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Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2014 2:30 pm
Ron_of_Wolves Who wants me to write a story in this thread for no exact reason? Me!
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Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2014 2:31 pm
LoricWarrior Ron_of_Wolves Who wants me to write a story in this thread for no exact reason? Me! Alright, let me just find a story I've been saving for the occasion and continue from that.
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Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2014 6:45 am
Ron_of_Wolves Who wants me to write a story in this thread for no exact reason? I would like to see that. :3
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Posted: Wed Nov 12, 2014 1:03 pm
Note: this is basically a fanfic for a mod in a game. I had started writing it from my own ideas but never got around to completing. If you guys give the ok I'll keep writing it on here.
((Three days ago)) Count Gwedagelnen overlooked the village of Nomar they had decided to raid while the main army decided to besiege Vinica, a small village that bore a rather large wall and defenses that had driven back bandits wave after wave with ease. He had begun to turn back to his army to give the order to attack when one of his commanders, a redwood archer, had approached him.
“My Lord, are you sure you wish to attack while the rest of the lords are on a campaign?” came the archer, kneeling to the ground and keeping his head low. “I understand your timing of attacking, sir, but they might still need us over at Vinica.”
“Look, that village has always been beside my castle, and in the last decade they have not been decimated by raiding parties I’ve sent against them.” came the count, making the archer bow his head. The army knew of their lord’s atrocities, including his dealings with some of the bandit clans to get some coin off of towns they raided, but any that spoke out about it were immediately whipped or sent to the dungeons. Gwedagelnen then smirked as he looked back at the town. “I will not be cheated out of profits by them again, and I’m at least going to decimate this town before I lose my chance with the capture of Vinica.”
With that he raised his right hand in the air, signaling the archers to form a line and prepare to fire beside him. As soon as every arrow was knocked, they noticed a large amount of black smoke come out of the town and up into the sky, causing some of the archers to look at it in confusion. The archer that had spoken before then saw a few flashes within the smoke, making him immediately go wide eyed before he turned to the army.
“Scatter now!” He shouted as he started running to the side, making the soldiers that heard him spread out as the smoke started shimmering with light that changed course and headed straight towards them.
“What are you doing you dogs, stand firm and fight!” shouted the count as he turned to them, oblivious to the events behind him before he felt three painful stings in his top right shoulder-blade, making him scream in agony as he leaned down on his horse as a barrage of arrows passed him, hitting half of his soldiers, killing or wounding a good deal of the ones it hit while the others spread out had narrowly escaped the radius. He then lifted himself up and looked back to see the gate opening, a small array of villagers standing at the center of it with wooden shields placed together in a shield wall. He then heard Tolranian war horns blasting around them, making his men look around in shock and fear as they began to break formation.
“My lord, we can’t stay here or try to take that town, not with this many reinforcements for them!” shouted the archer, his eyes looking at the town in anticipation of another arrow volley. “We need to fall back!”
The Count gritted his teeth as he looked back at the town, seeing a cloaked man walk out of the wall of shields at the entrance and sit down as if waiting for them to make another move, taunting them to try. “Damn it.” The Count spoke before he turned to his men, the pain in his back gradually worsening. “Fall back to the main forces in Vinica, double time. I don’t want us to be caught in the middle of these armies.”
“Yes my lord.” replied the archer in relief before the troops started falling back, soon beginning to become a thin line from the village before the village elder walked to the cloaked man.
“Doesn’t matter if you’re elf or man, if you’re uncertain of the odds and you’ve already suffered casualties from a surprise attack, you can only retreat or watch your troops begin to leave you behind if you’re a cruel leader.” The cloaked figure spoke as he stood up, the horns growing lowder as some elves that were wounded tried to limp away faster.
“Once again we owe you for the safety of the village.” the elder spoke as the cloaked figure got up when he saw the last of the enemies vanish from sight, smirking as he clapped twice, an arrow soon flying out of the village with a red smoke trail behind it before the horns stopped, the village now seeing four riders coming slowly towards it in the distance. “What do you think will happen now?”
“Depends on if the elves take Vinica or not.” the figure spoke as he turned back to the town, the villagers now going back inside to return to their business. “If they do, then he won’t be able to attack us like he tried, but if they don’t, then we’ll have to be prepared.”
“Take the armor and weapons from the fallen elves to help prepare for any events, and grab any arrows that didn't break on contact as well.” shouted the elder before ten villagers ran out from the group returning to the town, the cloaked figure soon turning back to the town to get what they had came for in the first place.
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Posted: Wed Nov 12, 2014 7:10 pm
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Posted: Thu Nov 13, 2014 2:47 pm
That's really good! Is there more/can you write more? heart
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Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2014 10:20 am
currently writing the next part
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Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2014 11:39 pm
((present time)) Linthradil rode through Nomar in shock as she saw some of the humans going through military drills, some shooting as accurately as an elf as they aimed at the scare crows, each of their shots hitting their marks. In another area, she was seeing them practicing drills in melee combat, seeing them take formations and face against each other in different forms, one a shield wall and the other a phalanx formation with some men in the back. “Excuse me.” Linthradil called to the village elder surveying the scene, who only turned and walked over to her. “I hope you aren’t planning on rebellion with how you’re training here.” “Of course not, my liege, it’s only a normal routine we’ve trained in since the willing men and women in town started learning under a hermit.” replied the elder as he bowed to the princess, making her look down at him in confusion. “How can a hermit know how to train villagers to become a defending force, and why didn’t any of you go to aid Vinica if you knew these strategies?” Linthradil asked, looking to see archers using practice arrows taking out the sides of the shield wall, and the phalanx having the same problem before the two formed into a circle with their weapons and shields, blocking a good deal of arrows from the mix of their shield types fitting together. “We may know some ways of battle, but nowhere near enough to fight armies in an open field.” replied the elder, looking back up and to the princess. “And lords always fight for lands, it’s nothing us peasants should worry about unless we’re being attacked personally.” “I see…” Linthradil spoke as she saw the villagers get ready for something before a bell rang, causing all those in the circle of shields to break formation and go to various points of the area. “So this hermit, where does he live?”
“Right on the mountain above us.” The elder spoke as he looked towards the line of mountains that towered over the town, a smoke stack coming from the start of the mountain beside the lake, causing Linthradil to only nod as she looked over towards the smoke. “You won’t be able to learn anything from him, however.” “And why is that?” Linthradil spoke as she looked to the elder, who only signaled for her to follow as he started walking to the main building in the town, a large hall that looked to be for feasts rather than meetings. “He doesn’t teach lords in battle, regardless of their standing in the land, and has lived the life of a hermit to keep his teachings from being misused.” the elder spoke as he sat down in the chair in front of the entrance. “He only wishes to defend this town and live in peace.” “Regardless, I need to see the man who managed to trick an army into thinking that an even larger force was about to take them.” Linthradil spoke as she rode past the elder, who only sighed as the princess rode off towards the smoke as a man who looked around his mid twenties walked out of the hall, carrying a few sacks of food, and looked over to the horse tracks Linthradil had left. “I’m guessing someone’s come over to see the hermit?” the man asked as he looked over to the elder, who only nodded as he leaned back in his chair. “I told them that he doesn’t accept lords as students, so you better go and get him some food for the trouble.” the elder spoke, soon seeing a group of elves ride past them. “I was already in the market as soon as I saw the elves, so I grabbed some items along the way.” the man spoke, making the elder look to see the sacks on the mans back before nodding, letting the man turn and walked down the trail after the group of elves, going the same direction as the smoke. -------------------- Done with this part, sorry about this one being slow
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Posted: Mon Nov 17, 2014 4:53 pm
I'm currently pissed beyond reason...
Edit: apparently destroying a large herd of sheep in Overlord does the trick of calming my nerves.
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Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2014 12:16 am
sadly I may not be able to post much more of it, the computer the story was on has some problems at the moment and I'm not sure if it can be fixed.
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Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2014 10:45 pm
((Guess who found a way to recover their story)) Linthradil had ridden for a few minutes past the village to find the source of the smoke, a small cottage resided with a bearded man in a long sleeved brown tunic chopping wood, his focus solely on the lumber he made as the princess stopped. She then got off her horse as her men stopped behind her and did the same, causing the man to look over at them before returning to his work. “What are you here for?” the man spoke as he continued his current task, his movements fluid and swift at each strike. “Are you the hermit?” Linthradil spoke, only to be replied with the man continuing to chop wood. “I had heard that this village had injured one of our lords and forced them to retreat, and came here to see exactly how that was possible.” “Because nobles are stupid enough to think they can take whatever they wish without facing that much of a fight in return.” the man replied as he swung his axe down on the cutting block, sticking it in as he straightened up. It was then that Linthradil noticed the height of the man, he seemed to be at least a foot taller than her, well above the height of any human she had met before. He then looked over at her before sighing, soon sitting beside his axe as he looked at the group. “Now if you have nothing else to say, may you leave me to my work?” “You’re talking to the Princess of Redwood.” Came one of the elven riders as they reached for their blade, making the man look over to them. “Titles may mean something out on the battlefield or in politics, but they are nothing more than that if you don’t have the ability to carry it, and are certainly nothing to me.” came the man before he sat beside his axe on the block, leaning forwards towards the group of people. The rider then gripped his blade before Linthradil raised her hand, making the elf grumble as he released it. “We didn’t come here to start commotion, I actually came here to offer you a place in my army.” Linthradil spoke as she looked at the man, who just looked over at her as if he heard the offer a hundred times. “With you we could possibly take over Perisno.” “Yeah, and leave many widows on the battlefield.” the man spoke as he got up and walked to his house, soon reaching through the window and pulling out a metal shield, on it a drawing of a hawk, half of it white, the other half black. “A country is only as good as the men and women who lead it, and if the land doesn't realize the problems it bears, then the people in charge are incompetent." The elven riders grumbled as the other man came out of the forests. "Don't say that for too long, you'll end up causing trouble again." came the man as he walked past the elves, reaching the door and setting the food down. He then looked over to the rest under his hood, the bearded man not paying attention as he kept his gaze on the elves. "Sorry for his mouth, he doesn't take kindly to nobles, plus he's just recently finished giving our town some schematics he wanted us to work on that he made the entire night, so could you come again later?" Linthradil looked at the two men for a few seconds, her soldiers looked rather angered at the peasants intrusion, before nodding. "Very well then, we'll come back in the morning to continue this." Linthradil spoke as she turned to her horse and walked towards it, her voice still calm and collected through this. As soon as she mounted her horse she turned and rode into the trail, her soldiers soon following as they went into a forest path. As she turned towards the path she noticed an old man in a cloak, who seemed to be practicing swordplay with a staff in the center of the woods as she passed him. The old man only glanced at her once as he finished his practice, the riders soon taking off as the forest cleared. He then smirked before he rested his staff on his shoulders, his body still well beyond it's years and standing straight as a tree. "There goes another group only looking for power in strategy." the man spoke as he turned back to the house, soon following the trail back. When he returned, he found the two men practicing in hand to hand combat as he walked into the cabin. “If the one who led them returns alone, I’ll speak to them, otherwise you will pull the same ruse you did just now.”
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Posted: Mon Dec 29, 2014 11:15 pm
heheh, it's silent again... oops
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Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2015 7:24 pm
master bump of all bumps! scream
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Posted: Mon Feb 16, 2015 8:21 pm
popping into here again to say sorry for my silence in this guild thread, and also that ATTILA TOTAL WAR IS COMING OUT IN TWO HOURS AND HOLY CHIPOTLE AM I PUMPED FOR IT!!
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Posted: Mon Mar 30, 2015 9:32 am
I feel like I'm talking to myself on here... This calls for a bad pun.
How do vegetables start a rave? They turnip the volume.
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