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Akari Ryou ZX Vice Captain
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 Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2012 8:43 am
Aeir_Sorrow Akari Ryou ZX Aeir_Sorrow Akari Ryou ZX Aeir_Sorrow did you read it or something else about how I personally know Sorrow o.o Was I supposed to? It doesn't matter ur choice sweatdrop ...I read excerpt. -w- Send? C: ? ME NO READ EXCERPT OF STORI? o.o
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2012 8:45 am
Akari Ryou ZX Aeir_Sorrow Akari Ryou ZX Aeir_Sorrow It doesn't matter ur choice sweatdrop ...I read excerpt. -w- Send? C: ? ME NO READ EXCERPT OF STORI? o.o  Still lost on what you mean I only have one chapter of the story in my journal entry
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Akari Ryou ZX Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2012 8:48 am
Aeir_Sorrow Akari Ryou ZX Aeir_Sorrow Akari Ryou ZX Aeir_Sorrow It doesn't matter ur choice sweatdrop ...I read excerpt. -w- Send? C: ? ME NO READ EXCERPT OF STORI? o.o Still lost on what you mean I only have one chapter of the story in my journal entry Love the picture. Can I read the one chapter? C:
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2012 8:49 am
Akari Ryou ZX Aeir_Sorrow Akari Ryou ZX Aeir_Sorrow Akari Ryou ZX ...I read excerpt. -w- Send? C: ? ME NO READ EXCERPT OF STORI? o.o Still lost on what you mean I only have one chapter of the story in my journal entry Love the picture. Can I read the one chapter? C: go ahead, it's a weekly thing
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Akari Ryou ZX Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2012 8:49 am
Aeir_Sorrow Akari Ryou ZX Aeir_Sorrow Akari Ryou ZX Aeir_Sorrow Akari Ryou ZX ...I read excerpt. -w- Send? C: ? ME NO READ EXCERPT OF STORI? o.o Still lost on what you mean I only have one chapter of the story in my journal entry Love the picture. Can I read the one chapter? C: go ahead, it's a weekly thing And it's where now? -w-
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2012 8:50 am
You should know by now I'm a very clueless person xD
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Akari Ryou ZX Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2012 8:54 am
Akari Ryou ZX Aeir_Sorrow Akari Ryou ZX Aeir_Sorrow Akari Ryou ZX ME NO READ EXCERPT OF STORI? o.o Still lost on what you mean I only have one chapter of the story in my journal entry Love the picture. Can I read the one chapter? C: go ahead, it's a weekly thing And it's where now? -w- it's in my journal u kno the thing that says "online" or "offline" on anyones profile it's under there
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2012 8:55 am
Aeir_Sorrow Akari Ryou ZX Aeir_Sorrow Akari Ryou ZX Aeir_Sorrow Akari Ryou ZX ME NO READ EXCERPT OF STORI? o.o Still lost on what you mean I only have one chapter of the story in my journal entry Love the picture. Can I read the one chapter? C: go ahead, it's a weekly thing And it's where now? -w- it's in my journal u kno the thing that says "online" or "offline" on anyones profile it's under there Oh, okay then. One last thing: *sics starfish at Aeir and flies away*
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Akari Ryou ZX Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2012 9:01 am
Akari Ryou ZX Aeir_Sorrow Akari Ryou ZX Aeir_Sorrow Akari Ryou ZX rofl Love the picture. Can I read the one chapter? C: go ahead, it's a weekly thing And it's where now? -w- it's in my journal u kno the thing that says "online" or "offline" on anyones profile it's under there Oh, okay then. One last thing: *sics starfish at Aeir and flies away* _Pulls out old yu-gi-oh card- Magical Cylinder -starfish flies through one cup, out the other, flying towards Akari
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2012 9:02 am
Aeir_Sorrow Akari Ryou ZX Aeir_Sorrow Akari Ryou ZX Aeir_Sorrow Akari Ryou ZX rofl Love the picture. Can I read the one chapter? C: go ahead, it's a weekly thing And it's where now? -w- it's in my journal u kno the thing that says "online" or "offline" on anyones profile it's under there Oh, okay then. One last thing: *sics starfish at Aeir and flies away* _Pulls out old yu-gi-oh card- Magical Cylinder -starfish flies through one cup, out the other, flying towards Akari BAKURA, YOU ARE NOW MAH BODYGUARD, GO BLOCK MAH STARFISH! Good story C: Just short. You're updating, right? I would've critiqued... but I got lazy xD
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Akari Ryou ZX Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2012 9:05 am
Akari Ryou ZX Aeir_Sorrow Akari Ryou ZX Aeir_Sorrow it's in my journal u kno the thing that says "online" or "offline" on anyones profile it's under there Oh, okay then. One last thing: *sics starfish at Aeir and flies away* _Pulls out old yu-gi-oh card- Magical Cylinder -starfish flies through one cup, out the other, flying towards Akari BAKURA, YOU ARE NOW MAH BODYGUARD, GO BLOCK MAH STARFISH! Good story C: Just short. You're updating, right? I would've critiqued... but I got lazy xD I'm trying for weekly, and it's only the first chapter, the other chapter will be longer then the first, just think of it as a book
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2012 9:09 am
Aeir_Sorrow Akari Ryou ZX Aeir_Sorrow Akari Ryou ZX Aeir_Sorrow it's in my journal u kno the thing that says "online" or "offline" on anyones profile it's under there Oh, okay then. One last thing: *sics starfish at Aeir and flies away* _Pulls out old yu-gi-oh card- Magical Cylinder -starfish flies through one cup, out the other, flying towards Akari BAKURA, YOU ARE NOW MAH BODYGUARD, GO BLOCK MAH STARFISH! Good story C: Just short. You're updating, right? I would've critiqued... but I got lazy xD I'm trying for weekly, and it's only the first chapter, the other chapter will be longer then the first, just think of it as a book Ah. Alrighty then. Interesting enough, I'd say. Y U NO PUT . IN RIGHT PLACE? o.o That's all that's really flawed about it - run on sentences. Text coloring was a good touch.
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Akari Ryou ZX Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2012 9:15 am
Akari Ryou ZX Aeir_Sorrow Akari Ryou ZX Aeir_Sorrow Akari Ryou ZX Oh, okay then. One last thing: *sics starfish at Aeir and flies away* _Pulls out old yu-gi-oh card- Magical Cylinder -starfish flies through one cup, out the other, flying towards Akari BAKURA, YOU ARE NOW MAH BODYGUARD, GO BLOCK MAH STARFISH! Good story C: Just short. You're updating, right? I would've critiqued... but I got lazy xD I'm trying for weekly, and it's only the first chapter, the other chapter will be longer then the first, just think of it as a book Ah. Alrighty then. Interesting enough, I'd say. Y U NO PUT . IN RIGHT PLACE? o.o That's all that's really flawed about it - run on sentences. Text coloring was a good touch. thanks, I think it's funny that this idea was originally a smaller project it started with only me and one other person, now its a whole crew of ppl that r awesome with it. I'm thinking of if I can't think of a chapter in time, I'll post a flashback, probably from the start of it all, the start of the entire idea, and the hero that started it all
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2012 9:28 am
Aeir_Sorrow Akari Ryou ZX Aeir_Sorrow Akari Ryou ZX Aeir_Sorrow Akari Ryou ZX Oh, okay then. One last thing: *sics starfish at Aeir and flies away* _Pulls out old yu-gi-oh card- Magical Cylinder -starfish flies through one cup, out the other, flying towards Akari BAKURA, YOU ARE NOW MAH BODYGUARD, GO BLOCK MAH STARFISH! Good story C: Just short. You're updating, right? I would've critiqued... but I got lazy xD I'm trying for weekly, and it's only the first chapter, the other chapter will be longer then the first, just think of it as a book Ah. Alrighty then. Interesting enough, I'd say. Y U NO PUT . IN RIGHT PLACE? o.o That's all that's really flawed about it - run on sentences. Text coloring was a good touch. thanks, I think it's funny that this idea was originally a smaller project it started with only me and one other person, now its a whole crew of ppl that r awesome with it. I'm thinking of if I can't think of a chapter in time, I'll post a flashback, probably from the start of it all, the start of the entire idea, and the hero that started it all How interesting... o.o Just a stupid thought, if you were to post a flashback right now when Mimi's attacking, I think it'd make your readers kinda frustrated on the cliffhanger xD I'll be critiquing from here on out, ya hear? xD I've got that reader's eye. -w-
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Akari Ryou ZX Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2012 8:45 pm
Akari Ryou ZX Aeir_Sorrow Akari Ryou ZX Aeir_Sorrow Akari Ryou ZX BAKURA, YOU ARE NOW MAH BODYGUARD, GO BLOCK MAH STARFISH! Good story C: Just short. You're updating, right? I would've critiqued... but I got lazy xD I'm trying for weekly, and it's only the first chapter, the other chapter will be longer then the first, just think of it as a book Ah. Alrighty then. Interesting enough, I'd say. Y U NO PUT . IN RIGHT PLACE? o.o That's all that's really flawed about it - run on sentences. Text coloring was a good touch. thanks, I think it's funny that this idea was originally a smaller project it started with only me and one other person, now its a whole crew of ppl that r awesome with it. I'm thinking of if I can't think of a chapter in time, I'll post a flashback, probably from the start of it all, the start of the entire idea, and the hero that started it all How interesting... o.o Just a stupid thought, if you were to post a flashback right now when Mimi's attacking, I think it'd make your readers kinda frustrated on the cliffhanger xD I'll be critiquing from here on out, ya hear? xD I've got that reader's eye. -w- True
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