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 Posted: Tue Dec 26, 2006 6:05 am
I love your quest! Both ideas are extremely awesome and well thought out! :3
^_^
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Posted: Tue Dec 26, 2006 8:26 am
Very nice and well thought out character, and I like the animals you've picked, both are unique just like your character. Bress is nicely rounded
and seems believible enough and like the different qualities the character has.
One nit-picky thing that I saw though was that you called him a
"scientist prodigy" while thats fine, I myself would shy away from that
word to describe someone
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Posted: Tue Dec 26, 2006 9:32 am
Thanks for the great replies!
The 'scientist prodigy' is a relic from when Bress would originally be 27 with 2 PhDs. I'll remove it smile
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Posted: Wed Dec 27, 2006 1:14 am
fixed a few intermittent typos, mostly worked on chibi stuff
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Posted: Wed Dec 27, 2006 10:13 am
On your bug quest:
I doubt the Doctor would try and make a super solider since he has all the security he needs.
However, I agree with your second reasoning on the psychological sense. The Doctor might be interested in how it affects some one's mind to change into an insect with that many legs and just that different from a human.
Don't know if he'll allow the poison.
<3 Just friendly advice.
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Posted: Wed Dec 27, 2006 10:54 am
TYTYTYTYTYTYTY!
at this point I much prefer flawfinding than praise. praise doesn't improve my quest!
About the supersoldier part, HE doesn't, but he could sell them around the world for billions. It just comes as another form of income.
The Millipede's poison is much more of an irritant than anything deadly (at their normal size). Centipedes are the ones with the deadly stuff, and if Moreau wanted poison, he could have a scorpion.
You're completely right, Moreau can do what he wants...I was just outlining Millipede traits smile
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Posted: Wed Dec 27, 2006 10:25 pm
After a good RP, tweaked the personality a little more.
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Posted: Sat Dec 30, 2006 2:52 pm
In a new RP, trying out a 75% idea
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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 1:52 am
Did a bunch of updates all around
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Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 9:13 pm
Construction is going well. Adding Peter soon.
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 12:15 pm
Bress Baltar Construction is going well. Adding Peter soon. Mule tag!
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Posted: Wed Jan 17, 2007 11:13 pm
My character outline is done! Now I just have to have a physical assessment, mental assessment, how I get to the island, the serum....
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Posted: Wed Jan 24, 2007 7:26 pm
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Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 3:09 pm
Peter reminds me of someone I know in appearence... xd
lolzchucknorris
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Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 4:02 pm
Severley awsome. Tonnes of info and cool idea.
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