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 Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2005 4:36 pm
Ruevian Mwa ha ha -- men fear for their testicles when I'm around! They instinctively clutch their junk just by hearing my name! Almost as if your name was Dark Helmet. whee This is amazing material, Gendou. Keep it up, and I'll keep reading. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2005 8:16 pm
Grayed Moryera Gray Legion. That's the hottest name for a secret group ever. domokun Yeah. And it has the hottest sorta-leaders, too. whee *mimes walkie-talkie* chhh~ Gray Leader One! Come in, Gray Leader! This is Gray Prisoner---*cough* Gray Princess. We have an emergency! Gray Leader Two won't tell me if we're there yet, and I'm getting really, really bor---*has walkie-talkie snatched from her* whee
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Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2005 1:41 am
I've added another chapter. (Two in as many days? Amazing!)
This one continues the rather sedate pace we've set, though things pick up a little toward the end.
And yes, eventually they'll stop talking and start doing. Don't worry.
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Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2005 1:47 am
I should probably chat with Ananel sometime and actually meet him in this reality, too.
Can't wait to read more.
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Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2005 1:48 am
AHAHAH. PWN. heart DUDE. That's awesome. surprised Totally watching your EVERYMOVE.
*smile* I love how the people around the campfire are so relaxed around each other. It kind of ... I'm not quite sure it would be appropriate to say, but a family kind of feeling I really rather like. heart
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Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2005 1:53 am
O_O! We're being followed!
I am very happy that I am not the one with an arrow in my throat. I was getting kind of worried there, for a moment. whee
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Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2005 1:57 am
Quote: "I'll just be happy if there's an smithy," Arcadian said. An smithy. In other news: 1. Uncharacteristically catcalls bath scene! Ananel 2. Raa makes an appearance! HAWT! 3. I can see everyone ... ;__; Your imagery has always been really fantastic. I love the interaction between Rue and Weston. heart
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Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2005 1:59 am
Grayed Quote: "I'll just be happy if there's an smithy," Arcadian said. An smithy. Damn. It had been 'an armorer,' but I liked 'smithy' better. You realize that this is why real authors have rough drafts, right?
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Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2005 2:00 am
Yes, and that fantastic imagery certainly helps the random Ananel bath scene a good deal. domokun heart
Or maybe it's just me.
Yeah, that's probably it. whee
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Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2005 2:06 am
In Mory's Ananel-bath-scene, said disrobed man throws his head back, and the water arcs backward in a shoujo-esque sheen of tiny, sparkling pieces of light...
*SLOW MOTION BUBBLES!*
Gendou: Yo, everybody needs somebody to catch their mistakes. My first commission was of a catgirl and I gave her two left feet. TWO LEFT FEET. But did I see it before I'd given it to the commissioner, and before somebody told me? Noooo...
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Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2005 4:51 am
It's awesome so far, babe. I was fooled too for a moment when Kyraa came into the scene. You tricky b*****d, making me think she had killed on of my Legion!
And Kyraa as a badass huntress of doom? Hilarious. And you make it work. You really have improved on your characterization.
*stares at Mory* Pssch. Princesses.
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Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2005 6:20 am
I quite enjoy scenes such as these. Exposition and character development are just as important as action, and most times more interesting to read. 3nodding
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Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2005 7:09 am
...he disrobed, leaving his staff across his clothing.
*shnrrrk*
Seriously, though--I'm enjoying this. Awesome. And I wasn't he only one worried that Kyraa had killed a person.
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Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2005 7:55 am
Grayed In Mory's Ananel-bath-scene, said disrobed man throws his head back, and the water arcs backward in a shoujo-esque sheen of tiny, sparkling pieces of light...
*SLOW MOTION BUBBLES!* d
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Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2005 9:56 am
I swear to god, you're all a bunch of horn dogs. Any comments BESIDES that of Ananel's staff?
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