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sola84

PostPosted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 1:46 pm


Revamped the appearance and personality. Unfortuatelly my IE died before I could press submit when I change the appearance so this is the second (and not as good as the first) attempt

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Appearance: The tips of his brown stringy hair rests on his shoulders, while his fringe hangs limply over his eyebrows. Usually he would have a young scruffy beard or stubble sometimes he would be clean-shaven, but he cannot decide which to keep to.

The small bags under his eyes gives him a tired look as he has a bad habit of staying up until the early hours of the morning. His face is thin and his skin is white which can give him an undernourished appearance, even though he isn't picky in the least with what he eats.
He is slender but not skinny looking as he regularly exercises and likes to keep fit.


I realised what was missing from his personality. smile I havn't changed it too mcuh, but it makes him more interesting, I think.

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Personality: A light worried expression seems to etch itself on his features the majority of times, but a warm smile quickly sooths the lines. With first impressions, he seems quiet, sincere and almost serious looking but he has a dry sense of humour as well as a playful and curious nature.

Generally he can be a coward or at least concerned for his welfare and safety although that can be overcome due to his sense of moralities and will try to help a friend when possible or even someone who looks like they need help, but this doesn’t make him skittish or nervous around people.

Malik’s temper is brief, if not sharp but he never resorts to violence, even if physically attacked he’d rather try and end it with words or get away. With his calm nature he usually shrugs off most things or at least appears to, but that doesn’t stop him being annoyed by others easily, he just hides it better.

As an opinionated man, he can’t help but offer his view or suggestions on things whether asked or not and loves to have friendly debates even though he can be sceptical at times, but likes to try to be open minded on various matters.

Socially Malik likes being with people, even if it’s only being alone in a crowd, as he likes to know someone is there and rarely completely absorbed in something.


Also got rid of him being vegetarian, didn't suit him.
There's probably smaller changes I've done, but cn't remember which ones.
PostPosted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 2:36 pm


heh, Malik and Anthony seem like they could get along fairly well! ^_^~ contact me if you want to do a developemental RP some time.

I don't really know what I can say as far as crits except maybe changing the spelling of his name to 'Malic'..so it seems less YGO-ish confused ?? Also, it might be fun to do that, since people would always be mispronouncing his name: "malice", or something. XDD

Anthony Timmons


sola84

PostPosted: Sun Aug 27, 2006 3:39 am


Heh, yeah thanks ^^ that's a great idea XD
I actually didn't know there was a character called Malik in Yu-gi-oh, I just found the name on babynames.com and liked it.

I'll think I'll change it to Malic then, don't want peeps to think I'm a fangirl rolleyes and the chance of getting his name said wrong would irritate him no end XD
Changed it to Malic smile

Yes I'll really need to do a developement rp with him thanks for the offer.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 28, 2006 6:28 am


Thanks for that ^_^
Ok I'll try to think how to tie it all together. *ponders*

sola84


sola84

PostPosted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 1:55 pm


Oooh I had a thought.

Malic: Did it hurt?

Did what hurt..? Hey, quiet you or you'll be jabbed with an earthworm serum!

Malic: *smirks*

Anyway I was thinking *evil glare at Malic to keep quiet* what would be the 'best' cure for bone cancer? And it hit me. Get rid of the bones and you have no cancer. *Dead proud of herself*

Malic: And that took you all week to come up with that? I thought of it ages ago.

So why didn't you suggest it before smart arse?

Malic: Because I was curious to see how long it would take you to figure it out yourself *cough* and hoping you wouldn't figure it out at all. Ahem.

Earthworm it is then

Malic: o.O' *nervous laughter* Here, let's not be rash, I mean, there's loads of invertebrates to consider such as crustaceans…

Like shrimp?

Malic: ... And insects…

Like ladybirds?

Malic: ... As well as molluscs…

Like limpets?

Malic: … And… and…

Earthworms?

Malic: . Yes and… *sigh* earthworms.

smile
PostPosted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 2:19 pm


Not bad. The island seems like a win win for him. He doesn't die of bone cancer and he gets megacute. Those island girls will be all over him. smile

I've never seens stoat, I have seen a martin though. Never seen an animal so happy in a zoo before. Played hide and seek with the camera.

MrFallenKitten


sola84

PostPosted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 2:36 pm


Haha, that mega-cuteness will be traded in to help cure the cancer. So really I'm going get rid of the stoat, as much as I don't want to as it does work for his personality, it doesn't work for his situation.

How does turning into a stoat cure his cancer? I could combine it with something else but I honestly just want to go with one thing... hmm stoat and a bug combo...
PostPosted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 3:26 pm


Not to be a grammer cop or anything but I didn't understand a word of that.

MrFallenKitten


sola84

PostPosted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 8:32 am


Sorry is that better?
PostPosted: Tue Sep 05, 2006 7:23 am


Hey good luck!! dramallama dramallama dramallama

Wolfgrl13


Picho Mystil

PostPosted: Tue Sep 05, 2006 7:37 am


You could always do a combonation of animals. Or a badger. Badgers are cool.
PostPosted: Tue Sep 05, 2006 7:51 am


badgers are really cool...you could also do a wolverine ^^

Wolfgrl13


sola84

PostPosted: Tue Sep 05, 2006 8:37 am


Thanks ^^

Baders are cool, a woverine combo have been done so I don't really want the same one.
PostPosted: Tue Sep 05, 2006 8:38 am


domokun

New character concept! next page biggrin

sola84

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