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Technique Name: Ninpou: Shuriken Souki (Ninja Art: Shuriken Recall)
Technique Type: Independent Bukijutsu
Rank: D
Description: The user forms the hand seal, focusing chakra through any number of thrown shuriken. These shuriken will revert their paths, flying back to the original point from which they were thrown, following their original flight paths to an exact reverse.


Technique Name: Ninpou: Soshuha (Manipulating Attack Blades)
Technique Type: Independent Bukijutsu
Rank: C
Description: The user is capable of performing their very chakra down along the very ground. Doing so the user then takes the time to concentrate and begins to lift small blades such as Kunais, or knifes up into the air just a meter and a half up high. The knunais are then are just held there for a brief moment in which is targeted towards the target at hand. This technique can not be pushed any further then stated. It can not be re-thrown, can not be directed, turned or any other type of situation. There is no way to redirect these or change directions after they had been thrown with this technique.

Technique Name: Ninpou: Soudai Shuriken (Ninja Art: Grand Shuriken)
Technique Type: Independent Bukijutsu
Rank: B *This was meant to be B Rank*
Description: The user forms the hand seals, focusing chakra into a single thrown or held shuriken. A burst of smoke will surround the shuriken, clearing to reveal a massive shuriken, bigger than even a windmill shuriken, with a diameter of about two meters. This giant shuriken can do far more damage than a normal shuriken, capable of shearing through trees and slashing deeply into a foe.


Technique Name: Ninpou: Kari Shuriken (Ninja Art: Hunting Shuriken)
Technique Type: Independent Bukijutsu
Rank: C
Description: The user forms the hand seal, channeling chakra into a number of thrown or held shuriken. Those shuriken, when thrown, will curve and turn in their flight paths to continue to follow their opponent. They gain no bonuses to speed, and as such can be foiled with a fast enough or clever enough defensive maneuver.

Technique Name: Ninpou: Shuriken Mokuzai Jiten (Ninja Art: Shuriken Lumber Spin)
Technique Type: Independent Bukijutsu
Rank: C
Description: The user forms the hand seals, focusing chakra into held or thrown shuriken. The shuriken will begin to spin excessively fast, reminiscent of a saw blade. With this it gains enhanced cutting power, much like a saw blade does, to shear through wood, bite into stone, and slash the human body deeply.


Technique Name: Ninpou: Nisemono Shuriken Saiken (Ninja Art: Liar Shuriken Bond)
Technique Type: Independent Bukijutsu
Rank: B
Description: The user throws two shuriken flying parallel to each other at an opponent, connected by a wire. When the user forms the hand seals, chakra focuses between the two into the wire, making it invisible and greatly increasing it's cutting strength. These lines are invisible to the unaided eye and are sharp as cutting steel, capable of slicing flesh and bone in half with relative ease.


Technique Name: Ninpou: Bakuyaku Shuriken (Ninja Art: Explosive Shuriken)
Technique Type: Independent Bukijutsu
Rank: A
Description: The user imbues a shuriken with chakra, and then throws it. After it has landed or is in flight if the user desires, the user will form the hand seals, causing the shuriken to explode in a large blast of heat and light. The explosion is littered with tiny scraps of metal from the original shuriken and has a radius of about five meters. This explosion is quite capable of killing.


Technique Name: Hibashiri
Technique Type: Fire Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Description: The user first performs the handseals that they need. Then they slam their hands together as the user concentrates along the heat around them. Focusing their chakra, two streams of fire is launched from the user, one along the left, and another along the right. These streams shoot off towards multiple enemies. The user is capable of creating streams of fire within the distance of fifty meters, encircling enemies within twenty-meter radius. The fire is two meters in width as the height reaches up to five meters in the air as it spins violently trapping those within. This type of fire is used as an encasing Jutsu, capable of trapping the opponents inside using intensive heat for the enemy.

Technique Name: Ashy Breath
Technique Type: Fire Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Description: User forms the needed hand seals and focuses chakra to their throat and mouth. Inhaling, the user releases a large wave of steaming hot black ash from their mouth, out towards the opponent. The ash quickly covers an area of 10 meters wide and 20 meters in front of them, leaving the hot ash in a 30 meter Cone expelling from the user, 8 feet high into the air, in about 1 second. This ash hinders all sight while active, except DouJutsu. However only remains within the air for one turn. This ash upon contact, will instantly burn whoever is caught within, leaving second degree burns (B Rank Damage) along the effected body parts.

Technique Name: Kirin
Technique Type: Forbidden Lightning Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Description: Kirin
To initiate a lightning storm, and then to take control of lightning in order to guide it to a target while using the shape manipulation shown above. As such, this technique can only be used once in a fight. However, natural lightning can reach a temperature of 30,000 °C, so that even if it misses the target, the sizable blast will likely eliminate the enemy. This technique is quite strong as it is capable of puncturing through great defenses of "S" Rank and lower. This technique using the capabilities of cutting, and stabbing in the strongest formulation within Lightning. This technique is capable of pushing through and stabbing through Earth Release defenses with the strength capability of Three "S" Rank techniques. As the technique is shot down from the sky within the created Storm it shoots down towards the opponent as it creates a destructive damage of a hundred meters in a diameter. This technique has an extra knock back of one "S" rank destructive power within fifty meters.
Uses 50 Chakra - 2 Post charge

First one, approved. Second one, if the explosions are going to be that huge, I want the cost to be individualized. Third one, the tree must be within twenty five feet of the tree you're entering, or a longer cooldown.

With flight. the only way i can see this as approved is if the chakra upkeep is constant so if you pay a rank to fly at a rank height you must pay the same amount for the duration it is used. OR it lasts only a set amount of posts, with a cooldown of the same number of posts it was used, and the upkeep must be C ranked.

Sonata, the length it is up for is too long. Lower it to five and we have a jutsu.

everything else is good to go smile

Technique Name: Hasashin's Variation: Wall Walking Burst
Technique Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C - B
Description:
C Rank:
Utilizing this technique, Hasashin is capable of falling from great heights and cushioning his fall through a controlled silent chakra burst from his feet. This allows him to leap from buildings nad land on the ground without damaging his body beyond it's limits. This doesn't protect him from destroying his legs, but simply conserves them enough that he can still maneuver at normal speeds while they repair themselves thanks to his Earth Grudge Fear ability.
B Rank:
Utilizing this technique, Hasashin is capable of pulsing chakra from his foot and delivering a bone shattering kick or stomp. The force is powerful enough that it can embed someone directly into a wall, or force them into a crater in the ground. The chakra force breaks bones, and can do intense damage ot the insides, rupturing organs and deflating lungs making it nearly impossible to breathe. If a medic sees the damage done, they'd call it as being hit by a severe blunt force, like a battering ram, or a jet of water.

Technique Name: Hasashin's Variant: Wall Walking, Hand of Death
Technique Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Description:
Using this technique, Hasashin grips the target's head or throat. Focusing chakra into his hand like the wall walking technique, he makes it so that his hand is bonded to the area so much so that it is nearly impossible to remove. This causes intense pain if removed as the flesh he was holding onto is ripped away with it. This technique allows him to use a second technique without hand seals.

Technique Name: Hasashin's Variant: Wall Walking, Judgement's Grasp
Technique Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Description:
After using Hand of Death, Hasashin is capable of supercharging the chakra in his hand and creating the same effect as the B rank burst, but with much more devastating effects. If he gripped the skull, it is crushed like a grape, leaving only a shriveled husk of a head while all inside of it are now on the outside, forced out through the target's mouth, eyes, and ears. No bones even remain within the skin once covering the skull. If the neck is gripped, then the windpipe is crushed and the neck is snapped, regardless of if the target is stronger than Hasashin, or even if it is a Kaguya. The target remains alive, though is paralyzed from the neck down. Unable to do anything but gurgle as they attempt to gasp for air, the target suffocates in two posts, or one if Hasashin leaves the area.

All of the above Jutsu are denied.

In a discussion with another crew member and the captain about these techniques we came to the conclusion that they are far too overpowered.

I did read them. Funnily enough it is my job. And now that i see what you were going for with the first jutsu it is doubly denied.Your expectations are clearly set very high, and you planned to have a super powered character, which is clearly not going to happen. That is why I am here, to stop overly powered things such as instant kill Jutsu.