| Do you write poetry or short stories often? |
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 Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2005 2:58 pm
grazi gffh, grazi, i was not able to get into the guilds for a bit...
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Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2005 3:40 pm
Scarlet Kyta Thunderboltx gffhgfththtrutrhj Thunderboltx Tear of Death Thunderboltx gffhgfththtrutrhj Thunderboltx Don't really know how to write poetry. It's cool just let it come from you.I promise you'll love it once you start. Not really. I'm not good even if I tried. I would mess up and make a fool of myself. That's alright! You should get a second opinion on your work. I usually think my work is BAD, but others seem to like it... No I had more than three opinions and they all said bad poetry. So I'm not good. No listein when I first started I thought my poetry sucked to no return but alot of people said it rocked out loud so why don't you post a poem you think is your best. Sorry, but I think I lost my poetic way of writting good things. I don't think I can. I"m sorry, I'm just useless here. Usually those who suck at oetry are amazing with stories or art...I'll let you submit art... Nope I'm none of those. I'm more of the intelectual guy. SO nope I wouldn't be able to.
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Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2005 10:43 pm
Scarlet Kyta you went over the limit, but because you only did it by one line i'll let it slide...It is pretty good...
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Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2005 10:58 pm
Here we go! It's of the top of my head so be nice k? It's called
"Useless Journey"
Friends you may seek,
But friend you never find,
If it were so easy we never would be alone,
You always look down when the rest look up,
Sticking out could be that you wish to be loved,
Or you seek that which you may already have,
But the catorigalisation of our inner lives has blinded you,
To only see those you wish not be.
stare hum not my best but it's ok!
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Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2005 11:52 pm
My short story is called "Higher!"
"Higher Ken! Higher!" My little sister screamed with exitement as I pushed her on our new swing set "Thats enough Jess I'm getting tired, your a lot of work." "Pleeease!? C'mon Ken Higher!" I'm reminded of that moment as I'm standing beside my sister's hospital bed. She looks so calm, so at peace. "Ken?" She said trying to speak "Yeah Jess?" I reply "Heh, guess I messed up again huh?"
I grabbed her hand the tears stinging my eyes. "No, no It wasn't your fault" she smiled than said "I never knew driving home would end me up here." "none of us did Jess, none of us did." "Hey Ken?" "Yeah?" ".....Higher..." She smiled as she let go. And as I broke into tears I saw the little girl I knew my entire life in front of me. She would always be, my little sis.
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Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2005 11:55 pm
Lothoran My short story is called "Higher!" "Higher Ken! Higher!" My little sister screamed with exitement as I pushed her on our new swing set "Thats enough Jess I'm getting tired, your a lot of work." "Pleeease!? C'mon Ken Higher!" I'm reminded of that moment as I'm standing beside my sister's hospital bed. She looks so calm, so at peace. "Ken?" She said trying to speak "Yeah Jess?" I reply "Heh, guess I messed up again huh?" I grabbed her hand the tears stinging my eyes. "No, no It wasn't your fault" she smiled than said "I never knew driving home would end me up here." "none of us did Jess, none of us did." "Hey Ken?" "Yeah?" ".....Higher..." She smiled as she let go. And as I broke into tears I saw the little girl I knew my entire life in front of me. She would always be, my little sis. WAAAAAA!!!!!!! THAT WAS SOOOO SWEEEEEET!!!!!!!! crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying
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Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2005 11:59 pm
quote] crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying WAAAAAA!!!!!!! THAT WAS SOOOO SWEEEEEET!!!!!!!! crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying sweatdrop thanks!
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 12:00 am
Lothoran quote] crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying WAAAAAA!!!!!!! THAT WAS SOOOO SWEEEEEET!!!!!!!! crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying thanks!it was biggrin
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 12:01 am
KitsumeChanSexyness Lothoran quote] crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying WAAAAAA!!!!!!! THAT WAS SOOOO SWEEEEEET!!!!!!!! crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying thanks! it was biggrin and I was actually thanking you =P
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 12:10 am
o uh thank you for thanking me... I think *quietly* or is it thank? confused
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 12:11 am
KitsumeChanSexyness o uh thank you for thanking me... I think *quietly* or is it thank? confused @_@ gonk I'm confused
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 12:14 am
Lothoran KitsumeChanSexyness o uh thank you for thanking me... I think *quietly* or is it thank? confused @_@ gonk I'm confused ... Just a second I can figure this out *passes out on the floor from to much thought* xp
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 12:16 am
KitsumeChanSexyness Lothoran KitsumeChanSexyness o uh thank you for thanking me... I think *quietly* or is it thank? confused @_@ gonk I'm confused ... Just a second I can figure this out *passes out on the floor from to much thought* xp oh no.. I must.. help..her >.> <.< *steals wallet* *flees!*
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 12:26 am
*While running feels heavy* I have a chain on my wallet! *starts trying to get wallet from you* smile
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 12:45 am
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