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 Posted: Tue May 22, 2012 4:47 am
((*stays quiet for a moment before rubbing back of head in embarassment* Heh..wish I known that too. Thats fine though, perhaps you can point me in the direction where there's not too many jinchuuriki? So one village isn't getting them all ^^"))
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Posted: Tue May 22, 2012 4:52 am
Teroenkai ((*stays quiet for a moment before rubbing back of head in embarassment* Heh..wish I known that too. Thats fine though, perhaps you can point me in the direction where there's not too many jinchuuriki? So one village isn't getting them all ^^")) (( Lol it's alright. At least when the moment arises, you already have an rp sample readied. And as of now, we only have I believe two Jinchuuriki. Both a think are in undefine villages at the moment so you have free reign to pick.
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Posted: Sat May 26, 2012 6:49 pm
Highly humorous...Can't say really bad against it. You definitely showed many aspects of the demon's abilities with/without it's influence. Approved. Though make sure to check the small word mistakes. =^.^=------------------------ Teroenkai Quote: Did you still want to utilize your application?
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Posted: Sun May 27, 2012 8:59 pm
ZaurielGuardianAngel Username: ZaurielGuardianAngel RPC Name: Riku Village: Mysterious Rank: Genin Bijuu: Yonbi Why do you think you deserve the Bijuu: I feel that the only way to prove that I deserve the Bijuu is by proving my capabilities within the samle and if granted the Bijuu within the RP itself. What you know about it: I know what has been shown in the series he is very intelligent and boastful. He has a lot of pride which is displayed in his personality.
RP Sample:It was a normal day for Riku and his new squad of genin he had been assigned to. They were out in the forest finishing up a delivery mission when Riku decided that it was okay to take a break since they had been traveling for a long time. The mission was a success and the young genin wanted to celebrate by playing a game. Seeing as how he could make this game both fun and interesting at the same time. You wanna play games so much? How about a game of Hide and Seek? The only thing is you all must find me he explained as he stood from where he was standing. The genin were skeptical about this at first but they agreed. Reluctant to play along with him they saw that there were strengths in numbers. Giving him the signal to go hide the race was on. Creating two clone beside him to create a smokey distraction Riku began the game by having his clones spy on the genin why the real one was hidden somewhere. Trying and trying as much as they could it seemed that they would never find him. Realizing this Riku thought he would try and give little hint of where he was, but for some reason they just couldn't find him.
For the next half and hour they all roamed aimlessly around looking for it. Soon the young genin would come across a small black bock. Upon reading what it says they learn that it was battle plans that were to be passed from the cloud to the leaf villages. Once this was revealed to them they called it quits and called out for their teacher, little did they know that a few 3 jounin ninja had been looking after the box. Watching the genin learn what information was within it, the jounin's objective was to now kill them before they could spread the word to fellow villages that they were in danger of being attacked. The young genin all ran back to base camp only to be greeted by the 3 jounin. Seeing that they were only mere genin it would be easy yo kill them. Almost instantly they all pulled out a kunai and aimed it at them. With one single stroke threw it.
Kmowing that he wouldn't be able to get there in time from the distance he was Riku quickly formed a few hand seals to use the Doton: Doryuu Heki, which created a wall big enough to protect them and distract long enough for him to get there rescue his students. The wall wasn't very strong and truth be told it was only sturdy enough to stop the kunai which was all the time he needed, but the other jounin were fast and with his genin with him it would only lower his chances of fighting without any distractions. I need you three to take what you've learned and inform the kage himself Riku order. Giving him a nod and a wave they set out. Once they were out of view he stood waiting for the three Jounin. Things would seem to quiet which was never good. He had to be on high alert, ready for any type of attack that could be thrown at him.
Hmph. So you've gotten you're self in quite a predicament. Idiot. From inside his mind he hear a strong brass voice speaking to him. Instantly he knew who and what was talking to him. Giving a smirk he looked around to check the jounin's position before replying, I see you couldn't go a day without finding away to insult me. The demon said nothing for a moment which was good seeing as how Riku could better concentrate without having to think if clever comebacks. I underestimate you at times, but if you're thinking of taking them on alone then you the same fool I though you were when we met the demon stated Take my power and you are assured victory. The offer was tempting but Riku wasn't ready to use the power so suddenly, but before he could even make the decision the enemy struck all at once. Crouching down he spun his body in a vertical manner causing him to evade them and also move out of line of fire for the moment. Once landing on his feet he watched as one rushed him. With one swift kick to the face he grabbed the falling ninja by the arm and threw him into the other behind him. Since he was distracted by those two the third was granted time to attack. From within the trees the third ninja attacked, holding his sword to split Riku in half. With barely any reaction time, Soukou force feed Riku some of his chakra which increased his speed high enough to dodge, but the ninja was expecting him to dodge. Gripping his blade he established his stance and started an on going, relentless slashing attacks. There was no room for error the attacks where cutting so close that his s**t was suffering small cuts. Once he was backed off into a tree Riku ducked down causing the ninja to swing his sword into the tree and getting it stuck. Gripping the ninja's ankles with his feet he forced him face first into the ground.
Back flipping to his feet he was hit by Deido Sattou Nami no Jutsu, a jutsu that caused his to be hit by rushing wave of mud. Finally he hit a hug tree but was bound to it by the now harden mud. Do you want my help now.... the demon asked. Riku sighed as the ninjas slowly approached with grins shinning on their face as if they had already won. This pissed Riku off. The color in his eyes changed, he was finally angered and ready to let loose. Fine lets get this over with he said to the demon. Reaching deep within him he felt a rush of chakra beginning to surge within his body. The intensity grew within until it began to peak. His body heat rose causing the mud to melt. Bursting out of his muddy confinement it was shown that two tails had emerged from within his cloak. The heat was so hot that the grass and plants around him turned to ash. Hit attackers were so thrown by his transformation that they had to take steps back for the heat irritated their skin.
Though they were not scared they were oblivious that the one they were fighting was in fact a host. In the heat of the moment the battle was back on once two of the ninjas came together and both used Suijouki no Jutsu. The two power of the water burst threw everything thing it touched but the power of them both combined wasn't enough to handle Riku in this state. Holding out both of his hands Riku created a thin compressed spear of heat and flame. Taking the spear in hand he used a tremendous about of strength to throw it. In an instant what seemed like a shinny yellow blur collided with the stream of water causing a powerful explostion of flesh burning steam to spread hitting the three jounin on an exposed part of their body. Given this opotunity to attack Riku didn't waste a second of it. Within two seconds he flashed in front of one of the ninjas. Taking him by the hand he kneed him in the stomach and elbowed him in the face cauing him to fall unconscious. Following that he quickly moved between the other two and using his burning out tails ot slam them both in the tree. With his job finally done he reverted back to his normal state and fell to his knees. This was the first time he had used the power of the bijuu and was in control. It was draining but one day soon he would become more skilled in it. Idiot.... the demon murmured from within Taichi. With a laugh Taichi got up and restained the ninja from escaping while went back to his village to have the Anbu come out for their bodies, but right before he left he smiled saying, Thanks Monkey King. Lol this is me reapplying since no one really replied or anything gaia_angelleft sweatdrop gaia_angelright
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Posted: Tue May 29, 2012 8:05 am
Good rp sample! ^-^ But I would like you to re-read some of it. Some of the reading was a little... odd. ^^;
- Also, what spear technique did he utilize near the end?
Other than that, that is all I can really see that is blocking you from obtaining Yonbi n.n
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Posted: Tue May 29, 2012 3:53 pm
Username: ZaurielGuardianAngel
RPC Name: Kazuhiko
Village: Leaf
Rank: Genin
Bijuu: Yonbi
Why do you think you deserve the Bijuu: I feel that the only way to prove that I deserve the Bijuu is by proving my capabilities within the samle and if granted the Bijuu within the RP itself.
What you know about it: I know what has been shown in the series he is very intelligent and boastful. He has a lot of pride which is displayed in his personality.
RP Sample:
It was a normal day for Kazuhiko and his new squad of genin he'd been assigned to. They were out in the forest finishing up a delivery mission when Kazuhiko decided that it was okay to take a break since they had been traveling for a long time. The mission was a success and the young genin wanted to celebrate by playing a game. Kazuhiko thought that that was a good idea and even found time to make it a lesson in examination. You wanna play games so much? How about a game of Hide and Seek? I'll hide and you will seek he stated. The genin were skeptical about this at first but they agreed. Though the thought of going against their teacher in a game that called for tactical thinking seemed to still have them on the opposing side they realized that there was strengths in numbers. As he counted down from three, Kazuhiko created two clone beside him to create a smokey distraction that game him the chance to quickly hide in a spot where he and his clones could spy on the genin without being noticed. It seemed that he was hidden so well within the forest that the genin was having a hard time finding him, so he decided to give them small subtle hints as to where he could be.
For the next thirty minutes they all seemed to be getting smarter as they began to catch on to Kazuhiko's hints until they came across a small black box. Upon opening it, they discovered that the contents with in were battle plans that were to be passed from the mist to the leaf villages. Once this was revealed to the genin they called off the game and called out for their teacher. Little did they know that 3 jounin ninja had been looking after the box. Watching the genin learn what information was within it, the jounin's objective was to now kill them before they could spread the word to fellow villages that they were in danger of being attacked. The young genin all ran back to base camp only to be greeted by the 3 jounin. Seeing that they were only mere genin it would be easy yo kill them. Almost instantly they all pulled out a kunai and aimed it at them. With one single the three jounin threw the kunai at the the genin.
Knowing that he wouldn't be able to get there in time from the distance he was Kazuhiko quickly formed a few hand seals to use the Doton: Doryuu Heki, which created a wall big enough to protect them and distract long enough for him to get there rescue his students. The wall wasn't very strong and truth be told it was only sturdy enough to stop the kunai which was all the time he needed, but the other jounin were fast and with his genin with him it would only lower his chances of fighting without any distractions. I need you three to take what you've learned and inform the Hokage himself Kazuhiko order. Giving him a nod and a wave they set out. Once they were out of view he stood waiting for the three Jounin. Things would seem to quiet which was never good. He had to be on high alert, ready for any type of attack that could be thrown at him.
Hmph. So you've gotten you're self in quite a predicament. Typical. From inside his mind he heard a voice speaking to him. Instantly he knew who and what was talking to him. Giving a smirk he looked around to check the jounin's position before replying, I see you couldn't go a day without finding away to insult me. The demon said nothing for a moment which was good seeing as how Kazuhiko could better concentrate without having to think if clever comebacks. I underestimate you at times, but if you're thinking of taking them on alone then you're the same fool I though you were when we met the bijuu, Kokuo, stated Take my power and you are assured victory. The offer was tempting but Kazuhiko wasn't ready to use the power so suddenly, but before he could even make the decision the enemy struck all at once. Crouching down he spun his body in a vertical manner causing him to evade them and also move out of line of fire for the moment. Once landing on his feet he watched as one rushed him. Jumping high into the air Kazuhiko roundhouse kicked him in the face. Grabbing the falling ninja by the arm and threw him into the other behind him. Since he was distracted by those two the third was granted time to attack. From within the trees the third ninja attacked, holding his sword to split Kazuhiko in half. With barely any reaction time, Kokuo force feed Kazuhiko some of his chakra which increased his speed high enough to dodge, but the ninja was expecting him to dodge. Gripping his blade he established his stance and started an on going, relentless slashing attacks. There was no room for error the attacks where cutting so close that his shirt was suffering small cuts that barely scratched the skin. Once he was backed off into a tree Kazuhiko ducked down causing the ninja to swing his sword into the tree and getting it stuck. Gripping the ninja's ankles with his feet he forced him face first into the ground.
Back flipping to his feet he was hit by Deido Sattou Nami no Jutsu, a jutsu that caused him to be hit by rushing wave of mud. Finally he hit a hug tree but was bound to it by the now harden mud. Do you want my help now.... the demon asked. Kazuhiko sighed as the ninjas slowly approached with grins shinning on their face as if they had already won. This pissed Kazuhiko off. The color in his eyes changed, he was finally angered and ready to let loose. Fine lets get this over with he said to the demon. Reaching deep within him he felt a rush of chakra beginning to surge within his body. The intensity grew within until it began to peak. His body heat rose causing the mud to melt. Bursting out of his muddy confinement it was shown that two tails had emerged from within his cloak. The heat was so hot that the grass and plants around him turned to ash. Hit attackers were so thrown by his transformation that they had to take steps back for the heat irritated their skin.
Though they were not scared they were oblivious that the one they were fighting was in fact a host. In the heat of the moment the battle was back on once two of the ninjas came together and both used Suijouki no Jutsu. The two power of the water burst threw everything thing it touched but the power of them both combined wasn't enough to handle Kazuhiko in this state. Holding his hand up to his mouth, Kazuhiko called forth a strong amount of chakra into his lungs. Removing his hand he released a large blast of wind from his mouth. The large blast of wind knocked back the water and the three jounin knocking thim into the air. Given this opotunity to attack Kazuhiko didn't waste a second of it. Within two seconds he flashed in front of one of the ninjas. Taking him by the hand he kneed him in the stomach and elbowed him in the face cauing him to fall unconscious. Following that he quickly moved between the other two and using his burning out tails to slam them both in the tree. With his job finally done he reverted back to his normal state and fell to his knees. This was the first time he had used the power of the bijuu and was in control. It was draining but one day soon he would become more skilled in it. Not bad, but not good either.... the demon murmured from within Kazuhiko. With a laugh Kazuhiko got up and restained the ninja from escaping while went back to his village to have the Anbu come out for their bodies, but right before he left he smiled saying, Thanks King.
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2012 12:42 am
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2012 7:32 am
Username: iTeddy Inferni
RPC Name: Teddy Okazi
Village: Leaf
Rank: Sanin +
Why do you think you deserve the Bijuu: I think i deserve the bijuu because I have held a demon before when I was rping. Also i have the most experience out of all the Demon host, and plus im really suitable for this demon and I know how to roleplay with it.
What you know about it: Koukou seems to be a quiet and reserved individual. Though it does not speak much. Kokuō primarily resembles a white horse, but with a dolphin's head. It has two pointed long horns and three shorter horns in front. The ends of its horns, hooves, and tails are light brown, with some of the same-coloured spots before the brown areas of its horns and hooves.
RP Sample:
The day was set, the sun was settling down east of the Leaf village, shops were barely closing, everyone was still wandering the village except Teddy. Teddy was the cousin of the former Mizukage Qastor Okazi, who lived a fairly good life til his death in the great battle in the sky over Mist. It's been such a long time, this thought had always floated the back of Teddy's mind as he walked through the crowds of Leaf. It indeed had been such a long time, if he could recall was last visiting her when he was training with his sister Jaime, who passed away a year later or that's what everyone had thought. Teddy made his way to a empty part of the village, it looked new to him, everyone looked so shady, none of the surrounding scared him but he felt uneasy and as if he was being watched within the shadows of the alleys that were among him. This place, what goes on here... he thought as he found himself leaving the village through the back exit, he looked around with a sharp eye as he knew there was someone or something following him. Teddy slowly walked into the forest away from the village as the feeling of being followed had got even heavier then it was earlier.
Teddy came to a sudden stop as he knew there indeed someone following him. " Make you're presence known," he said in a low tone of voice. The man quickly peered out of the brush, he appeared to have the Konoha headband wrapped around his arm, he wore the jacket of a Leaf Jounin. Teddy had seen this man before, but not for such a long time. The last time Teddy was here was when he was a Chunin and this man was a mere Gennin but time has changed everyone and now he seemed to be much older then before. " It's been such a long time," The man mumbled as he formed a set of hand signs and seemed to yell the name of the jutsu loud, " Furyuuchou Ken [ Flowing Wind Fist ], " the jounin put his hand out as wind flowing began forming around his hand. The Jounin fired off a powerful, explosive burst of wind from his hand. Teddy just nodded slowly as he seemed to form the same set of hand seals that the jounin made, he stuck his left hand as a wind began to swirl around it, it too blasted off colliding with the other Flowing Wind, since Teddy was a sannin and the Houkou host it canceled out the Jounin's jutsu's. " What have you done," he screamed as he took off in a dead sprint at Teddy, he pulled a katana out as he was gonna slash Teddy's upper left torso. Teddy slightly smiled as he released the first stage of the chakra cloak of the Houkou. The man noticed the chakra flow around Teddy and came to a sudden stop. " Damn, it's true," he mumbled as he jumped back a bit. Teddy's wind jutsu's had increased a rank and his speed slightly increased. He formed another set of hand signs as he stared the jounin down and nodded.
The jounin ventured off behind a tree so he wouldn't get hit killed. " Raikou Shunshin (Lightning Release: Lightning Instantaneous)," Teddy imaged being in front of the jounin. The jounin was a Raiton use and was quiet aware of this jutsu, he pulled a ear piece out as he radioed other's in the area, " This is Jaku Hino, leader of squad 9, I need back up now, I can't fight this man alone," he said as the radio was transmitted to 2 other jounin that were a mile away. The jounin began to panic as Teddy soon appeared in front of him. " You die now," the jounin screamed as he swung his katana at Teddy, not aiming at any spot. Teddy was quick to form hand signs as he appeared and mumbled, " Koukiatsu no Jutsu [ High Air Pressure Technique ]," the air pressure began to rise quickly as this was a C ranked jutsu but as Teddy was in Stage 1 it was a B ranked. The jounin felt uneasy and blacked out, this was a easy kill for Teddy but he didn't want to kill the man. " Were almost to your position," the radio had said within the Jounins area piece. But he had to discard of the body, he formed another set of hand signs as he swung his right arm into the arm as he laid his free left hand onto the mans legs. Lightning struck down on his arm as electricity flowed though his body into the mans legs, this was to paralyze the man for when he woke up he couldn't escape. Teddy smirked as two tails appeared on the cloak as all his water jutsus were know a rank higher then before.
The jounin arrived in a rush, they were aware who Teddy was and how powerful and capable he was. They also noticed the chakra cloak forming around him. Teddy smirked as he slowly turned to face the men, his water jutsus were now a bit stronger then before due to the chakra cloak of the Houkou, his speed was now faster. Teddy took off in a dead sprint, he ran fast, faster then a normal shinobi, as he ran he was forming a set of hand seals for his next attack. The jounin jumped back and formed a set of there own hand signs. "Doryuusou (Earth Release: Earthen Rising Spears)," this was a Doton move, which in 2 tails was a rank lower. The spears shot up from the ground around the Jounin to merely trap them instead of kill them. The jounin used a earth jutsu as he sunk into the ground, leaving his fellow comrade in battle. Another tail was added onto the chakra cloak, 3 tails now. Teddy smirked as he formed another set of hand signs, his lightning jutsus were now a rank higher since another tail had been added. Teddy mumbled, " Chidori (Thousand Birds)," teddy focused some chakra into his arm as he held is down with his right, a spark of blue lightning appeared as it began to crackle. The jounin trapped within the spears just watch slowly with not have any time to react. Teddy's speed was fast now since he was in the 2nd stage, he smiled as the spears fell into the ground and he threw his left arm at the Jounin's left upper chest, the jounin who had vanished through his hands out from the ground using another Doton move to pull his comrade into the ground with him. Teddy noticed this as he hit the tree that stood behind the man, the tree was cut in half as Teddy smirked. " Nice," he said. He formed another set of hand signs, " Raikou Shunshin (Lightning Release: Lightning Instantaneous)," he whispered as in a wisp of lightning he was gone.. or so that it had appeared. The jounin came out from the ground as they looked around, teddy was not in sight or in there eyes he wanst.
" Where the he-," he stopped as Teddy was behind, the jounin could sense the powerful chakra that Teddy was leaking. There was now 4 tails, Doton moves are predicted to be up another rank and now speed and strength had increased. Before any of them could react Teddy was running at one the Jounin will full speed, he tried to form a set of hand signs, but in Teddy's stage hand seals aren't required. Tsuchi Shikyo no Jutsu (Earth Death Technique) was in effect as the earth seemingly opened up and swallowed one of the jounin into the ground. There was now one jounin left, Teddy was gonna merely play with this man before killing him. The jounin formed a set of hand signs as he dove into the ground and tried to escape. Teddy laughed as the ground rapidly opened and swallowed the jounin, teddy's jutsus allowed him to open the earth when he wanted and was unpredictable. There was silence, a dead silence. The cloak seemingly looked like to go back into Teddy, Teddy nodded as he smiled. " Good work Houkou," he whispered as he made his way off..
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2012 5:59 pm
Approved. Just remember what we discussed blaugh
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Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2012 8:10 pm
(((NOTE:i am just joining the guild but i am active everyday and commited to the guild any requirements are needed))
Username:
RPC Name sad (Will make one if accepted))
Village:Mystery Village
Rank:Genin
Why do you think you deserve the Bijuu:because i love Rokubi and snails and slugs alike and saiken is one of the few tailed beast which is unique to me i love its features and abilitys along with its dialect n.n.
What you know about it:i know that the host must carry around a water pipe to keep hydrated. the jinchuuriki is immune to most tai attacks the biju itself posses leech gap (manga only) corrosive gas and tailed beast ball.
RP Sample:chai walked casually through the forest as 5bandits surrounded as he gets into a fighting stance you're coming with usone says gripping a kunai in each hand as chai gets into his fighting stance as he looks around him counting how many there are. one charges towards chai swinging a punch directly at him as his hand becomes attach to chai ''rokubi please lend me some of you're chakra.'' he says as a 1tailed cloak surrounds him coming in contact with the bandits hand evetunally the bandit leaps back in shock of it all. chai slowly leaps back a little putting his pipe away for a moment so it doesnt break. as he then waits for them to attack him as one mindlessly attacks him as chai simply delfects it again with his hand as the mans hand becomes attached to him as another comes from behind him in attemps to slash through his cloak as his hand also comes in contact with the cloak as chai grips to shirukens as he sends one directly at the one attached to him as he then spins the other delfecting the kunai out of the other bandits hand as the bandit attached to chai falls down with the shirukens lodged in his throat area as the other one looks at his hand a little then back to chai as chai then brings out 5shirukens with a smile as he then sends them all in various directions as the 3rd one pierces into 1bandit as he falls down bleeding from his head as they were all connected to thin lines of string as he pulls them back slightly slashing a bandits left leg as chai then retrieves them in his left hand as he then relases 2 directly in front of him piercing through 1bandits chest and shoulder as they fall down bleeding as the one who was inflicted by his cloak his hand begins to slowly begin to burn he paniks as chai then aims 1shiruken sending it off slicing into his mid chest area as he falls down with his hand literaly ignited as he looks at the last he smirks as he then tosses a final one slicing directly into his lower neck area. as his cloak faded off he smiles. ''how munch of a pushover am i now?.'' he ask with a laugh contuining to walk off
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 6:30 pm
Unfortunately, I cannot approve for the Demon. Though it seems you have the knowledge of the demon, the rp ability is not up to par. BUT you have at least two more chances to try out for it if you want. blaugh
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 9:28 pm
((this is my second attemp sorry if its rush i g2g :/))
chai was relaxing as he blew a few bubbles from his water pipe to keep hydrated he decided to go for a stroll through the forest as he walks through the forest he smiles seeing the sunshine and blue sky above the lush green tall trees as he smells the scent of fresh air he is approached by a tall man covered in brown clothing with a blade in his hand ''heh you look easy enough i'll beat you down with my bare hands.'' he says in a cocky tone. chai calmly contuines blowing bubbles from his water pipe the man then quikly runs towards chai as he then swings his left fist directly at chai as his hand attaches to chais. chai simple smiles ''what the.'' the man says chai then blows into the water pipe as many bubbles blow out of it as the man finally is able to break away from chai the bubbles explode around the man. he grips his sword as he then looks at chai with a smirk a little injuired from the explosion. ''heh looks like i underestimated you kid.'' he says as he then grips the sword as he charges it upwards towards chai simply blows more bubbles as they surround the mans face as he is about to swing the sword down at chai the bubbles explode creating a red powder as it momentarily blinded the man making him miss his attemped attack the man then glares at him in rage. ''alright kid you're asking for it.'' he says angered he was being beaten so easily he then brings out to explosive bombs from his pocket as he tosses them towards chai as he laughs. ''HA lets see you're little bubbles protect you from that!.'' he says. chai simple stands there relax ''Water Release:Soap Dome.'' he says as a dome of what appears to be a bubble surrounds him as it easily protects him from the multiple blast the man glares at him. chai then sighs. ''i suppose i should end this soon.'' chai says as he then blows what seems to be a type of corrosive gas as the man inhales it as it comes in contact with his skin it begins to burn as he falls down on the ground in pain as he slowly dies from the deadly gas as chai sighs walking off blowing more bubbles
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Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2012 5:27 pm
Shinju Kaia ((this is my second attemp sorry if its rush i g2g :/)) chai was relaxing as he blew a few bubbles from his water pipe to keep hydrated he decided to go for a stroll through the forest as he walks through the forest he smiles seeing the sunshine and blue sky above the lush green tall trees as he smells the scent of fresh air he is approached by a tall man covered in brown clothing with a blade in his hand ''heh you look easy enough i'll beat you down with my bare hands.'' he says in a cocky tone. chai calmly contuines blowing bubbles from his water pipe the man then quikly runs towards chai as he then swings his left fist directly at chai as his hand attaches to chais. chai simple smiles ''what the.'' the man says chai then blows into the water pipe as many bubbles blow out of it as the man finally is able to break away from chai the bubbles explode around the man. he grips his sword as he then looks at chai with a smirk a little injuired from the explosion. ''heh looks like i underestimated you kid.'' he says as he then grips the sword as he charges it upwards towards chai simply blows more bubbles as they surround the mans face as he is about to swing the sword down at chai the bubbles explode creating a red powder as it momentarily blinded the man making him miss his attemped attack the man then glares at him in rage. ''alright kid you're asking for it.'' he says angered he was being beaten so easily he then brings out to explosive bombs from his pocket as he tosses them towards chai as he laughs. ''HA lets see you're little bubbles protect you from that!.'' he says. chai simple stands there relax ''Water Release:Soap Dome.'' he says as a dome of what appears to be a bubble surrounds him as it easily protects him from the multiple blast the man glares at him. chai then sighs. ''i suppose i should end this soon.'' chai says as he then blows what seems to be a type of corrosive gas as the man inhales it as it comes in contact with his skin it begins to burn as he falls down on the ground in pain as he slowly dies from the deadly gas as chai sighs walking off blowing more bubbles
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Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2012 9:36 pm
*edited post* chai was relaxing as he blew a few bubbles from his water pipe to keep hydrated he decided to go for a stroll through the forest as he walks through the forest he smiles seeing the sunshine and blue sky above the lush green tall trees as he smells the scent of fresh air he is approached by a tall man covered in brown clothing with a blade in his hand ''heh you look easy enough i'll beat you down with my bare hands.'' he says in a cocky tone. chai calmly contuines blowing bubbles from his water pipe the man then quikly runs towards chai as he then swings his left fist directly at chai as his hand attaches to chais. chai simple smiles ''what the.'' the man says chai then blows into the water pipe as many bubbles blow out of it as the man finally is able to break away from chai the bubbles explode around the man. he grips his sword as he then looks at chai with a smirk a little injuired from the explosion. ''heh looks like i underestimated you kid.'' he says as he then grips the sword as he charges it upwards towards chai simply blows more bubbles as they surround the mans face as he is about to swing the sword down at chai the bubbles explode creating a red powder as it momentarily blinded the man making him miss his attemped attack the man then glares at him in rage. ''alright kid you're asking for it.'' he says angered he was being beaten so easily he then brings out to explosive bombs from his pocket as he tosses them towards chai as he laughs. ''HA lets see you're little bubbles protect you from that!.'' he says. chai simple stands there relax ''Water Release:Soap Dome.'' he says as a dome of what appears to be a bubble surrounds him as it easily protects him from the multiple blast the man glares at him. chai then sighs. ''i suppose i should end this soon.'' chai says as he then blows what seems to be a type of corrosive gas as the man inhales it as it comes in contact with his skin it begins to burn as he falls down on the ground in pain as he slowly dies from the deadly gas as chai sighs walking off blowing more bubbles. as a another man lands in front of him as he was taller and more muscular as he hand a 2handed sword and various weaponry blades around his waist ''i'll be you're enemy.'' he says gripping the two handed blade chai prepares for the attack knowing he'll half to be more serious now. the man swings from his right side the blade at chai. chai then begins to blow bubbles as they pop the man leaps into the air as chai blew bubbles into the air which began to float upwards towards the mans face as he also attemps to slash them they pop relasing a red powder temporarily blinding him. ''Water Release:Wild Water Wave'' chai says as chai gushes out water out of his mouth like a waterfall towards the man as the man smirks. ''Not Bad.'' he says ''though i have tricks of my own.'' he says the man forms a chidori in his hand using the shape transformation he let off a chidori senbon was they all flew out colliding with the water vaporizingi it. as chai then blows more bubbles though before he is able to explode them the man landing out of the sky with his blade attemps a head first slash into chai due his reduce speed from rokubi he barely misses it as he rolls on the ground taking a minute to get up the man then swings in a z shape form at chai as he manages to slash at chai's chest knocking him off balance falling down as the man leaps upwards attemping another chidori senbon chai begins to focus more putting more thought into this now he closes his eyes knowing he has no option but to ask for rokubis help a 1tailed cloak forms around chai. ''heh that wont help you kid.'' he says as he forms a chidori in attemp to slash through the cloak 5bubbles floated towards the mans face as they exploded letting off a red powder for a little escape time as the mans attemped chidori senbon is scattered into trees or other objects. as he then decides to take chai head on as he attemps to punch chai as he comes in contact with the cloak his fist sticks to chais body giving him a small amount of free damage time as some bubbles a little ways behind the man the man is finally able to pull away falling backwards as the bubbles explode as the man falls he begins to feel a little irratiaion to his skin but shakes it off gripping his sword he lifts it up with both hands as he launches himself into the air forward in a attemp to do a downwards slash as chai is able to barely miss the some bubbles spew out from his pipe as they float towards the mans feet they explode temporarily trapping the mans feet in a type of sticky substance as the man is able to succesfully do another senbon as it is more of them at a faster rate as chai goes into a block postion 1 strikes his arm and another strikes his leg. the man smirks finally being freed from the substance chai then releases his 2tailed cloak adding 1more tail to his cloak the man then forms a chidori in a attemp to finish him off close combat style as he charges towards chai releases several bubbles from his pipe as they float towards the mans direction as he then swings his blade as the bubbles explode around him as his grip on the sword losens as it slides out of his hand he gathers raw strenght to punch at chai only to become stuck again. ''What the hell is this!?!.'' the man says angered his taijustu attacks just bounce off. chai releases more bubbles as they go around the man as some hover above he leaps upwards as he attemps to toss a shiruken at him as the man finds it harder to aim directly at chai as the shiruken lands in a tree. his skin slowly begins to burn from coming in contact from chais tailed beast cloak as he is wore down from the attacks and from the accuracy drop and chakra usage chai smiles as he then blows 10bubbles as they float at a meduim pace towards the man as they explode in hopes off taking him out. with all of the damage and chakra usage the man collaspes dead with his skinned extremtly burned from the tailed beast cloak intereaction. as chai reverts back into his normal stage as he smiles. ''thanks rokubi for helping me out.'' he says with a smile
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Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2012 11:50 pm
I really, really, really hate doing this. Unfortunately, I still have to deny it. I still see improving, but quantity doesn't really overshadow quality. A bit of advice though, if you need help with grammar, punctuation, spacing, etc. If you have a word processor program ( Such as Mircosoft office ), you can get all of that fixed there. But you can still apply for a Clan, Bloodline, or a Cursemark if you like!!! ^-^
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