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 Posted: Mon Apr 03, 2006 9:17 pm
Sorry about the late reply. Both Accepted. ^.^
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Posted: Thu Apr 06, 2006 8:00 am
fidvo
Gaian Name: Konoka666
Character Name: Kaile
Allied with: Konan .
Age: 19
Birthday: Oct 31
Appearance: 5 foot 2 ,hour glass figure , long wavy black hair , that she allways lets flow down her back, bluegreen eyes that almost glow (and do when she is mad ) .
Blood type: O
Birth place: Probably Konan
Family: non that I know of .
Hobbies: punishment . (only to those who deserve it of course)
Abilities: pro at martial arts , abnormally fast , and doesn't play fair , every time she fights she learns some thing new about her powers she has no family to tell her what she is but she cant be all human , I mean her eyes glow when she is mad , and finaly she is great with a sword .
Personality: cool , relaxed ,nothing really gets her mad but when it dos "some one will die " loves to have fun ,will try any thing ones but gets board quickly , some times she wont stop talking and others she wont say a word and very private about her past life , might be friendly but dos not trust any one.
Mini Biography: Kaile was raised by an old copal that found her one there door step one day, thy treated her well , thy took care of her and her"father" started teaching her matial arts as soon as she started to walk , but she never felt loved , so on her 13th birthday when her trainig was complete , she left to see the world ,learn to be more powerful and maybe know why she was so strange , and she has been wondering from village to village ever since .
(I think I got it right this time sweatdrop , sorry to have been so much trouble redface , I hope you dont mind that I just edited the first post , I have mid terms and I type realy slow so I dont have a lot of time 4laugh )
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Posted: Sun Apr 16, 2006 12:58 am
Konoka666 Stupid dogGaian Name: Konoka666
Character Name: Kaile
Allied with: every one and no one .
Age: 19
Birthday: no idea (she was just happy she knew how old she was ).
Appearance: 5 foot 2; hour glass figure; long wavy black hair, that she allways lets flow down her back; bluegreen eyes that almost glow (and do when she is mad ).
Blood type: O
Birth place: again no idea ?
Family: none that she knows of .
Hobbies: depends on the mood .
Abilities: pro at martial arts , fast , and dos not play fair , every time she fights she learns some thing new about her self she has no family to tell her what she is but she cant be all human , I mean her eyes glow when she is mad , she can dodge any attack 'cos she can make it go thru her by terning into smoke , witch also lets her go from one place to another as fast as the wind will take her , and she is great with a sword .
Personality: cool, relaxed, nothing really gets her mad but when it dos "some one will die," loves to have fun, will try any thing once but gets board quickly, some times she wont stop talking and others she wont say a word and very private about her old life, might be friendly but dos not trust any one.
Mini Biography: Kaile was raised by an old copal that found her one there door step one day, thy treated her well , thy took care of her and her"father" started teaching her matial arts as soon as she started to walk , but she never felt loved , so on her 13th birthday when her trainig was complete , she left to see the world ,learn to be more powerful and maybe know why she was so strange , and she hase been wondering from village to village ever since . (Good?? sweatdrop ) Ok, starting at the top. 1) Wrong Secret Word. I have no bloody idea how you managed to come up with that one. Go look at the rules again, and do some highlighting. You should find it. 2) You have to put a country to who you are allied with. There is no "All and None." It doesn't work like that. You have to choose a country to be allied with. Period. 3) You have to have something for a birthday. Your character doesn't have to know it, but I DO. 4) Birthplace is the same with Birthday. Your character doesn't have to know it, but I DO. 5) If your character's hobbies depends on her mood, say what she does with each mood. Like, does she like to doodle when she is happy, but when she is sad, she likes to go thrash something up? Tell me. 6) Your abilities have me perplexed. You are trying to describe some of her past in her powers. From what I can gather, you have: Martial Arts, Swordsmanship, Speed, Smoke Alright, here's the deal. You have your two physical, and two magical. HOWEVER, you CANNOT have your character "dodge any attack 'cos she can make it go thru her by turning into smoke, which also lets her go from one place to another as fast as the wind will take her." NO. You can use it to dodge, yes, but you are going a little too far with it. There will be some times where it doesn't work. Other than those, it's not bad. Though, I would sincerely appriciate if you did a spell check on it. ^.^
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Posted: Sun Apr 16, 2006 5:03 pm
Gaian Name - Wind.scattered_wings Wow, it took a while to find the password xDD haha. it's Fidvo ^.^Star Name - Shoshi Real Name - Chiyo Group - Pangu Age - 16 Birthday - January 22 Appearance - MeghanShe usually has to look up, down or staight at a person, because she's more or less an average height; then again, it depends on the age of a person. She stands at about 5' 6" and weighs in at 125lbs. Location of Mark - right shoulder blade Blood Type - O+ Birth Place - Huaxi Village Family - Grandparents- Chei sen and Yei toi; sisters- chein lu, tei lin and beru; brothers- ryu and po Hobbies - Finding anything that will get her blood flowing, watching her siblings, helping out around the village, playing music, fighting Abilities - She knows various types of martial arts, including the use of various weapons, but she prefers hand to hand. She's extrememly acrobatic and flexible having loved to go on adventures where walking just wasn't enough. She also can come into contact with spirits, which either help her or haunt her, depending on the actual spirit. Personality - Although she feels bitter towards her parents for giving her up when she was young, she loves her family very much; she considers everyone in her village to be her family. She's kind and caring, although easy to get mad; when she's in a fight, she tends to become cruel. She loves to meet new people, and is very active, to say the least, usually upbeat and eager for new tasks. Also, she's very adventerous and will go to any length to find that one adventure that will make her body tremble. Mini Biography - Meghan and her brothers and sisters don't know much about their parents, they just know that the two of them gave each of them to their grandparents when they were born. They've been growing up with them eversince. A neighbor of Meghan's taught her many forms of martial arts, having no children to pass his knowledge to.
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Posted: Sun Apr 16, 2006 10:09 pm
Wind.scattered_wings Gaian Name - Wind.scattered_wings Wow, it took a while to find the password xDD haha. it's Fidvo ^.^Star Name - Shoshi Real Name - Meghan Group - Pangu Age - 16 Birthday - January 22 Appearance - MeghanShe usually has to look up, down or staight at a person, because she's more or less an average height; then again, it depends on the age of a person. She stands at about 5' 6" and weighs in at 125lbs. Location of Mark - Blood Type - O+ Birth Place - Huaxi Village Family - Grandparents- Chei sen and Yei toi; sisters- chein lu, tei lin and beru; brothers- ryu and po Hobbies - Finding anything that will get her blood flowing, watching her siblings, helping out around the village, playing music, fighting Abilities - She knows various types of martial arts, including the use of various weapons, but she prefers hand to hand. She's extrememly acrobatic and flexible having loved to go on adventures where walking just wasn't enough. She also can come into contact with spirits, which either help her or haunt her, depending on the actual spirit. Personality - Although she feels bitter towards her parents for giving her up when she was young, she loves her family very much; she considers everyone in her village to be her family. She's kind and caring, although easy to get mad; when she's in a fight, she tends to become cruel. She loves to meet new people, and is very active, to say the least, usually upbeat and eager for new tasks. Also, she's very adventerous and will go to any length to find that one adventure that will make her body tremble. Mini Biography - Meghan and her brothers and sisters don't know much about their parents, they just know that the two of them gave each of them to their grandparents when they were born. They've been growing up with them eversince. A neighbor of Meghan's taught her many forms of martial arts, having no children to pass his knowledge to. You are accepted, however I do have a few comments. 1) I answered your question in the Ask the Owner thread, so just add another little post saying where the mark is. ^.^ Just remember, it is a KANJI mark. ^.^ I just need to find them so that everyone knows what they look like. sweatdrop 2) This is just a random curiosity, really. Why the heck is your character's name Meghan, when all of her family members have Chinese names? Last time I checked, Meghan wasn't Chinese or Japanese for that matter. So, why Meghan?
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Posted: Mon Apr 17, 2006 8:45 am
haha. that IS a good question o.O i was thinking 'bout that when I was becuase it's the name i usually use and I have a bad habbit of going back to it all the time so it ends up confusing everyone so i just stick with it... i'm sorry >< if you want me to change it, i can xp
and i guess i'll just edit my form for the location of the mark
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Posted: Mon Apr 17, 2006 9:17 pm
You can change it if you want, hell... I could change it with just adding a u between the g and the h. It's not a huge deal. I was just curious. ^.^ I would prefer if it was a Chinese or Japanese based name though.
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Posted: Tue Apr 18, 2006 5:58 pm
haha. i changed it to Chiyo xDD sorry, i was thinking about memoirs of a geisha when i wrote it ><
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Posted: Sat Apr 22, 2006 11:05 pm
Konoka666 fidvoGaian Name: Konoka666
Character Name: Kaile
Allied with: Konan .
Age: 19
Birthday: Oct 31
Appearance: 5 foot 2 ,hour glass figure , long wavy black hair , that she allways lets flow down her back, bluegreen eyes that almost glow (and do when she is mad ) .
Blood type: O
Birth place: Probably Konan
Family: non that I know of .
Hobbies: punishment . (only to those who deserve it of course)
Abilities: pro at martial arts , abnormally fast , and doesn't play fair , every time she fights she learns some thing new about her powers she has no family to tell her what she is but she cant be all human , I mean her eyes glow when she is mad , and finaly she is great with a sword .
Personality: cool , relaxed ,nothing really gets her mad but when it dos "some one will die " loves to have fun ,will try any thing ones but gets board quickly , some times she wont stop talking and others she wont say a word and very private about her past life , might be friendly but dos not trust any one.
Mini Biography: Kaile was raised by an old copal that found her one there door step one day, thy treated her well , thy took care of her and her"father" started teaching her matial arts as soon as she started to walk , but she never felt loved , so on her 13th birthday when her trainig was complete , she left to see the world ,learn to be more powerful and maybe know why she was so strange , and she has been wondering from village to village ever since .(I think I got it right this time sweatdrop , sorry to have been so much trouble redface , I hope you dont mind that I just edited the first post , I have mid terms and I type realy slow so I dont have a lot of time 4laugh ) Sorry it took me so long. I didn't see you had edited it. And, don't worry about it that much. ^.^ Anytime I make comments, they are meant to help. Ok. Starting at the top, and going over the comments I made last time: 1) PERFECT! biggrin You found the proper secret word. Good job! 2) Alright, so you are allied with Konan. Wonderful! 3) Oooh, a Halloween baby. *grins* Great! 4) Probably Konan? Hmmm... well, depending on which city, it most certainly can be a probably. *chuckles* Particularly if she is from Seisen Village. 5) Punishment, huh? Hmmm... quite an interesting hobby, I must say. 6) Ah, alright, so you cut out the smoke huh? Alright. Though, you didn't have to. I just didn't want you to be dodging everyone's attacks because you could turn into smoke. But, Martial Arts and Swordsmanship as physical and Speed as Magical is a good balance. biggrin Alright! You are accepted! I'll add you in just a minute.
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Posted: Wed May 17, 2006 9:07 pm
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Posted: Wed May 17, 2006 9:31 pm
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Posted: Wed May 17, 2006 9:34 pm
Thank you, I'm working on Tomite right now.
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Posted: Wed May 17, 2006 9:54 pm
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Posted: Wed May 17, 2006 10:06 pm
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Posted: Wed May 17, 2006 10:10 pm
Thank you, I'm trying to decide if I want to do Tomo, or one of the Pangu warriors...
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