I'm entering for: Doe 3 Username: Appeal Kin name: Corner of my Eye Naming Dream:
It moved.
It went so quick.
Around me my head spins.
Nothing.
My eyes meet darkness.
Caution.
Fear.
My head cranes slowly.
Worry consumes me.
The answer lies around me.
Nothing but a sound from behind.
I don't move
I dare not look.
But it finds me in the corner of my eye.
Posted: Sun Dec 08, 2013 1:19 am
I'm entering for: Doe 3 Username: Sarei Stargazer Kin name: Elegant Agony Naming Dream:
The wind rustled the leaves and the grasses and rushes. The sky became dark with clouds, which swirled in the high breeze, an almost sickly color as the sun spiralled away beneath them. There was a greenish gray hue to them, and it seemed as though the world was buzzing all around. Through the flora, the wind created cries, whispers, whistles, howls and screams, and a lone plant bestowed with the most magnificent purple flowers whirled about, played by the wind spirits. They seemed to almost glow in the strange light that was coming filtered through the sickly clouds, and as the breeze grew stronger, the flowers seemed to still. Suddenly everything stopped, the plants all settled with a tremendous rustling, and all is silent. The magnificent purple flowers start to vibrate, to hum…the calm before the storm…
As the sickly clouds swirled, they grew greener as they went, spiralling about the sun- hypnotic, and suddenly went gray.
All the world seemed to be draped in a thin veil of gray, and as this veil swept the land, the purple flowers hummed and vibrated stronger, until the hum became an earsplitting wail, a horrendous scream unlike any other witnessed. Something seemed to be binding them, draining the life from them, the last frontier…the unknown force of the storm that held itself in the sky. The dainty, beautiful flowers began to wilt, slowly turning gray, just as the rest of the world around them, and as they turned gray, life left them in Elegant Agony, and there they sat, gray, but still beautiful…
A reminder that beauty is not lost in agony and suffering...
I'm entering for: Doe 2 Username: Sarei Stargazer Kin name: Jealous Rage Naming Dream:
There was a tribe of Kin that were known for trying to spread lies and heresy through other tribes, creating hatred between creatures great and small, stirring up malice everywhere they went. The leader of this tribe was a shocking crimson and black doe, they called her the Red Queen. None of them had ever known her true name, as she was very secretive of it. She was a very beautiful doe, and her beauty was known as well as their terrible reputation. Many suitors would seek her to request her motherhood, or her partnership. While the Red Queen loved the attention, she was disinterested in any of these bucks. No amount of courtship, romance, or anything else that came with that was of any importance to her, but she was a petty and jealous doe. Though she was not interested in the strings that came with the attentions of bucks, it boiled her blood for them to pay other does any mind in her presence...
As she grew older, the Red Queen became good companions with a handsome and accomplished hunter that was called Roses Rage, who had become top informant for the tribe, and her right-hand man. She denied that they were falling in love, but that only made him try harder. She was so cold to him, at every advance, every attempt he made to finally win her, and one day he had had enough. After the time he spent, working for her, impressing her, still, she gave him nothing. Disheartened, he gave up, and soon he settled with a younger doe, one who was smart and also beautiful, though not as beautiful as the queen.
The Red Queen saw this relationship, and she became filled with rage of her own, at seeing the buck she had fallen in love with run off happily with another doe...but it had been her own fault. If only she hadn't been so cold...But that's what she was all about, and she used this realization, this anger, fueled by Jealous Rage to encourage her followers to continue spread hate and malice amongst kin...
And nobody knew what happened to Roses Rage and his pretty little friend...
I'm entering for: Doe 4 Username: Jun D Kin name: Ghost Rabbit Naming Dream:
One rabbit, two rabbit, three rabbit, four rabbit; one wolf, two wolf, nipping at their heels. One rabbit, run, rabbit - run, fast - RUN, rabbit, faster than your legs can fly, faster than the wolf behind, faster than you feel.
One rabbit, last rabbit - the last, flying fast, rabbit; one wolf - one wolf - faster than its prey: teeth, gnashing - flesh, gashing, one rabbit, death-thrashing - gleam - the terror in your eyes - scream - the horror in your cries - cannot get away.
Oh, rabbit, no - rabbit; blood, flesh, and bone, rabbit. One wolf, feasting, staining red the loam. Oh, rabbit, woe, rabbit. Never now to go, rabbit: never now to bound through fields, summer-kissed nor winter-chilled, never running home.
One rabbit, two rabbit, three rabbit, ghost rabbit: ghost heels, ghost paws, ghost footfalls. One rabbit, ghost rabbit, running all alone, rabbit - home nevermore.
I'm entering for: Doe 3 Username: Jun D Kin name: Grey Death Naming Dream:
a soft coughing like the pad of light paws kah - kah - kah - then she coughed no more
the foal that sleeps and succumbs in the night cried no cry his eyes remain closed
lay down it comes upon you as a blanket of ash as soft coughing eyes closed you slip away to death not black but grey.
Posted: Sun Dec 08, 2013 1:05 pm
I'm entering for: Doe 4 Username: Tiarana Kin name: Gangrene Naming Dream:
She watched her limbs turn black and fall off, one by one. The infection spread to her body and soon there was nothing left of her.
Tiarana
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Posted: Sun Dec 08, 2013 2:14 pm
I'm entering for: doe 3 Username: phoenix kiss Kin name: Night Owl Naming Dream:
Whooooooooooo is there? It's only me, sitting awake in the cypress tree.
Whooooooooooo are you? I'm nobody.
Whooooooooooo do you seek? A soft someone, with twitching nose And creeping paws -- a soft someone Who will fit in my jaws.
Posted: Sun Dec 08, 2013 4:55 pm
I'm entering for: Doe 1 Username: kurotomato Kin name: Cracked Bones Naming Dream:
I'm entering for: Doe 2 Username: kurotomato Kin name: Goodbye My Lover Naming Dream:
I'm entering for: Doe 3 Username: kurotomato Kin name: Drown Me Naming Dream:
I'm entering for: Doe 2 Username: SerinaNight Kin name: Bloodshed Naming Dream:
The doe trembled in delight, barely able to contain her unadulterated enjoyment. Her lifted forehoof shivered as she remembered the sticky sweet sensation she felt every time she moved her legs. A wild smile has long since spread across her face, and her eyes were widened in wild abandon. The doe's grin seemed to extend as the ground below her sparkled, slowly moving her forehoof closer and closer until it squished to a halt, sliding along the wet ground. She shivered, slowly twisting her hoof back and forth, savoring the sensation before her. When it began to dull, she lifted her foot again, looking for another spot wet with Bloodshed. Perhaps she needed to make more.
I may increase the length of this if I win her, but I am unsure. I like it rather a lot actually.
Posted: Sun Dec 08, 2013 6:42 pm
I'm entering for: Doe 2 Username: fluorescein Kin name: Bludgeon Naming Dream:
Hit, sock, pop, dodge and tuck into a dirty roll. For the finishing move, a lunge complete with the satisfying crunch of a job well done. The clear sound's muddled with liquid now.
I'm entering for: Doe 3 Username: Strawberri Stardust Kin name: Haunt the Earth Naming Dream:
At the crossing of the ways she stood, a grey shadow caught between a world of permanentdusk and a world of colorfulnature. She had a choice....a choice of worlds....
Should she choose the world where she would blend in? Where she'd never be noticed as different?
Or should she be the lone shadow in a world of color? Where she could stand out or hide as she pleased?
That last appealed to her... She wanted others to know who she was, wanted them to f e a r her, but only a little. She wanted to be a wild card....
Lips twitched, the faint shadow of a smile upon a face that seemed to be created of shadows.
Black hooves stepped into the world of color and she smirked softly as the world seemed a little darker just from her presence. She would be the ghost of this world.
She would haunt the earth.
I'm entering for: Doe 2 Username: Strawberri Stardust Kin name: Spilled Blood Naming Dream:
Green grass....
Pink water....
Red blood...
She looked on it all without emotion.
White hooves became stained with thick, r e dliquid.
And still she never stirred. Why?
Because she didn't cry over spilled blood.
I'm entering for: Doe 4 Username: Strawberri Stardust Kin name: Wraith in Color Naming Dream:
She wasn't like her sisters, not like her brother. She could already feel that.
They were all darkness, all saturated colors.
She was pale. She was pastel.
The only dark that stained her was her hooves, but she cherished the color that made her similar to her siblings.
But then she smiled. She could still be like them. Still similar...just in a different way.
She would be their wraithincolor.
I'm entering for: Doe 1 Username: Strawberri Stardust Kin name: Shadows on the Sun Naming Dream:
Warm, she was so w a r m...all golden glow without a single mark upon her...
And then the shadows came. They crawled over her warmth like ice, paling it out and chasing it back.
She screamed, but on they came, on and on until her golden warmth was stained with b l a c k.
Shadowsonthesun.
Posted: Sun Dec 08, 2013 7:03 pm
Annndd.... Closed!
Thank you everyone for entering! 4laugh I'll gather up the entries now so Elvy and I can do what looks like it's gonna be some really, really difficult judging! I'll announce the winners as soon as we decide!
Judging this was absolutely brutal with so many great entries. Seriously. So many. T ^ T You guys totally slayed me with all of the submissions. Maan I love doin' these contests but doing the juding is sooo haaard! Thank you everyone for entering! You're amazing! And thank you to Elvy for being so patient on getting her buck certed while I painted all of these tags. sweatdrop
Winners, please PM space crawfish (that's me!) with a mailing address! If you don't have an address you're comfortable with giving out or don't have secure mail, I'll be happy to hold the tag for you. Please triple-check your address before you send it. The tags will be coming from the eastern US, so please let me know if there's customs forms or specific declarations that need to be on the package so they arrive safely. They'll be sent via USPS in nondescript kraft paper padded envelopes.
kurotomato
I'm entering for: Doe Username: kurotomato Kin name: Cracked Bones Naming Dream:
Ruriska
I'm entering for: Doe 2 Username: Ruriska Kin name: Overkill Naming Dream:
It takes a push; she gives a shove. It needs a n**; she bites instead. They’re only friends; she loves too much. He breaks her heart; she breaks his legs.
Strawberri Stardust
I'm entering for: Doe 3 Username: Strawberri Stardust Kin name: Haunt the Earth Naming Dream:
At the crossing of the ways she stood, a grey shadow caught between a world of permanentdusk and a world of colorfulnature. She had a choice....a choice of worlds....
Should she choose the world where she would blend in? Where she'd never be noticed as different?
Or should she be the lone shadow in a world of color? Where she could stand out or hide as she pleased?
That last appealed to her... She wanted others to know who she was, wanted them to f e a r her, but only a little. She wanted to be a wild card....
Lips twitched, the faint shadow of a smile upon a face that seemed to be created of shadows.
Black hooves stepped into the world of color and she smirked softly as the world seemed a little darker just from her presence. She would be the ghost of this world.
She would haunt the earth.
Amorpheous
I'm entering for: Doe 4 Username: Amorpheous Kin name: Bait Naming Dream:
so enthralled were they that they did not even notice the trap
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Posted: Mon Dec 09, 2013 11:21 am
Omg guys seriously all the entries were amazing and like craw said, super difficult to judge. I'd give you all prizes if I could.
Sharing Famine's card too!
Posted: Mon Dec 09, 2013 11:21 am
hnnnnghhh *cries disgustingly into the thread*
Thank you so much, oh my goodness! Look at her! So cute! ♥♥♥
Congrats to the other winners! *clutches everyone close*
Thank you so much, Craw and Elvy, for the opportunity! ♥