Welcome to Gaia! ::

The only real change I would suggest would be to actually give her some magical abilities. You have her dexterity, which is a wonderful physical trait, but none for magical based. There is a slant towards medicinal healing, which could or could not be magical(honestly, I would say no... ye gods, we have far too many healers in the Suzaku group as it is...). Just give me some Celestial Powers for her, and then she will become a Celestial Warrior.

Thanks =) i was trying to think of something that went with what Soi meant, and chamber made me think of some sort of containment...I have a strange thought process..., but thank you. ^_^

There is already currently a player for Chichiri. However, if she does not answer me fairly shortly, all of her characters will be up for grabs. Write up a profile for Chichiri, and I will keep you reserved in the back of my mind for him if/when the spot opens up.

I'm so sorry about that. I'll see what changes I can make sweatdrop

Is this alright? I changed my mini bio completely in hopes that you'll approve of this one. Please tell me if there is anything else I must change

Gaian Name - Inuphantom13
Star Name - Chichiri
Real Name - Kisho Masao (Last name first, and I hope you don't mind that it's Japanese, since I'm no good with Chinese names sweatdrop )
Group - Suzaku
Age - 25
Birthday - May 18th
Appearance - Has deep red, almost brown, hair that goes down to about halfway down his back, which he keeps pulled back in a ponytail; jade-green eyes; is about 5'7" and 135 lbs.; usually wears a simple outfit of deep-blue pants, a white shirt, and deep-blue slippers; was given the previous Chichiri's kesa and prayer beads, which he wears daily as well
Location of Mark - Left cheek
Blood Type - O-
Birth Place - Seirin Village, Jusoh Prefecture
Family - Mother (Mai), Father (Kano), younger brother (Akira; 18 yrs. old), younger sister (Rini; 16 yrs. old)
Hobbies - Drawing, painting, helping at his parent's art store, meditating, practicing his magic, and helping out people in need along his yearly travels
Abilities - Can use his ki in various ways (ki blasts, teleporting, etc.), and can 'borrow' any seishi's powers (but it greatly depletes his ki if he does this too constantly, and leaves him vulnerable, so he tries not to use this power unless of emergencies).
Personality - Masao is a sweet, caring person, always putting aside his own wants and needs in place of his parents' and siblings' needs. He's always ready to lend a helping hand, whether it be chasing away the bandits that tend to raid the smaller villages, or something as simple as lending a listening ear or a shoulder to cry on, which he often does for his younger sister, who he's very close with. He doesn't enjoy violence, but will fight when necessary. He's level-headed, thinks before he acts, and is very serious and dedicated, but at the same time, he manages to be very fun and amiable. He's also very virtuous and chivalrous, never once hitting a woman, even if a woman hits him, which seems to attract most of the girls in his village. However, he turns them all down, focusing only on his family and training for when the priestess would come to their world.
Mini Biography - Masao was born and raised in Seirin Village until he turned 12 years old, when he and his family moved to Eiyou, the capital of Konan. There, his parents set up a small art store, seeing as the whole five of them were all talented artists in their own way. Mai (his mother) and Rini (his sister) were both talented at making jewelry, Kano (his father) was talented at sculpting, Akira (his brother) was talented at sculpting and painting, and Masao was talented at drawing and painting. Together, they were able to make a lot of money, and live a comfortable life in a house right by their store.

When Masao turned 12, right after his family had moved to Eiyou, he discovered his character ("sho", or "well"), and soon after, his powers. He immediately told his parents and siblings, who were proud to have a shichiseishi as a son, though they agreed to keep his powers and identity as Suzaku no shichiseishi Chichiri a secret, until the priestess came to their world.

Masao did some research on the previous Chichiri, and discovered that the previous Chichiri had gone to Mt. Taikyoku to train. Figuring that it was as good a lead as any to how he'd master his powers, he packed a bag and, upon gaining his parents permission, set out. However, after a few months of wandering, he finally realized that he wouldn't be able to find it, and he headed home, disappointed.

Every year, he'd set out in search of Mt. Taikyoku, unknowingly beginning to master his powers on every outing. He'd learned how to meditate, and did so until it became a ritual to meditate for some time before going to sleep, and after waking up.

When he turned 14, he decided to make use of his yearly travels, and would buy and sell art in different villages, bringing a bigger variety of art, as well as more profit, to his family's buisness.

By the time he turned 18, he'd more-or-less gotten control of his powers, though he didn't know how to fully utilize them. On his trip, he came across a large, beautiful area, one that could only be described as Mt. Taikyoku. Two Nyan brought him to Taiitsukun, who agreed to train him for 3 years. After sending word to his parents, he stayed at Mt. Taikyoku and trained. Taiitsukun taught him how to use his powers to the best of his abilities, and she also taught him of his second power; the power to borrow the abilities of any seishi he chooses. She taught him how to use it, and warned him of what would happen if he used it too often. After 3 years, he returned home, bearing two new accessories--prayer beads, to enhance his powers, and a kesa, to help him teleport longer distances; both of which, he was told, belonged to the previous Chichiri. He doesn't hear from Taiitsukun at all for the 4 years after his training, which worries him, but he dismisses his worries under the pretense of "she's the ruler of the universe; I shouldn't worry about her.", though he still can't help but feel a bit nervous. Nonetheless, he continues to work at his parents' shop, as well as continuing to go on his annual travels (to collect and sell art for his parents' shop), as he awaits the arrival of the priestess.

((Hope this was okay 3nodding ))

Fidvo
Gaian Name - Shadowfire757

Star Name - Tomite

Real Name - "Wolf" he is only known by this name and has forgotten his given name.

Group - Genbu Seishi

Age - 25

Birthday - August 5

Appearance - http://strykersarena.250free.com/images/untitledvegapic.JPG Like this only with dark hair
Height: 5' 10", Weight 180

Location of Mark - Upper Middle of Back, covers his entire back. He thinks it is a scar from his fall into the book.

Blood Type - O+

Birth Place - Tokyo, Japan

Family - Father and mother, is an only child

Hobbies - currently his hobbies include training and travelling.

Abilities - Martial arts, Training in the Bagh Nakh, Enhanced agility, "Pet Monster"(To use the BESM reference), Enhanced Speed , Jumping (another BESM reference) can jump and fall from/to very high places)

Personality - Extremely non bias will kill anybody if the price is right. Seems very aloof and cold. He was not always as so he used to be a very kind caring person.

Mini Biography -
Note: I have used the name "Tiger" in his biography as a place holder
Tiger was not born of the Universe. He was born in Tokyo, Japan where he discovered the book while researching ancient chinese culture. Upon reading the book he was sucked in landing extremly hard on the ground. Unconscious for an unknown period of time he awoke to a group of bandits whom had pilfered much of his belongings. They figured the boy for dead but were suprised to see he still had life in him. They took him in as a pack mule forcing him into slave labor and treating him like dirt. This went on for several years until Tiger finally got the nerve to run away. He sought shelter within a forested area where he met a young wolf that was near death. Having always wanted a dog Tiger raised the wolf as a pet nursing it and caring for it all the while making his way as a street beggar and performing odd jobs. Much of his time was spent training in which the villagers would construe as a performance in the streets and toss him any change they would offer. As the wolf became healthier it began to grow in size almost to the point where some villagers were afraid to laugh at "the fool performing". One day the wolf spoke to him.
"I am Windstalker, a spirit of the forest. You have saved my life and for that I owe you a debt of gratitude."
The two of them are now well known bounty hunters to the point where they are often challenged by random adventurers seeking a name for themselves. It has now been ten years since Tiger came to this world he has grown to be a strapping young man and the scar on his back has been itching a bit lately. He continues the hunt for the bandits who so horribly abused him hoping to one day take their lives with his own hands.


Notes-I chose the symbol of Tomite because I beleive it best describes what has happend to him. He is devoid of much feeling because of his ordeals here and has completely forgotten that he even lived anyplace else. He has in a sense become one with the book. If need be I can also post up for Windstalker if you like.

Addendum- I apologize for multiple post editings. I have dug up the BESM character sheet for this character and had to change a few parts of the profile. Everything new is in red

Sorry about the wait. Work has been hell.

ANYWAYS, onto new profile:

It's the same two problems, though this time, it's for different reasons. You don't need to put AS strict a regulation on your powers. I mean, really... 3 times a week? That's too strict even for me. Just roleplay it to after a certain amount of time using her powers, she is going to get tired and unable to do so. Think of it like the original warriors. They didn't have any restrictions, other than if they started to get tired, they couldn't do it. The restrictions I was referring to are for MASSIVE things. Like, I'm not going to let you hide the entire group in shadows to where no-one can see them. One or two, maybe, but your character would be taking a massive energy drain. Do you understand what I mean?

Now, for the bio. Duke and Dutchesses are european, rather than ancient chinese. This would be before the Europeans started coming to China. With the way your character is going, I would say have her parents be royal advisors, or minor lords of a town or such. That way, they wouldn't be part of the royal court, but they are trying to like you said in your bio. Okay? Does that sound good?

Once those tiny things are fixed, then your good to go and you can start RPing.