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Punk vs Emo

PostPosted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 12:02 pm


Please update! PLEASE TT-TT This story is awesome
PostPosted: Sun May 06, 2007 6:02 pm


More I need more! You left it at a good part.

xX7ZombieKiller7Xx


Punk vs Emo

PostPosted: Sun May 06, 2007 6:48 pm


Okay so I have the pointy things all prepared from when I was gonna hurt maduza9 not to long ago so if you don't update I'll have to use them on you... and again, it won't be pleasent.
PostPosted: Tue May 15, 2007 10:40 pm


You guys....I have been crying and crying over this story because...well...somehow my story was deleted because microsoft word has been deleted from my computer which is very sad. I lost ch. 8 also. I'm so sorry, but I will still keep updating though it will not be perfect spelling so bear with me.

Ch. 8
"Renee....wake up." Gerard said to her in a low voice. His cheek was up against hers and he had his lips to her ear. Renee went red as she soon realized this.
"G-Gerard?" That was all Renee could say. Gerard sat up then and looked down at her for a moment and then looked away.
"I'm sorry I couldn't help it. You were just so vunerable." Gerard said with a chuckle. Renee said up also as didn't say anything. All she could think about was how rude she was for falling asleep on her bed like that.
"I should be sorry. I shouldn't have fallen asleep like that. You just...you were drawing and I didn't...it seem like you were focussed on your drawing." Renee couldn't speak clearly since she was so embarassed.
"I guess I was." Gerard said, laughing. Renee let out a slight laugh that seemed more of a sigh. "I'd say you were asleep for about 30 minutes."
"We should rehearse then." Renee said. Gerard got up and went over to his desk to grab his script.
"Did you bring your script?" Gerard asked. Renee's eyes got big as she realized she hadn't grabbed her script.
"Oh, no I didn't bring mine!" Renee dropped her head and then Gerard laughed.
"It's ok. You can read off of mine." Gerard sat back down next to Renee and opened the script. Renee then leaned over so far to look at the script she slightly hit Gerard in the head. "Ow!" they both said at the same time. Gerard grabbed his forehead and Renee grabbed hers. Renee was blushing as she rubbed her head and Gerard the same.
"I'm sorry!" Renee said a moment after.
"It's ok. I was kind of getting sleepy anyway and that woke me up!" Gerard said laughing. Renee had to laugh at that. After about 2 minutes of rubbing their heads and laughing they got back to reading the script. "Where should we start?"
"Um...how about...the kissing...scene." Renee started to blush slightly as she realized that came off wrong. It sounded as if she just wanted to kiss him.
"Ok." Gerard said after an awkward pause. Soon they started to rehearse that part but Renee was stalling saying she needed to say a part over again because she didn't feel right saying it certain ways. Soon she ran out of lines to critique and the only thing they could rehearse now was their kissing. They both leaned in and slightly paused out of fear and have butterflies in their stomachs. They had their eyes closed except Renee because was looking at Gerard. Renee was shaking slightly. She closed her eyes completely and leaned in but paused as she heard a meow. Renee's eyes widened right before her lips touched Gerard. She leaned away so quickly shaking the bed causing Gerard to open his eyes and look at her in confusion. "What's wrong?" Gerard said leaning up also. Renee pointed at his window and saw a cat there. "Who's cat is that?"
"Karin..." Renee said under her breath and as soon as she said that the cat left. Gerard looked at her with a confused look on his face.
"Huh?"
"I have to go Gerard." Renee got up and headed for the door and Gerard followed like a dog. "I have to get back home. I'm sorry I have to leave so suddenly." Renee got to the door and grabbed the door knob but before she opened the door she looked back at Gerard. She saw Mikey leaning over the couch in the living room to look at me. It seemed like he thought something else happened. "I'll see you later Gerard." Renee opened the door and left. Renee started walking up the street while looking for the cat.
"Dude what happened? You do something to make her mad?" Mikey said as Gerard came into the living room and sat down in a chair.
"No. She saw a cat and then she said she had to get home." Gerard was slouched in his chair and biting his thumb while moving his leg up and down really fast.
"That sucks." Mikey said as if he didn't care anymore.

Zakuro159


Punk vs Emo

PostPosted: Wed May 16, 2007 3:40 am


KITTY KITTY!!! I love Kitty Kitty's. Lol, Mikey is such a younger brother.
PostPosted: Sat May 19, 2007 6:16 pm


sorry its been so long since my last update. the end of my sophmore year is coming so quickly I lost track of time lol

Zakuro159


Punk vs Emo

PostPosted: Sat May 19, 2007 7:43 pm


Does that mean you're gonna update soon?
PostPosted: Sat May 19, 2007 9:39 pm


yes because I enjoy knowing people care enough to read my idiotic stories when no one else would lol

Zakuro159


Zakuro159

PostPosted: Sat May 19, 2007 9:46 pm


Chapter 9

Renee walked down the street in a hurry. “Why was Binx following me?” Renee turned the corner of the street. “Is she watching me now?” Renee stopped at a crosswalk and looked both ways. “Why?” Renee crossed the street and walked back to her house. When she got there everything was dark. “Anyone here?!” Renee yelled in the kitchen. She walked to the living room and yelled again. “Anyone alive?!” Renee kept walking around and decided to turn on a light. It hurt her eyes as it was dark outside. Renee jumped and hit the wall. She slid down the wall and looked up. Karin was sitting in a chair facing the corner. Karin wasn’t moving or anything but just sitting there and by the look of it her hands were in her lap. Renee got up after a moment of pain and slowly walked over. “Karin?” Renee reached out a hand and touched her shoulder. Karin didn’t do anything so Renee fully grasped her shoulder and turned her around.

The chair slowly spun around until Karin was fully facing Renee. Renee’s eyes got big and her pupils got small. Renee dropped her jaw and slowly started backing away. “W-what?” Renee started releasing tears from her eyes but didn’t cry. Renee felt like puking but screaming at the same time. She wanted to run as fast as she could but she was paralyzed all over. Her throat was tight and her mind was blank except for the image that is before her. No one here except her and Karin, nobody here to help her. “K-Karin…?” Renee started backing away again but tripped and hit her head on the wooded floor. After a moment of head pain and receiving a headache she slowly sat herself back up. Renee looked up at the body that seemed to tower over her. It seemed to be Karin but her eyes were torn out and her jaw was missing. Her whole face was torn up and a huge hole in her head that let to her brain. Blood was splashed down her front and her hands held her jaw and eyeballs as if she sat there and had to hold her own body parts as the person did this to her. Without warning Renee puked to her side and coughed afterwards. Renee tried to get up but her legs were numb so she tried crawling away but her arms were too weak. She couldn’t get away at all, couldn't run away, all she could do was squirm. Feeling this sense of helplessness Renee started to cry. “Aunt Mare! Aunt Jeanette! Help!” She cried as she screamed this. She was consumed with fear all over. Renee closed her eyes and tried to get rid of the image in her head. She continued to cry as it didn’t work.
“What are you doing?”
PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2007 6:39 am


Please ,ma 'am, may I have some more?

Don't make fun of my oliver twist voice....

Punk vs Emo


Zakuro159

PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2007 8:47 am


I like it! Hold on a sec just let me type it up.
PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2007 9:18 am


Chapter 10

“What are you doing?”
Renee stopped crying. Renee stopped everything. Her loss of strength came back. Renee felt a strong emotion in her. It felt as if a great weight had been lifted off of her as she heard those words come from that cold-heartless voice. Renee looked up with tears still leaking from her eyes as she gazed into emotionless, lifeless eyes. “Karin?” Renee choked out. “You’re still alive…” Renee nearly started crying again. Karin didn’t do anything. She didn’t crouch down and help her sister up. She didn’t do anything. She glared down at her then looked around her. “Karin?” Renee started to sit up and look at her sister. She finally realized she had bloody hands and some blood on her clothes. She had a few smudges of blood on her right cheek.
“What are you doing?” she said in a cold voice in a slight whisper. Renee’s eyes got big and her bottom lip started to tremble. She dropped her head and started shaking.
“I…..I….thought you…..were dead. I thought you were m-murdered.” Renee choked out as her tears fell to the ground. Her left had been flat on the ground to help support Renee up but she made a fist with it.
“You’re an idiot.” Karin said in a harsh voice. Renee looked up with tears covering her cheeks.
“Huh?” It was all Renee could say. Without warning Karin slapped her across the face.
“You’re a coward! You’ll die a puppy’s death in this world. You can’t even find the strength to run away. You get queasy at the site of blood. You’re worthless.” Karin stood there saying this. Renee had her head to the left with her right hand covering a bright red mark. Renee was shaking but it wasn’t because of the slap. It was from Karin’s words because she feared that she was right. Renee didn’t blink through Karin’s speech but as soon as she stopped she slowly turned her head to look at Karin’s.
“That’s right.” Renee looked at Karin’s feet. “I’m a worthless puppy that should be beaten to death.” Renee started looking up her sister’s body. “I loose my strength when I see somebody I love dead right before me. Renee made it past her waste. She didn’t want to look at her sister directly while saying this because she would loose her words but she didn’t want to keep her head facing down or the other direction because she was coward that had no self-confidence. “I throw up when I see blood and dismembered people.” Renee made it to her throat and saw a straight line that was a scar. It looked like someone cut her or shot something at her that just left a graze. Renee got side tracked by the scar she lost her trail of thought. Karin shifted her body, waiting for Renee to finish. “I-I’m a worthless person.” Renee looked Karin in the eyes.
“I waited 5 minutes for that?” Karin glared at her as she kicked Renee in the stomach. Renee hit the floor with her stomach clenching with pain. Renee curled up in a ball and began to sob. “You can’t even defend yourself when someone physically hurts you.” Karin walked around Renee and went to the dead body. “You puked when you saw my dummy like this? You are pathetic.” Renee was shaking. “I told you earlier that K-1 needed to be killed. She was a failure. So I removed my blood vile from her brain. Without my blood to power her she can’t live.” Renee felt like puking again.
“Is Lady Renee alright?”

Zakuro159


Punk vs Emo

PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2007 9:40 am


Karin's a b***h.
PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2007 9:55 am


Alex The Homicidal Maniac
Karin's a b***h.
lol yes she is

Zakuro159


Punk vs Emo

PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2007 10:20 am


Zakuro159
Alex The Homicidal Maniac
Karin's a b***h.
lol yes she is

^^
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