Rabid Jigglypuff
I didn't skim. And please don't insult me by treating me like I'm stupid o_O
I didn't crit this character for my own health or perverse pleasure.
I didn't crit this character for my own health or perverse pleasure.
Sorry, didn't mean to come across as if I was attacking you.
Rabid Jigglypuff
And no, the whole idea of him being conscious or not is not what's bugging me. If I got shot in the jungle (for example), a wolf would not come and lick my wounds lovingly. Maybe to taste my carcass for later consumption, but not the way you described it. It doesn't happen. Normally. Hence the "fantasy".
Uhm, once again, I in no way said lovingly. Apparently I wrote it in a way where it comes across that way. So, since I comprehend that, I rewrote that aspect. Also, wolves obviously aren't cuddly creatures. But then again, they aren't bloodthristy bastards either. I mean, hell, there's only like 20 known cases at most of a wolf attacking someone and pretty much all the cases, they were either provoked or were straved to the point of insanity. But yes, the way I wrote was too sugar coated.
It's been reworked now to play a bit more realistic if the situation were to arise.
Rabid Jigglypuff']Hunters who hunt at night use nightvision goggles. They do not blindly fire into the night or they might shoot EACHOTHER.[/quote]
That detail might have helped earlier, you know. razz
But at least you made it clear now. So thank you. I'll rework it.
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That detail might have helped earlier, you know. razz
But at least you made it clear now. So thank you. I'll rework it.
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Electroshock therapy is used, as I said. But it is much different. I think you should consider doing some better research on the topic.
Ok, well do you have some suggestions there? I'd appreciate it if you can point me in a proper direction there.
Rabid Jigglypuff
As for his "feral" spells, Clinical lycanthropy is believing oneself to be an animal, wolf or not. Perhaps what I was saying is that its not as easily recovered from as you insinuated in his past. He sounds pretty socially successful to me, compared to a snarling guy crawling on all fours. (which are the medical symptoms, fyi)
Well, ok. He doesn't believe himself to be an animal persay. And thanks for the reiteration on that the other bit. I did make it more clear there is a struggle to remain of a sound mind so hopefully that does help.
Rabid Jigglypuff
Raw meat is not a snack. Try it sometime, you'll puke. Your body's not made to digest it. Rare is believable, raw is not. As for the "laughing matter" comment, it was to show that consuming raw meat isn't like saying "I think I'll have Taco Bell today." You HAVE to have a stomach used to it.
Uhm... Ahem ~looks embarassed~
I've actually tried raw meat before and did not vomit nor find it gross. This is kind of why I put it in there as more so a personal experience I wanted to incorporate into the character (like my love for filmmaking and wolves).
But if you still have a problem with it, I'll cut it. It's really not a huge issue. It's how you worded it before really, making it sound like some sick little joke. That's what bugged me.
Rabid Jigglypuff
Transgender is not mythical. Its a chemical sex change. Multiple heads and limbs are actually quite easy to make. o_O You just hafta tell the body to grow more of what it already has.
Ok, you're right about transgender. I just kind of got into a spiel there and disregarded that people do get it done. My fault. The additional limbs I was not aware of. Are you actually serious?
But I still get some points on the dragon bit. razz
Just teasing
Rabid Jigglypuff
If you're going to get crit? Make sure you take it with a grain of salt. Not everyone's gonna say what you want them to say and personally, you jumping down my throat for my educated opinion is not appreciated.
Once again, I must apologize for coming across as such a dickhead. I truly did not mean to. Really, my main problem was the way you worded certain things. Besides, at least I didn't reject everything you had to say.
Also, I understood more of what you had to say this time. When I first read it, how you put things seemed so snooty at the time and other things rather arrogant. So, I seriously think it was miscommunication between us there. For that, I am truly sorry.
Plus, I've been under a little bit of pressure at the moment. I'm trying to get all the new additional footage for an indie horror film I worked on editied into the film before we ship out for a film festival where the due date is luming right around the corner. Also trying to keep tabs on the composer to make sure he will finish the score on time. My dad also recently had shoulder surgery so he's kind of incapacitated and that leaves me to do most of the work around the house while my mom is out of state helping out my sister.
So yeah, it's a rat race on my end. Probably also another reason I got snippy. Anyhow, I did not mean any ill intentions and I hope you can forgive me. Will you accept my truce? smile
