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Intkueetu

PostPosted: Tue Feb 10, 2009 7:55 pm


Nice Fwee!
Your lasting bubble is pretty sick o.o
PostPosted: Tue Feb 10, 2009 8:02 pm


Looks good! I like your essence concept a lot~

One thing you might want to think about, though, is adding in a little bit of the essence to the Raeven's personality. Not a lot (or not at all) if you don't want to - but right now his personality is all ferret XD Which is cute... but yea.

Just a thought and not something you'd really need to do or whatever :3

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Fweedle

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 10, 2009 8:08 pm


Aww, thanks guys. XD

Making him bubbly? I think that's cute. XD Thanks. X3
PostPosted: Tue Feb 10, 2009 8:14 pm


XDD That would be cute. A bubbly, happy little thief! ... He'd get along with my guardian pretty well... *bricked*

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Fweedle

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 10, 2009 8:20 pm


MINI EVENT RAEVAN CONCEPT


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Essence: Lasting Bubbles - Bubbles are one of the most fragile object in the world, often a short term source of entertainment for the young. However, the clump of bubbles in this vial does not pop no matter how much you push, prod and squeeze the bubbles, it doesn't seem to have any effect. Even piercing a needle through it does nothing.
Soul: Ferret
Owner: Agni Maxwell
Powers:

Bubble Creation; Able to create bubbles from any part of his body.

Bubble Manipulation; Able to change the size and strength of the bubbles created. The strength and size of the bubbles he is able to make the are limited by his stage.


Feeding: Fills his 'stomach' by absorbing bubbles. It doesn't matter if it's air bubbles or water bubbles. Once he feeds, the bubbles harden for a few minutes before finally bursting.

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 10, 2009 10:00 pm


I think I've said this before, but I think your concept is very nice. Though your teleportation power has me on the fence since your essence is bubbles that don't pop. So from my thinking is that it wouldn't be able to 'pop' due to the fact of its essence.

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 12, 2009 4:52 am


Fweedle
MINI EVENT RAEVAN CONCEPT


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Essence: Lasting Bubbles - Bubbles are one of the most fragile object in the world, often a short term source of entertainment for the young. However, the clump of bubbles in this vial does not pop no matter how much you push, prod and squeeze the bubbles, it doesn't seem to have any effect. Even piercing a needle through it does nothing. "I'm really quite fond of your last bubbles concept and I wish that somehow they could be real - imagine the endless entertainment of trying to squish them! (evidently I'm a little kid at heart) Your essence fits with Mouse's advice, it's name says it all and your description isn't overly wordy or complex."
Soul: Ferret "A wonderfully cute and fitting soul. The playful nature of a ferret fits excellently with your essence in my opinion. I think the markings and thief-like aspects of the ferret would also result in an interesting raevan design."
Owner: Agni Maxwell
Powers:

Bubble Creation; Able to create bubbles from any part of his body.

Bubble Manipulation; Able to change the size and strength of the bubbles created. The strength and size of the bubbles he is able to make the are limited by his stage.

Teleportation; Able to make himself 'pop' and reappear another place almost instantly. Distance determined by his stage.

"No real problems or criticisms here. Although Ebony has a point - if his essence is unpop-able then he shouldn't really be able t pop to travel. He could just get inside his bubbles and float around?"

Feeding: Fills his 'stomach' by absorbing bubbles. It doesn't matter if it's air bubbles or water bubbles. Once he feeds, the bubbles harden for a few minutes before finally bursting.
"Another cute idea!! What about bubble bath? I can imagine you raevan sitting in a jacuzi or bubble bath feasting on the bubbly goodness. ;D"

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 12, 2009 7:39 am


Yeah, I wasn't so sure about the teleportation thing either. Thought that he doesn't have enough powers. XD

I guess I will scrap it. x3

LOL, indeed it will. It'll be like a buffet for him. XD

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Fweedle

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 12, 2009 7:40 am


Removed the teleporation powers. X3
PostPosted: Fri Jul 10, 2009 10:38 pm


Added a little more on his powers. Snoofles and I felt that his powers were a little passive, just for show. So I decided to let him generate such bubbles inside of others and than manipulating the size to cause various wounds.

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 9:46 pm


Oh man, making air bubbles in other things is a very serious and deadly thing, believe it or not! People have been murdered by having small air bubbles injected into their bloodstream, you know.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 6:15 pm


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Oh man, making air bubbles in other things is a very serious and deadly thing, believe it or not! People have been murdered by having small air bubbles injected into their bloodstream, you know.


Exactly! Well, Snoofles and I found that he needed a power that was more deadly and injecting bubbles into people is pretty deadly. XD

Fweedle

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