Denied for now. From what I've seen in your RP sample and many of your RP posts so far in the guild, you are not yet ready for an Uchiha Character with your current level of literacy and grammar. I'd advise you to sharpen up your overall roleplaying skill before applying again. This means you should work on post length (try to get in 1-2 paragraphs each post) , perfecting your grammar, and making sure you explain each of your posts in detail to include their surroundings, thoughts, emotions, sense and actions towards certain aspects of the situation they are placed in. We will be hosting a RP thread soon for improving everyone's rp skills so that we all can strive to be more excellent RPers. It would be smart to check out to practice improving your roleplay level. Also, don't take it personally. Uchihas are the most complex characters of naruto world, so they must be played by those that can successfully portray their thoughts, emotions feelings as well as handle their commonly abused and fairly overly powerful abilities.
Posted: Wed Jun 19, 2013 1:21 am
ox Kaze xo
Dawn Senpai
Luke Tensai
Good job the both of you. Approved.
Chocolate lion II
Denied for now. From what I've seen in your RP sample and many of your RP posts so far in the guild, you are not yet ready for an Uchiha Character with your current level of literacy and grammar. I'd advise you to sharpen up your overall roleplaying skill before applying again. This means you should work on post length (try to get in 1-2 paragraphs each post) , perfecting your grammar, and making sure you explain each of your posts in detail to include their surroundings, thoughts, emotions, sense and actions towards certain aspects of the situation they are placed in. We will be hosting a RP thread soon for improving everyone's rp skills so that we all can strive to be more excellent RPers. It would be smart to check out to practice improving your roleplay level. Also, don't take it personally. Uchihas are the most complex characters of naruto world, so they must be played by those that can successfully portray their thoughts, emotions feelings as well as handle their commonly abused and fairly overly powerful abilities.
Okey I understand. But I wont be posting in that, "better grammar /better roleplayer" thread, I don't see it necessary. I will try to get better through time and rp'ing in this guild.
Username: xNew York Slavex Desired Bloodline: Uchiha // Shairgan Reasons for choosing said Bloodline: I think that i would be able to teach even the crew a few things about the bloodline itself. I like to think that I can RP with it above expectations smile RPC Link: U // C RP Samle w/ Bloodline technique usage:
Kohana stood in the forest, on a mission from the kazekage to detain and interrogate a thief that may have stole important documents. She had been hiding in the forest for sometime and wated to make sure that she got him this time. In the distance, she saw the man walking and reading the document at the same time. She thought that this would be a prefect time then never to try to capture the man. She began to jump tree to tree in an attempt to confuse the man, but that wasn't the case. He did a single handsign and his eyes started to glow, Thats when she jumped down a distance from him and crossed her arms " Thats cheating... " He pulled down his hood and revealed the Byakugan. She did the same handsign and a single tome of her sharigan appeared.
" Is that lady? I thought that this was going to be a challenge! " He charged at her and twisted aiming for 2 of her chakra points. She knew that there wasn't much that she could do, she was new to her own Sharigan...but she had studied up on the Byakugan and wanted to make sure that he knew that. She did the same action and they hit fingertips. Her hands went numb and she jumped back, she laughed and got into the Konohagakure Taijutsu stance. She also knew that taijutsu would be unaffective but it was worth a shot, the man charged once again and at the last minute she threw a chakra charged Windmill Shuriken. The man laughed and jumped then Kohana pulled the wire, the large shuriken seemed to split apart and the blade shot at the man. The man narrowly escaped, put had turned his back at kohana. He swiftly countered her attack and punched her in the stomach, she started to feel a great pressure in her eyes and the 2nd tome poped through. She knew that she was close but not this close, She dung her heel into hsi foot and jumped back showing her new tome.
" I see you... " She knew that Genjutsu against the Byakugan would be absolutely useless, she did a string of handsigns and shot a stream of fire at the man. The man jumped as the fire quickly ignited the forest and engulfed them in flames. When he tunred back Kohana was gone, she hid amongest the flames. She thought that with the amount of flames that the byakugan would temporarily confused...but it wouldn't last long. She quickly created 2 clones to charge at the man, the man laughed...but underestimated Kohana. The clone got close to the man and exploded with a great force sending the man flying back. the second jumped through the smoke and exploded over the man sending him into the ground. Kohana slowly walked to the man and looked at him, he was wounded enough not to be able to walk. This excited Kohana, she knew that she would be finally able to use the jutsu that was taught to her from a friend in RooTs. She looked at the man, you could see the horror in his face, Kohana started to feel weird... she liked the fact that she was going to be able to test her new jutsu; but the fact that the man was scared excited her too.
She did a string of handsigns and touched the ground " Summoning Art!: Torture Chamber! " Iron walls burst from the ground and wire bound the man " Silly boy... did you not know that I was an Interrogator? " She laughed and the man rose to the wall wound tightly in wire " Now... lets start from the top. " She said as the 3rd tome pushed through. Everything was so clear to her now, she saw a side of herself and the man that would be rivaled by few.
Username: Kai Takahashi Dun Desired Bloodline: Uchiha Clan - Sharingan Reasons for choosing said Bloodline: It's an interesting, yet highly popular bloodline. I've role played with it a few times before, and have gained much experience on how to use it efficiently in combat, without any over exaggeration or godmod. RPC Link: Under Construction RP Samle w/ Bloodline technique usage:
Katsuro stood at the village gates, leaning against the door wall, looking into the sky, his light violet eyes fading out as his thoughts drifted along side the soft moving clouds above. His arms were crossed, and his legs held together with his back firmly pressed to the wooden construction behind. A sudden light breeze came through, flowing lightly through his black hair, brushing it to the side as he exhaled gently. Several leaves spun about within the wind, and with it an Anbu appeared on a nearby tree, silently dropping from his perch within the tree. He lightly cleared his throat with a hoarse cough, bringing Katsuro back to the world. His eyes fluttered about frantically until he found the source of the noise, his posture instantly repairing itself as though by pure instinct.
The Anbu stepped forward, speaking in a voice muffled by his mask. "The Hokage has requested I provide you with details for a mission pertinent to this war." The Anbu left not even a moment for questions as he disappeared within the cover of another sudden breeze. Looking down, Katsuro noticed the envelope in his hand, he carefully pulled several papers from the large orange casing, shuffling through the contents with extreme precision. His mission was rather simple, he, along with his brothers, were to destroy a small team of mist anbu within the area between the Fire and Wind country. The motives of this group of mist anbu were unknown, but from previous encounters with the likes of those from Kirigakure, it couldn't be any good. Katsuro was sure that it was Kirigakure who has started this war, adding fuel to the flames with their lies and deception. If the mist anbu managed to make their way into Sunagakure territory, as one of Konoha’s major allies in this war, they must prevent any further instigation from the mist to avoid losing a very valuable source. It is crucial for Konoha to take control of this in order to turn the tides of the war.
Without further adieu, Katsuro tossed the papers into the air alongside a match, they quickly went up in flames, falling downwards as the flames quickly incinerated the entire form of the white stationary. He disappeared along the road from Konoha, moving quickly towards the Mist Anbu camp. As he broke the forest cover, it was only a matter of moments before he reached the camp. He quickly lunged through the air, landing in the center of the enemy Shinobi, simultaneously, he formed a multitude of hand signs, bringing his hands to his lips as he released a massive swirling ball of flames towards his opponents as it ripped through the ground before dissipating into the air. Katsuro landed onto the ground, his legs bending slightly beneath him as he formed another torrent of hand signs. Several puffs of smoke appeared around him, expanding outwards as five clones of Katsuro moved swiftly towards the other Anbu. In a flurry of fluid movements, they ripped through the air, before restraining several opponents, and then, by forming one more seal with his hands, each of the clones exploded in a furious fiery rage.
Few of the Anbu remained, as Katsuro jumped upward into the air, he formed a single hand sign at the bottom of his chin, allowing his chakra to heat up and swell within his chest before expunging a volley of extreme flames towards his remaining opponents. The air quickly became saturated with the massive heat, as the air almost appeared to ripple outwards from the great ardor. Katsuro fell to the earth in time to watch as his flames cut through the particles that formed the surrounding atmosphere, as the flames reached his opponents, they would be assaulted by numerous small fireballs of destructive heat.
Katsuro landed on the ground, posting against the ground as he firmly pressed his palm against the ground, his eyes flickering back and forth as he studied the chaos he created, the blood he had spilled, and the lives he had taken for the sake of his village.
Techniques Uses: Great Fireball Technique Shadow Clone Explosion Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique
[It's lacking in word size, 598 words to be exact. But I hope you will see the quality of this sample over the quantity of words within it. If need be, I will add more.]
Grammar is a little messy, but you seem to have good potential as an Uchiha. That being said, approved for now but I'm expecting nothing less than great roleplaying skill from you. Try to have your grammar perfect in your posts from now on and keep your rp skills in top shape or you could be at risk of losing your character/bloodline. Also..You need to get a profile posted.
Kai Takahashi Dun
Good sample. You're good to go with this, but I want you to add in the missing words just for the sake of rules. I have to be fair with everyone after all. Make that slight edit and you are approved. You also have to make sure to get your character profile posted soon.
Posted: Mon Jun 24, 2013 10:15 pm
ox Kaze xo
Well, I do recall the rules stating that samples should be between 200 to 650 words, depending on the bloodline applying for. So, what is required for the Uchiha Clan bloodline?
Well, I do recall the rules stating that samples should be between 200 to 650 words, depending on the bloodline applying for. So, what is required for the Uchiha Clan bloodline?
650.
Posted: Mon Jun 24, 2013 10:26 pm
ox Kaze xo
Edited. A total of 683 words within the sample now. I do apologize if I sounded lazy or anything, I just wanted to know what expectation was needed to be met in order to be approved.
Edited. A total of 683 words within the sample now. I do apologize if I sounded lazy or anything, I just wanted to know what expectation was needed to be met in order to be approved.
Lol, it's cool. I actually enjoyed your sample. Approved!
Posted: Sat Jun 29, 2013 8:20 pm
ox Kaze xo
Username: Metal Trsu Desired Bloodline: Rinnegan Reasons for choosing said Bloodline: Ummm....I wanna be the first? An I like the idea of it; also wondering if I can make completely new Paths? RPC Link:Narakku RP Samle w/ Bloodline technique usage:
--The Past--
When Narakku was a small boy his life changed forever, at the mercy of experimentation's of his father who was a Medical ninja in the Village hidden in the Rain, and one of the few left followers of the original Amekage. Narakku had a rather unusual childhood; having lived with his parents till he was the age of 6 his father would slowly start to inject the boy every night while he was asleep with a syringe filled with Senju DNA. Being a Medical ninja it was unknown how his father came to posses such rare DNA but non the less he still injected it into his son. Although it was unclear to Narakku for at one time he had woken up during the injection process and questioned his father anyway a small boy could, by crying about having to get a shot. His father told him that it would be alright and that the shots were something like flu shots, to keep away bad germs, you know the kind of story parents tell children. Now Narakku's father did love him, it was throughout his life that he began to resent his son; he wasn't showing signs of the DNA taking to his body; his body didn't seem to be integrating the two blood types. Thinking that his boy would one day take down the current Amekage if he possessed the legendary Dojutsu that he could mold for the sole purpose of being rid of the tyrant like kage, Narakku's father continued with the experimentation. Though to only be legend the father soon ran into a road block, studying the tomes and scrolls of old, looking for any sign of the dojutsu any hint of an idea on how to acquire the Genkai, or manifest it. It wasn't until he found a small blurred out scribing of a word. Sharigan.
It seemed that the man needed to find and implant the eye's of a Sharigan user into the boy or else the Senju DNA would never take hold to the boy and just be lost to the workings of his own blood. So the man took it upon himself to track, and find a user of the Sharigan, which happened to only be that of the Uchiha clan. Upon finding a subject that he could take the users eye's away he tracked him for days while he was one what seemed to be a mission. He waited and watched as the young Uchiha completed his mission and was all out of charaka before making his move and putting his plan of attack under way. Although Narakku's father had the upper hand he underestimated the power of the Sharigan and was badly wounded during his fight with the Uchiha. In a fatal blow Narakku's father took the young man out and began to take him back to the village.
The young Uchiha's body was dragged through the streets, a bloody trail was left behind him going all the way from the gates to his house during the middle of the night. Entering the house Narakku's father limped his way towards the room he'd placed his son, rushing just a bit as he could feel himself losing what little time he had left he began the operation. Narakku was put under for this, for even though he'd grown a little hostile at the boy for not producing results like he wanted he was still the boys father. After the pain agonizing procedure was done he stared down looking at his son, pulling back his eye lids to see the results, upon seeing nothing but his regular eyes he cursed his son how could it not work; he read all the books, studied all the tomes, he thought he knew the process in and out. Feeling that he had one last effort he reached for another syringe and prepared to inject another small amount of DNA into the boy, maybe over time it would manifest, maybe he just needed more DNA.
It was then though Narakku's father had been found out; the Amekage had found the trail of blood, she'd been on his tail for week trying to find the source of the small rebellion that still lay dormant in her Village. Walking her way up the street with several Anbu members she stepped towards the door and sent it flying off the hinges. Narakku's father startled that she had found him raced to continue with the procedure, he turned once or twice looking back and forth between his son and the Amekage. Knowing now at this point arguing or begging was a completely futile thought he did the only thing he thought was right in his moment of panic. Instead of giving his son the correct dosage, he took the syringe high above his head and slammed the needle straight into the boys shoulder, releasing the DNA into the boys blood stream as he turned and stared back now looking at the Amekage, who seemed to have a slight smile across her face. Narakku's dad hoped it worked and hoped his son see another day, he then pressed himself away from the boys bed readying a Kunai as he went to charge at the Amekage. She spoke few words, and his eye's glowed red with her own Sharigan. Narakku's father was stopped in his tracks; he couldn't move his body, he couldn't do anything but stand there watch as the Amekage got closer and closer to him. Each step she took was a dagger that was slicing through the tension of the night.
Looking back over the man's shoulder she saw the boy and spoke to his father, telling him that this was his last night alive, as well as his sons. The man couldn't even call out for Narakku's to wake up. As the Amekage readied herself, she quickly ended the life of the boy's farther, splattering his warm blood across the room as it sprayed onto the boy's face. The warm sensation fueled the boys thoughts now, the medicine his father had placed him under was starting to wear thing, and the sensation of a liquid like substance hitting his face proceeded to give him that extra boost. Quickly shooting up from the bed, as the Amekage had began to approach the boy his eye's opened one sec, completely normal, he gazed down at his father's lifeless corpse. It was then he felt a surge of Charaka coursing through his body; it was like in a Uchiha when the Sharigan awakens for the first time; but this was different, this wasn't the Sharigan. In a fit of rage the boy quickly shoot to his feet and his eye's shut and then a surge of charaka flowed and pushed from his body; enough so he sent the Amekage flying the the air, crashing into one of the wall's she was pressed back. The boy's arms came to rest at his sides the boy's charaka was all over the place, as the Amekage looked up at him she noticed the circular pattern that was etched multiple times into his eye's, the dark purple color that now tinted his vision as he stared at the woman. He then collapsed on the bed passing out; that night was now forever etched into his mind as a blur, a mental blank that he could never remember fully.
--The Future--
Narakku had been sent on a Mission by his 'care taker' and current Amekage, his mission was to eliminate a foreign ninja spy by any means necessary. With the use of his Rinnegan always on he could see the flow of Charaka coming from the ninja who was hiding just outside the outskirts of town. The ninja was perched in a tree covered in leafs as he stared over into the village; Narakku was quickly approaching the man, his feet hitting the ground every so often before jumping into one of the trees himself. Quickly in front of the ninja spy a man appeared similar in comparison with Narakku's body. The spy was taken back seeing the man as he stood covered with a long coat like attire, his mouth and nose were covered except for his head which showed his long dark mane, a pony tail tied in several places that went down to his waist, and dark circular eyes that looked like that of a demon. The ninja that had appeared before the spy quickly made gestures with his hands, signing away before the man could react and then placed his right hand forward and left hand backwards "Shinra Tensei (Almighty Push)". In a split second the ninja spy was sent crashing into the tree trunk, and the tree itself gave way to the force behind the technique. The snapping of limbs and the tree itself was heard throughout the echo of the forest. The Deva path man still stood on the broken tree trunk, his foot resting up on the trunk as his right arm came down to rest on his knee looking down at the ninja spy that started to squirm his way to his feet.
Quickly getting up the ninja spy gestured himself and a then began to grip the air as if he had a whip in his hands. "Toruneedo Raitoningu [Tornado Lightning]" The ninja spy then cracked the whip at the top of the tree, towards the Deva path. Quickly he moved dodging the lightning as it cracked and sparked all around the man, hitting the ground the Devan path quickly charged the man, this wasn't an offensive technique it was a distraction. The ninja spy readied his whip like lightning and went to strike it was at the point that the Deva path had grown closer and closer in his charge that the spy realized another Ninja had entered the area. But it was too late, he was in mid swing of the Deva path. "Katon: Kakiryuu no Jutsu [Fire Dragon Technique]" Narakku was behind the ninja, his hands started close together, before pulling apart and then shooting forward. From his thrust the fire ignited in the air and burst into the form of a dragon, roaring the dragon shoot across the land leaving a trail of blacken ground and burning grass and trees. The Deva path was struck with the lightning for a brief moment before being released from the technique. Quickly clearing the area the Deva path jumped to the side, as it did the spy was struck with the dragon's maw, erupting in flames the dragon pushed the man forward from his feet and into a tree, setting the entire tree ablaze, the man was torched against the tree and the area was now left in devastation.
Past- 1232 Words Future- 558 Total words- 1796
Techniques Uses: Outer Path: Supplementary | Chakra Sight Outer Path: A Rank | Elemental Creation - Katon: Kakiryuu no Jutsu [Fire Dragon Technique] A Rank | Deva Path: Shinra Tensei (Almighty Push) Outer Path: The Six Paths -Deva Path
Username: ox Kaze Desired Bloodline: Uchiha Clan / Sharingan Reasons for choosing said Bloodline: The way my character is set up, looking at this story, would only make sense for him to possess the Sharingan. RPC Link: Shinto Hisagi Uchiha
RP Samle w/ Bloodline technique usage:
Rain drops. Every where. Shinto would shake his head, freeing hundreds of waer droplets from the strands of jet black hair follicles that covered his scalp. It was another lonely, rain night in Kumogakure. The young uchiha teen walked through a dark alley, with hands tightly tucked into his jacket pockets. He could hear footsteps from behind his position along with the cocky whispering of a pair of no good street thugs. Morons. They were totally barking up the wrong tree. Without a warning a very muscular looking man came charging at Shinto in attempt to stab him in his back, between the teen's shoulder blades. Shinto gracefully and swiftly side stepped the man's poorly planned assault, showing a very skilled sense of awareness before he shot off towards the building on his right with a dash. Using the wall-walking technique, the young uchiha forced chakra into the soles of his feet and ran up the wall of the building in the narrow alley way. Running until reaching the height of the building, Shinto performed a graceful black flip before flashing a number of handsigns and shouting out to the criminal below, "Katon: Housenka No Jutsu!", and spewing a raining parade of fire balls onto the poor thugs in the alley below. Following his backflip, Shinto would fall onto the wall of the building opposite from the one the he had ran up earlier. Using the wall-walking technique to cling the building, the teenager smoothly slid down the wall of the apartment complex before reaching the ground of the alley way, where the victim of the fire technique was rolling around covered in flames. Shinto stared coldly at the suffering man, activating the glowing red eye doujustsu known famously around the world as the sharingan. Looking down upon his poor victim he would decide to put out the fire which plagued the man's body with severe burns. Suddenly, without a single fore-warning Shinto began kicking and stomping the thug to the ground to put out the flames in a very painful and cruel manner. Wiping the blood that leaked from the thug's mouth with his index finger, Shinto gave a slight pyschotic smile. He would flick his hand to the side in order to clean it of the man's blood. "Loser.", He would utter at the now unconscious, defeated street thug.
Hearing multiple foot steps approach, Shinto would look up and around to see who was drawing near to his position. It was more thugs. These guys looked much more meaner, older and uglier than the first. Oh well. It wasn't a big deal to Shinto actually. Just more fodder for him to play around with, if anything. Looking at the aggressive body language of the approaching threats, the Uchiha boy got into an offensive taijutsu stance. The two thugs came rushing at him from opposite sides of the alley way. Shinto choose to lock his sharingan on the thug in front of him for now and get rid of him first. Very swiftly, the shinobi slid forward before twisting and sending a vicious thrust kick to the jaw of the street thug to send him high into the air. Following up his kick, Shinto leaped after the opponent and grabbed the thug from behind, flipping the man's body upside down and locking his ankles around the thug's neck in mid-air. To finish the assault, Shinto brought the man's head slamming in to the solid concrete of the alley, breaking it and slightly burrowing the man's head underground. Blood would poor out of the man's mouth as his body limply fell over after being released from the Uchiha's grip. Swiftly turning around, Shinto noticed the other thug was still running towards him. Allowing him to come into a close range, Shinto would inhale a large amount of air into his lungs while flashing a number of handsigns. Katon: Gōkakyū no Jutsu!, Shinto would shout in his mind as he exhaled a massive ball of fire to engulf the poor street thug. After the flames faded away, the Uchiha boy would proceed out of the alley, stepping over the last thug's black, charred corpse. "Correction... Losers.", The boy would utter as he exited the alley way of Kumogakure.
709/650 words.
Techniques Uses: Passive: Wall-Walking Technique [Nonton] C Rank: Katon: Housenka No Jutsu [Bloodline] D Rank: Surasutokikku (Thrust Kick) [Taijutsu] C Rank: Hayabusa Otoshi - Peregrine Falcon Drop [Taijutsu] C Rank: Katon: Gōkakyū no Jutsu [ Great Fireball Technique ] [Bloodline]
Approved, and well done. Make the needed changes to your profile if you haven't done so already.
Posted: Tue Jul 09, 2013 4:56 pm
Username: Look-up-to-sky Desired Bloodline: Sharingan [ Uchiha Clan ] Reasons for choosing said Bloodline: To make the best genjutsu user. RPC Link: I have not made it yet, because I want to know my bloodline before I make him. He will be based around the bloodline. RP Sample w/ Bloodline technique usage: Flying backwards, toward an already broken wall, Almos started forming hand-signs. He looks tattered and beaten, but it seems like he does not want to give up this fight. His opponent seems untouched and confident in this battle. Maybe a little to confident because Almos has a trick up his sleeve. People wonder why he does not use it often in fights? His response is always the same "These eyes brings out hate, and hate brings war and war brings hate. That is what I hate." Before his hand-signs were finished, Almos closed his bright blue eyes. When the last hand-sign was done, his eyes opened wide, reveling the three tomoe sharingan. Almos' opponent noticed the the change in color, from bright blue to a deep crimson red. Everyone knows what the eye color means, but the man is already involved in the fight and he wants to finish it off right. All he knows now is the probability of him winning is lowered. Not wanting to use genjutsu just yet, he will perform the one of his bloodline techniques.
He started cocking his head back, like a sling shot, as he was gathering chakra in his mouth. This chakra was burning out, but to Almos it was nothing. Training under skilled Uchiha's made him pretty resistance against pain. He is no where near invincible, but his pain threshold is higher than the average shinobi at his rank. Finishing the gathering of chakra, he started shooting forward. His mouth opened, reveling a fireball inside if it, and it will soon be heading toward his opponent. exciting Almos' mouth, the fireball headed straight toward the man. The man was smirking a little bit because of such a simple attack, but he was not ready for Almos real ability. Though it was a not a big succession of moves that become an amazing attack, it will do its job well. Seeing the man's muscle twit, Almos dashed forward with breakneck speed. He knew exactly where the man was going to be, but that is just the beginning of his next attack. Something a little worse than a burning body is going to happen next.
Rushing up to his next position, just as his opponent go there, Almos grabbed the man's shoulder. Seconds later a trail of fire started rushing toward the man, but all he could do is watch is come toward him.HE could not move or anything, all the man could do was watch. The trail of fire came to his body, but before he even noticed his skin was paper, the fire got him. All he could do was scream and shout. His body is in so much pain, but nothing is happening to him. In reality he is still standing near Almos. Techniques Uses:Great Fireball, Demonic Illusion: Burning Paper Body
Username: Suijin_Kun Desired Bloodline: Chakra Manipulation - Kuryuu Clan Reasons for choosing said Bloodline: It fits well with the RPC that I'm trying to make RPC Link: [x] RP Samle w/ Bloodline technique usage: Ebisu would cautiously grind the sand in between his teeth as he stood up facing his master. "If you want to be the strongest you have to train like the strongest. Now get up and face me!"Ebisu knew that there was now way that he could ever win this battle, but he was not ready to give up. He would stumble to his two feet, swaying back and forth as he did so. His master would get into his stance and he had the most serious face he had ever held. Ebisu, to be the greatest you have to learn how to take a life no matter how precious it is to you. That's why I'm telling you to kill me. Show me your truth strength and take my life or I will take yours in the process."
His master would charge at him thrusting his right fist to the left side of Ebisu's face. "I have had enough of this. I'm tired of being weak." Chakra seemed to begin to shoot out of Ebisu's body. He had never felt like this before, but it felt good. The chakra coated his fist as though it was protecting him. He would grab the fist of his master apply force to it as he did so. "I'm sorry master, but I'm no longer that little boy that was always defenseless and couldn't stand up for himself. I have grown into something..." His knee would rise and thrusted into his master's stomach. "I have become..." In the corner of his eye he could see his master's feet coming for his head. He would swift the duck making sure to grab hold of the feet as it passed him. Twisting it as hard as he could he launched his master towards wall. As his master would be making his way to his feet. He would sense something that he had never felt before. Ebisu's body..it was becoming coated in some type of blue flame. Ebisu would run towards his master jumping in the air, spinning as he did so. It would seems as though Ebisu was almost using the air around his feet to increase his speed. His master could only bare a smile as the blue flame tornado came towards him. "Hmm, that's it Ebisu. You have shown the skill to become the greatest. I guess my time ends here." As Ebisu made contact with the chest of his master he would mutter words that would be the last ones his master would ever here. "....A man." With that, the battle was over. Ebisu had learned a lot of the years from his stay here and it couldn't have been more grateful, but it was time for him to return to his village.
Techniques Uses: • Chakra Molding: Fists of Power • Chakra Molding: Chakra Feet - C-Rank • Body of Power :: Body of Flames - C-Rank
