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Lita Rutherford

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PostPosted: Mon May 21, 2007 6:54 pm


Both prompts and replies. They basicly jsut feed off each other, no real change in personality besides maturing, between each. ^^ Hope you enjoy them at least.

Foal:
Since emerging from the basket you have known nothing but darkness; a mother who despises you and a father who views you as little more than an object to be manipulated to his whims, used as a tool against your mother. Upon first introduction to Diabetia by your father she snarls and attacks. In order to put her back in her place Plague steps in to keep her at bay. How do you react to this? What are your thoughts?




Cold…His father’s gaze, the feeling of his mother’s obvious detest. Then again he couldn’t blame her entirely, having to put up with the b*****d who he called father. Of course she wasn’t the sweetest thing either. The young foal never stopped to think these thoughts were advanced, morbid, to evil for a child as young as him to think. He simply thought them. If anything the thanked his father for brains. Spotting a pair of foals as they darted in play, the few times he had escaped from the watch of the stallion, he sneered at their ignorance. He was small, he was young, but he was not a foal, he believed. He was not ignorant. Even if his father didn’t even realize this. However like a foal, total rejection hurt, especially when it was from the mother he had hoped would treat him better. That day had been horrible…horrible indeed. And the little devil child knew something about being horrible.

It had been a pleasant day. Chasing and killing a few of the rats what clung to his father like the hair that was always coming off. Sneak off, and scare those pitiful foals from that “happy” family. Kill a little bunny for lunch. A good day in his eyes. Until his father called to him, the stallions deep voice always demanding respect, and instant attentiveness. He learned that his first day out of his basket. So he came, and question the powerful creature what he was needed for. “You will meet your mother today.” Was the only reply as he lead the foal to what he was sure to be his certain doom. He never questioned about her, he didn’t care. Obviously she wasn’t fond of him if she wasn’t around. However upon seeing her he had to keep from sneering. She was beautiful. A magnificent Kalona. But the pinks and purples were so overpowering…His eyes ached from the bright light on her bright body.

He listened with mild interest as she and his Father spoke. However the moment he was spotted she suddenly snarled, and lunged at the “innocent” foal. “Innocent” his flank. He jumped back, flaring and snarling back. Who was she to try and attack him! However his father’s reaction startled him. Protecting him? Well maybe it wasn’t as it seemed. It defiantly couldn’t be as it seemed. He wasn’t cared for that much, not even close to love. Protecting his possessions, that must be all his father would do. He wasn’t stupid…he knew he was a tool, a toy, a piece of property for his father to dispose of at his will. Much like, at this little display, his mother must be, or was. And obviously she must blame him for any misery she currently held. Stupid, stupid mare. To weak and to stupid to get away. Under the large stallion’s hoof like one of the many rats, the dirt…and like himself, for now. But once he grew, he would get away. He would not be a slave to his father, nor his mother. His family…they hated him…and he hated them.
Stupid, Stupid Father…Stupid, Stupid Mother. You are my pawns…and my pawns alone.




Adult:

Freedom at last! Or is it? Your childhood is something that will continue to haunt you for the rest of your life. It has formed you into the creature that you are today for better or worst. Upon meeting your mother again now that you're older how do you react to her? What, if anything, do you say? Do you blame her for the way that you've turned out or, in her absence, is it all the fault of your father?




Year, years it seemed since he had first left the wing of his dictator like father. Even more still since he last saw his mother, choosing not to associate with the mare who had birthed him, but did him no more then that. What mother, no matter the breed, despised their son to the point they would attack, try and kill, upon their first meeting? So he hated her with the passion. However as he grew, as he became wiser still to the world; observing, for that was his specialty, the actions of the stallion he feared, admired, and detested, he grew to feel…love? No, love was not the right word. He felt no love for his family. Not a drop for his siblings, which he never interacted with. Not a drop for his Mother, who was to weak, in his eyes, to stand up and leave the presence of his father. Not a drop for his Father, who had shadowed his childhood, destroying his life, but also shaping him to be a talented observer, and to be able to see the faults of the “happier” horses he watched, or ate. Though he wasn’t to fond of horse. A dear, a rabbit, or one of those retched rats his father had trailing him, was far sweeter. Especially those rats, being as he could act as if he was eating his father’s horrid flesh, imagine the bones cracking under foot, the squeals of pain as he slowly died. Alas, however, his father was alive and well. So much for dreams.

And yet…his mother. He did not love her, as aforementioned, but he did not hate her as he did as a child, or a younger adult. He felt...sorry for her, pity really. Pity for the fact he did not think she could ever break free of his father. Pity that the mare was doomed to live a life of being nothing more then a worthless toy, one day to be killed mercilessly. Then again no doubt by then she would be begging for it. But he could not understand WHY she did not leave, why she seemed unable to. He had. Not easily, and he had to use his observations to get him as far from his home as possible, even...well not hiding exactly…more like tricking, a human and mare until he was sure his father was not following him. But now, he stayed near the forest, an easy distance to the mountains to were his favorite game was.

It was on such a day, as he contemplated his relationship with his family, his life as a child, and his feelings for the mother who seemed to detest him more then he believed he deserved, that who would appear but the said mare. At first he was startled. A bit angry for not noticing her approach, and then discussed at her appearance. Still as sickening sweet as before. Pink…on a Kalona…it just didn’t work. However he lifted his head high, a smart, air of defiance about him. One he did not realize he picked up from his mother. “Mother.” He said shortly with a curt nod of his head. “What, pray tell, are you doing so far from Father?” There was half a sneer in his voice, but no emotion on his face.

“And what, pray tell, are you doing so far from your father?” She asked back, the same defiance. She would not take this from the son of that b*****d. She would not be shown up, she would not take it. “Hiding, little boy, from the big bad papa?” She did not fear him. He had never shown any of the aggression his father held. Snide remarks, a ruthless hunter at times, but no aggression towards her. Why would that change now?

“Taking to insulting your own son, Mother? Honestly, how sad.” He moved, begging to circle his mother, eyes watching her intently. She was a bit thin, he noted, then when he last saw her. Not much, not really noticeable. His father must be taking her kills again. The b*****d had a habit of such offences, even from himself. When his Father wanted something, his Father got it, no question. “And you did not answer my question. I’m tempted to believe you are ignoring it for a reason.” He smirked. “Stupid, Stupid mother…”

Diabetia lashed out at the son who stood before her. “Don’t you dare say that, you insolent brat!” She snarled. Plague said that often. That exact phrase! The little twerp was asking for it. She advanced on him, wings spread. She could never take Plague. She knew that. So why not the next best thing. The son of him.

With one swift kick he slide back, laughing. “Pathetic, not only are you sickeningly pink, such a sweet color, but your aim is horrible.” Ok, so she had hit him, and it did hurt a bit, hooves were not soft after all, but he wasn’t about to fall from one kick from the old mare. “Come now Mother, you’ll have to try harder then that to erase your mistakes…”

However suddenly a smell reached his nose. Hers, too, by the look on her face. Crap. His father. She had led him right to him! Weather or not she meant to he did not stick around to ask. Within moments he was gone, easily moving through the forest he called home. He would not be dragged back like his mother before him. He was stronger then that.

Stupid Mother...Stupid, Stupid Mother.
PostPosted: Mon May 21, 2007 7:36 pm


Since emerging from the basket you have known nothing but darkness; a mother who despises you and a father who views you as little more than an object to be manipulated to his whims, used as a tool against your mother. Upon first introduction to Diabetia by your father she snarls and attacks. In order to put her back in her place Plague steps in to keep her at bay. How do you react to this? What are your thoughts?

A flower and its thorns... Father knew how to keep his father in place. The young colt watched with a slight pleasure. This pain... this torment... such joy would swell in his tiny black heart. After his father had set his mother in her place he glared at her, the darkness in his eyes evident as he looked to his father looming figure and smirked, trotting off after it. She would learn her lesson eventually, whatever measure his father needed to take.

The basket had been merely a shelter from his mother's goodness. She was quite annoying, the little twit. His father was the one who raised him right! What fool doesn't want power? Doesn't have power? All you needed was a weakling like this sad piece of work that is supposedly his mother. So his father didn't like his company, Shio didn't mind, he watched fine from the side lines and learned everything he needed to know in the darkness of his father's shadow. His mother would learn her place if Shio had to do it himself...

Neither of his parents accepted him. He was the beautiful spawn of a looming dark shadow, this pretty face only the bearer until the time was ripe for this cruel being fell into the world. He despised his mother with a passion for she wouldn't accept the fact that his father a poweful being and she was his toy, to dispose of when he wanted to. Shio would find himself a toy too... he wouldn't be a softy like all those other winning curs...

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PostPosted: Mon May 21, 2007 8:24 pm


Oo *remembers* ^^

Is there a length limit to this? *Couldn't find it on the front page* ^^;








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PostPosted: Mon May 21, 2007 9:02 pm


Foal

Since emerging from the basket you have known nothing but darkness; a mother who despises you and a father who views you as little more than an object to be manipulated to his whims, used as a tool against your mother. Upon first introduction to Diabetia by your father she snarls and attacks. In order to put her back in her place Plague steps in to keep her at bay. How do you react to this? What are your thoughts?


Rot had emerged from his basket but never from the darkness that surrounded him and his heart. He hated his father, his siblings, and his own name. Now his father was going to take him to meet his mother and he was sure he would hate her too. He dug his hooves into the ground and glared at the mare on sight with disgust…she was so…pink. He snarled up at his father in disgust and then looked down at himself and wondered why he was cursed with such a horrid combination of genes. Suddenly his mother snarled and moved to attack him. He looked at her startled and reared up behind his father stamping furiously at the ground and trying to push past to defend himself, being protected rankled him especially form that pink mare he was forced to share blood with. Someday he swore to himself he would become stronger then either of his parents, perhaps he would even do away with them. Yes the wicked plan came into the young colts head instantly he would kill his mother, his father, and his siblings. Then his blood wouldn’t be tainted by their actions. He would make his own way in the world and NEVER would he have himself a mare that was so…PINK. With that he lunged under his father ignoring the rodents biting at his legs and bit into his mothers leg. Rot would have a lot to learn before he could get away with attacking either of his parents and with that foolish action his lessons in receiving and delivering pain were sure to start.

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PostPosted: Mon May 21, 2007 10:37 pm


DragonsRage24
Oo *remembers* ^^

Is there a length limit to this? *Couldn't find it on the front page* ^^;


We haven't set any limit for length of the entries.
PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2007 3:42 am


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Freedom at last! Or is it? Your childhood is something that will continue to haunt you for the rest of your life. It has formed you into the creature that you are today for better or worst. Upon meeting your mother again now that you're older how do you react to her? What, if anything, do you say? Do you blame her for the way that you've turned out or, in her absence, is it all the fault of your father?


The white stallion’s nostrils flared as he fidgeted on the spot. His eyes, always blazing with anger and hate at the world, were narrowed and squinted toward one spot. His entire body was tensed, every muscle flexed. All in response to one thing. A scent he recognized all too well.

Acidos had left, or rather escaped, because of the owner of this one smell – his mother. He had never blamed his father for how his life had been. Quite on the contrary, he loved his father. Loved the cruel black stallion he had met at birth, despite knowing that Plague would never love him back. Plague didn’t love anything. But Acidos was different, he did love. But he loved only one thing, and that was Plague. All his childhood he had spent following his father everywhere he went, and it was a small price to pay for a harsh n** on the shoulder or a kick in the side. Acidos would tail his father like a lost little puppy until Plague really could stand it no longer and he would send the colt away with a good thrashing. Every few days it would happen, and still the black striped colt would not learn to stay away. Indeed, so highly did Acidos see his father that he would gladly do anything asked of him by Plague. Where the white Soquili would kill even his own siblings, especially his sister for he so hated mares and thought them little more than the dirt on the ground, without so much as a second thought, he would willingly die for his heartless father.

He had spent as much time as possible away from his mother, on whom he blamed all of his misfortune. Mares were the cause of everything, so he had grown up to think, and every time some small misfortune befell him, he would curse and mutter his mother’s name in hoping she would suffer for his own bad luck.

“Acidos…” There was no love between Diabetia and her son, and the mare uttered his name as if it were the plague itself. How ironic that she might think of her son that way, like the disease that was his father’s namesake.

“Mother.” The burly white stallion sneered, his every word riddled with scorn and distaste. How dare she utter his name, the mare that had done little but to bring him into existence and had made his childhood a living hell. He looked down at Diabetia, almost as he would a lowly ant in the dust that he considered squishing, scrutinizing her carefully and looking her up and down. “You’ve gained weight. You’re almost twice as hideous as before.” He snickered most ungratefully, shaking his head with a snort.

His insult hit its target, and he was rewarded by the look of utmost horror, followed by immense hate, that flashed across her pastel pink face and black rimmed eyes. An almost unworldly shriek of rage pierced the air at the blow to her beauty, and Acidos chuckled, much to his mother’s rage. “Hell hath no fury like a useless mare well scorned.” He mused. For a moment, she looked as though she might leap at his throat, but it was replaced with a simple look of pure, unadulterated contempt. Perhaps she wasn’t as stupid as he had previously thought she was. He was built heavily, and was taller than she. Had she charged him, it might well have been the last thing she ever did.

But she was a wily thing too, as he hadn’t quite anticipated. “I suppose you wonder about your hero,” She said silkily. Acidos could see the evil behind the sweetness of her smile. But she was talking about Plague. He couldn’t help but be sucked in. He nodded, almost invisibly. “Well guess what? He’s forgotten about you,” Her husky voice changed and became a snarl, tinged with triumph. She had hurt him and she knew it. “He’s forgotten you ever existed.”

It was his turn to shriek, his mouth opening and an altogether alien sound, jagged and shrill, entered the world and seemed to wrench it in two. The fire that always lurked behind his evil eyes blazed as the white stallion rose on his hind legs and lunged for the mare’s throat. No longer was she his mother in his eyes, but an aura of evil, faceless and ugly, and all he wanted was to see her dead. Diabetia responded, lightning-quick, to his assault. She whirled and kicked up at his chest. Acidos shied to the side, landing heavily on his hooves. The keening cry erupted from within him again, and this time Diabetia fled before he had a chance to renew his attack. “You ever show up near us, Acidos,” She screamed over her shoulder as she galloped for her life. “Your father’ll kill you!”

And just like that, his world fell apart.

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PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2007 10:47 am


Foal
Since emerging from the basket you have known nothing but darkness; a mother who despises you and a father who views you as little more than an object to be manipulated to his whims, used as a tool against your mother. Upon first introduction to Diabetia by your father she snarls and attacks. In order to put her back in her place Plague steps in to keep her at bay. How do you react to this? What are your thoughts?


Yeah snarl all you like, horrid mare. Well of course the little colt wasn’t going to say that out loud and give the mare but another reason to attack him. But none the less, he held his ground from behind his “Father”. Ok so neither of them was to his approval but he could leave yet. His “Father” used him he had noticed that, but he was too young to fully understand it. Glancing around the colt pranced in his place, he wanted to do some things. Maybe he could run over and try and bite the horrid mare. No, that would put him to close. And he was knew enough to protect himself by using his father just this once.

Letting out something between neigh and a grumble, the little colt spread out his wings. To him it was like puffing himself out, he had seen a frog do it once. It had made the frog bigger. And that’s what he needed to be bigger. The bigger he was the better he could back at the mare right. Back at both of them. They hadn’t even cared to name him, his thoughts turned at that moment. Sure the colt had never been happy go lucky, that was all but beaten out of his mind by his “Father” the instant he left his basket. But he had never been vicious either. But now his thoughts turned to some thing evil, he wanted them dead both of them. Stupid mare, stupid “father”, he would get them both.

And with that he charged forward skipping under Plague towards Diabetia. Nipping at the mare’s flanks with a growl, the little colt stomp his front hooves down before retreating to safety behind Plague.
PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2007 2:32 pm


Prompt 1

Name: Torpid (soulless/callous)

A small thin body walked by plagues side like an obedient dog, today was going to be one of those days, father had said. He was going to see Dia, his mother, and he was told what to expect. Torpid snorted softly as his father's gaze looked down upon him. "Must I?" He asked. A colt of little words, and little mass, ones would say he was the weakling of the group. He looked malnourished, but never seemed to complain if he was hungry, or show any emotions at all. Plague gave him a toothy grin. "Can't deprive a mother of her children." He told his son, who just nodded ion agreement.

A Kalona mare came into view. The sounds of angry pants and snarls seemed not to phase the colt as his father lead him over to his brightly colored mother. A shell puppeted by his father, walking along as if on autopilot and saying nothing. His blank gaze landed upon his mother and her angry words fell upon deaf ears, he didn't even flinch as she reared to strike him with her bright colored hooves. Plague moved between them, defending him. Torpid watched her, using his father like a fence to see her angry face, eyes aflame with anger. She had so much emotion, and he lacked it all.

Why was she so mad? Didn't she have the chose to dispose of them at birth? He could not remember, but wouldn't it have been logical? A few good strikes to the basket should've done it. Yet they were still here, sons and daughters of a dark union. His tail idly brushed his flanks and looked to his father, no words spoken between them. Plague moved from his guarding point to let his son get a better view. Tor moved a few steps closer, his mother emitting a warning snort and he stoped. Her head shot down at him to snap at him but her moved out of her reach, and in words his father used, he chided in a dead pan voice eerie for any child to have. “Stupid....Stupid Mare.” Then with a manner beyond his years, he gave her a slight bow of his head, he knew one thing, respect those older, even those that despise you or vice versa. Even those of evil tendencies can have manners. He shook out his pelt, flicked his tail and turned his back to her.

Plague gave Dia and gruesome grin and turned to walk with his son. “Exactly as planned.” He commented to Torpid. “As always, father, as always.”

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PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2007 3:24 pm


Foal
Since emerging from the basket you have known nothing but darkness; a mother who despises you and a father who views you as little more than an object to be manipulated to his whims, used as a tool against your mother. Upon first introduction to Diabetia by your father she snarls and attacks. In order to put her back in her place Plague steps in to keep her at bay. How do you react to this? What are your thoughts?


Mother. Father. Two words that should have meant the world to him, but did not. 'Mother' meant weakness, pure and simple. If he behaved like 'Mother', he would feel the rush of hooves and teeth. Strong words would chastise him, and he would remember that 'Father' was the word that was most important to his survival. 'Father' meant many things, the most important of which was 'master', strength. Dimly, he knew that his words were not the words of others, that his views were different, strange. However, his understanding of them was vital. He must know the difference between them, and he must seek to follow his father.

His sire was difficult to impress. In fact, he wasn't entirely sure that it was possible to impress him. But he would certainly try, if it meant that he might garner a little bit of his father's approval. Suddenly a bubble of anger snapped up, roiling through him. It was his mother's fault that Plague thought he was weak, wasn't it? He must think that his own son was just like her. Weak like her. Stupid like her. Instantly, almost inexplicably, he hated her. He hated her because she had left them before he was even out of his basket, hated her because she defied Father, because she roamed free while he must remain here. If she had not been so wretched, such a coward, he would not have to put up with his sire's lessons the way he did. Surely Papa would find other ways to teach him.

But the lessons were of absolute importance, at the same time. This he knew. He idolized his father, the strange, almost skeletal stallion who had taken him in hand and begun to shape him. He held him up on high. He did not, however, love him. No... love was far too pure an emotion to be felt by one as tainted as he had become, even as a foal. His body was too soft, too small to be right. There were things he must do, ways he must change. He must, absolutely must achieve the greatness that only his father commanded. Manipulation was a tool, and a powerful one. He'd had it used on him long enough to know what it meant, what it was. What it might entail. Swiftly, his baby thoughts began to grow more complex. The change was a necessary one, one that he could nor afford to do without.

He pushed himself, forcing himself to improve. Even a hint of praise was worth whatever pain he might encounter in the interim. But it was not praise he was seeking. No, he had a far grander goal than that. He divorced himself from his gentler feelings, until they became nothing but a shadow, nothing but a memory. Even the desire to appeal to his father was forgotten in his obsession. Perfection took time, took effort. It took everything he had, and more than he had not yet discovered in himself. His failure to achieve that goal rankled, but he ignored the sting.

Personal pride was not as important as the end result. And slowly, the darkness was eating at his soul. His awareness of the passing of days was dim, distant. He did not, in fact, notice how long it had been since he had come to his decision until his father told him that he was bringing him to meet Diabettia. Mother. The mare who had not had any role in his upbringing until now, except as a tale, as a warning. Another foal would have been told to 'be good, or the Skinwalkers will get you', but he was told that he was to behave, or to expect the same treatment as his dam. He did. He listened, he obeyed. He allowed himself to be formed into a tool to his father's hooves. Why did Father want him to meet her? Silently resentful, the colt followed Plague, his young eyes filled with a deceitful wickedness that might perhaps have been perceived to be disturbing.

He almost tuned out the conversation that his father had with his mother, but then he noticed the madness in her eyes. Without any further warning, she lashed out. Well, well, well. She did have some spirit after all. Fool. She ought to know that disobedience came with an almost instantaneous reward. Her striking hooves connected with nothing, leaving her off balance, open to his father's attack. His father stepped in, coming between them, and backed her down.

“Sweetness, you know better than to defy me,” Plague mouthed, his tone harsh, and ... was there a hint of amusement, hidden at its depths? Disbelieving, the colt stared from his sire to his dam, trying to make sense of what he saw. Yes, his father was angry at her show of rebellion, of fire, but he was also amused by something. What could that be? It was then that he realized the true reason that Father had brought him out here to meet her.

She hated him. Hated the sight of him, her son. It seemed to trouble her some how, to torture her. Smirking to himself, the colt drew himself up, giving her a look that said plainer than words how pathetic he found her to be. The darkness roiled within him, giving him strength and shaping his thoughts in wild, twisted ways. So, that was how it was to be. He was truly a tool, truly something that could be used again the candy covered Kalona. The knowledge pleased him in ways that he could not describe. Just by being who he was, what he was, he had assisted his father in punishing his mother. Good.

I hate you too, Mother. he thought at her, his eyes cruel and hard. I hate your weakness, and your stupid, foolish 'freedom'. It was entirely her fault that he did not learn the more important lessons from his father. Lessons that would teach him how to be something more than a puppet. How dare she interfere in his life in that way? Senseless mare. The manner in which his father had reined her in was masterful. He was impressed. So, that was the way to do things. Use force, and words. Weapons of the mind, and strength of the body. Watching him once more, he realized how very desperately he wanted to become like him.

Of course, Diabettia was a roadblock to that. However much he cut himself off from the thought of her, of her behavior, her blood ran in his veins. Damnable wench. She corrupted him just by existing. He gave her a hard, unforgiving look. Surely, her weakness was a trial for him, a trial which he must learn to overcome, to overshadow. He had already learned what her behavior meant in his life. Now he was learning what it meant to be her son. Well, he'd show her. He would become more than she could ever hope to be. He would become his name. He would become... Famine. And his father would be proud.
PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2007 3:25 pm


Name: Throes
Meaning: "Agony" or "Violent"
Personality: Throes, in my personal opinion, would be much of an agonized foal, possibly being made fun of by his two siblings for his 'girly-white' color. As his other two siblings would despise his mother, most likely, he would probably love her, not understanding why things are the way that they have become. As much as his father would take care of him and teach him the ways to be evil and conniving, he would surely follow his mother's beliefs in the end, being a true Kalona, despite his 'girly-white' color that always got him picked on in the first place. Not only would he be like his mother in simply beliefs, but he would stay by her side, defending her against his father, as it is very clear and obvious that their relationship is nothing more than a 'hostage' and 'bondage' situation. He would do everything he could to protect her, as well as himself, while still managing to be a male that's irresistible.

Prompt:
Foal
Since emerging from the basket you have known nothing but darkness; a mother who despises you and a father who views you as little more than an object to be manipulated to his whims, used as a tool against your mother. Upon first introduction to Diabetia by your father she snarls and attacks. In order to put her back in her place Plague steps in to keep her at bay. How do you react to this? What are your thoughts?


The light... The damn light... It burned so badly. The darkness was much, much nicer, as it was so cool, and it seemed like everything could be done in the dark without anyone seeing you. It was like you were invisible, and it had surely felt good to feel that way. Now, as light sizzled across precious white skin, agony and anger overcame the new foal that was emerging, already being teased about his 'delicate' color.

With a half yawn, half mini rawr, a rather small, white foal emerged from within a white basket, sporting the many shades and hues of pink and black. Around his basket, two others sat, both being a very dark color, much like the inside of his basket was. However, they were already open and foals were already out and standing about. With his black eyes looking through the thick rays of sunlight, he noticed that the two other foals, his siblings, were snarling at him, laughing, and just being plain out cocky.

He tried his best to snarl back, but the light literally smacked him in the face when his body inched outwards, the white shine of his coat reflecting in the sun's powerful light, making him go blind for a few seconds. All that did was make him hear more snarls and laughter, a large and loud grunt being heard as well. As he blinked away the confusing daze, he saw a large, black, and kinda stinky-looking stallion standing before him, two dark-colored foals on either side of him. They were all smiling with evil grins on their faces, all eyes down on himself.

Toppling the basket over, the large stallion grunted some, smacking the foal's rear quarters with his muzzle, making him skid into the ground some. More maniacal laughter was heard, making the small foal very agitated by now. Showing just how tough he could be, he sprung to his hooves, snorting at his two cackling siblings. They stood stunned for a moment, the only sound being able to heard was a grunt of approval from the large stallion. Smiling at his own leisure, the foal walked around some, only to come across some damn stone that just so happened to be in the way, making him trip and tumble a few feet, landing with his tail in the air... And his face in the ground. That was a stupid mistake... Because from that day forward, he never heard the end of the same evil laughter from his stupid siblings again.

Days went by, as well as a few weeks. The young foal, who was starting to turn into a lean, mean, and colt-snarling machine, had been trained and toughened up by his father, Plague. Ever since he had come out of his basket, he had encountered evil... And due to it, he had become evil himself. He was always pushed around for the mere color of his body, saying how he was the lightest of all evils. That, more than anything, ticked him off... And he was determined to show anyone who made fun of him for it just how evil he could truly be.

However, today was not the day to do so. Today, his father was taking him and his two bratty siblings, Taint and Torment, to go and finally meet their mother. Supposedly, she was nothing more than a cruel and heartless b***h, but Throes, the young foal, would determine that for himself, as he felt that he had already met three of the most cruel and heartless things on the face of the damn planet.

As they came into a dark clearing, not much could be seen around them, except a few trees, bushes, grass, and other crap that Throes could care less about. Unfortunately though, the one thing that could easily be seen was himself, making him look like a robber caught in the spotlight. He heard his siblings begin to cackle like that always did, his father shushing them immediately. So, instead, the pointed and silently laughed, just ticking off the young foal.

When the four of them came to an immediate halt, Throes thought that maybe his siblings had finally gotten in trouble, but that surely wasn't the case, as their father loved to have them tease each other. Instead, about 10 feet away, a white mare with demonic wings and horns stood in the darkness, her pure white skin showing up, just as Throes did. His black eyes stared for a moment, entranced by what he saw. He was so involved with what this mare looked like that he never heard her or his father talking, and was interrupted in his gazing as he was shoved forward with a mighty kick of his father's forehoof.

Standing about only 5 feet away from the mare now, Throes could feel her glare upon him. While she looked sweet and innocent, her soul was very dark and evil, as the young foal could hear her mumblings about his father. As the two of them stood in the dark clearing, neither of them made a move.. Not a sound.. Until....

SNAP!!

Cringing and shivering, the white colt slowly opened his black eyes, seeing his father stand before him, the white mare biting into his flesh. With a snarl and bite right back, the black stallion pushed away the white mare, her pink eyes glaring at him as she now stood away about 5 feet like she had before.

"Meet your mother... Diabetia... Throes."

Those were the only words his father spoke. Still quite shaken up, the young foal watched his mother and father. The two of them just stared he each other down... Not saying anything at all. Then, he concentrated his gaze on his mother. She was looking right at him, and while she looked very upset, hurt, and quite disgusted, there was something about her that seemed to lock Throes into her.

Snarling and grunting, the black stallion pushed his son away from the white mare, and right back over to his teasing siblings. Even though he had done nothing wrong, they teased him yet again, making him quite angry and flowing with pain. He quickly snarled at them, pushing them back, and making them stay at bay. He was not in the mood for their damn mortalities...

While he walked with his siblings and father back to the beginning of the dark clearing, he had the urge to quickly turn around and look back at his mother. She was still standing there, watching them walk off. Her white coat glowed, just as his own did. Sure, she had attacked him, and probably would of killed him had his father of not been there... But for some reason, he didn't blame it all on her.... And that was the only reason that stayed in his mind that he would meet up with his mother once again.. Whether she liked it or not.

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PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2007 3:51 pm


Foal
Since emerging from the basket you have known nothing but darkness; a mother who despises you and a father who views you as little more than an object to be manipulated to his whims, used as a tool against your mother. Upon first introduction to Diabetia by your father she snarls and attacks. In order to put her back in her place Plague steps in to keep her at bay. How do you react to this? What are your thoughts?


Tyrant ducked and kicked up his heels as he danced out of the way. He slashed his tail through the air with anger as his ears p***k up curiously watching as his father steps forward to handle the wayward mare.

Crazy b***h, he thought as he continued to watch, a feeling of delight rising up in his young heart as she was bullied back to her place like a proper mare should be. So that must be what it means to be a stallion. Powerful, in control, and strong. His eyes locked on his father in contemplation.

You won't be strong forever, old man, Tyrant thought as he considered his options. Someday I will be stronger, powerful, and in control. Then all you have will be mine. Tyrant ducked his head as his father glanced over to him, hiding the ambition that swirled in his eyes. He had long since learned that his father's temper was not reserved to crazy mares.


Adult
Freedom at last! Or is it? Your childhood is something that will continue to haunt you for the rest of your life. It has formed you into the creature that you are today for better or worst. Upon meeting your mother again now that you're older how do you react to her? What, if anything, do you say? Do you blame her for the way that you've turned out or, in her absence, is it all the fault of your father?


Tyrant stepped out in a longer stride, feeling good today. The sun that beat down on his coat felt warm and inviting. He felt stronger. I'm not ready to challenge him yet, but I am getting there, he thought to himself. He was enjoying the feel of his body as it bent and moved to his commands, just as the world should.

He spotted a mare nearby and paused, striking a pose of control and strength, knowing that any proper mare would be attracted to that. His tail drooped as soon as he noticed it was his mother. She glared at him, but said nothing. He snorted and wandered up to her, cool and calm, yet ready for any attack.

"Well hello, mother," he sneered. His ears turned up as he noticed that she was uncomfortable with the word; an unexpected yet pleasant jab. A grin marked his features as he used this to his advantage.

"How are you today, mommy?" He danced out of her way with a chuckle as she swiped at him, then suddenly stepped up to her to press his young but stronger body against hers.

"I'd be nicer to me, were I you," he said casually, letting a hint of a threat slide through his voice like a dagger in the dark, "You never know what accidents can happen out here," he said and chuckled again, this time taking her hit, letting it hit him squarely.

He took one step back and breathed in slowly, as if enjoying the pain, letting a look of pleasure dance across his face. He shook out his mane and glanced at her again, then flicked his ear at her as if she were an annoying fly.

"Mmmm thanks, mom, but you're not my type," he tossed over his shoulder as he trotted off, tail up and lifting his hooves high to flash in the light. The pain in his side was a pleasant price to pay for the look on her face. Yes... today is a good day.
PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2007 4:25 pm


Since emerging from the basket you have known nothing but darkness; a mother who despises you and a father who views you as little more than an object to be manipulated to his whims, used as a tool against your mother. Upon first introduction to Diabetia by your father she snarls and attacks. In order to put her back in her place Plague steps in to keep her at bay. How do you react to this? What are your thoughts?

Malice follows his father through the woods solemnly. It has been a long day full of harsh lessons. He was tired and bruised, but he knew that if he wanted to eat anything, he'd have to follow Plague to get it. Malice resented his youth and small stature. He bored holes into the back of his father's head with his eyes. His stomach rumbled, but would not be satisfied soon. There was a purpose to this trek. The sunlight filtered in through the leaves of the trees, blinding Malice as rays caught his eyes. He winces and moves through the shadows as best he can. The pair come to a clearing, where Diabetia is waiting as instructed.

This is my mother? Malice thinks to himself. Having become accustomed to the blackness of his father, the bright white and pink of his mother hurt his eyes. He glares at her distastefully as she attacks. He bares his teeth and snarls at her as Plague steps in to interfere. Side-stepping his father, Malice lunges at his mother, catching her off-guard. She stumbles, surprised at this attack. Plague laughs, amused at his newest toy. Malice straightens himself, grinning wickedly at his deed and at the apparent pride of his father. He prepares for another attack, but Plague steps in. It seems that Diabetia had made a kill recently and Plague's insatiable appetite for blood has gotten the best of him. The rats surrounding him were already squeaking, eager for scraps. Plague muscles past Diabetia and Malice, who both fume at his arrogance. Malice snarls, baring his fangs at his father who ignores the gesture. Malice flicks his tail derisively at his mother as she flares her nostrils angrily and turns away.

The rats swarm around Malice's hooves and swiftly he extinguishes one of their lives. Another and another he slaughters, laughing and dancing in the puddles of blood that he creates. Soon the swarm gives him a large birth, lest any more fall victim to his wicked game. Looking up he finds his father grinning down at him, apparently pleased at something. "You've learned well, unlike your stupid mother." Malice snarls and pushes past Plague towards the carcass. The rats protest, but keep their distance. The rats are just the beginning. Malice thinks to himself. Soon all shall give me the respect I deserve. I will become strong one day. Strong enough to free myself from these two idiots I must call parents.

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Freedom at last! Or is it? Your childhood is something that will continue to haunt you for the rest of your life. It has formed you into the creature that you are today for better or worst. Upon meeting your mother again now that you're older how do you react to her? What, if anything, do you say? Do you blame her for the way that you've turned out or, in her absence, is it all the fault of your father?


He stood on the outer edge of the clearing, a faint breeze blowing over his body. The stallion had not returned to this spot since he left all those years ago. The moon shone as a sliver over head, illuminating the clearing. He snickered to himself. It was all too perfect for him.

Lunis stepped out of the trees, he hooves barely making a noise. In the light of the moon, he seemed to shimer white, though those who knew him would have thought otherwise. Lunis was evil, pure evil, and he enjoyed it.

He had been evil ever since he could remember. Of his parents, Lunis blamed Diabetia--he spat at the name--for his turnout. She had left him with his father, Plague, a minipulating stallion who shaped him into a tool to get back at Dia. And Lunis despised both of them for it.

The stallion smiled evilly, exposing a pair of fangs. He wanted blood tonight. Lunis wanted blood whenever he thought of his parents.

A flash of pink and white in the corner of his eye pulled him out of his reterive. He stared at the white and pink mare standing in front of him. Her purple and pink candy filled hair blew cautiously in the wind. Her pink eyes were full of surprise.
Lunis snarled. "b***h..." He stared her down, rage and hatred building in his body. The mare didn't recognize him, that much he could tell. The stallion smirked at his mother. "How can you not remember me, Mother?" His voice had a blood chilling ring to it.

The mare stared wide-eyed at him. "Lunis..." He smirked even more. He would kill her one day, and Plague. Diabetia would feel the pain that he felt and he would take pleasure ripping out her throat. His father, well, Lunis would do even worse to him.

"Speak while you can. For you won't be alive much longer." He laughed to her, his threat sending waves of panic and fear through the mare. He turned around and walked back into the trees. Lunis left his mother in the clearing, and spoke from everywhere, "You are the reason I am like this. Don't ever forget that... Mother."
PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2007 6:10 pm


Prompt
Freedom at last! Or is it? Your childhood is something that will continue to haunt you for the rest of your life. It has formed you into the creature that you are today for better or worst. Upon meeting your mother again now that you're older how do you react to her? What, if anything, do you say? Do you blame her for the way that you've turned out or, in her absence, is it all the fault of your father?


A part of him would forever blame his mother for her absense in his life, but regret was something he had grown to ignore. Much like the dull ache of pain and the festering loneliness he felt sometimes, even in the company of his father, he learned to ignore the regret that he had only Plague to turn to for survival, that he had only Plague to look up to and to learn from. Did that change Luther's anger to Diabetia? Oh, of course not. To him, it only rationalized it.

Luther narrowed his eyes darkly at the hideous, brightly colored Kalona. How can she call herself that, he wondered, since no true Kalona would ever be like Diabetia, would ever be as horrid as his own mother. His lip curled back in a fierce sneer, but he did not speak yet. He would wait. Patience was a kindly thing to have on his side, even if it was something he'd been thoroughly 'taught', as opposed to inhereted.

Finally, when Diabetia had made no move to speak, Luther took it upon himself to do so. "Look at me." He said slowly, his voice quiet and barely more than a growl. "Look at me." He sneered, walking towards Diabetia with every intention of hurting her, for every day that he hurt he'd make her hurt. "I am this way because of you." He hissed, pausing in front of her. Despite his anger, Luther carried himself proudly, refusing to look up at anyone and raising his head above Diabetia.

"How can you even call yourself Kalona." He mused, eyes narrowed. "Look at you. You look like one of them," he spat, referring to the regular Soquili he had the displeasure of watching, how they paired off 'in love', weakening their own defenses in favor of another. "You're pathetic." He spat, glaring at her.

"And you know what?" He continued, not giving Diabetia the chance to interrupt him. "You're protection has run out." Luther started to circle his mother, the absolute bane of his existance, slowly. "I'm all grown up now. Don't you see?" He flicked his tail near her face, jumping away before he could be bit with a wicked grin. "This'll be fun." He hissed, rearing back and kicking at Diabetia as hard as he could.

Of course, there was time for Diabetia to get away, and he gave her that opportunity. Luther was nothing if not a fool for games, and he laughed even more when she got away, skittering from the kick before she could be wounded. He turned to face her, eyes flashing. "Watch yourself from here on out, Sweetness." He hissed, taunting Diabetia with his father's pet name. "I'm not him, I'll kill you without warning."

Luther turned away from Diabetia, and kicked himself into the air, airborn in barely a minute. He flew away from Diabetia, planning. Luther was nothing if not patient.

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PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2007 6:34 pm


((Sorry to interrupt but: Are we allowed to enter more than twice? Just curious...))
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