly to make it look like she never left? To be in what her parents last saw her in?
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