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 Posted: Fri Feb 14, 2014 10:10 am
MalevoIents  Would anyone like to provide me with any feedback for my sea witch :3 I'm thinking it may be a bit on the complex clutter side.... Not really in with the theme :/ ALSO if and if anyone needs an item they cannot afford, I will be willing to buy and lend it to them. Funds are not a problem for me Just please pm me what you need, and what not I will ofc expect the item to be returned after the event I just require some notice so that I can pick up items on the exchange. It's a little bit too clutter for may taste but I like the deep sea colors and theme you are going for. Have you tried checking the items Bewitching Beauty, Bewitching Minstrel, Ruined Souls, and Gary's Island Adventure? I think the greens and blues will match the hair and head pieces well. Overall pretty good. As expected from my rival. cool
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Posted: Fri Feb 14, 2014 10:46 am
Hylomania Being one of the lesser constellations, Lupus is used to flying under the radar, and that's just how he likes it. He considers himself to be a bit of a 'lone wolf' and doesn't mind the solitude, but he can't help but show his playful side when he's got some company.(I really have no idea what role he's going to play at the Wedding. If you guys have any ideas, or suggestions for improvement, I'll take it.) I like the avi. 3nodding I see him being a ... Wedding Bouncer? There's also Best Man. I think Wedding Bouncer might suit him more but it's whatever you're comfortable with.
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Posted: Fri Feb 14, 2014 11:34 am
I like the first and second but I can see way more of his personality now. Also I have a huge inventory guys, please check it out in the official exchange and if you want something for keeps ask me and I shall see if I can get it for you. For hair, hmm, let me check around see what works.
Here are some hair options for you. Tried not to get expensive hairs.
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Posted: Fri Feb 14, 2014 11:38 am
Not a fan of clutter, but I like where your avi is going, clutter tends to be complex so that is good news, your avi is very complex and I can see there is always something new I notice. But I am liking the color scheme. I would recommended reducing the winged backgrounds though, even with your awesome clutter the avi isn't looking so great because it's distracting from the avi.
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Posted: Fri Feb 14, 2014 11:40 am
Hylomania Being one of the lesser constellations, Lupus is used to flying under the radar, and that's just how he likes it. He considers himself to be a bit of a 'lone wolf' and doesn't mind the solitude, but he can't help but show his playful side when he's got some company.(I really have no idea what role he's going to play at the Wedding. If you guys have any ideas, or suggestions for improvement, I'll take it.) Hmm, Best Man would work, as for bouncer you could be if you want. Depends on the personality your going for with him. Hmm, I like the outfit too. I feel like there is something missing though, as to what I'm not exactly sure, lol. sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Feb 14, 2014 11:47 am
Can you elaborate on what you mean as to "reducing the winged background" As in, remove the lion fins?
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Posted: Fri Feb 14, 2014 11:52 am
TheMainCharacter1 I think it's fine. I can already imagine the personality he'll have. lol I think he's wearing a laid back shirt for his wedding though. Maybe something a little more dressy like the La Mort Rouge? Then again I think what he has on now probably fits his personality more. Either way I like it. 3nodding Thank you for the gift. emotion_kirakira Your welcome, and it was for Valetines Day guy, in case someone's message didn't say that. xD But thanks, I have that item but with the avi, I don't like it. I have to find a jacket then and I don't want to do that.
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Posted: Fri Feb 14, 2014 11:59 am
MalevoIents Can you elaborate on what you mean as to "reducing the winged background" As in, remove the lion fins? Yes, I mean either choose the Actaeon's Blessing (Dark Full Bloom), or Emeraldback Lion Fins, not both. I like the horns more but that's just me. The wings and horns make me look at them and not focus on the clothes or the actual avatar. But again, this is your tektek so take everything I say with a grain of salt, I want you to be happy with the avi you have for the ball. 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Feb 14, 2014 12:11 pm
I enjoy feedback. I know clutter can sometimes be a bad thing! Not many people like it, and I'd hate to be an eye sore .x. I think I may have come up with a design I like more though.
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Posted: Fri Feb 14, 2014 12:16 pm
MalevoIents I enjoy feedback. I know clutter can sometimes be a bad thing! Not many people like it, and I'd hate to be an eye sore .x. I think I may have come up with a design I like more though. I like her, she isn't too cluttered, and I can clearly tell what she is. I love that you kept the horns too, she is definitely not someone I'd want to meet in a dark murky place at night. xD
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Posted: Fri Feb 14, 2014 12:19 pm
Raff_sapphire6 MalevoIents I enjoy feedback. I know clutter can sometimes be a bad thing! Not many people like it, and I'd hate to be an eye sore .x. I think I may have come up with a design I like more though. I like her, she isn't too cluttered, and I can clearly tell what she is. I love that you kept the horns too, she is definitely not someone I'd want to meet in a dark murky place at night. xD Awesome! I guess I'll work on the rest of everything this afternoon into evening :3
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Posted: Fri Feb 14, 2014 3:21 pm
TheMainCharacter1 I like the avi. 3nodding I see him being a ... Wedding Bouncer? There's also Best Man. I think Wedding Bouncer might suit him more but it's whatever you're comfortable with. Raff_sapphire6 Hmm, Best Man would work, as for bouncer you could be if you want. Depends on the personality your going for with him. Hmm, I like the outfit too. I feel like there is something missing though, as to what I'm not exactly sure, lol. sweatdrop I agree that something is missing, I thought maybe this might work?  Anyway, I think regardless of what role he takes he's going to be a bit awkward at it. He's probably better suited at being a bouncer though; I see him being pretty good at knocking a few heads together if someone rubs him up the wrong way.
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Posted: Fri Feb 14, 2014 9:52 pm
I'll put mine up when I have proper internet's.
PM me if you guys are having problems cause I'm stuck using my phone unless I'm at college with time on my hands till I get internet at my dad's.
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Posted: Fri Feb 14, 2014 11:06 pm
Here is mine, sorry for the lateness! I still am not happy with some bits, but I think it is good enough~ Here is what it looks like when it layers correctly:  I am thinking her personality will be a bit like Glenda the good witch, or even the white queen from the tim burton alice in wonderland. This one will be silly and sort of a superficial moron though.
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Posted: Fri Feb 14, 2014 11:17 pm
Eren Jaegerbomb I'll put mine up when I have proper internet's. PM me if you guys are having problems cause I'm stuck using my phone unless I'm at college with time on my hands till I get internet at my dad's. ;_; ACK! Sorry to hear that, yeah I shall pm you the intro I make up tomorrow. Right now my brain is blank, also think we need to get an order for graphics in soon, so we can start saving up for it. And once our tekteks are settled hire some artists. biggrin
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