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Okay a few things to work on. The number is I believe a little too low. Given it's basically a third of the Bakudo it's based off of then move it up to around the 10-19 zone as it could potentially hold with the same force but the difference in formation is what makes it weaker.

As it's not visible try and describe it through other senses. What does the impact feel like or how can I ascertain it's there?

Also the flavour text. It mentions being created in the early stages of the Hado System. Does that suggest an offensively geared Hado form may also exist? If so make sure to write about it.

I like the Kido we just need to do a little refining.

Also I'll be getting on a train soon so don't expect a reply for at least three hours.

Alright. That's great. I'll add it to the list now.

To be honest I could actually see a use for the Hado you described as multiple hits with such a Kido would greatly weaken an enemy. With your permission may I add a slightly modified version to the Kido list?

Kidō Number: 5
Kidō Class: Chiyudō
Kidō Name: Sealing Straps
Kidō Chant: "Winds from the silent river, comfort those thrown asunder."
Appearance: This Chiyudō does not take a real physical "standby" form. However, upon conjuration, the caster's hands will glow with light green light. When the Chiyudō is applied to the afflicted field, the green light solidifies and forms into a medical gauze, although slightly different from the Pressure Gauze (#14) Chiyudō.
Effects: Upon casting the Chiyudō, the hands of the caster glows and its light is smeared around the wounded part of the body, much like how gauze are applied by medical personnel. It is considered as one of the most basic Chiyudō for learning. Due to the Chiyudō's basic nature, it is commonly used as a "base Chiyudō", which makes it a basic preparatory spell to other Kidō as well.
Flavour Text: It was widely used long ago by members of the Fourth Division in missions where there are no proper access to medical equipment. It was created by Megurine Hayashi, an unseated member of the Fourth Division (although extremely talented to Kidō), while on a dangerous mission in Earth. Along with her team, she was wounded by a powerful Hollow and chased them in a place where there was no proper medical equipment around. She forced her own Reiryoku to form what seemed to be an early version of the Sealing Straps Chiyudō, a Reiryoku-made wrap that adjusted to the patient's movements, which was an attempt to bind her teammate's broken arm.
Credited to: keichaos

Kidō Number: 80
Kidō Class: Chiyudō
Kidō Name: Domain Penetration
Kidō Chant: "The dark seas rages; the angry wind howls; the troubled earth trembles; and the broken man falls. Beneath the seething and binding darkness, a light struggles. One hand. Hundred sparrows. Two minds. Endless sorrows."
Appearance: When the Chiyudō is activated, a transparent cube forms around the caster and the patient. This creates a small perimeter, which is actually the area of the Chiyudō and must never be disturbed in any way possible.
Effects: This high-level Chiyudō functions mostly for patient's who has suffered a deep coma. In this effect, upon the activation of the Chiyudō, the caster's conscious mind is separated from his body and is sent to the subconscious domain of the comatose patient. Therefore, it is considered to be a very dangerous process. The healer, who happens to be the caster of the Chiyudō, must therefore analyze the nature of the coma so proper medical procedures are to be applied for the comatose patient. If the healer is experienced in this field, he may be able to "pull" out the patient from his own subconscious domain, where, though not all the time, the patient is perceived to be found at; this process requires utmost time and caution. However, in order to pull out the patient from his own subconscious mind, one must perform another Chiyudō, Separating Void, perfectly. It also must be noted that disturbance of the "cube perimeter" disrupts the energy fields of the Chiyudō, which may cause the connection between two people to collapse - this may cause the caster to also "lose" his consciousness. Therefore, when performing Domain Penetration, it is essential the cube remains untouched or protected from outside disturbances.
Important Effect: While it is most commonly used to patients who have fallen into coma, this Chiyudō is also weak and brittle in such a way that it cannot penetrate even the weakest of mental Bakudō. Therefore, those patients that have chosen to become "shut in" their subconscious world will be impenetrable to Domain Penetration.
Flavour Text: The high-level Chiyudō was developed and conceived by a brilliant member of the Fourth Division, Shion Kazemaru. She created it in order to save her mother, who has been in a coma since her younger years after suffering from a Hollow attack. The Chiyudō was first conceived to be classified as a form of Hadō, because of its nature to separate the link between the host's body and consciousness; however, she later explained that the ability also developed along with a combination of Bakudō, which protected the caster's consciousness from being obliterated by the Hadō's separation procedure and its successful transfer to another's subconscious domain. It was, later on, labeled as a highly dangerous Chiyudō, which may only be performed those versed in the peculiarities of the mind. Shion was known to be the only one so skilled in this to the point that she could do it anywhere, even if the place is chaotic or dangerous (i.e. battlefield).
Credited to: keichaos

Kidō Number: 81
Kidō Class: Chiyudō
Kidō Name: Separating Void
Kidō Chant: "The guiding hand leads the poor-sighted sheep. The sound that he makes paves through dangerous leaps. Unfazed by the lingering gloom, they continue on towards the safe land, where the meadow is greener and quieter. Unbroken path. Truthful sight. Dark night. Shallow light."
Appearance: When the Chiyudō is conjured, three pillars, which follow a triangular pattern, appears around the caster. It also requires the subject's/patient's conscious manifestation to be in the triangle along with the caster's or else the Chiyudō fails. When it is finalized, the pillars shatter and causes a massive jolt of energy around the subconscious world of the patient. And at the same time, this jolt "launches" the two subjects upwards (although perception may change the "launch" to falling or accelerating forward).
Effects: Put it simply, it is a "separating" Chiyudō that cuts off the patient's conscious mind from its subconscious domain, essentially "bring it up on the surface". Of all the times Shion Kazemaru (the developer) used it, the Separating Void's primary nature is to wake the comatose patient from his condition. The pillars are inscribed with three words: Perception, Understanding, and Acceptance. Upon the final steps of the Chiyudō, these pillars shatter and the patient's conscious manifestation should be able to differentiate between the subconscious and conscious mind. It is notable that time is extremely longer when inside one's mind and that a lot of things could happen once inside for several minutes in real time.
Flavour Text: Shion Kazemaru theorized that with the works of the mind, it is impossible to completely cut off the patient's consciousness from his own personal world (a.k.a. the subconscious world). Therefore, incorporating emotions into the patient's mind, she continued, would eventually end up with solving of the patient's inner conflicts as soon as possible, rather than forcing him to pull out from the comatose state (outside healing methods), which meant untimely inner recovery. The "final steps" mentioned earlier were, in fact, the patient's own guidelines in coming to terms with his own subconscious domain. If the patient manages to solve his internal conflict, the pillars shatters according to his realizations. Once a complete realization (all three pillars broken), the Chiyudō sends a massive jolt of energy into the mind of the patient, thus sending him out of coma, and the caster back into his own body.
Credited to: keichaos

Don't be silly Kei. I like getting any entries. Any. Entries. The longer the better.

I love the last two. I really do. They serve a purpose that we don't really have Chiyudo for and their high level makes sense as they tend to deal with mental elements.

One question and one tiny issue however before I approve them. What if the coma is self induced? Is it possible to force a person out of a coma they don't want to come out of? Also I'd prefer at this point if you either split them into 80 and 81 or made them into one single Kido #80. Although some Kido have two phases these are two different Kido. Otherwise they're great and I'll add them soon.

As for your first energy I see potential for it. I see it more as a reiyoku gaze whereas Felicity's was physical. They could have different uses. For example there may be supplementary Kido that make it better for different types of wounds. In essence I want a few edits but we're half way there.


Khaost. Nice job sneaking in an entry there. I was just about to post to Kei when I saw it come up below me. Let's see then. I think it's fine to be honest. It does everything it says it does. The only issue I can remotely have is that the number might be a little too high. I'd put it at 40-49.

Okay then if you want to make a note that they're designed for unintentional cases then that'd be good. Then I can put them in after they separated into 80+81.

While I see that they're a part and parcel of one another I've got to fatten out this list. I might put them together in future but for now let's keep them separate. Someone might get clever with it. Who knows?

As for SS. Let's see. Well perhaps there could be a branch of supplementary Kido that enhance the effects of the gauze so it works better to treat burnt wounds or to remove micro-organisms.

Heads up Kei as you were once the Captain of 4th Division. I'm designing a Kido with the intent to poison enemies. Maybe you could have it so that there's a supplementary addition to the Reiyoku to drain out poisons.

I can see that. Perhaps though it would fit the setting. With Squad 4 cut off from their medical supplies they have to use Chiyudo methods.

Of course it's your call.

Okay that looks like everything to me. I'll be adding them all in.