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PostPosted: Thu Mar 03, 2011 7:59 pm


Ello! ^_^ I be crit'in~

The personality is pretty cute, she is pretty cute too~ <3
So what are her likes and dislikes?
What does her wand look like? also, you may want to check the Reaper updates found here.~ Allot of stuff changed around, so she can't cast magic with her hands, she needs a weapon or familiar to channel any FEAR.
and for her natural ability; what would the summoned familiar look like?
her FEAR is interesting, but how would it work in battle? Cause fear is basically a magical move used in battle.~
She has a rather, dark and odd history, if things are so bad, how could she pick her self up and keep moving? Did she go into a new family/adopted? Did she live alone after the incident?
and lastly is the whole killing and clan thing, it doesn't fit in with the setting in my opinion, there aren't clans out to kill each other or clans at all, maybe small family rivals sure but nothing that big. It is a civilized time with cops (called Bogeymen) and rules.
So maybe she was simply orphaned into a place that wasn't total paradise and lots of arguments and emotional abasement, sure doesn't sound great, but it is an okay replacement for clans and revenge. sweatdrop

Hope I didn't sound mean! D= I wasn't aiming for that...
If you could, can you give some crits to my quest Basil?
PostPosted: Thu Mar 03, 2011 8:05 pm


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Ello! ^_^ I be crit'in~

The personality is pretty cute, she is pretty cute too~ <3
So what are her likes and dislikes?
What does her wand look like? also, you may want to check the Reaper updates found here.~ Allot of stuff changed around, so she can't cast magic with her hands, she needs a weapon or familiar to channel any FEAR.
and for her natural ability; what would the summoned familiar look like?
her FEAR is interesting, but how would it work in battle? Cause fear is basically a magical move used in battle.~
She has a rather, dark and odd history, if things are so bad, how could she pick her self up and keep moving? Did she go into a new family/adopted? Did she live alone after the incident?
and lastly is the whole killing and clan thing, it doesn't fit in with the setting in my opinion, there aren't clans out to kill each other or clans at all, maybe small family rivals sure but nothing that big. It is a civilized time with cops (called Bogeymen) and rules.
So maybe she was simply orphaned into a place that wasn't total paradise and lots of arguments and emotional abasement, sure doesn't sound great, but it is an okay replacement for clans and revenge. sweatdrop

Hope I didn't sound mean! D= I wasn't aiming for that...
If you could, can you give some crits to my quest Basil?

Its ok! Thanks for the crit! I'll crit basil later on~
Im gonna' fix things up in a jiffy~

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 07, 2011 1:33 pm


Thankee for the crit and here is something for you in turn:

As you may have noticed when you critiqued Akubi I was told that die rolls are a thing that are discouraged by the GMs of TiH because they are working on a rolling system of their own so you might want to set a reasonable starting limit of 'how long' they stay asleep or you may wish to pick an ability that isn't so dependent on die rolls if you can't work around it.

Personality wise she seems pretty nice so far. What kind of dances does she like? Not all dances are elegant.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 07, 2011 1:33 pm


She seems really cute~ Though I'm pretty sure characters can only have one Natural Ability? Unless one of them is one of the overall sort of Reaper abilities ... XD

I also sort of agree with Boo in that there aren't really clans and rivalries and the like in Halloween-world right now. Her whole family getting killed could have been something else ... and for some reason she THOUGHT it was this other clan of witches. Then you could keep the 'revenge' aspect. But later on if/when she finds out it wasn't really them, you'd have some very interesting character development in that she would have a choice whether to pursue the revenge against people who didn't really do anything, or let it go.

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 09, 2011 3:39 am


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Thankee for the crit and here is something for you in turn:

As you may have noticed when you critiqued Akubi I was told that die rolls are a thing that are discouraged by the GMs of TiH because they are working on a rolling system of their own so you might want to set a reasonable starting limit of 'how long' they stay asleep or you may wish to pick an ability that isn't so dependent on die rolls if you can't work around it.

Personality wise she seems pretty nice so far. What kind of dances does she like? Not all dances are elegant.


Ah yeah. Noticed that friday but i forgot to edit it sweatdrop

THANK YOU! 4laugh
PostPosted: Sat Jul 09, 2011 3:56 am


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She seems really cute~ Though I'm pretty sure characters can only have one Natural Ability? Unless one of them is one of the overall sort of Reaper abilities ... XD

I also sort of agree with Boo in that there aren't really clans and rivalries and the like in Halloween-world right now. Her whole family getting killed could have been something else ... and for some reason she THOUGHT it was this other clan of witches. Then you could keep the 'revenge' aspect. But later on if/when she finds out it wasn't really them, you'd have some very interesting character development in that she would have a choice whether to pursue the revenge against people who didn't really do anything, or let it go.


Owhh.... Okay, thank you for your crit! biggrin 4laugh

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