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Maria_Peacecraft

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Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 6:56 pm

Well the thing problem is with the BLD rating that you have there.

The numbers from the build rating that you forget to enter toward the calculations on the total of the character points.

Advice :

To fix the error simply adjust the BLD rating toward a lower number. Or reduces the other stat to make it possilbe for the BLD rating at that number.

Maybe lowering the BLD number to 2 as it will only cost you about 9 character points that makes the total of 29 points for your character.

total free character points to allocate : 30 points.

AGI: 1 cost 4 character points allocated 4
APP: 0 cost 1 character points allocated 5
BLD: 4 cost 25 character points allocated 30
CRE: 2 cost 9 character points allocated 39
INF: 0 cost 1 character points allocated 40
KNO: 0 cost 1 character points allocated 41
PER: 1 cost 1 character points allocated 42
PSY: -2 cost (-1) character points allocated 41
WIL: 1 cost 4 character points allocated 45
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Total character points that is allocated : 45 points.

Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2006 9:58 pm

Maria_Peacecraft

Well the thing problem is with the BLD rating that you have there.

The numbers from the build rating that you forget to enter toward the calculations on the total of the character points.

Advice :

To fix the error simply adjust the BLD rating toward a lower number. Or reduces the other stat to make it possilbe for the BLD rating at that number.

Maybe lowering the BLD number to 2 as it will only cost you about 9 character points that makes the total of 29 points for your character.

total free character points to allocate : 30 points.

AGI: 1 cost 4 character points allocated 4
APP: 0 cost 1 character points allocated 5
BLD: 4 cost 25 character points allocated 30
CRE: 2 cost 9 character points allocated 39
INF: 0 cost 1 character points allocated 40
KNO: 0 cost 1 character points allocated 41
PER: 1 cost 1 character points allocated 42
PSY: -2 cost (-1) character points allocated 41
WIL: 1 cost 4 character points allocated 45
______________________+
Total character points that is allocated : 45 points.

ok i adjusted it.

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Posted: Tue Dec 26, 2006 12:30 am

-ATTRIBUTES-]
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(2 points left)

AGI:1 cost 4 allocated points 4
APP:0 cost 1 allocated points 5
BLD:2 cost 9 allocated points 14
CRE:2 cost 9 allocated points 23
FIT:1 cost 4 allocated points 27
INF:0 cost 1 allocated points 28
KNO:0 cost 1 allocated points 29
PER:1 cost 4 allocated points 33
PSY:-2 cost -9 allocated points 24
WIL:1 cost 4 allocated points 28

Your character points is fine.

Pilot (MS) 2 1 cost 4 allocated points 4
Gunnery (Space) 2 1 cost 4 allocated points 8
Navigation (Air) 2 1 cost 4 allocated points 12
Navigation (space) 2 1 cost 4 allocated points 16
Combat sense 2 1 cost 4 allocated points 20
Information warfare 2 1 cost 4 allocated points 24
Technical sciences (Computer) 1 1 cost 1 allocated points 25
Technical sciences (Communications) 1 1 cost 1 allocated points 26
Small arms 2 1 cost 4 allocated points 30
Zero-G 2 1 cost 4 allocated points 34
Medicine (First aid) 1 1 cost 1 allocated points 35
Hand to Hand 2 1 cost 4 allocated points 39

total allocated points for skills 39 points

You still have 11 skill points to spend.

[-SECONDARY TRAITS-]
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STR 2+1/2 = 1
HEA FIT+PSY+WILL/3 1-2+1/3 = 0
STA 5x2 + 0 + 25 = 35
UNA 3+1+2+2 = 8
AD 3+1+2+0 = 6 ; because you didn't have any melee skill.

[-PHYSICAL STATUS-]
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Flesh wound threshold : 35/2 = 18
Deep wound threshold : 35
Instant Death Threshold : 70
System shock : 5+HEA = 5 + 0 = 5

Advice :

(1) I think you should spend your available points in your skills , don't forget you left out on your perk and flaws.

(2) And for your character description well just for a minute forget about the stats , numbers and all of that. Just tell me about your character , what do you see in your mind eye as you imagine your character ?

Posted: Tue Dec 26, 2006 12:45 am

Medium build, not too big or small. brown hair, ice blue eyes. fairly muscular. as for clothes, just standard military cammo.

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Posted: Tue Dec 26, 2006 11:16 pm

Name : Erwin
Last Name : Marx
Callsign : Jaguar 7
Age : 25
Lineage : Human
Height: 6'1
Weight: 167 Lbs

Phsyical description sad Will post it later on when I get inspiration to describe my character.)

Character background / history : Born in a fancy resort colony he was seen as a high class person but was instead a hard middle class worker who had it tough. When a teenager his parents sent him to military school. Oddly enough he liked it and soon after graduating went into military serive becoming an enlisted officer.

Organization: ColonyY Garrison ((You forgot to put an extra r in garrison.)
Rank: Lt. Colonel( Is the rank to high for a character like mine?)
Job : Colony Garrison Marine
MOS : Intelligence (I want to be a CO so would this suit me?)
Current Posting: Training Facility
Emergency Dice : ( I don't know what this is.)

Motivation : To defeat his enemy by any means nesscary.

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[-ATTRIBUTES-]
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AGI: 0
APP: 1
BLD:4
CRE: 3
FIT:2
INF: 1
KNO:2
PER: 1
PSY: -1
WIL: 3

____________________
[-SECONDARY TRAITS-]
--------------------

STR:3
HEA: 1
STA:40
UD: 10 (I screwed up didn't I?)
AD: 10 ( I screed up again I think..)

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[-SKILLS-]
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Name LVL Cpx

Athletics 2 1
Small arms 2 1
Navigation (ground) 2 1
Etiquette (militairy) 2 1
Information warfare 2 1
Survival * 2 2
Small-arms 1 1
Heavy weapons 1 1
Combat sense 1 1
Stealth 1 1
Technical sciences (Computer) 1 1
Technical sciences (Communications)1 1
Medicine (First aid) 1 1
Hand to Hand 1 1

(Do the MOS skills go under this?)
Technical sciences (Computer) 1 1
- Investigation 2 1
- Interrogation 2 1
- Notice 2 2

_________________
[-PERKS / FLAWS-]
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Enlisted/Member 2( What does -2 mean?)

Dedicated -3
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[-WEAPONS-]
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Name ACC DAM RANGE AMMO ROF

PD8 ( Semi Auto pistol ) 0 x15 60 12 1
M-21 Assault Rifle 0 x28 65 40 1

__________________
[-PERSONAL ITEMS-]
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M-21 Assault Rifle
H&K PD8 Semi-Automatic Pistol
ID/Security Badge
2 Work Uniforms (No2 Uniform)
2 Dress Uniform (No1 Ceremonial Dress Uniform)
2 Mess Uniforms (No1 & No2 Mess Uniforms)
4 Camouflage Uniforms (DPM Uniforms with Kevlar Vest & Kevlar Helmet)
Load-Bearing Vest w/parachute & rucksack attachment points

Field Kit with:
-Rations (Two weeks worth)
-3xCanteen (1x2 litre, 2x1 litre)
-Thermal Blanket
-Waterproof Poncho
-Poncho liner
-3 Signal Flares
-Infrared Distancing Binoculars
-Pocket Flashlight
-Compass
-Combat/Survival Knife
-Ammunition (7 magazines for weapon)

First Aid Kit with:
-Healing Salve
-Dressing
-Tourniquet
-Bandages
-Painkillers
-Stimulants
-First Aid Booklet

Interstellar bank card with 3000 Solar

Posted: Tue Dec 26, 2006 11:27 pm

Archdemon Kaiden

Gundam : Nightmare (Alternate Universe )
Pilot Character template V 1.0
______________________
[-PLAYER INFORMATION-]
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Player Name :Archdemon Kaiden
____________________________________
[-MS Pilot-]
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MS Pilots of the Armed Forces are considered to be the 'creme de la creme'
of the some of the Armed Forces personnel.
It is these hot shots who fly millions of credits worth MS in to combat.
Anyone who has graduated from High School, on any Colony world, may apply to become a Mobile Suit Pilot .
However competition is hot for the positions.
Applicants must be 18 or over and under go 3 years of MS School and training in every element of operating the MS.

The average age freshly graduated pilots is 21 , however those pilots who are smart enough to graduate in 2 years could possibly be as young as 20 .

Pre-requisite character attribute Requirements :

AGI 1 FIT 1 PER 1 are required as minimum

_________________________
[-CHARACTER INFORMATION-]
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Name :Arlan
Last Name :Kaiden
Callsign : Arcane
Age :21
Lineage :Human
Height:6'0"
Weight:113

Phsyical description :Brown hair, blue eyes, body appears to be very physically fit.

Character background / history :

Organization:N/A
Rank:N/A
Job :Mercenary
Current Posting:Lunar Base

Motivation: To be the best of the best

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[-ATTRIBUTES-]
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(2 points left)

AGI:1 APP:0
BLD:2 CRE:2
FIT:1 INF:0
KNO:0 PER:1
PSY:-2 WIL:1

____________________
[-SECONDARY TRAITS-]
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STR:1 HEA:0
STA:30 UD:8
AD:8

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[-SKILLS-]
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Name LVL Cpx
(my calculations show there are now no more remaining points to allocate)

Pilot (MS) 2 1
Gunnery (Space) 2 1
Navigation (Air) 2 1
Navigation (space) 2 1
Combat sense 2 1
Information warfare 2 1
Technical sciences (Computer) 1 1
Technical sciences (Communications) 1 1
Small arms 2 1
Zero-G 2 1
Medicine (First aid) 1 1
Hand to Hand 2 1

_________________
[-PERKS / FLAWS-]
-----------------
Thick skinned
50.000 multiple favors

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[-WEAPONS-]
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Name ACC DAM RANGE AMMO ROF

PD8 ( Semi Auto pistol ) 0 x15 60 12 1

__________________
[-PERSONAL ITEMS-]
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Armed Forces MS (Normally a LEO
Tactical Life Support Suit (Flight suit) + Helmet
H&K PD8 Semi-Automatic Pistol
ID/Security Badge
2 Work Uniforms
2 Mess Uniforms
1 Dress Uniform

CSW (Combat Survival Waistcoat) with:
-Rescue Radio/Emergency Locator Beacon (Encrypted)
-Handheld GPS (Global Positioning System)
-Small packet of water (1 pint)
-2 Signal Flares
-Pocket Flashlight
-Compass
-Combat/Survival Knife

First Aid Kit with:
-Healing Salve
-Dressing
-Bandages
-Painkillers
-Needles, Razor blades & wire
-First Aid Booklet
-Flotation Vest

PID (Personal Interface Card) starting with: 6000 Solar

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[-PHYSICAL STATUS-]
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Flesh Wound :15
Deep Wound :30
Instant Death :60
System Shock:5

((this is all the editing im going to do for now. so its done. all i need is the MS sheet and things for it.))

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Aona

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Posted: Wed Dec 27, 2006 8:07 pm

[-PLAYER INFORMATION-]
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Player Name : Aona

[-CHARACTER INFORMATION-]
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Name : Marcus
Last Name : Aurelonous
Callsign : Caesar
Age : 22
Lineage : Human
Height: 175 cm (I did the conversions)
Weight: 79 (Though I know little about kg, that's the scale you used for the Build stat)

Phsyical description : Male. As suggested by his height and weight, he is very thin and lean, though he has some muscle as well. He posesses dark golden eyes and short, dark brown hair combed to the side.

Character background / history : A young man from what was once Canada, he joined the military mostly for the sake of getting a useful education. He grew up in a normal town, and a normal city, with two normal parents, two sisters, one three years older, one two years younger. The younger sister has also joined the military.

Organization: UDF
Rank: Ensign
Job : Tactical Officer
Current Posting: ?

Motivation : Protecting Earth.

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[-ATTRIBUTES-]
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AGI: 1
APP: 2
BLD: 0
CRE: 2
FIT: 0
INF: -1
KNO: 2
PER: 2
PSY: 0
WIL: -2

____________________
[-SECONDARY TRAITS-]
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STR: 0
HEA: -1
STA: 24
UD: 3
AD: 3

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[-SKILLS-]
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Name LVL Cpx

Combat Sense 2 2
Technical sciences (Computer) 2 2
Gunnery (Warship Weaponry) 3 2
Natural sciences (Math) 2 2
Etiquette (Military) 2 1
Combat sense 3 2
Leadership 1 1
Zero-G 1 1
Medicine (First aid) 1 1
Information Warfare 1 1
Defense 1 1
Social (Parties) 1 1
_________________
[-PERKS / FLAWS-]
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Common Sense (4)
Sense of Direction (3D) (5)
Animal Antipathy (-5)
Slow Healing (-4)
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[-WEAPONS-]
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Name ACC DAM RANGE AMMO ROF

PD8 ( Semi Auto pistol ) 0 x15 60 12 1

__________________
[-PERSONAL ITEMS-]
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Space suit + Helmet
Starship Technical Manuals (Hard Copy)
Laptop Computer (with Tech Manuals saved on it)
H&K PD8 Semi-Automatic Pistol
2 Work Uniforms
2 Mess Uniforms
1 Dress Uniform

CSW (Combat Survival Waistcoat) with:
-Rescue Radio/Emergency Locator Beacon (Encrypted)
-Handheld GPS (Global Positioning System)
-Small packet of water (1 pint)
-2 Signal Flares
-Pocket Flashlight
-Compass
-Combat/Survival Knife

First Aid Kit with:
-Healing Salve
-Dressing
-Bandages
-Painkillers
-Needles, Razor blades & wire
-First Aid Booklet
-Flotation Vest.

PID (Personal Interface Card) starting with: 6000 Solar

___________________
[-PHYSICAL STATUS-]
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Flesh Wound (threshold 12) :
Deep Wound (threshold 24) :
Instant Death (threshold 4 cool :

((This is all I've got for now. I or someone else can check my math later - I'm tired right now))

Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 7:33 pm

Name : Erwin
Last Name : Marx
Callsign : Jaguar 7
Age : 25
Lineage : Human
Height: 6'1
Weight: 167 Lbs

Phsyical description sad Will post it later on when I get inspiration to describe my

character.)

Character background / history : Born in a fancy resort colony he was seen as a high

class person but was instead a hard middle class worker who had it tough. When a

teenager his parents sent him to military school. Oddly enough he liked it and soon

after graduating went into military serive becoming an enlisted officer.

Organization: Colony Garrison (Yeah thanks for the typo correction)
Rank: Lt. Colonel( Well you could purchase rank points via the perk more info later

on)
Job : Colony Garrison Marine
MOS : Intelligence (I want to be a CO so would this suit me?)
Current Posting: Training Facility
Emergency Dice : (Emergency dice is left over points from the character points.)

Motivation : To defeat his enemy by any means nesscary.

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[-ATTRIBUTES-]
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base character points 30.

AGI: 0 cost 1 point allocated points 1
APP: 1 cost 4 points allocated points 5
BLD: 4 cost 25 points allocated points 30
CRE: 3 cost 16 points allocated points 46
FIT: 2 cost 9 points allocated points 55
INF: 1 cost 4 points allocated points 59
KNO: 2 cost 9 points allocated points 68
PER: 1 cost 4 points allocated points 72
PSY: -1 cost 0 points allocated points 72
WIL: 3 cost 16 points allocated points 88

Total allocated points 88 points.

The points you allocated excededs the base character points. ( The base character

points is 30 points ))

Try readjusting the scores some.

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[-PERKS / FLAWS-]
-----------------
Enlisted/Member 2( -2 means that the points is added for you as your rank is lower

then the standard ones. If it costs 2 points that means that your rank is high 2

notches from the standard ones)

Dedicated -3

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Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 8:18 pm

[-PLAYER INFORMATION-]
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Player Name : Aona

[-CHARACTER INFORMATION-]
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Name : Marcus
Last Name : Aurelonous
Callsign : Caesar
Age : 22
Lineage : Human
Height: 5'9"
Weight: 79 (Yeah Sorry , All I know is the SI system)

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[-ATTRIBUTES-]
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Base character points : 30 points

AGI: 0 cost 1 allocated points 1
APP: 1 cost 4 allocated points 5
BLD: 0 cost 1 allocated points 6
CRE: 2 cost 9 allocated points 15
FIT: 0 cost 1 allocated points 16
INF: -2 cost -9 allocated points 7
KNO: 2 cost 9 allocated points 16
PER: 1 cost 4 allocated points 20
PSY: 0 cost 1 allocated points 21
WIL: -2 cost -9 allocated points 12

Total points allocated 12 points , you still have 18 points free character points

that you haven't allocated. It will be a shame if you didn't use them.
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[-SECONDARY TRAITS-]
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STR: 0
HEA: 0
STA: 25
UD: 3
AD: 3

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[-SKILLS-]
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Name LVL Cpx

base skill points 50

Combat Sense 2 2 cost 8 points allocated points 8
Technical sciences (Computer) 2 2 cost 8 points allocated points 16
Gunnery (Warship Weaponry) 3 2 cost 13 points allocated points 29
Natural sciences (Math) 2 2 cost 8 points allocated points 37 points
Etiquette (Military) 2 1 cost 4 points allocated points 41 points
Combat sense 3 2 cost 13 points allocated points 44 points
Leadership 1 1 cost 1 point allocated points 45 points
Zero-G 1 1 cost 1 point allocated points 46 points
Medicine (First aid) 1 1 cost 1 point allocated points 47 points
Information Warfare 1 1 cost 1 point allocated points 48 pointt
Defense 1 1 cost 1 point allocated points 49 points
Notice 1 1 cost 1 point allocated points 50 points
Social (Parties) 1 1 cost 1 point allocated points 51 points

If added with the perk and flaws your points is 51 points -2 = 49 points.

But the problem is your flaws exceedes the limit as the allowed number of flaws and

perk maximum is 2 perk and 2 flaws. On your sheet there is stated you got 2 perk and

3 flaws.
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[-PERKS / FLAWS-]
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Common Sense (4)
Sense of Direction (3D) (5)
Animal Antipathy (-5)
Heavy Sleeper (-2)
Slow Healing (-4)

Notes:

Okay just adjust your base character points and your skills/perk and flaws. And I'll

help you out in filling the rest.

(( Btw I am having trouble with my ISP due to that quake near taiwan. It have caused my internet connection to become unstable. And thus I can't be online more often then ussual hope people would understand. I am not abandoning the thread , just that I might be a bit slower in response. Sometime I could connect to gaia online , sometime I can't. And being tinkering on the Mercenary campaign engine ))

Posted: Fri Dec 29, 2006 8:35 am

o_o.. See? I told you.. people would be interested. Once someone gets the Sheet right, I'm sure everyone else will join once they understand fully how to fill the sheet out. As for me.. I'm about to start working on mine.

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Posted: Sat Dec 30, 2006 7:44 pm

XiKeiyaZI

o_o.. See? I told you.. people would be interested. Once someone gets the Sheet right, I'm sure everyone else will join once they understand fully how to fill the sheet out. As for me.. I'm about to start working on mine.

yeah yeah, i got mine right after two attempts at it.

Posted: Sat Dec 30, 2006 8:42 pm

I'll have to fix it when I'm more awake... your attribute points have confused me it seems. I'll drop a minor flaw, and probably drop Notice to make up for it.

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Posted: Mon Jan 01, 2007 10:27 pm

To Mark :

Mark Actually your Weight there that is

167 pound is actually is about 75.17 Kg

167 x 0.45 Kg = 75,17 Kg.

So your build rating is much lower then the one that you have in your chara sheets.

To Archdemon Kaiden :

This is the fixed chara sheet and I want you to use this chara sheet that I am posting below here as your final chara sheets.

And be patient a bit as I tried to balance the numbers for the weapons for the MS and trying to put a RP scenarios for the mercenearies.

Gundam : Nightmare (Alternate Universe )
Pilot Character template V 1.0
______________________

AGI 1 FIT 1 PER 1 are required as minimum

_________________________
[-CHARACTER INFORMATION-]
-------------------------

Name :Arlan
Last Name :Kaiden
Callsign : Arcane
Age :21
Lineage :Human
Height:6'0"
Weight:113

Phsyical description :Brown hair, blue eyes, body appears to be very physically fit.

Character background / history :

Organization:N/A
Rank:N/A
Job :Mercenary
Current Posting:Lunar Base

Motivation: To be the best of the best

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[-ATTRIBUTES-]
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(2 points left)

AGI:1
APP:0
BLD:2
CRE:2
FIT:1
INF:0
KNO:0
PER:1
PSY:-2
WIL:1

____________________
[-SECONDARY TRAITS-]
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STR 2+1/2 = 1
HEA FIT+PSY+WILL/3 1-2+1/3 = 0
STA 5x2 + 0 + 25 = 35
UNA 3+1+2+2 = 8
AD 3+1+2+0 = 6 ; because you didn't have any melee skill.

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[-SKILLS-]
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Name LVL Cpx
(my calculations show there are now no more remaining points to allocate)

Pilot (MS) 2 1
Gunnery (Space) 2 1
Navigation (Air) 2 1
Navigation (space) 2 1
Combat sense 2 1
Information warfare 2 1
Technical sciences (Computer) 1 1
Technical sciences (Communications) 1 1
Small arms 2 1
Zero-G 2 1
Medicine (First aid) 1 1
Hand to Hand 2 1

_________________
[-PERKS / FLAWS-]
-----------------
Thick skinned
50.000 multiple favors

___________________
[-PHYSICAL STATUS-]
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Flesh wound threshold : 35/2 = 18
Deep wound threshold : 35
Instant Death Threshold : 70
System shock : 5+HEA = 5 + 0 = 5

Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 1:00 pm

I'm curious as to what system you based this on. This is really complicated and looks almost like something out of a roleplaying system like D&D or Paladium.

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