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"What a ... an...odd fight." Cap said to himself, as he leaned against the archway of the busted entrance to the building. His appearance, unaltered by the razor water whatsoever. Closer examination would reveal a small half inch cushion between Cap, and any drop that might have come his way from the final attack. The water cascaded off of him and down to the floor as he turned and walked away a few steps, and with a flicker of black he vanished from the dueling arena.

((Perhaps next time Mavrick...you'll consider getting off your lazy butt and fight me yourself instead of playing "mr. puppeteer".))

((I see. I wasn't referring to you irl, I was referring to the Mavrick hero avi that you're supposed to represent. But, you just went along and made things just a little more complicated than what they should be...oh well.

I know, but I sure made it look like I killed her. mrgreen ))

true I guess, but my avi is just an extension of my consiness. Basically its Bull Crap for me to use any of my characters in a fight, for lack of a better term.

Mavrick
Spelling & Grammar: 15pts
- I found that alot of your sentences ran on and a few even sounded like they repeated themselves a few times.
Character Physical limitations: 20.
- I saw nothing that water could not accomplish or a semi robot could either.
Attack Creativity and depth: 35 pts.
- really well worked techniques but i have seen a few on tv and some were a bit hard to understand for me.
Defense Creativity and Depth: 30 pts.
- Most of your defences were extremely easy to see coming, ie water spliting apart, but it was mostly well done with a few things that seemed a little onesided.
Imagery: 30 pts.
- It drew pictures in my mind showing me the fight but with alittle more detail you could have made it much beter like if you talk more on the actual attacks and defends or even the physical shape of the used character.
Passion: 25 pts
- You put your heart into your attacks but not very much into your defends, try to work on a few better forms of defence and it'll raise the marks here.
Damage: 20 pts
- Man(or should i say Women) you took and delt damage with nearly every attack done, very well done.
Artistry and general RP skill: 15 pts
- I believe that you are a very good fighter but your defences need work and a little more detail can always help.
Knock Out/ Kill 0pts.
- you didn't kill nothing.

SnoopE
Spelling & Grammar: 17 pts
- you had a few run on sentences and nothing seemed to be repeated. i saw a few incorrectly spelt words, but i was surprised to find words i never heard before and had to look up to make sure they were real, very well done.
Character Physical limitations: 20 pts.
- i found nothing that a mage style character couldn't do, the staff part was ify but seeing as if a weapon is placed correctly they can break anything.
Attack Creativity and depth: 35 pts.
- they were good in general but i have heard of attacks like those so many times before in nearly every rpg video i have ever played that they weren't the the most creative things i have ever saw. come up with a few moves created espeshily for you, ie noroi's ice comit yoyo trick.
Defense Creativity and Depth: 40 pts.
- didn't really need to defend much but when you did they were pretty good. I love the shadow teleport like thing.
Imagery: 37 pts.
- very good use of words and detail to describe your attacks and defences, it drew a hard to forget picture in my mind. there isn't much you can do to improve it but ask oni or archangel for imagery pointers if you cant find some way to increase it yourself.
Passion: 30 pts
- You put everything you had into this fight and I saw that you truely were trying to win this.
Damage: 18 pts
- You delt damage fine but when you took damage from mavrick's characters rebond techniques it didn't do all that much, all i saw was a flinch and thats about it.
Artistry and general RP skill: 18 pts
- I personally like your fightning style alot but somethings are a little hard to believe like the teleport. although it was my favorite defence used it is alittle unrealistic even for a mage, i have only play one rpg that had teleport for a mage and you got that skill when you were completely maxed out.
Knock Out/ Kill 60pts.
- From what i read from your final attack i see no way what so ever that the water spirit thing could get back up, you fricken crushed the head which is the central source of it's being, if it could regenerate from that within a few minute then they are gods( i see in maybe a weeks time it would be healed but not a few minutes). I give you the points for a knock out not a kill.

Mavrick=190
SnoopE=275(big win from knock out)(25 points difference without)

VERY GOOD FIGHT MEN

This Is Not Final Until Oni Or A Higher Up Makes It Offical.I Have PMed Oni To Tell Him To Check This Over To Make Sure It Is Legit.

(Lets see.

1. Uses a staff.
2. Used lightning.
3. Used lava, AND cooled it with a type of Earth style magick.
3. Materialized and manipulated the enviroment to attack.

Traits of a mage? *nods* Balance is a fighting mage...a mix of both, similiar to my character. He just leaned to his spells in mid-battle to create an advantage...after all, whats the use of punching water? I use that figuratively.

At the same time, Yamick didn't know what kind of fighter Balance was, and it could be easily assumed that Balance was in fact a mage.)

('Beatstick' works for me. However, the people here like to make other peoples character's seem weak based on their opinions and sticking certain people into a specific class, as if they can't be good at everything. Good luck in your next fight, as I think you will be advancing to face either of the other two guys...both of which do exactly what I just talked about.)

i'm sorry if i offended you or anything but from what i read you were and advanced magic user with good staff skills.