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 Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 6:56 am
CHAPTER FOUR IS UP YAY!
Sorry... but I'm just so happy the document manager is now working again.
You'll just have to read and see... ^^
Sorry, but no more Gelf. But you'll soon see there are bigger problems.
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 9:09 am
No! A Cliffhanger!!!!!!!!!
I liked the fight scene. It was rather action packed. Go Jack go!
I always use the idea of a plain white cell in my stories. I can't actually remember where i got the inspiration from!
I want the next chapter NOW!
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 9:18 am
fredwise No! A Cliffhanger!!!!!!!!! I liked the fight scene. It was rather action packed. Go Jack go! I always use the idea of a plain white cell in my stories. I can't actually remember where i got the inspiration from! I want the next chapter NOW!
I'm glad you liked the fight scene! :glee: It was kind of hard to write... it's my first one. Ever. But it was a lot of fun, too! I had a little bit of trouble trying to make it realistic, and also how much they'd actually talk while fighting.
Well, the point of the cell is to scare the crap you of you. Kind of ish... Well, it's designed for no escape. You'll see! I'll try to write the next chapter soon... but I can only get on the computer every other week. :cries:
Thanks for the review! :hugs:
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 9:24 am
Sepik fredwise No! A Cliffhanger!!!!!!!!! I liked the fight scene. It was rather action packed. Go Jack go! I always use the idea of a plain white cell in my stories. I can't actually remember where i got the inspiration from! I want the next chapter NOW!
I'm glad you liked the fight scene! :glee: It was kind of hard to write... it's my first one. Ever. But it was a lot of fun, too! I had a little bit of trouble trying to make it realistic, and also how much they'd actually talk while fighting.
Well, the point of the cell is to scare the crap you of you. Kind of ish... Well, it's designed for no escape. You'll see! I'll try to write the next chapter soon... but I can only get on the computer every other week. :cries:
Thanks for the review! :hugs: It's no problem. I love reviewing fanfics I like! I'd lend you mine, but it's technically the family's computer. Maybe you could use snail mail? Text message? (Not that they'd work, but anyway!). I'm not too bad at drafting fight scenes, but I can't imagine how a reader wuold interpret it, seeing as I have clear mental images of characters/monsters, and what the location is etc. I prefer group fights, with 2 on 2. More distractions. But yours worked very well. Maybe I should try to finish one of my stories. Or maybe I could ask you for suggestions? wink
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 12:55 pm
fredwise Sepik fredwise No! A Cliffhanger!!!!!!!!! I liked the fight scene. It was rather action packed. Go Jack go! I always use the idea of a plain white cell in my stories. I can't actually remember where i got the inspiration from! I want the next chapter NOW!
I'm glad you liked the fight scene! :glee: It was kind of hard to write... it's my first one. Ever. But it was a lot of fun, too! I had a little bit of trouble trying to make it realistic, and also how much they'd actually talk while fighting.
Well, the point of the cell is to scare the crap you of you. Kind of ish... Well, it's designed for no escape. You'll see! I'll try to write the next chapter soon... but I can only get on the computer every other week. :cries:
Thanks for the review! :hugs: It's no problem. I love reviewing fanfics I like! I'd lend you mine, but it's technically the family's computer. Maybe you could use snail mail? Text message? (Not that they'd work, but anyway!). I'm not too bad at drafting fight scenes, but I can't imagine how a reader wuold interpret it, seeing as I have clear mental images of characters/monsters, and what the location is etc. I prefer group fights, with 2 on 2. More distractions. But yours worked very well. Maybe I should try to finish one of my stories. Or maybe I could ask you for suggestions? wink
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Posted: Sat Jul 01, 2006 12:40 am
The plot thickens! I think my head's starting to hurt from trying to work out who's trying to do what to whom and for what purpose. xd
Nice action sequence. Angry Jack is pretty darn scary... gonk
One question: Did Trall intentionally kill Racks?
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Hairy Priest Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jul 01, 2006 6:43 am
Hairy Priest The plot thickens! I think my head's starting to hurt from trying to work out who's trying to do what to whom and for what purpose. xd Nice action sequence. Angry Jack is pretty darn scary... gonk One question: Did Trall intentionally kill Racks?
I was trying to make Jack scary... show a different side of him. Of course, Torchwood will do that more than I ever can... :glee:
That one is left up for you to decide. But think about it, would Trall really want to have shared his reward with anyone?
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Posted: Sun Jul 02, 2006 3:06 pm
Chapter Five is now up! I had trouble writing this one... so it's a little bit shorter. But eh. I wont be able to update for atleast a week. Sorry, but yeah.
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Posted: Mon Jul 03, 2006 8:53 am
Sepik Chapter Five is now up! I had trouble writing this one... so it's a little bit shorter. But eh. I wont be able to update for atleast a week. Sorry, but yeah. Now that was a weird chapter. Loved the ending. And I didn't really notice that it was shorter! Can't wait to see what will happen to Rose. And I'm starting to think up really weird theories about your story (no I'm not going to share them), so there's no rush for this one!
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Posted: Mon Jul 03, 2006 8:38 pm
The story's moving nicely along. The mystery continues...
Jack was flirting with the Doctor.
No he wasn't, he was just saying how glad he was to see him.
For Jack, that's flirting. mrgreen
I figured the ship's name meant something silly like "Saliva God".
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Hairy Priest Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 2:55 pm
fredwise Sepik Chapter Five is now up! I had trouble writing this one... so it's a little bit shorter. But eh. I wont be able to update for atleast a week. Sorry, but yeah. Now that was a weird chapter. Loved the ending. And I didn't really notice that it was shorter! Can't wait to see what will happen to Rose. And I'm starting to think up really weird theories about your story (no I'm not going to share them), so there's no rush for this one!
I have lots of theories still floating around in my head... I'm not exactly sure which one it's going to be. Although if it's the one that I've been planning on... then I need to do some research before I write the ending. Of course, I have to write the next chapter which comes before the ending... eheh. And that one involves another plot twist! biggrin
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Posted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 3:02 pm
Hairy Priest The story's moving nicely along. The mystery continues... Jack was flirting with the Doctor. No he wasn't, he was just saying how glad he was to see him.For Jack, that's flirting. mrgreen I figured the ship's name meant something silly like "Saliva God".
... Saliva?
Do you people really not know latin THAT badly? xd
Flirting... greeting... being happy. What's the difference? ^^
Yes, the mystery DOES continue. BWahaHAHAwaha... biggrin
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Posted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 4:48 pm
To anyone who might be all... 'Woah! She killed off Rose!' let me remind you of something.
I LOVE plot twists.
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Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 9:58 am
Back on my compie! :huggles: Time to stop procrastinating and write! Problem is... I'm getting to the sketchy part of my plot. I'm not exactly sure what's going to happen... ^^
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Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 11:11 am
Sepik Back on my compie! :huggles: Time to stop procrastinating and write! Problem is... I'm getting to the sketchy part of my plot. I'm not exactly sure what's going to happen... ^^ I always get to that part. Trouble is, I just stop writing...
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