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 Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 7:11 pm
This is a wonderful idea. ^.^ I adore the Daemon's personality and the way she is described.
Good job. XD
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Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 10:14 pm
Great job changing the powers around- the thought of a patch up didn't cross my mind at all while reading them. In fact, I remembered you had to change them after I finished. So with that, I love the new powers, very appropriate and fitting.
I'm quite the fan of a boy who feels like his life has no path. He seems fairly normal, like so many of the drifters out there, just floating and absorbing. Love it.
The way his daemon balances him out is great, too. I like how she's a part of his music, too.
All in all I'd say that your concept is beautifully thought out and executed.
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Posted: Wed May 17, 2006 8:29 am
I'm glad you find his new powers fitting. It took me a full day of pacing and freaking out to get down a new idea. And then, it turned out, all I had to do was read the passage, and use what was so obviously already there. I'm glad I didn't get to take him in the bardic direction, actually, because I would have been too cautious to ever really use those kinds of powers, while this will be fun to play with.
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Posted: Thu May 18, 2006 7:21 am
Well, I guess I didn't find time to do the practice prompts, but I've got a good grip on his personality.
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Posted: Thu May 18, 2006 7:26 am
You can still do the practice prompts and stuff. Threads aren't being judged yet. XD Just as long as you have a good grasp on your character now, you'll be fine.
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Posted: Wed May 31, 2006 5:12 am
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