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Harli_Nightmare
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 25, 2013 3:31 pm


Dearest Matthew aka Punkology.

Your promos and in ring work are nothing short of ******** awesome and there is hardly anything to say that you need improving on however I feel we need to have some more matches with each other.

Regard.

Reginald Harold the Third

P.S just kidding it's from Harli
PostPosted: Wed Dec 25, 2013 9:21 pm


I'm sure I could find something to critique, Harli.

Speaking of, I do like your in-ring work. Always good to have vets around to show the young'uns how things get done in the ring.

The only thing I could nag about (and its relatively minor, mind you) would be consistency. I remember your feud with Fox in CWA; you came in as being this unstoppable force, only to do a 180 a few cards into that. And believe me, I LOVED it when you took out that drummer (don't remember which), so to see Harli go from that to Fox getting in your head...well, it gave me whiplash.

But yeah, minor gripe.

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PostPosted: Wed Dec 25, 2013 10:12 pm


What to say about you... Well let me put it this way Dion: there was more than a possible feud with Bison that led me to make the suggestion to make you champion in WWFG.

Glad I made the call and you took the plunge in FG have to do it again sometime.
PostPosted: Thu Dec 26, 2013 3:00 am


What can I say about my main man Lauri? Best In The World, King Of The Deathmatch, Sprocket champion, and even Undisputed Women's title as Karen.

Main issue, activity baby. Personal and professional life take precedent but a post a day keeps the auto hits away biggrin .

Kid_Omega91


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PostPosted: Fri Dec 27, 2013 9:01 am


This kid, I like this kid, enough to let him play an old gimmick copy of me anyway...so far so good.... blaugh

I think activity and match psychology/timing would help you improve. For example, in your match with Andrew Styles in BBW, you both jump into big moves as soon as the match starts. For you that is a jumping enziguri. Pace yourself son! Start with the basics and build-up to the big hitting moves so that they mean more to the match and helps to tell a story etc. It's a title match so presumably you both want it to be awesome and such, rather than rushing all your big moves out in the first page and ending it with something that does nothing for neither character match and story-wise! 3nodding
PostPosted: Fri Dec 27, 2013 8:10 pm


Knowing Cartwright since about '07 and seeing his rp text stay the same and skill dampen as years dragged on, edging to a likely retirement..

Then Hiro had to have injected some nonsensical cartoon life into Cartwright and blew him to the most silly character, filled with humor and seriousness drained from him. His promo's blown into amusing reads.

From what I learned in The Hated.. you don't have Cartwright in a serious promo, unless a comedian character is wanted. He stays in character and never drifts from it... never.

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 27, 2013 8:47 pm


Weird! Where ya been?! I hardly see anything from you anymore. It's like once GWWF closed down, you've kind of faded off the radar.

Other then that...
Guy Cancer was an awesome character, and you are very excellent writer, which brings out the best in what The Fox character can be. I will say I noticed when you and I had are matches that you were one of the few that has any "Ring Awareness". I loved our little feuds in GWWF though short, they were fun stuff.

I want another feud outta ya!
PostPosted: Sat Dec 28, 2013 2:23 pm


Once GWWF went down, I moved right on over to EWA in December '09 and been there since.
I've been on the radar, just not on yours.

As for my assessment...
I don't know what happened to Riker or where and what these characters have been or done, but I can see that your promos are of better quality than mine, as you've likely improved far more than I. It seems you haven't strayed from the dark only created more characters from the shadows of your mind.

I wouldn't mind another feud, just this time with more focused length to it.
Unfortunately I am closing in on retiring the Guy Cancer character.
If truly interested, message me and we can work a story out.

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Yukari Clepsydra

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 29, 2013 10:44 am


I was waiting on Fox to step up and make 2013 his, but he's had a few set backs.
Plus the trolling accounts didn't help his cause.
He comes close to the top, close to that top spot
then he either messes it up, or disappears.

He needs to find a strong foundation, an actual goal to accomplish and stick with it.
Out of all the vets on Gaia, he probably has the most to prove
PostPosted: Sun Dec 29, 2013 6:12 pm


What more can I say? You started and kinda are the businesd... nuff said

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 29, 2013 6:44 pm


A good talent who got rhe ahort end of the stick when he was red hot due to personal matters. I really hope you bring back Bison at aome point since he is the one big character I want Hiro to face.

The only thing you need to work on is becoming hot again!
PostPosted: Sun Dec 29, 2013 8:38 pm


I'm sure I could name a number of nice things to say about Hiro, though right now I'm drawing blanks. As far as compliments, being able to RP on both sides (heel and face) is a talent I wish I had.

In regard to improvement...the only thing I can think of is to give Hiro more drive. He's not a bad character when you focus on simply RPing and wanting to go for the top ring, but the focus is lost. Whenever I set up a skeleton for a story, I set goals for it, things I want the character to achieve. As another story-based character, you should be doing the same.

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 29, 2013 9:21 pm


Yukari Clepsydra

Darn near to perfection, he treats this Wrestling RP and its federation guilds like a Pokemon game. Gotta beat 'em all. Collect all the titles and win every award & honors available to attain. His retirement has greatly opened the field, but in turn greatly reduced the chance at facing a legend. Many good and bad, both sides have debatable truths.. egotistical a*****e.. greatest savior of our community..

I look forward to the future of EWA, to see how much further Chrono can better it, than it already is against other guilds. Continuing to keep the womens division alive, holding four tournaments in a single year, while continuing everything as usual, and doing (what I personally just love) having a crossover with another mainstream g-fed.

Don't stop rolling.

Daemonsparta

You showed up on the scene with your loudly boasting Bison and quickly gaining our admiration, you've picked up trust for GM spot and crews. There was some distasteful feelings of intrusion.. Other than that, you have created characters that were fun to read and intriguing to follow. It is disappointing to not finish the match I had with you in CWA. Sad to see Bison go, it seems you have taken a strong silent monster character now, assuming Boom doesn't speak with that gas mask on.

DamienHiroSandow

... I don't know what to really say here.. you started, probably trying to hard to shock or what.. you got a reaction of appalled and disgust instead. A lot of anger and drama tends to follow and apologies made over and over..

But since your teaming with Cartwright.. you've been nothing short of commendable work in rp. You've made me jealous at seeing you having a match with King and envious of your rp skill. Yet.. I'm not sure if you've learned to slow down, take a breath, and think. You jump around, as if you don't know what the ******** you're doing with your character or what you really want to do, like you have no plan in getting what you are after.

Stick with a name, stick to a side, and come up with a story, a goal line.
Be sure to rethink anything of shock value that questions morals, taboo, or the like.
Crossing a line without repercussions is an art.

Dion Necurat

You've made me sad. I want a CWA return.

Dion, you have wonderful rp talent. An interesting character and even a badass moment of riding a bear. Too bad a fox can't be ridden, otherwise I'd be wishing I thought of that.

I'd like to message you of an idea you could add to your new gimmick run, that I don't want to ruin by posting here.

Sorry, there isn't much more I can say.
PostPosted: Mon Dec 30, 2013 3:49 am


Weird Fox


Damn, Fox. Talk about being a tough act to follow.

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 30, 2013 5:50 am


Salem made a powerful debut here with his RP skills! His promos and matches have been top notch! Good to see you trying different things like a heel character in WWFG right now, experiment with different things in each fed to see what suits you best as a character now and perfect what works for you later! The only killer is activity! We've had a few ideas and plans that had to be put back, hopefully in 2014 things will settle for you and you can reach your full potential! We're all missing those radio shows too! wink
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