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Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 4:39 pm


As do I. I truly enjoy it here as well. I've already been promoted and have donated to as well. I plan on making some more changes, in fact, if you would be so kind as to read my Announcement in the Main Forum about new Sub Forums.
PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 4:44 pm


That is a great idea. I posted a reply. I hope others will read it and agree also.

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Crew


One Poet
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 4:52 pm


Well I was mainly looking for the Captain's Approval, which I've received. And thank you for your approval as well.
PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 5:16 pm


Well I am glad to know you got the approval!
Much cheers and good luck to everyone. Hehe. Yeah, I''m excited about it.

undesirable_sacrifice
Crew


One Poet
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 5:18 pm


As am I. Soon, when there is a lot of people on, I'm going to hold a Poetry Contest for the people on here. I have a few items that I no longer use and no longer need, such as Elemental Hair, and probably can afford giving them as prizes.
PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 5:23 pm


Sounds like a wonderful idea. I'll try to help out as much as I can. Though at the moment all I can do is donate. But, I look forward to the new changes.

undesirable_sacrifice
Crew


One Poet
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 5:25 pm


And I do as well.

The only thing is, I am very new, and I feel like I'm taking some control over things, I don't want that. I only want to do it with the consent of the people of this Guild, a Social Contract of sorts.
PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 5:32 pm


True. It doesn't hurt to expose your ideas to the members of the guild before taking action. There is no harm in that. Most who seen the ideas seem to be agreeable about them. I don't think you have much to worry about. But posting before hand and seeing everyone's thoughts and ideas is probably the best. Just to get an idea of what others think as well.

undesirable_sacrifice
Crew


One Poet
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 5:38 pm


Very true, which is why I do so.

And also, since I can't put the ideas into effect myself, it is good to show the higher ups that it is approved.
PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 8:11 pm


- Untitled #2 Dedicated to Zachorie -

Look within my soul
Your infidelity and discourteous ways
Hiding using gentle words to shelter me

considerate yet cautious
In this world of turmoil and demise
We live for each other and die for each other
attainable and sustained my love for you remains
Without vigilance we walk down our path

To condone our flaws
Seeking our fate
With honest cause and devotion
Together we seek the answer
Of our fate unknown

undesirable_sacrifice
Crew


One Poet
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 10:52 pm


Very interesting. And since it's somewhat open, it leaves some to the imagination, I love it.
PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 11:46 pm


Thank you. I wrote this with someone in mind. For me it represents What we've gone through and what our future holds. Very vague and open, that is true. It leaves the mind to connect the pieces in their own ways. Thank you again friend.

undesirable_sacrifice
Crew


One Poet
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 11:47 pm


You're very welcome. And it is a very good my friend.
PostPosted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 4:15 am


- Untitled #3 -

My immortal wings take flight
With bloodshed and tears
Wake from my darkness
Release my demons again
Let them fly towards the skies
Burning all within its path
Flame fallen bodies
Flesh covered grounds
Everyone you seek
Look for their bones
Everyone you find
Has the mark of the fallen
Eternal and broken
Trapped within my heart
Forget no one
As they meet my wrath
No one is left behind

Just a random poem of thoughts disorganized. Untitled.

undesirable_sacrifice
Crew


undesirable_sacrifice
Crew

PostPosted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 4:20 am


- untitled #4 -

Looks now at what you have
Your stepping stones clouded by water
Cracked with age and turmoil
Lost within the seas of time
Be wary of your step
You may fall the next time around
I'll be there to catch your hand
Lift you up
Get to your feet
Start over again
Look at your stones
Study them
Learn from your falt
Let the mistakes pass over you
I give you my hand now
With all your stregnth
Pull yourself from the depths of the water
Back to the begining
Be wary of your friends
Truthful and honest
They are there to lend you a hand
When you fall next time around
I won't be there
Next time you fall
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