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Siermana

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Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 3:45 pm

Shadow

Come into my shadow
Let me embrace you
Let me enshroud you in darkness

Come into my shadow
I can feel your desire
I know you want to join me

Come into my shadow
Open up to me
Give in to your desires

Come into my shadow
I'll give you my kiss
I'll be with you forever

Come into my shadow
We can wander the night together
Together...in our shadow

Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 6:45 pm

xd Good one.

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Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 6:50 pm

Stupid Hi-ku, but I felt like it! xd

Eteranl eyes bore into my head
people mock me with stares and snickers
I walk on proud being me

Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 7:11 pm

I'm sorry that I'm a brain theif.... I'll try to keep my brain hogging down low next time....

On another note... That haiku was really good! Damn you for being able to do haikus.... When I tried to do one it turned out really crappy...

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Soriana Leo

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Posted: Sun Apr 30, 2006 4:05 pm

Bird

Spreading black wings of charcoal sute
Flying through skies so blue and presteen
Perching on branch like a bird

Hearts are like...

Like snow flakes icy hearts melt
Wooden splinters shatter as the heart brakes
Like the sun, hearts are warm

Wheee more random hiaku's! Enjoy and please comment. ^_^

Posted: Sun Apr 30, 2006 4:46 pm

Sleeping Darkness

Soriana Leo

Stupid Hi-ku, but I felt like it! xd

Eteranl eyes bore into my head
people mock me with stares and snickers
I walk on proud being me

I'm not trying to be mean, but I don't think that's a haiku poem because the first line has five syllables, second line has seven, and the third five. But I like it anyways.

Helping comments are the best, thanks. ^_^ I'll make sure to do better the next time I do a Hiaku. =3

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Posted: Sun Apr 30, 2006 4:52 pm

I think this was one of the first one's I ever wrote.

My Soul
For my soul
I will not tell
for which would be a frightning tale
for thou would have to share my fate
with a burning soul of pain and hate
and a living hell of which to tell so I warn thee
to prie me not or for which to tic me off
for if that happens
you will see of what a pain I can really be

Posted: Wed May 03, 2006 6:44 pm

Love is painful
Hearts break in two
eyes get red and watery
chests get tight as if air is not there

It hurts not to be loved
To be ignored
tossed asside like trash
blending into every thing as if a chamelian

Your breath is taken away
not being able to speak
not a sound escapes those lips
eyes look glassy from all the crying

Fear escilates into something worse
thinking love will not find you
blades are your heaven
box cutters are solace
pens to burn
mutilation makes you feel good

It happened
time and time again
someone said they didn't love you
you mentally break down
not knowing what to do

Hurt only breeds more hurt
but the kind of hurting you do to yourself
you seem to think it helps
crimson shades your vision
lines scar across your wrists

Emotions locked away
rocking in a dark corner
invisible chains wrapped around ankles
clinking with the motions

END

emotional time for me at the moment, sorry for some of the steriotypes! *cries*

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Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 1:05 am

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