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 Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 7:26 pm
I've been reading the three stories in this subforum (at least I think there are 4 stories). They are all different and great in their unique way.
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Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 10:54 pm
Koosei xd heh. I love how he has so much faith in the thought that NO ONE ELSE will come to save her.
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Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 7:19 pm
you have a very good writing style with a creative mind towards something we all know and love waiting for the next chapter
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Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 8:32 pm
Loving this story Betman, the way you write it sounds up to par on the levels of how Ganondorf would behave, however a bit childish at times for the Geruda, it is nonetheless a great story so far.
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Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 9:39 pm
Well, see, I really wanted to put a sort of twist on Ganondorf, so I figured, what the heck! I'll make him sound like a total a** and make sure he keeps the world entertained.
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Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 9:57 pm
Betman Well, see, I really wanted to put a sort of twist on Ganondorf, so I figured, what the heck! I'll make him sound like a total a** and make sure he keeps the world entertained. Don't get me wrong I like it, and seems pretty well thought out, it's just more humorous than I expected, which is doing it's job. Keeping me entertained.
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Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 10:00 pm
Zen Rider Betman Well, see, I really wanted to put a sort of twist on Ganondorf, so I figured, what the heck! I'll make him sound like a total a** and make sure he keeps the world entertained. Don't get me wrong I like it, and seems pretty well thought out, it's just more humorous than I expected, which is doing it's job. Keeping me entertained. No! Everyone knows stories aren't for entertaining! They are for making kids bored in english class and for making other people think you're smart!
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Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 10:02 pm
-Slaps Bill- YOU FOOL. DX
Books are a main part of me life, here, d00ds. I'm planning on being an English teacher/writer. cool
xd Humorous is almost what I was going for, Zen. Expect a bit more seriousness when I finish up the three guardian species.
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Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 9:01 pm
well, the humour is definitely there so far.
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Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 9:33 pm
Why have I not noticed this before? Well done sir, it's nice to see a different point of view on the story
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Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 9:42 pm
Thank ya muchly, Allwing. Good to see that people are catchin' on. ninja
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Posted: Sun Oct 22, 2006 12:41 am
Chapter three is up! I know my Darunia character sucks, so don't bother telling me.
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Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.]
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Posted: Sun Oct 22, 2006 12:53 am
Rofl IT'S TRUE THERE IS NO SOUND SYSTEM DAMNIT! D=<
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have you ever wanted to stab the people in the market place? just to stop them from moving?
>.>
Awesome =3 I like Ganondorf XD Purple gives the story an A STAR >=O
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Posted: Sun Oct 22, 2006 12:59 am
Yes, Draken. I have.
HAVEN'T WE ALL!? D=
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Posted: Sun Oct 22, 2006 1:49 am
Hehe, oh Ganandorf, how you make me chuckle so.
Good work Betman, keep it up.
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