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PostPosted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 6:18 am


She was sitting against a wall, hugging her knees to her chest, her head buried in them. She started crying, for Rose, and Brian, and herself, and her grandma, and even the kid a little, and for herself and Rose some more. Then, after ten minutes or so, she listened to her ipod untill she fell into a light sleep, or more like she went into a place hovering between the room and sleep, nothingness, where she knew what was going on, her senses sharp and alert to any movement, sound, smell, anything that told her what was going on. She was never one for skirts, so when she had gotten her prom dress, she had added white capris underneath, just so that if she wanted to hike up to the waterfall, a normal occurance, that night, she didn't have to lug a heavy skirt, and would be free to move. So, she stood up, unsnapped the sash which was wrapped around her back to keep the skirt on, and unsnapped the actual skirt, which fell to the floor with a light swooshing sound.
PostPosted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 8:17 pm


Brian grabbed up his bag and searched inside for his knife. "Gotcha." He said. Brian stalked into the backstage area and started his hunt.

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 2:41 pm


((Sorry I's has beens gones so long... I was at my Aunts.))

Abby picked up her skirt and wandered to the edge of the stage and put her skirt down there. She walked to the spot where the kid had dissapeared and tried to find her 'happy place', the surest way that she could think of to contact that psycopath, but to her surprise, she couldn't focus. Something was wrong. She took off her heels and pulled her pocket knife out of her bag. One of the little knife attachments came off and she turned around with her head down and quickly slid it into the pocket between the inside of her cheek and her teeth. She opened the rest of the knife and waited, hidden in shadow, for whatever was to come next.
PostPosted: Tue Sep 04, 2007 1:54 pm


Brian found himself behind two unexpected teens. The two were scared out of their wits, embracing tightly. 'Aww.... isn't that sweet... kill them. Both of them.' His mother's voice snapped sternly. 'Yes, mother.' Brian said with a smile, pulling his bucknife up and preparing to make the first stab into the boy's back.

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 04, 2007 2:25 pm


"OY! YOU! GET AWAY FROM THEM! Don't make me come over there, right now, or it's not going to be pretty!" Abby screamed as she ran towards the kid, who was about to plunge his knife into a kid. "god, why didn't I think of bringing duct tape..." she muttered to herself.


((didn't you mean "unsuspecting", not "unexpected"?))
PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 4:51 pm


((Unexpected. Brian wasn't supposed to find anyone behind here, he was going to circle around to the other side of the gym behind the back hall and kill a group there.))

The two were startled and turned to find Brian. Without responding to Abby, he plunged the knife into the boy's liver. He couldn't move or think as his unwelcome inhabitant left his body. The tenseness left him as he realized what he had done. "God... no!" He shouted, falling to his knees.

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 5:26 pm


"GOOD JOB, SMART ONE! YOU KILLED A KID, NOW YOUR FREAKY FRIEND HAS A BODY AND CAN WREAK HAVOC!" Abby yelled, rushing over. The kid was still alive, but unconsious. Abby looked at Brian and said, "My skirt is on the edge of the stage. If you want to fix your mistake, go get it. Bring it to me, and get all the first aid kits that the teachers have and some water." And went to work on the injury. She ripped off a piece of her pants and held it to the wound after removing the knife, then told the kid's friend to hold it there, pressing down as hard as possible and reached into her purseand pulled out her knife. With a noise of disgust, she emptied out her purse onto the floor.
PostPosted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 8:17 pm


4laugh

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 11:48 pm


Brian heard a devilish laugh come from up above. It rang through the halls, not just in his head. He picked up the knife and looked at the blood stains. "It's my fault... I shouldn'tve let him..." Brian whispered before dropping it on the ground. He sadly went over to fetch the skirt when he noticed that everyone was staring at him. But there was something else wrong; there eyes were pitch black and sunken in. "I must be hallucinating..." Brian said.
PostPosted: Thu Sep 13, 2007 9:26 am


Abby worked to make sure that the kid didn't die. When she had done all she could, she told his friend to keep an eye on him, and to come get her if he took a turn for the worse. The she noticed the people around her. Their eyes were all black and sunken, like skulls. The second this fact registered with her, she grabbed Brian's arm and pulled him back towards the two other kids, the wounded one and his friend, the only two people there who weren't creepy. "We need to get somewhere they can't get to us! Hurry, you two grab him and come on!"

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 13, 2007 9:27 am


(( FYI, those two kids are going to be called Nate and Clay. Nate is the hurt one.))
PostPosted: Thu Sep 13, 2007 2:14 pm


Brian took the skirt and layed it across Clay before taking his feet. "Damnit..." He muttered as the creepy skull-faced kids began to walk over towards them. "This isn't his style. Why is he sending these kids after us?" He asked himself out loud. While Pinhead was inside of his head, he could hear homicidal thoughts and talks of death, which was nothing like what he was doing.

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 14, 2007 5:38 pm


zaht is a vewwy question
PostPosted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 10:47 am


((Huh?))

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 19, 2007 3:12 pm


I said, that is a verry question, but I ment that that is a verry Good question. See, see that's all you had to do, was add the good...
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