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 Posted: Fri Apr 27, 2007 9:36 pm
ah, and see, I was trying to get an avatar that went with the fan (it's a present I got for my gaiaversary razz ) ah, oh well! Thanks!
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Posted: Fri Apr 27, 2007 9:38 pm
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Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2007 12:55 am
go ahead and rate away! constructive criticism is always welcome, and If I like your ideas, you MIGHT actually see them done.
edit: I just realized the way I said that could be construed as rude, or boarish. I apologize.
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Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2007 1:04 am
I would also like to point out before hand. the baby chick is supposed to stand out, and look out of place. He is there to make people take a second look and ask, "what?"
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Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2007 1:28 am
umm... can you rate my dream avy please?
i dont want to waste my money just to know that its a bad combination
thx
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Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2007 1:32 am
I'd like to hear what you think of the following avatars:
Peasant (plain, yah?)
Sinelo
Mintergreen
Shenanigans
drknss (imagine the outfit without the nasty green glitch)
sneez
Thanks heart
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Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2007 2:30 am
whee! thanks for the tips!! ill do whats you suggested cept for the eyes and hair. ^^;; thats kinda like my signiture er.. thing. lol. i just dont feel like meh. if it wasnt XD. thanks again! you are BEAST. whee
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Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2007 2:38 am
Go ahead rate me...It's way black I know. Maybe Goft of goddess doesn't go with it...Just give me your honest oppinion and be as harsh as you want. I'm here to improve not get all defensive.
Thank you
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Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2007 3:22 am
I like the way you rate 3nodding People don't often give details on why they are rating the way they are so.... Please rate me. xd
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Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2007 7:29 am
@ Frazzled Panda
Well, I wasn't able to get to your avi yesterday and I am sorry. You have changed it since then and seeing as I do remember what it looked like yesterday, I am glad you changed your outfit cause your rating, I think, will be better now then it would have been~
xd
Anyways, let me start with the colors. Very well put together I have to say, matching the different hughs of white/grey with other colors like black that connect together.
Normally, the slight yellow on the pants would stand out and not look that good, but it is pretty well layered out by your avatar's skin tone and the owl's eyes so it's ok.
I recommend getting a held item or a tail though, just to balance out the hat on top so that the top half doesn't look larger than the bottom half.
I like your choice of gloves, but if you look closely, they really arn't a "black" black, they are more of a lighter shade. Your mask, hair, shoes, and shirt, on the other hand, are of a different black so those match together, but the gloves are a bit off. This is ok though, you don't really have to change it, I was just pointing it out to you for future reference.
Overall, 6.5/10
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Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2007 7:44 am
@ bluebellfaerie24
And married you shall be, right after a quick make-over!
I only see a couple problems with your avi.
To begin, your skin tone doesn't match your outfit in the least. It's too dark for all white and throws the avatar off.
Secondly, the eyes don't go. If you follow what I say below, go with a red eye color.
Third, the hair doesn't go either.
Again, too dark for the white look so it stands out and makes you notice the hair only and not the items surrounding it. Go for maybe a red or a light pink color, but this is only if you go with my last bit of advice below about the dress.
As for the accessories themselves, if you are going to use the hearts in the background, perhaps try the pink version of your current dress? It would match more and even out your appearance giving it a softer look, just as a bride-to-be should look!
;]
Overall, 5/10
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Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2007 8:04 am
@ princealexis
Well, I see random things matching every-which-way so it looks weird to begin with.
Yeah, I will take into consideration that the chick is to stand out and look strange. And don't worry about being rude or boarish, it doesn't bug me in the least.
=]
Ok, so lets start up top:
The eagle looks awkward just there, matching nothing but the eyes, and clashing with the rest of the entire avatar. The ears obviously match the tail, but nothing else. If you are trying to match them with the hearts, forhead stone, and the held heart box, then you need more red colors, but with just those items, seeing as the color hughs are different, it doesn't connect. The basis of your outfit is, or seems to be, black. Some people say black matches with everything...well...it that isn't always true, especially on Gaia.
The armor on the shoulders...they just don't belong in general. I would get rid of them personally~
As for the scythe, it tries to match the hair, but doesn't succeed because the colors are off. The silver on the scythe is just in its own class. Unless the avatar is black&white/grey and the hair and eyes go along, I wouldn't use it. I point this out to everyone though, because that item is, afterall, the monthly collectable, and rages with popularity for a while until the new item comes out for the next month. Unfortunatly, it is one of those tricky items to deal and match things with~
Oh, and if you are trying to match it with the chain hanging from your avi's hand, that doesn't work out well either. Again, different colors~
It's an all together clashing avatar in many ways. Just chaging items here and there though, could bring it together better.
But, you have no reason to take my opinion into consideration, I'm just putting it out there afterall~
mrgreen
Overall, 3.5/10
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Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2007 8:19 am
Rate me please =3
Not the best, but I tried getting the Orange-Green scarf to match something brown.
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Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2007 8:37 am
@ Skye Nabby
Alright, I'll take a look at your dream avatar for you.
I do indeed see a few things that need to be changed. I mean, you can still get the items there, just maybe, don't put them all together~
The first thing that stands out at me is the sword. Whether it's supposed to do that or not is not my concern. It just doesn't match. Either hold the Demonbow there is its place or get the Demonic Pitchfork, depending on your budget.
Not on his clothing, there is a speck of green and a few specks of red. Now, I know, it;s the clothing, but there are items that don't have those. They look strange just...there ya know~
Now to look at the two items behind you and by your feet. They may look good together at first, but upon closer inspection, the colors intermingle to create a strange sense and it starts to look awkward. I would get rid of them personally so if you do buy them, put them with another outfit.
Lastly, what's with the chain and ball at the feet? It is just another random accessorie? Again, put it with different items, `kay!
=]
Overall, 4/10
Maybe try something like this?
It's a quickie, but it's alright~
Item List:
#0000FF Complex Shirt M
Black Goth Boots - M
Black Tuxedo Pants
Celestial Wrap
Dark Halo
Demonbow
Nitemare Collar
Romani Glasses
Shadow Spirit
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