Wells_Falls
Ok, will you take a look at my rpc and tell me what you think? Not sure where to add healing spells or what type of abilities she would have.
Again, I haven't been through the character approval process yet (just got my first RPC finished) but I've spent some time looking over the thread. The information is a bit scattered, but between us I think we can figure it all out
3nodding Overall, looks pretty good. I don't know why there is an "Abilities" part in the first section if we are only really allowed to use the 3 types of powers in the last post, so I'd ignore that for now. However, under "Skills", I'd put something like:
Skill NameLevel: Apprentice / Journeyman / Expert / Master (or something like that)Description
For example,
ArcheryLevel: Expert
Lora has spent years teaching herself archery and has become very proficient. If she takes an extra moment to aim she is very precise even at a very long distance, and can even fire two arrows at once at two incoming targets if they are close enough together.
And you've spent all 30 of your SP. I think I might add something in the first part of the profile for myself to keep track of where my points are. For Lora for example it'd look like:
Element - Plant (15 SP)
Bow (5 SP)
Mana +1 Bar (10 SP)
Just so that I can keep track, because it took me a few minutes to see your mana was increased and I couldn't see where the rest of the SP went or if it was unused.
As far as the abilities:
1) Seems a little bit strong, 1 mana bar for 3 bars of damage. Could describe it a little more, such as how large of an area, etc. Since I assume the vines are stationary and can't move outside their zone, it could still work to be that strong since its area of effect is limited.
2) I think the barriers need to describe how much magical
and physical damage they can block, described as number of bars. So for example:
Totem [Wall of Vines]Cost: ۞ ۞
Magic Resist: ❖
Physical Resist: ❖ ❖ ❖
In this case, the idea is that the vines are an actual, physical barrier to swords, spears and the like, but they might be weak against magic. You can play around with the stats of course.
3) You didn't have anything for your Summon, not sure if you didn't want one or didn't finish it.
