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Ying-Hua watched the dragon enter. It was very impressing to see such a creature being brought in as an opponent. It would be challenge, but shouldn't prove to be that difficult. When the dragon exploded from something set off inside, she was puzzled as to how Poppy was unscratched by the bomb. There was no trace of magic on her when the smoke cleared.

"Hm...congratulations on defeating the dragon. It must have been quite an unusual experience to get swallowed by one."

((OOC~lots of grammer mistakes, lots of spelling mistakes, i got really lost in your fighting and descriptions. Oh, and when you use commas, there is a space after it. It's almost like using a period.))

3/8

*During Aldora's exam*

Aili's eyes widened when her other half entered the dome.

'What is she doing here? Did she lie to me?' Aili was seething on the inside and ready to berate the little girl when she got out. It wasn't that she lacked faith in Aldora's performance, it was just the pain of not being told. Of course, she was worried, wasn't it normal to worry in a situation like this?

Seeing the smirk on Aldora's face, Aili knew this was meant to be a joke. 'I'm going to die early because of her,' Aili sarcasticly thought.

Aili became tense when Aldora blocked thin air. 'An invisible opponent?' Aili immediately spread her senses and flet the condensed spiritual signature of Aldora's opponent.

Aili carefully watched her younger sister and kept track of the invisible opponent. When Aili saw Aldora play manipulate the shadows like a bedsheet, she relaxed, knowing Aldora would be able to handle the rest.

The battle seemed to have gone on forever in Aili's time before Aldora made a gruesome finishing move.

Aili listened to the judgements and grabbed her own microphone.

"I know it is not fair for me to judge, so therefore I will not be giving you a score. However, I must criticize your endurance and your timing. Precious time was wasted. I do believe I told you to never play around with your opponent. Aldora Kou, I will speak to you afterwards about your behavior today."

((Bah, I didn't like Aldora's post. Though I must admit, I liked the opponent I created. *scratches head* eh... I would've given myself a 5/8. I reread it just now and I realized all the bad sentence structures and grammatical errors I made. Then again, I did type Aldora's post with my left hand while reading the screen sideways. I'm a lazy bum, doing everything in bed. *snoozes*))

((teacher will be Mr. Ashige!!))

Tiffany walked in the large metal shpere. She was quite nervous, but kept a strong composure.

"Ok Tiffany, are you ready...your match will begin, NOW!"

Tiffany looked around to see where the voice came from, but she quickly turned her head when she heard a loud noise. The door slowly opened releasing steam. Tiffany heard faint sounds...sounds of footsteps. The footsteps grew louder and louder every second. Tiffany went into a fighting stance, her muscles tightning. Tiffany widened her eyes when she saw the gigantic monster come out. The colosseus robot was armed with millions of guns and bozooka's. Its whole body was subdued with armor.

"You have got to be kidding me...say why dont we talk this through...?"

The robot merealy responded with massive fire shots, shooting in every direction. Tiffany did several backflips, then following through by twirling in the air, dodging all the bullets. Tiffany landed on the ground and merely sighed.

"I guess not..."

Tiffany then looked at her right arm...she had been shot.

"OK, its personal now!! THAT SHIRT COST 100$"

Tiffany ran full speed at the giant robot. The robot tried to shoot Tiff in the process, but was unable to get a clear shot. When at distance, Tiffany unleased a barage of kicks to the robot's stomach. She then swiftly jumped in the air and furiously kicked at the robots head with a flying back kick. While still in the air, Tiffany unleashed a flip kick to finish her combo. Tiffany landed on the ground and did several backflips to keep distance from the robot. She smirked, but soon frowned when she saw that she did not damage it.

"Ok...I guess I'll just stick with wind and water then...EEEKKK!!"

Tiffany shrieked and started running along the the walls of the sphere. The robot didnt seem to have any patience, and started firing bazooka's at Tiffany. Tiffany ran like the wind, trying to avoid the fiery explosions...however one of the explosions caught her off guard. The room was full of smoke, and barely anything could be seen. The robot slowly approached where Tiffany had been caught off guard. It looked around sensing nothing in site. Just then a furious scream could be heard. Tiffany quickly jumped out of the smoke and shouted...

"DANCE OF BLADES!!"

Some of the blades bounced off the robots armor, however one wind blade manage to cut off the robots arm. Tiffany saw this and smirked.

"I get it, so that thing does have a weakness."

Tiffany looked at the remaing limbs it still had.

"So the joints are the only parts that dont have protection"

Tiffany ran after the robot, but the robot was ready and shot a barage of bullets from its remaining arm. Tiffany quickly made a water barrier protecting herself. She glided, twirled, and dodged every bullet, getting closer to the robot every second. When she was close enough, Tiffany jumped on the remaining arm and cut it off with her wind blade. The robot had a surprise maching gun on its back, but Tiffany saw and quickly changed her body into water. The bullets shot right through her. Tiff then seperated her fluid body and sunk deep into the robots joint leg. The robots leg started to sizzle, then *BOOM* the robots legs were no more.

"OK Its over!!!"

Tiffany quickly resembled herself into skin and hair, and delivered a massive kick to the robots neck, cutting his head clear off.

"Finish"

Tiffany sighed and looked at her bloody arm and ragged clothing.

"OK!! can I go shopping now!! I need new clothes!!"

Aili cleared her throat before speaking into the microphone. "Wonderfully done Tiffany. I must compliment you on your fighting ability. I personally wouldn't waste my breath talking, but your style seems to suit you fine. Congratulations."

((Great job Tiff! I really liked it! No mistakes to my eyes... but something was missing. Not sure what... *goes to reread post* Actually, since I feel that your rp animated Tiff very well, I give you an 8/8.))

Ying-Hua was very disappointed at Tiffany's attitude towards the fight. Clothes and shopping seemed to be more important than the actual test.

"One should never wear clothes they were not willing to get destroyed when testing. I suggest you be more patient when talking to your teachers. If we say you are finished, then you are. There is no need for you to sigh and ask to go shopping.

On another note, your fighting was impressive. I'm very shocked to find that you were able to locate the robot through smoke."

((OOC~grammers mistakes, you don't seem to like to use 's, some spelling mistakes, felt too unrealistic even for a rp, 100$ should be $100, wish you added just a few more details especially with you "dance of blades"))

6.5/8