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A City Of Fools Vice Captain
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 Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 9:42 pm
Simply editing what we said to edit doesn't make your mistakes not happen. The answer is the same [Especially since you only fixed one or two of the "With"s] Declined. The sample wasn't all that good even without all the mistakes. Sorry.
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Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 9:56 pm
I actaully passed the sample throgh five people and said that there were no spelling errors, the only one's where the with's and one villager that was in singular when It had to be in plural... And they said it was an awsome sample TT-TT
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A City Of Fools Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 10:01 pm
Well I have higher standards than those five people. You must be at the least at a high intermediate level to be a kage. I'd put you at very low intermediate.
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Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 10:16 pm
Alright, the part of being a good soldier is to know when you have lost. I guess I can autorank sannin or jounin? For Kumo, Suna or Kiri right?
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A City Of Fools Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 10:19 pm
I said no such thing. The kage of each village chooses whoever they want to auto-rank so if your gonna get auto ranked then the kage has to choose you as one of those.
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Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 10:33 pm
I was basicly asking if I could, the right part was a typo, I was opening and closing windows to fast and placed it here sweatdrop Just great... now I have to kiss up Convince Mistah to autorank me to jounin.
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A City Of Fools Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 10:37 pm
Lol. I think he already chose his, but good luck. xD
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Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2010 9:15 am
Applying for Super Epic Beast Meister King in the guild.....or, just any kage available. except mist. mist can go to hell scream
Sasuke (yes, sasuke. suck a nut) gazed from atop the tower to observe his village. It was a real beauty. Too much for words. A few buildings scattered across the village lit up the night sky, allowing for it to have a sort of calming, serene aura to it. In truth, Sasuke could have stayed up there all night. He wanted to stay there all night. But, word of invaders had reached him, and he knew he couldn't have let the rouges roam free, especially in the Village Hidden in the *blank*. He would show them the true power of the *blank* kage. With one swift move, he leaped from atop the tower, a dust of smoke taking his place on top the tower. It was time to kick some ninja butt.
"Hehehe. Hey, Skeeter! These ninjas are weak as hell. But, they ain't as weak as that stupid village hidden in the mist. Now, those ninjas were weak! And stupid. Ain't that right Skeeter? Ain't it? Ain't.....thud." The ninja stopped mid sentence, something suddenly bringing him to the ground. Blood had stained his back, leaving a crimson colored pool around the ninja, and his eyes were left open, leaving him staring at his once best friend, Skeeter. Skeeter, the leader of the rouges, was surprised at the sudden action, but knew it could only be one thing. "Sasuke Uchiha, huh? The super manly hunk of a ninja with great hair has finally arrived." Off in the distance, Sasuke could be seen holding his famous katana, his eyes glowing those famous, vibrant red, his famous hair blowing in the wind. Man, that hair was epic. Real epic. I mean, seriously, who could not love that hair?
Skeeter, by now, had drawn a couple of kunai and, with a sudden action, threw them all at Sasuke. The kunai pierced through the air with amazing speed, speed that a normal kunai shouldn't have had. But Skeeter was a powerhouse. Strength was his specialty. As the kunai zipped through the air, yes zipped, Sasuke tensed up. His sword was already in front of him by the time the kunai had reached, the metal of both weapons sending a loud noise through the area. Sasuke was moving before the weapons thrown at him had reached the floor, his hair moving so epically in the wind. "Ram. Horse. Snake. Dragon. Rat. Ox. Tiger. Katon: Karyū Endan!" As he took a huge intake of breath, Sasuke took the time to stop and, after a long exhale, flame started to spurt out of his mouth, heading in the direction of the rouge ninja named Skeeter. The temperature rose considerably around the two ninja. The flames took the shape of a fearsome dragon, a dragon intent on killing somebody, something. Skeeter had no choice but to jump out of the way, and allow the dragon to continue its journey before its inevitable extinguish. Still, a small part of Skeeter's cloth had caught fire, and Sasuke capitalized on this to use a new combo.
While the rouge tried to extinguish the flames spreading on his cloth, Sasuke rushed to Skeeter, using all the strength and agility a ninja could possess, and charged. A kick landed directly on the stomach of the rouge, sending him flying back a few feet. But that wasn't enough. Grabbing hold of Skeeter's two legs, but just barely, Sasuke twirled him around a few times before letting go, sending the ninja flying towards the gate. But, still, that wasn't enough. Sasuke's eyes had dilated a little, allowing him to look back on a technique he had copied from an earlier battle. In fact, this was one of his favorites. In his right hand started to form a small sphere of chakra, the orb slowly, but steadily, increasing in size. In a matter of seconds, the sphere was the size of a a small basketball, meaning it was ready. Rushing, Sasuke outstretched his hand, the one containing the rasengan, and made contact with Skeeter, who, by now, had attempted to get up. There was a moment of silence before Sasuke shouted out the name of the deadly jutsu, so loud that everyone within a 100,000 mile radius could hear it (ok ok, 100,000 might have been a stretch). "Rasengan!" Skeeter had winced in pain, and could not contain the agony in the attack. He was thrust away over the gate. Sasuke, unable to resist, had struck a pose, his epic hair flowing in the wind. Seriously, does he even use hair gel?
As Sasuke turned back, many of the *blank*'s citizens were waiting for him, ninja and common folk alike. A small girl had started a slow clap, though was quickly chastised by her mother. "Idiot! He wants an attractive woman to start the slow clap. Not a small, stupid girl! You're the reason everyone hates us......." A few feet to the left, a buxom ninja had smiled and started another slow clap, but this one had taken momentum. Everyone in tech village was applauding Sasuke, all for that one small girl, who was crying. Sasuke shrugged it off and allowed the village people to pick him up and bring him to his tower. Tonight, there would be a celebration. An epic celebration of no proportions. For Sasuke Uchiha, the cool super beastly uber epic meister, had just saved the village yet again from some redneck rouge ninjas.
Katon: Karyū Endan!
Rasengan
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A City Of Fools Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2010 9:17 am
D<
I'm the mizukage. You want a war, eh? I'll destroy you! D<
Well I'm not allowed to accept in this thread, only decline, so you gotta wait for Izuru. xD
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Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2010 9:21 am
Hmm...alright. You can get...
*drumroll*
Tsuchikage((since I don't think Tanh wants it and you'd be good here)), make it so that your village is in the middle of a large canyon or a Supa Dupa Crater.
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A City Of Fools Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2010 9:22 am
Normally a neutral country..... I shall ravage it with war! >D
Izuru, dont make any alliances with him! We must tear him to pieces! >D
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Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2010 9:32 am
sofa, join me! join me! the mist is lame! the earth, however, is super cool! yea. we own! totally! woot!
btw, two things. 1. i still have to make a character in the profile acceptance forum, right? and 2. since i'm like, all kage rank and junk, do i get mangekyo sharingan? *dramatic music plays*......er......yea. if i can, sweet. if not, its cool. i'll just pwn you village that much more
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A City Of Fools Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2010 9:34 am
Sharingan is for fagggggs!
And no, you have to start off at the basic sharingan. And yes you still have to post up a profile.
Me and Izuru already have a badass alliance. xD
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Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2010 9:39 am
@Nerd
you'd have to prove to be an omega badass for me to make an alliance with you.
Well we haven't figured out the auto-ranking things. If anything you'd probably end up with Stage 3 and have to fulfill one of the requirements.
@Con
Yes. Sharingan is for fags xD
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A City Of Fools Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2010 9:41 am
Glad you agree. xD
@Nerd: If you really name your guy sasuke I'm going to massively assrape you, then rip your head off. >>
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