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PostPosted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 6:39 am


I think your really good ^_^ but i dunno where writers thingy is..so..i cant help ya ._.
PostPosted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 8:35 am


hmm, I just realized I'd written two poems recently...now to find them... sweatdrop

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 4:35 pm


Takkun Naota
I think your really good ^_^ but i dunno where writers thingy is..so..i cant help ya ._.


Just click the MAP in my signature... the one that says Headquarters on it...

And Sailor, I would wait for a Poetry Contest (mine, I mean) unless the poem is long. Its so difficult for poetry to compete with prose, and that is what most of the entries this time have been as it was free choice. I have had three poems, nonetheless, so do feel free, either way, and even if you do not win this time, you could enter the same poem in a future contest. Okokok, don't wait!
PostPosted: Sat Dec 11, 2004 12:35 pm


Hey, I found a little poem that I wrote on the plane trip to DC we took on choir tour. I was inspired (even though it's not that good) sweatdrop whee


Up where the clouds dwell, above and below
Landscapes spread out and twisted rivers flow
Rising on high now, the clouds fall behind
Seas of cream glide past, no earthly ties bind
Layer upon layer of this glory
Inspires on our way to tell the Story
The ground peeks through when fair clouds chose to part
Blooming billows cause praises from my heart



I like it ^^

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 12, 2004 6:45 pm


Me too! You have such a gret outlook on life, and share it so freely. You will be blessed.
PostPosted: Wed Dec 15, 2004 2:43 am


What an encouraging and nurturing spirit you have, Mahayr
I am honored to make your acquaintence.

I adore words and the pictures they create
I love the facinating journey they have lead me through
I appreciate the friends they have revealed to me
I cherish the light they have developed in me

I will search for the Writers Corner you suggested....
And though I may not post often, I vow to post original
For here am I inspired and my vision rekindled
heart

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PostPosted: Wed Dec 15, 2004 9:16 am


*Smiles quietly as she inclines her head to a kindred spirit.*
PostPosted: Tue Dec 21, 2004 5:21 am


Rapture
Sated and quiet is the night
A brief break from the life fight
Cloudy visions of past days
Blurred lines of reality, nay
Quiet rest, in the arms of a lover
Murmurs of passion to each other
Blinding heat, intense and pure
Spirals in the stillness, but unsure
Unconditional treasure, blessed kiss
Come to me, I reach and miss
Ripped, heart exposed, bleeds despair
Holding tight to memories, laced with care
Full and ripe, quiet is the night
Seeping darkness engulfs the light
Rest your head, sweet child, oblivion capture
Sleep, deep and dreamless until dawn wakes-Rapture

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PostPosted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 12:32 am


Paranoid communities...
devestated earth.
Whatever has become of our planetary worth?

Inadequate dispersment,
unfocased polaroids.
Singing turns to chanting by robotic humanoids.

Are we just half-cocked crazies
roaming through the sand -
or fractioned visionaries forming a new band?
PostPosted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 2:16 pm


All my poems worth posting are sad, depressing things written in the dark by flashlight... Otherwise, I'd add to the little bit we have growing here *sigh* xd

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 23, 2004 9:46 am


You sound like me when I was your age! POST! We understand that kind of thing you know...
PostPosted: Thu Dec 23, 2004 11:55 am


Ok... But you asked, so don't crucify me...

Here is one I wrote in 7th grade... It's a little bit old, and not very good, but I love it because it was my first real poem and what got me into poetry...
Defiance

I'll try and list my head up
Cuz' I've learned not to cry
I've learned how to banish tears
And put defiance in my eyes

I won't be weathered down
I won't stumble, I won't fall
I'll push forward into that dark, dark night
I won't stop pressin' on

You think I'm beat, I've gone to low
You think you've worn my down
But I'll rise back up and I won't stop
'Til you're the one on the ground

I've put a shield around my feelings
I have a shell to hide inside
I'll cover my eyes with a baseball cap
So no-one sees the fire alive

The sun falls low in the evening sky
And my red-rimmed eyes look up
But there's defiance in them
I haven't had enough.


This one was done more recently... Who would guess, I wrote it attempting to get over this guy I liked... rolleyes
Ready to Walk Alone

Beautiful through her pain,
Deglected through her defeat,
Trying to see clearly through the tears,
Wanting so badly to please,
Those who had caused her fears.

Standing up tall,
Wearing a worn-out mask of a smile;
She knows its been a while,
Since she could open up and live,
Through the deceit.

Appearing so frail, delicate,
So easily broken,
Inside she's as tough-as-nails,
Preparing to live alone.
Wondering if she'll ever be free,

To fly, to soar
With wings of her own.
She'll be stronger, older.
Her trials will've helped her grow
And she'll be ready to walk alone...


This is.... Just one I wrote searching for meaning, I guess...
Puzzle of Life
I don't know
This gap in my heart
This confused air around me
This mistake I've made...
...I make
None of it fits
None of it clicks together
It... just... doesn't work
I don't know why
Maybe it's just me
But my puzzle of life is boring
Yet confusing
And it's missing all the pieces...
All of them

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 23, 2004 3:50 pm


Oh! Do not sell youself short... those are more powerful than you might think.

I see a budding young poet, ohyes, I do.
PostPosted: Thu Dec 23, 2004 4:50 pm


Mahayr
Oh! Do not sell youself short... those are more powerful than you might think.

I see a budding young poet, ohyes, I do.


*coughs* Glad you liked them... Maybe I shall post another in tomorrow... ^^

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 23, 2004 4:56 pm


I will look forward to that, then, and thank you.
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