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As far as her appearance, please keep in mind that this is a real-world setting and that white-hair is not a natural thing unless you're albino. Bleach/dye could get the white with purple shading, but I didn't see any note on the character to say that the hair color was not natural.

Given Aurora's and her sister's names, you might want to go into why their parents gave them such 'hippy' names - what was the background that led to this?

While I know that there have yet to be any islanders that have amnesia, I caution you to be careful and do your research on the condition - because it is one that tends to be very overdone/misplayed in many situations.

Additionally, the twin sisters - one being involved with super-secret spy stuff is a bit on the over-the-top end, but it can be worked with in the right light.

As far as the way to the island, I find it unlikely that if she was kidnapped and though to be her sister the spy, I seriously doubt that they would leave her alive and on a raft instead of just killing her outright. They were an organization that was that sought-after by the government, I don't see them leaving the loophole of possibly leaving her alive.

In essence, it seems like at the core you have a good concept - there's some intrigue in her being mistaken for her sister and ending up in the wrong place at the wrong time. She might even have, say, been shot and thrown overboard their boat in the middle of the ocean and left for dead when Moreau picked her up. This could very easily have had a very traumatic experience enough to have her block out memories - giving her the situation where she can't remember a signifcant portion of recent events if not total amnesia. contrary to popular belief, Amnesia as a syndrome is VERY rare. Just a bump to the head will usually give a concussion - not total loss of memories. Amnesia is normally a psychological effect, not a physical ailment. It is when something so traumatic has happened that the mind refuses to acknowledge the past.

However, keep in mind that her extreme appearance with the white hair is not a normally-occuring situation, and if it was dyed then it wouldn't make much sense for both sisters to have/maintain it. ESPECIALLY if one was a covert agent. Espianage agents are supposed to look average, and not stand out in a crowd.

Nita seems pretty much ready to go. Yay for lesbian/bisexual women characters! She seems bookish and cute.

I noticed you have two different ideas for how she got to island. Personally, I want to avoid castaways/rescues/plane crashes as MUCH as possible. Just because realistically speaking, those would be pretty rare. Its kind of the "cop out" way we can default for characters that we can find no other way to reasonably get them here. Since Nita is a college student, I can think of many other ways that could work, including something very similar to the idea you had about a study abroud program. We've had several of those already, like Timothy and Hargun.

My only question would be what is her current relationship with her parents or brother like? Generally Moreau tries to take people with no strings, unless there is something terribly unique abuot them

Generally everything seems fine with her background/personality. I would like a little more insight as to way she dropped out of aschool so close to finishing it. She doesn't seem like the kind of character that would normally just drop out because some guy was spreading rumors.

Also, I would like a name for "the boy" blaugh

As for how she got to island needs some work. Sabin Duvert would have no direct contact the outside world, and there is nothing particularly singular about Evan that would draw his attention anyway.

There are plenty of programs Feral Labs uses as guises to get people here. If she likes adventure, perhaps she signed up for one of the "free" vacations Feral Labs hosts (charitable fundraisers, of course ^_~). Maybe there was one that was advertised more like a safari than a cruise that seemed "adventurous" to her?