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Posted: Sun Mar 10, 2013 4:47 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 10, 2013 6:12 pm
(Well, hopefully this is enough. Thanks for reading this in advance.)
RPer's Name: Hedpefan Character's Name: Kin Uchiha (Will be made after I get everything sorted.) Character's Rank: Genin Wanted Bijuu: Yonbi
What are your plans for the Biju? To help make a character that can protect Konohagakure no matter what. Also to help give my character a little extra back ground.
What is a Jinchuriki's purpose? To be the host of the Biju and to protect his village. He/she must also be able to protect his friends.
RP Sample “Run for your life!” One of the local village boys yelled at Kin as he walked through the town. Kin was used to people yelling at him for no reason. At this point he didn't even care that people did it. Ignoring them always seemed to be the best way to make them go away. Anyways he was going to training and he had no time to be bothered by pests. The village however was extremely quite. Almost too quite for him. This was something that actually bothered him for once. In the distance however he could see a figure walking towards him. Kin thought that it was just going to be another villager but, he could have never been so wrong in his life.
“Ready to die little boy?”, the figure said to Kin as it got closer and started to become more detailed.
“W-who are you?”, Kin replied to the man. He was starting to get a little hesitant about this but, he knew he couldn't run. All he could do was in counter this man and see what he wanted. However before the other man said anything, a kunai came flying out of the mans hand at Kin. There was no time for Kin to be strategic at this point. Kin knew that he was going to have to find a place to hide or attack and figure out a strategy while fighting. Only once chance was Kin given. If he screwed up it could be the end.
”What are you doing? You better move boy.”, said the Yonbi inside Kin. This was something that Kin had not quite got used to yet. However he knew that the thing inside him was right. Another Kunai came flying at Kin and Kin quickly jumped out of the way of the kunai. When Kin looked to see if the kunai had hit him, he realized that it had. It only ripped his clothes a little. Now, Kin had a chance to fight back a little. It seemed that the man was mainly using long ranged weapons. However, Kin knew that the man hadn't used any jutsu yet and that he couldn't apply that in his strategy.
“Damn...What should I do?”, Kin said to himself quietly as he dodged a couple more kunai. Just when he thought he had a good strategy, a blast of wind came at him. He didn't even see the man make any hand seals. The man started to walk closer to Kin as Kin jumped up onto a building. This battle was going in the favor of the mysterious man so far and Kin didn't like that. The man again seemed to make a blast of wind come towards him. This time Kin was hit by it and he went flying.
”Boy, you better be smarter about this.”, the Yonbi said to Kin inside his head again. ”Here...use it well.” The Yonbi then gave Kin the slightest amount of Chakra. It wasn't that much for the Yonbi but, it was a lot for Kin.
Another kunai came flying at Kin but, this time Kin didn't jump out of the way. The only thing that stopped the kunai from hitting Kin was a cloak made out of his elements, Katon and Fuuton. Kin was able to make the cloak grab the kunai and he made it throw the kunai back at the man. The kunai however missed the man. This didn't discourage Kin. Something incredible however happened. Kin managed to come up with a strategy. It seemed that this man was using mostly long ranged things. Both his weapons and ninjutsu were long range so all Kin had to do was get up close and personal. His sharigan then showed in both of his eyes. The three tomoe being the most apparent thing.
Movements of the man became extremely easy for the boy, Kin, to follow. It also helped that he could see what the man was going to do next. All he had to do now was get close to the man and Kin knew that he could take out him. The strategy was still being formed but, Kin wasn't just sitting there being idle. There were buildings all around him and he knew that these buildings could be used for a place to make the man back up into. If Kin could back the man into a corner, he could then get even closer.
With the best strategy in mind that Kin could come up with, he started to make hand seals. It took him only a second to do the hand seals and out loud kin said, “Fire Release: Flame Bullet.” Then Kin felt oil in his mouth. The next thing that happened was somewhat amazing to Kin, he spit out the oil and ignited it. A ball of fire then appeared and made the man be pushed back a little. However, Kin wasn't done with his assault. He was still going to make this man go into the alley way to corner him.
Kin then made a few more hand seals and said out loud, “Wind Release: Spiraling Wind Ball.” In the palm of his hand a ball of wind appeared and Kin made it go towards the man. At first the man dodged it but, this is exactly what Kin wanted the man to do.
“Oh come on. You are an extremely weak boy aren't you.”, The man said to Kin. Kin then laughed softly and manipulated the ball to make it go towards the man. He also made sure that his cloak went towards the man as well. Again the man dodged his cloak but, he didn't see the ball of wind coming towards him. This was all falling in place for Kin. His strategy was working. The ball hit the man and sent him flying into the alley way. Now all Kin had to do was go into the alley way and finish the battle.
The alley was was a dark place and Kin couldn't see really anything at all. This man had to be in here though. Kin walked into the alley way as slowly and stealth-fully as he could. Then he felt something try to hit him in the back of the head but, his cloak of fire and wind blocked it. The man had decided to show his face and this was a mistake. Kin's strength was going to play in this part now and Kin was ready to bring this man to the Hokage. A smile spread over Kin's face as he turned around and punched the man right in the stomach. This sent the man flying out of the alley way. Kin was right behind him and punched him again but, this time in the face. This knocked out the man instantly. When Kin actually got a look at the man's face, he realized that he didn't know him. There was almost no distinguishable features of the man besides a black tattoo of a hand on his right cheek.
”Good job boy but, remember you'll have to fight something more than him someday. And you better respect me when that happens as I am an Ore and I will only help you if you respect me.” Kin could hear in his head again. It was the same voice so Kin felt a little satisfied with the voice. However Kin didn't know why the voice wanted him to respect it.
His cloak of fire and wind slowly disappeared and Kin picked up the man. After a while of walking towards the Hokage's office, Kin realized who this man was....He was one of the men you killed his parents. Just when he realized who the man was, Kin had an overwhelming feeling of wanting to murder the man. Kin slowly went into a rage and he threw the man against the floor. This man woke up with a start and couldn't speak really. All the man saw was Kin coming towards him with Malicious intent. “P-please don't kill me.”, The man begged Kin. However Kin wasn't there. The only thing controlling him was his instincts. The cloak of fire and wind appeared gain but, before Kin could do anything to the man, a pair of anbu black ops appeared and stopped Kin dead in his tracks. Kin was able to throw off one of the anbu but, more appeared and took him away to a cell.
Kin never did see the man again. He was put in the cell for a few days to cool down and eventually he let out. Free to go back to his daily routine was all that he wanted and that's what he got. However, Kin wanted to find out who the man was and why he attacked him but, the Hokage wouldn't tell him. It was his right to find out and Kin knew that he would have to hunt down these people whether the Hokage liked it or not but, Kin wasn't going to go without friends and with the Hokage's permission. He respected the Hokage and knew that when the Hokage thought he was ready, they'd allow him to go but, for now Kin would get as strong as he could for the fight of his life. A fight to find out who killed his parents and why. The day he found out would be the day that he could be satisfied with all of his training and when he could stop training so hard. Actually, Kin decided that he would always train as hard as he could as he had to protect the village and it's in habitats. Doing that would take a lot of training and Kin had to be the one to do the training.
(Again thanks for reading this.)
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Posted: Sun Mar 10, 2013 6:27 pm
Declined, your character is planning to be an Uchiha, which due to the natural Biju suppression that your character will get, I'm afraid you will be declined on those grounds. Thank you for your application.
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Posted: Sun Mar 10, 2013 6:31 pm
Some Witty Name Declined, your character is planning to be an Uchiha, which due to the natural Biju suppression that your character will get, I'm afraid you will be declined on those grounds. Thank you for your application. Well, I read this "Uchiha's with their natural Biju suppression ability once they reach three tomoe are not allowed to apply for Biju." so I thought it was okay. However, if you say that they aren't allowed to have on then would it be okay if I change the clan?
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Posted: Sun Mar 10, 2013 6:38 pm
The problem is, is that Uchiha aren't that hard to get three tomoe with, especially as a Biju host. You'll be constantly hunted by people, and constantly pushed to your limits, so really, Three Tomoe would take possibly 2 out of 2 fights before you'd have it fully ready. However, if you were to create another character, one without the Sharingan, then I think I would be more than willing to allow you to have access to the Yonbi. Just make sure to specify what clan your character would be apart of, or lackthereof.
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Posted: Sun Mar 10, 2013 6:43 pm
So, if I change the clan do I have to completely do a different application? Though the application just says a rp sample which generally doesn't have to be your character but, if you'd like I can edit the application to have the new clan. I'll leave that up to you though to decide.
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Posted: Sun Mar 10, 2013 6:47 pm
Your application is fine, just make the minor edits about the clan and such. I'll have another moderator read over your post and confirm my opinion, and then if they agree with me, then you'll be the Biju host.
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Posted: Sun Mar 10, 2013 6:49 pm
Some Witty Name I make the edits now then? Or do I wait until the other moderator confirms your opinion?
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Posted: Sun Mar 10, 2013 7:15 pm
After talking over everything with the other moderators, we've decided not to give you the Biju. The reasons are as followed:
Aside from the "Speaking?", bits, your post was very inconsistent with what you say in your post, talking about a child screaming, then mentioning the village was quiet. You had a bit of random capitalization in your post, and you seem to be using oil that was apparently already within your character's mouth.
The last reason is that you automatically assumed control with Yonbi, which really isn't how Biju work. The Biju aren't really something that will just "Give" you chakra, so overall, I'm going to decline you after further looking into. I apologize for any inconvenience.
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Posted: Sun Mar 10, 2013 7:18 pm
Don't worry about it. It's perfectly understandable. I'll just go make my character now. Thank you anyways for helping me.
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Posted: Tue Mar 12, 2013 11:36 pm
RPer's Name: xNew York Slavex Character's Name: Radha Akunin Character's Rank: Genin Wanted Bijuu: Yonbi .. Son Goku
What are your plans for the Biju?: Well, I love this particular Biju, I know everything about it. I like the fact that there is a elemental addition along with it (Yougan/Lava). I would in general like to be a bada**.
What is a Jinchuriki's purpose?: Thats a weird question, cause generally Jinchuriki are shunned from their villages as they are seen as the demons themselves. Jinchuriki keep the demon sealed and attempt to keep them under control.
RP Sample A sigh escaped the raven haired female's luscious lips as she walked along the trail from Otogakure to Konohagakure, due to a certain circumstance she'd been moved to the fire country as her own village seemed to be quite busy with repairs and constructions. So many of the ninja in Otogakure had ended up dispersing into the different villages, not that there was a choice, the only two were Konoha and the Mist. Serenity ran her slender fingers through her silky raven hair and stared into the clear blue skies. In the end she'd chosen Konoha, though she hadn't left with the others she tried to help as much as she could before she left but they didn't allow her to hence she was going in her trip a day later at the most. Serenity had only just left the village a moment ago therefore, she had quite a ways to go until she would safely arrive to Konoha, though she wasn't so sure that she wasn't going to get attacked, in her old village, there had been rumours going around that she was some had some powerful beast inside of her body. Serenity stopped and looked down at her stomach, touching it lightly, tenderly. Shaking her head she went to walk again but momentarily forgot how to and had ended up falling over. " I hate when that happens.. " She said to herself. Serenity moved her hands in front of herself and pushed herself off of the ground quickly, dusting off her clothing as she stared onward.
Serenity closed her piercing midnight blue eyes and ran a finger along the black mark upon her face in the shape of a butterfly, on her eye and a part of her cheek. Whenever she closed her eye it was full once again. It was like a drawing etched in a book, however it was on her face. It was a flower lace like pattern on the butterfly. Serenity's slender index finger slid down her eye and on her cheek as her fingers reached her lips, kissing her index finger and middle finger as she opened her eyes, as they pierced into the sky; her arm slowly dropping to her side once again as she walked on. Hey little monster inside of me. . . if you really exist, why don't you talk to me? Serenity began to think to herself, unknown to her that the so called little monster as in fact quite big and all airs, he knew what she felt, he heard what she thought, though he remained dormant and still, not doing anything about it, unless it was required for him to do so, however. . for her to call him a monster was a little harsh, even if he was a huge crimson ape who wreaks havoc when he was released and not under control. . He wasn't that little either. . The crimson ape rolled his eyes and drummed his fingers against his face; she was just another vessel for his chakra, she wasn't anything important. . unless her life was in danger, if her's was in danger, his was as well.
Serenity leaned against a tree on the path and closed her eyes as the sun was setting; she presumed that the trip would take around two days to get to her destination and well, it wasn't what she had expected but at least she would serve as a ninja and learn the art of her trade, go on missions as such. Whistling a small, cute tune she heard it whistled back at her by the mocking jays near by before they flew off. Closing her eyes she rested for a bit, not sure what would really happen. Rustle! Serenity's eyes snapped open, darting her eyes about in the pitch darkness she couldn't see the four shinobi who had surrounded her, leaving her no escape. Though Serenity oblivious to this had stood up, slowly, leaning against the tree which was actually a person the whole time. The strong arms wrapped around the waist of her curvaceous bodice, holding a cloth up against her face. Serenity didn't inhale or exhale for a while, leaving the shinobi to tick her exposed stomach and cause her to take a large breath inwards as she gasped. Serenity choked on the poison infused with a liquid product which had knocked her out, allowing her kidnappers to take her easily. The first stage of the poison had activated. The poison's job was to knock her out and enable her paralyzed the moment she awoke however after a few minutes she would be able to move, however after that, every time she would move, it would have caused her to feel as if every one of her organs and bones were being crushed mercilessly.
Serenity who didn't know this had slowly tried to sit up the moment it took effect and have moved onto the second stage. The poison was created so that the victim was in so much pain they begged for death, however it wasn't given and in a few hours she would be dead. The Shoukou inside her could feel her pain as she tried to get up, a scream erupted from her lips as she fell back down, panting. " Get up girl! " the so called monster inside her screamed inside her head. " I-I c-can't. . . " she whispered, hoping the demon heard her and it had. " I can't? It hurts too much! You wuss get up this minute and act like a real shinobi! " The demon had yelled. Serenity nodded, a shock of pain running through her body as she moved. Slowly she got up, her breath was heavy as she breathed slowly in and out. In a moment she was on her arse, then her knees and her hands, then on her feet, the pain was too unbearable, every movement she made she'd cried out in pain loudly. She was up though, even if it hurt so much. Taking a step forward she collapsed on her knees. " Argh! " she screamed, pushing herself to stand up once again. It's like learning how to walk again. . . she thought to herself slowly. An eye shut as she winced, moving her feet forward she walked herself on, only to hear a voice. " So she can walk eh? even after the poison we made her inhale. . . " the voice had chuckled right behind her. Serenity twisted her body in a rush, forgetting she was in pain for a moment as she screamed once again, in pain, tears slid down her pale cheeks.
" That's right kiddo, you're stand, if you can walk you can run, if you can run, you can dodge and fight " Soukou had said to her, his voice only ringing through to her in her mind. Serenity knew he was right, she could walk, even if it was painful she could walk, she bet she could run as well. " What do you mean by poison? What's going to happen to me? " She questioned, her midnight blue eyes piercing into his emerald green eyes as a smirk, as sexy as it was painted on his lips, pissed her off. Biting her bottom lip she realized that only her face seemed unaffected by the poison. Waiting she was starting to be get irritated by the second as he refused to explain it to her. " The poison is specifically designed so that you'll feel as if you bones and organs are being crushed, though it might not actually be happening, " He started off, No s**t Sherlock! I think I can feel that with every itty-bitty movement. . she snapped, in her mind, however stayed quiet. " But the thing is, in four hours you'll be dead unless you manage to get this from me. " When he had finally finished explaining he waved about a clear vial full of white liquid and placed it in his. . . boxers. . . Serenity stared blankly at him in disgust, imagining how horrible it would be if she had managed to defeat him and had to reach into his pants and actually take the god forsaken thing. Worst of all she had to drink it, and it wasn't very appealing anymore, even if she was going to die. Serenity shook her head, though it caused pain to flood her body like no tomorrow she was beginning to like it, it a weird way, meaning she either had a lot of determination or she was a kinky teen. Serenity hoped it was just the determination, she really didn't feel all good thinking about herself that way. Taking a bold move she ran towards him in a slow pace and aimed to punch him in the face, though it was quite the waste, he had amazing features. The shinobi dodged, causing her to cause quite a hole in the wall.
Going into strike her but before he could pulled out a kunai and threw it at her head, causing Serenity to rip her arm out of the hole and dodge it as fast as she could, though she wasn't quite so lucky, it had grazed her shoulder, causing her to hiss in pain. Normally it wouldn't hurt as bad but she was currently under the control of the blasted poison. Serenity didn't last long, she had collapsed on the ground with many scars on her body as she breathed heavily. I guess I'm going to die. . . She thought to herself as her private thoughts had been interrupted by the Soukou " God, I don't want to die, even if I have to let you borrow my charkra.. " he spoke a matter of factly towards her. Feeling some more chakra flow through her she got up as fast as she could, an eye closed as she tried to steady her breathing. " Housenka no Jutsu " She said performing the necessary hand seals as she emitted small little fire balls hurling them towards her opponent, hiding shuriken inside each one. The shinobi ducked as he tried to avoid the fire balls being hurled towards him as he began to wonder why and how she was still able to person jutsu, he was sure he had drained her of it, which explained his tattered clothing from the way she had attacked him ruthlessly. Caught in his thoughts he did not see the fire ball hurled at his right thigh, scorning his skin as the shuriken dug it'self in deep.
" s**t! " He cried, ripping it out of his thigh, not caring about the damage it would have done to the muscles in his thigh. As he was distracted by his leg he had not noticed she had moved in for another attack, flinging her fist at his head, knocking him back into the wall with a cracking sound. Serenity could feel more of the pain as it rippled through her very being, it got worse as time went on, she was sure she didn't have much time left either. Performing more hand seals she was about to attack him again until his emerald grey eyes had turned red, and three tomoe had appeared, later on it had changed. She knew what this was. The sharingan, the copy wheel. Serenity knew by the looks of it, it wasn't any old sharingan it was at least a stage or more better. Caught by surprise she hadn't realized she had already been stuck in his genjutsu, in fact from the start, from the moment she woke up, she knew she was in the genjustu. Just as she realized it, he smirked and her younger bother Koichi appeared before her and ran towards the other shinobi a smile on his face as he hugged him. Her precious little brother hugging her enemy who was going to kill her. A small scream had erupted from her brother's mouth as the shinobi stabbed a kunai throguh her precious one's throat.
The shinobi decapitated her baby brother, his head toppling off his shoulders and bounding on the ground. Her eyes widened considerably. Her precious baby brother, her Koichi, the shinobi had killed him. Forgetting she was in the genjustu, she was brought with rage and had unknowingly allowed a crimson red cloak spread around her body, snapping her from the genjutsu as she ran at him in rage, a tail waving about, her speed heightened considerably she had caught his throat in her hand, throwing him into the wall, as it shattered and fell, the shinobi himself had landed on the ground, trying to get up. " I-I'm sorry! Please have mercy! " he pleaded however, Serenity had been engulfed by her anger for him she had grabbed his throat again and pushed him back down, continuously punching his face, before she had even realized she was covered with blood and she had flatten his skull and killed him in cold blood. Staring at her hands she was frightened, however she still took the vial from him which was actually in a compartment inside his pants and drank the vial, feeling lighter, better not in pain. Serenity got up and paced back and forth, she had killed him, she had killed him. " Well done kiddo.. " The Soukou remarked smirking.
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Posted: Wed Mar 13, 2013 10:24 pm
Accepted, I look forward to seeing what you can do with the 4 Tails. c:
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Posted: Sun Mar 17, 2013 1:24 am
RPer's Name: Stark-kun Character's Name: Tenkusabana Stark Character's Rank: Genin D Rank Wanted Bijuu: Hachibi What are your plans for the Biju? To train with it, and learn its strength, probably fight with it a bit, and eventually become friends if at all possible or control it and use it to protect the leaf in rp.
What is a Jinchuriki's purpose? To contain and control the bijuu and protect their village with the massive amount of power a bijuu brings. That being said it is also their purpose to prevent war by being a show of force for the village. They must also be stronger mentally then other Shinobi just because they have to suffer through a lot alone that no one can really understand.
RP Sample Stark sat under the old willow, the wind playfully blowing his hair around. He chewed a blade of grass just for something to do. He was waiting, he wasn’t entirely sure what or whom he was waiting on but a cryptic note had told him to come out to the training grounds. He had been waiting for a few hours something was nagging him though, ever since he had started training with a squad his sensei had been keeping close eyes on him. More so than the other students’; and on missions he always tried to keep stark to the back. That at least made sense; he was a combat medic, but still a medic, Stark new that his job was to stay safe so he could heal the others. However he always felt a deep desire almost a need, to be in the fight to throw in tooth and nail and truly give himself over to the fight.
“Just gonna sit their day dreaming?” Stark jumped to his feet and flew almost two yards, startled by the voice though once he recognized it he blushed.
“Akuma-sensei, you scared the crap out of me.” Stark straightened standing his full five feet four inches tall, though he was still significantly shorter than Akuma who was almost seven feet tall. Akuma had the decency to not laugh at Stark but he did have a kind of halfhearted smile on his face, almost like he was about to deliver terrible news.
“Stark-kun, why don’t we sit for a little bit?” Akuma spoke with a wary edge to his voice, and Stark had to wonder just what this odd meeting was about, however he never ignored his sensei so he promptly sat down next to him.
“What’s up?” Stark still had his usual happy boyish tone, but there was a hint of the confusion and fear he felt, this odd meeting was simply to strange for him.
“Well, a lot of things kido’, and what I’m about to tell you is not going to be easy to hear so please just bear with me till I’m done.” Akuma took a long pull from his flask, while Stark simply sat there and nodded. “Where should I begin?” Akuma spoke to himself looking at the sky through the green leaves of the willow before he turned his emerald gaze on Stark. “I guess it would have been twelve years ago, almost thirteen now, a beast had been terrorizing the country side…”
“That was the Hachibi right?” Stark’s eyes had taken on a wide glint, he knew that the fight with the Hachibi hadn’t been far from the small village he had lived in as a baby.
“Don’t interrupt Stark, but yes it had been the Hachibi. I was one of twenty Shinobi sent out by the Hokage to go, fight it, and seal it. We fought for hours barely hurting it while we lost Shinobi almost constantly, even with reinforcements arriving we knew we could hold for much longer. Then as luck would have it the sealing team was finally ready, they managed to seal the bijuu away.” Akuma’s eye’s fell to the ground and he let out a deep sigh.
“But what does that have to do with me?” Stark was nervous now, Akuma wasn’t one to tell war stories, he never said anything arbitrary, this had to mean something to Stark and he knew it.
Akuma could barely look Stark in the eyes as he spoke, “We rejoiced, but our happiness was short lived, the sealing team reported that with the hurried work on the seal they didn’t have time to make sure everything was perfect, and that the seal would fail very soon without transplant. Everyone prepared for another fight with the beast but without a prepared container it looked like we would just lose. That’s when the Hokage made his choice, ‘take the jar to Kantou village, we will find a suitable host there’, and we ran, as fast as we could, we all had been briefed. The best host for a Jinchuriki was an unborn child.” Akuma paused to let his words sink in, and finally Stark began to grasp what this whole meeting was about, his mother had given birth to him that day, march seventh, they had told him that she died during child birth but what if that wasn’t true. He pushed the thoughts away it simply wasn’t possible in his mind, but no matter how bad he wanted to he couldn’t ignore Akuma’s words.
“We found a girl, young and beautiful, ready to burst with child we told her what we needed and what it meant and she gladly accepted. The sealing team and the hokage arrived just in time to seal the bijuu into the unborn child and create a Jinchuriki. She gave birth that same day, to a beautiful baby boy, sweet and innocent but forever marked with the seal of a beast. That child was you Stark, you are the Hachibi Jinchuriki, and it is your destiny to learn to control its power, and protect the village.” Akuma’s eyes were sad, tears spilling over onto his face. Stark was simply stunned, he simply couldn’t handle being told that he was a Jinchuriki.
Akuma stood up and pulled Stark to his feet, before kneeling in front of him, abruptly lifting Stark’s shirt and slamming his fingers into Starks stomach, as Stark blacked out he heard Akuma’s voice.
“War is coming stark and we need you to be ready, I’m sorry we couldn’t give you more time.” He sounded so sad, and all Stark could think as he fell into the black was how sad his normally happy sensei was.
It was like falling into black water, deep and endless it felt like there was no bottom, that he would never find an end to this place. Only much later will he realize that it was just his mind giving him perception of a conversation. Finally he could see the floor and he oriented his feet to it, landing lightly he took a few steps forward until a large metal cage came into view. On a sign read eight, and then the voice hit him, at first all he could understand was the malicious intent mingled with it, the pure hatred and evil of it, and then, slowly, the words came through.
“So it seems that in the end my weak little host needed help getting here, let me guess they want you to take control of me now don’t they?”
Stark swallowed hard, the Hachibi’s voice was hard to stand, all the hatred was so much for him to bear, but he squared his shoulders and faced the demon, faced what he knew would be his future.
(I hope that I one day get to finish this story in rp, thank you for reading through that long post and please have a nice day.)
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Posted: Sun Mar 17, 2013 7:28 am
Your post isn't 1500 words, so I'm going to have to decline you the Biju. Thank you for applying.
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Posted: Sun Mar 17, 2013 1:07 pm
Some Witty Name Your post isn't 1500 words, so I'm going to have to decline you the Biju. Thank you for applying. woops totally thought that said 1000 my bad and dont worry about it, I really dont need that bijuu,
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