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what is it cause im better now rofl
i wouldnt saycopy more inspiration, i tried to gimmic tupacs str8 ballin song. but you see words different.

Diss the one above me but you're not get the HELL up
Get this Michael Jackson wannabe a damn sweater
Talking bout my avi puts you back where the lames at
I think you lost something should I tell you where your chains at?
You claim I'm Carlton Banks and tryna call me a queer
*what's that a keyblade* man get the fuc outta here
How you gonna speak hood playing Kingdom Hearts
Stay outta my castle cause the Tyrant tears your s**t apart

no *****, cuz look at what you posted on 1st page. its s**t. lyrical s**t. something a mother ******** 4th grader would come up with. then on the second page it improves. BUT IN THE LAST 2 LINES YOU RAP ABOUT SOMETHING THAT HAS DO WITH ANYTHING YOU WERE RAPPING ABOUT
"I gotta survive yo. So next time Im gonna lay low." it fits no where in what you were rapping about. thats why i said it looked stolen. not cuz you got skill, you fullofshit mother ********.

******** this im going at AKS aka jeezie
mother ******** thinks hes got hot flows like lil weezy
claimin he rob banks and knows what to do when a guns shot
***** stealing rhymes from makaveli aka tupac
he biting rhymes off shakur but his alias snow man
he aint a thug. he never even heard a gun go BLAM

trying to put me in his rhymes like he can get at me
but my words murder you lyrically and i spit em deep
the way i roll you'd swear it was mutha ******** conspiracy
its been planned out in front of you and you didnt see
my mind's a gun, my words the bullets
every syllable i spit is the ******** trigger finger that pulled it
And every joke and punchline
are the bulletholes that makes you flatline
Every bar that sounds insane
Is the shovel that digs your grave
and this ******** verse
is the one that puts you deep inside your hearst
and you stepping to me thinking that im sweet
was your only mistake that led you 6 deep.

I can flip it fast. I can do it chopped n screwed
I can deal with beef, and i can deal with feuds.
Never ever in my life will i ever lose
to some punk ******** who never held a 22
you trying to put me in your jokes is funny as s**t
i guess i have to give some props for it
naw ******** it. if im a joke, you're the punchline
you must be out your mother ******** mind
jus stay in yo house, and keep to ejaculating
while i suck on your moms tit while its steady lactating
cuz best believe outlaw aint a ho
and if you ever come at me with your whack a** flow
ima have your mutha ******** fat whack a** towed
and slap your whack black a** till your body's cold

The besto of Outlaw thats the best he could ball
But not good enough no not good at all
Outlaws a liar
He spits s**t but he says he spit fire
He hatin
Niw he debatin
What should i do when he come at me with them thangs?
I say b***h just put ya hands up and put cha bars down as my chain swang
I made this system called NHA
Came to teach wankstas like him and while im here ill enjoy my stay
God let me lyrics be dope so a ***** could see the light
Or maybe make my fist hard as stone as I knock him hard wit might

He discrimnatin talkin s**t bout my bang
I didnt like it so i put lyrical poison in his mind with my lyrical fang
He thinks im worshipin Tupacbut well *****...hes dead
They dont know who i should put it on yo head
Munchin him crunchin him with words as teeth
Cover his a** with a lyrical sheet
Lets have a ***** moment while a drop my crystals
And put up some pistols
No Hater Allowed
He couldnt read so he actually got me wowed

Ill crush another nut
And cap one right in the but
You know im fo sho with this and all the other busts
Fingas in the air while i watch yo mouth rust
Cause you dont drop heavymetal
Breakin' all yo limbs so you like a daisy wit no petals
Truth is he posin as lil weezy
You make me laugh i dont give s**t fo him cause i be Jeezie
Hes not so bad though just behind
He dont have a good ***** mind
He had a pimky ring when i had a grill
Still better, still

Enough about fake a** ***** Shadow
Cause he lacks fo's
He say he bullet
And hes mad with the clips but i dont really think this ***** can pull it
He say i aint a thug
His shitty nonsense makin me bug
He still kinda gave me a suprise
Feel pity for him this nigg really tries

He execute many horibble ryhmes
Hes done many different times
He makin too easy to take the cake
It still ridiculous so i have a headache
He might have little skills
But they aint good enough to pay no childcare billz
His rhymes are a stack a blocks unstable
But the stories he tells are ALL FABLES!
He started to scare me though
I hope he stop lyin sayin he aint no hoe

Does it really matter if im jeezie on crack
Way he cam back at that made me laugh like a Bernie Mac attack
If you a joke, im the critisism
You eatin your own kinds rep like cannabalism
Make my rhymes look blingy they shinin like a prism
I tell him bow ***** bow!
Foget it retarted a** ***** Chao...

Just like outlaw, str8 hater ******** crew has a sorry b***h, lost ******** and a gay dicksuka
I aint callin no names
My rhymes might sting, cause im rappin at 92 frames
You can literally see the words coming out my mouth
Shut it, hile i show you dose wkillz from the south
Dont matta what i say
I can sell it right and i can rap right into the fray
Talk my s**t, spit the game
Talk some s**t, get some fame
Close yo mouth rhymes is lame
Yo ill flows got my at the brink when ya came
Just that bad
A little better then hell, just a tad
Also:
Why he rappin bout G Unit
Dont matter he just ruined it.

this niggas a joke
hiding behind black tinted locs
never ready to see pistol smoke
getting mad at mak
cuz he came on the attack
and murced your s**t within 8 lines
and speaking of lines. look at the time
it took you to retort
with some bullshit you shoulda kept short
i went out to have some lunch
came back to this flith and disgust
cuz it took you forever
to get at me... never
you took an hour n a half
to make 6 paragraphs
you aint nothing but loose lips
your rhyme wasnt about s**t
and i pretty much skipped
your whole little bawl
from "best he could ball"
to "retarded a** *****. Chao"
cuz the whole thing was ******** FOUL
if you took half the time you did to check your mind
look deep inside you will find
you really cant rhyme
your new at this s**t.
wearing diapers. you're a ******** infant
mak was prolly comparing you to 50 cent
cuz you look like an ape
fat hairy black and outta shape
worse rhyme wit no style
getting nasty with homosexuals buck wild
and yeah you caught me im a hater
of this mother ******** chronic masturbator
a**l virginity violator
cakish f** a** cateror
ghetto thug faker
you talk bout outlaw like he a wanksta
never. ima neighborhood pranksta
im down wit tha hos and the gangstas
wild a** white boy in this rap game
set your house a flame
grab your dame
kill yo family. kill yo dog. kill yo inlaws
that'll teach you to ******** wit da ******** AKS
shadows da best
rhyme biter
passive fighter
looking like a ******** song stealer
come up wit your own rhymes
then comment on mine

that'll learn you b***h

(edit: was posting when mak did. was directed at AKS)