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Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 8:17 pm
I'd personally say no on those as well. Making a mile wide area of pitch blackness that can only be seen through if you cast it, or you have a vision enhancing bloodline? That is very very over powered.
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Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 8:29 pm
What if I made it a genjutsu?
And you still have your other senses. You just can't see that far ahead of yourself.
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Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 10:16 pm
The Nerdbot dante: approved, but i'm letting any other crew override this denial. the reason being is that this is a lot like deidara's chakra mouths, just without the clay. still, i like it. so yea....approved as far as i'm concerned, though if a suiton technique touches the charge before it explodes, it is canceled.
http://www.gifbin.com/bin/1237811519_chuck-norris-approves.gif I'll edit it then. Thanks for the approval.
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Posted: Thu Sep 02, 2010 6:55 pm
Your Rank: Kage Name of Jutsu: Mind-controlling Dōjutsu Rank of Jutsu: No rank Range of Jutsu:Short Jutsu's Element:None Description: Hekiyume, the only one capable of using this technique, has taken time to master this technique. Using his sharingan technique, Hekiyume can control the minds of a ninja, though under certain circumstances. For one, Hekiyume must be looking directly at the person, for eye contact is necessary. This jutsu cannot be used in battle whatsoever. Heki can only use on three people a day, and after that, his sharingan is unusable for a few hours. On academy students, it completely takes over their mind, leaving them no room to fight back. On genin, the ability puts an extreme feeling of persuasion on the ninja, making it very difficult to resist. On chuunin, it gives a feeling of persuasion, but is easier to resist than on genin. On sepcial jounin and regular jounin, in idea is suggested and put into the minds and is occumpanied by a small feeling of persuasion, but nothing else. This jutsu does not work on anbu, sannin, or kage.
Rp Sample OK, its late and this is only a basic post.
Hekiyume couldn't help but laugh at the young acdemy student. The fool, after knowing of Hekiyume's identity, actually wanted to fight back. Heki grinned, unable to contain his amusement, Still, it was time to work on a new jutsu. Glaring at the young boy, Hekiyume's sharingan eyes dilated. He focused on the boy and tried his best to look into his mind. After a few seconds on concentration, Hekiyume was getting impatient. Sweat was falling down his face. Damnit! I gotta learn how to control this! Blinking, Hekiyume tried again, but by now, the ninja had realized something was up. Attempting to run, Hekiyume's eyes searched deeper into his mind. You.....you will not run. You will stay completely still.....You will not move. After a few seconds of intense concentration, Hekiyume snapped back into reality. He was still alone with the academy student, nobody else present. Walking over to the student, he spoke up, but his voice was barely above a whisper. "Why aren't you running?" he asked the boy. With all his heart, he was hoping to hear the words that he'd been working so hard to listen to. The boy, not moving an inch, not even blinking, stayed silent for a moment. Hekiyume turned his head around and gazed into his eyes. "Tell me why you aren't moving. Now!" His eyes had dilated, his special jutsu activated yet again. There was a moment of silence before the young boy took a deep breath. The student, now commanded to speak, looked at Hekiyume, his soul protesting with all its might. But. The mind and body were now in Hekiyume's control. The boy looked at Heki for a few seconds. Then, he spoke up. "Because you told me not to."
[[now, i might have exaggerated the powers in the sample a bit. still, in actual roleplay, i usually will use it to get someone to stay quiet, talk to an adult, or tell me something about their past sweatdrop ]]
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Posted: Fri Sep 03, 2010 3:13 am
Your Rank: Academy Student Name of Jutsu: Ro-gao [炉顔 “furnace face”] Rank of Jutsu: D rank Range of Jutsu: A cone 6-7 ft in front of the user Jutsu's Element: Fire Description: Ro-gao is a jutsu wherein the user lets out a massive wave of heat from their face, causing the air in front of them to heat up so rapidly that it expands with a force strong enough to push an object back. As well as create a brief blinding effect. The heated air carries enough strength to push an average man back by about 3 ft, and can temporarily stun even those are particularly resilient to such attacks. Though it has no real damage upon the object, the effect is still significant as the coverage of the jutsu is rather wide, and thus this can be used in a variety of ways. Rp SampleStretched out on top of one of Kumogakure’s buildings was Fuun Chiroku, playfully tapping his foot as he passed the day by ”Ah... what a beautiful day, so relaxing to just do nothing.” he commented as he took out a biscuit and bit down on it. His good time however was interrupted by the appearance of three special jounins, visibly irritated at Fuun. Noticing them, Fuun jumped back on his feet and stood up facing them, his hair still a bit messy from lying on the ground for more than an hour. Not bothering at introductions, one of them began to speak ”Fuun, I’m not even going to bother scolding you about your hide-and-seek games.” spoke the lady in charge, as the two others approached Fuun “But, I am going to scold you about cutting classes, once we get back to the academy.”Visibly broken-heartened, Fuun slouched as he moaned out ”Aw, but it’s no fun there.” turning his back as he did so. He would wait for the two to get within striking range; the leader would be caught in the radius as well. Thus, when the two were within range, Fuun suddenly turned around. Then, having already performed the hand seals, yelled out ”Katon, Ro-gao!” as his face was engulfed in a bright light, and the air around him expanded instantly, pushing the two back and blinding the leader, just long enough for him to make an escape. ====================================================================================== Your Rank: Academy Student Name of Jutsu: Ro Bakuhatsu [炉爆発 “furnace blast”] Rank of Jutsu: C rank Range of Jutsu: A sphere 12-13 ft around the user Jutsu's Element: Fire Description: Ro Bakuhatsu is an upgraded version of Ro-gao. Though the mechanics are still the same, the heat generated, and the subsequent force generated as well, are far greater in magnitude compared to Ro-gao. Here, the heat is so intense that flames momentarily appear above the user’s skin, and the air blast created is strong enough to rip through earth, and is more akin to a bomb than a simple push. The area covered by the jutsu is also greater; also, the blinding effect is still present. Rp SampleDespite his admirable efforts to shake his pursuers lose, Fuun found himself still being tailed by the three special jounin. Smirking, Fuun tossed several kunais towards them in an attempt to stall them, but was surprised when one of them impacted upon the leader, before the woman disappeared in a puff of smoke. ”A clone technique?” asked aloud Fuun before he was stopped by the woman, appearing a few feet away from him, forcing him to stop and be surrounded by the three. Sighing, the woman spoke once again ”That was a rather impressive move, Fuun. But, play time is over.” with a wave of her hand, all three of them started to move in to capture Fuun. However, he had other plans and spoke out tauntingly ”Heh, play time’s never over.” following up with a quick succession of hand seals ”Katon, Ro Bakuhatsu!” he roared as his upper body was covered briefly in flames, and a powerful front of air radiated outwards from him. Not wanting to find out how powerful the attack would be, the three jumped back as the air blast cracked the ground they were standing in. Once the intense light had subsided, they found Fuun to be gone once again, causing the leader to shake her head tiredly.
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Posted: Fri Sep 03, 2010 2:48 pm
dante, while these jutsus are acceptable, i can't approve both of them. we are trying to limit the jutsus to 3 per rpc, and i would hate for you to use up all of your jutsus already. however, if these are to be added to the katon ninjutsu section (meaning use for the whole guild) and not only custom to your rpc, then they are approved. if not, i can only approve the first one.
http://www.gifbin.com/bin/1237811519_chuck-norris-approves.gif
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Posted: Fri Sep 03, 2010 3:18 pm
I see, hmm... then I'd like for them to be added to the Katon ninjutsu section then.
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Posted: Fri Sep 03, 2010 3:41 pm
ok, i'll add them. but, they will be both one jutsu, just one an advanced version of another.
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Posted: Sat Sep 04, 2010 12:12 pm
just thought id point out since i dont see a guild wide customs thread. all jutsus ive posted so far are intended for the whole guild. I'll add some more in a min
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Posted: Sat Sep 04, 2010 12:25 pm
This one has not been approved before
Name of Jutsu:Fuuton: Soothing Breeze Rank of Jutsu:E Jutsu's Element:Fuuton Range: Surrounds the character in a small bubble. Another ninja could be affected only if they were themselves very close to the target (ex: hugging them) Description:A support jutsu which can be used to raise morale and effectiveness in a battle. The Fuuton user, wraps their teammates (or themselves) in a relaxing breeze, that clears their mind of emotion and minor pains. This allows the affected ninja to think rationally, and put their emotions and physical pains aside. The breeze surrounds the character for a post, but the length of the affects depends on how emotional/injured the affected ninja is, as well as their state of mind. If used on a tired shinobi, it may cause drowsiness. This can be useful outside of battle, or against a fatigued ninja. It can also be extremely dangerous if used on a tired teammate (or ones-self). Can be used on multiple ninja on the same turn. Chakra drain is per affected ninja. So if one was to use it on three ninja, it would drain E-rank chakra 3 times. Rp Sample Nagisa could sense that her comrades were unable to put their emotions out of the way. Their best friend was captured, and they had allowed their temper to rise to dangerous levels, and she did not know that she could trust them to carry out the mission. It was hard, Nagisa knew, to have to fight one of your long-time friends. “Everyone stop. We need to take a moment to collect ourselves.” She declared loudly. They all stopped in a clearing, as Nagisa began her work. After a short series of seals, a soothing wind began to surround the whole team as she began to speak. “Everyone, listen up! The shinobi we are chasing is no longer your comrade. The Raikage has assigned you all, because you know him the best. I know this is asking a lot, but if you can not put aside your emotions during this battle then our whole village will soon fall.” As she spoke, she worked on lowering their stress. When the jutsu wore off, she called the wind once more, knowing once would not be enough in this situation. the team began to return to their collected selves, and she could tell that reason was beginning to win them over. This would help keep them from doing something stupid, but she still had to watch them carefully.
These were all made and approved for POTS guild...
Name of Jutsu: Fuuton: Sanran-fū (Scattering Winds) Rank of Jutsu: A Jutsu's Element:fuuton genjutsu Description: Takes two turns. After performing a long set of seals, the user must be heard saying the name of the jutsu. When they are heard, a very strong wind picks up, and the ninja has to brace themselves against it. In the second post, the affected sees their body turning into cherry-blossoms and blowing away. This is extremely emotionally traumatizing, and a little painful for them since they are slowly losing contact with their body. even if they realize it is genjutsu (how many real jutsu turn you into flower petals?) they cannot easily break it. While they are affected their bodies are unable to move, and open to attack. Extended exposure (3 posts?) requires at least 2 posts in a medical care to recover from the shock Rp Sample Jeremy had underestimated her genjutsu. For Nagisa to know such a powerful jutsu was uncanny. She was so strong! He knew what was happening as soon as he heard the words “Fuuton, scattering winds no jutsu!” but he couldnt do anything about it. He had not yet mastered kai, andhe had no allies here to help. She had won the fight, and he felt lucky that this was just a sparring matfch. Had he really surpassed her in such a short ammount of time? This was not the same Konoha ninja he had been friends with. He looked at his hands and sure enough they were vanishing into petals, It felt so uncanny, to lose contact with the body had had used his whole life. Before it got any worse, Nagisa had mercifully released the genjutsu, and Jeremy found himself staring at her Kodachi. “You lose” She said with a strange smile. She knew how badly she had beaten him, and was loving it.
Name of Jutsu: Katon: Akuma no iki (Demon's Breath) Rank of Jutsu: B Jutsu's Element:katon genjutsu Description: Useful against katon and raiton users,. After the user performs the seals they stand in front of the victim and blows out a slightly red air that surrounds the affected, if they are not seen doing this the genjutsu does not work. The “gas” smells very strong, and feels warm. The affected, believes that if form of spark or fire reaches it (the enemies or their own), it will ignite the gas and cause a powerful explosion, roasting them. The gas will follow them for two posts and then dissipate. If the gas is “lit” within view of the affected, then it briefly surrounds the affected in an illusory fire (like an explosion) that feels like it gave them a very severe burn, with a pain to match. The illusion of a burn only lasts as long as it takes for the victim to realize that it is illusion. This jutsu is mainly used to stop them from using their jutsu. Rp Sample Jeremy was having a hard time against the raiton user, she seemed to know far more jutsu than he did, and to top it off she was an Aburame. She was able to avoid all of his katon so far, and not even one bug was burned either. He was quickly running out of options, and she already knew most of his jutsu. He had to knock her off balance and introduce some uncertainty. He stepped back out in behind her and called out “Okay, now its time to get serious” as she turned around he performed a series of seals and called out “Katon, Demons breath no jutsu!” as soon as she could see what he was doing he breathed what appeared to be a light red gas, which surrounded her. If it worked she would believe that any spark or fire would ignite the gas roasting her and her wonderful little bugs.
Name of Jutsu: Fuuton: Kaori no chūdan (Scent Disruption) Rank of Jutsu: D Jutsu's Element:fuuton ninjutsu Description: A mild breeze is used to pick up any scent nearby, remove it from the area and make it appear that it is coming from a different location. This is very useful against any tracking that uses scent. Rp Sample Nagisa knew she was being tracked by dogs, and needed to do something to draw them off. She stopped and performed a long series of seals and a breeze blew her scent towards the west, and cleared it from the general area. The dogs would be on a wild goose chase. Nagisa then continued her journey south with a wide smile on her face. “mission complete!”
And my Aburame jutsu (also approved in POTS)
Name of Jutsu:Secret Technique: Insect Cocoon Rank of Jutsu:C Range of Jutsu: Jutsu's Element:Bug use Prerequisites: outside of battle. must be in a partially isolated area and it takes 2 posts. In the second post the clan member may not initiate attack or leave the area. Description: A secret jutsu in the aburame clan, used primarily to accelerate the breeding of their bugs. this is very useful after a large battle, when their bug supply is runnning low. The jutsu incases them in a larde cocoon made of chakra, (pretty much just a visible aura) and allows their kikaichuu to breed. They are very vulnerable to attack while in the cocoon. This jutsu is also a necessity, for reaching higher ranking jutsu. Rp Sample Nagisa was exhausted from the battle, and lucky o be alive. She called what few of her insects remained, and performed a long series of handsigns. The uchiha had brought her bugs near extinction with that last katon. she hid in a small cave and whispered. "Secret Technique: Insect Cocoon!" Her chakra began to pour from her body, trapping her in a cocoon that promoted growth. A sudden calmness flowed through her body, and she reached a meditative trance, conflicting with the sudden energy of her kikaichuu bugs. Slowly, the emptiness of her body, began to fill once more. She regretted having to perform such a jutsu, for she knew it was her who had put the bugs in the path of death. It was a dark knowledge, that haunted her even through the calmness of the cocoon. After a very long wait, Nagisa finally released the jutsu. Her body was seemed overflowing with the bugs, her friends, although her chakra had run dangerously low.It was reassuring that she had her bugs once more, and that the uchiha had long lost her trail.
Name of Jutsu: Kikaichuu radar Rank of Jutsu: C Jutsu's Element: bug user Description: This jutsu requires chakra to use, plus an extra 1 chakra cost per turn. The Aburame sends his/her bugs around them creating a wide grid. The bugs are connected by a very thin thread of chakra which can be used to send information. This allows the bug user to search an area, or watch a base camp for any disturbances. This would allow for any important information to be known immediately to the user, instead of waiting for the bugs to deliver information directly. The information sent, is similar to something poking your arm. You can tell how big it is, how hard and fast it poked you, and the general area. You don't know what it is though, until you look. The bugs are sending only information of unusual behavior. They will not tell you about trees if you are in a forest.(or people in a crowd) This includes objects that are dangerous, but still fit in. The snake hiding in the bush beside you, isnt something your bugs will tell you about. you have to wait till it bites you in the arse. The grid covers a radius of 30 feet in all directions at genin, and then grows 10 feet per rank. The bugs are spread thin so they are very difficult to notice.In the event of a very large amount of changes, the receiving ninja might have difficulty sorting it all out possibly leaving them vulnerable.
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Posted: Sat Sep 04, 2010 4:23 pm
Your Rank: Special Jounin Name of Jutsu: Puppet art: Eye of the Puppet Rank of Jutsu: C Range of Jutsu: As far as the eye can see Jutsu's Element: Description: The user closes one eye and focuses chakra on to the eye. The user then releaces a spike of chakra on to the chakra strings and it allows the user to see through one of the puppet's eyes. This lasts for 3 posts and it has a 2 post cool down after the jutsu is over. What is seen by the eye of the puppet is seen in the mind of the user, also, the user cannot open the eye or the jutsu will be broken.
Your Rank: Special Jounin Name of Jutsu: Kairai omoiito, Puppet Mind string Rank of Jutsu: B to learn ( C cost ) Range of Jutsu: As far as any other chakra string. ( I don't know how far they go.) Jutsu's Element:None. Description: The jutsu is done just like the basic chakra strings. The chakra is focused on the tip of the finger, the user then places his/her finger on the back of the head and the chakra string goes out from there. Once the chakra string(s) is/are attatched on the head the user can use their brain waves to move the puppet.
Rp Sample
Cecily glanced around the battle field with a blade on her hand, there were only three of her opponents where standing. The sun kissed ninja sighed as she placed her blade on her back and took out a scroll. " Rise, Bang Bang." She muttered as three small puppets appeared on the battle field, she then began to make chakra stings on her hands. " Get ready." She said softly as she closed her eyes and activated the sharingan as she moved he hand to the back of her head. The strings on her hand attatched on to the back of her head and flew toward her three puppets. " Puppet art: Eye of the puppet." She said as she got a clear mental picture of the enemy appeared of the enemy. Let's finish this. She thought as the puppets slowly walked toward the ninja. Jump. She thought as the puppet's jumped and clung on top on the ninja. Cecily then turned away from the men as the puppets clung on to their faces, she then made a neddle seal and let out a sigh as she opened her closed eye. " Boom." She said as her puppets blew up and killed the enemy ninja.
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Posted: Sat Sep 04, 2010 6:42 pm
I'm not crew but that last one is too OP...
And you only made it cuz I pwned you with it in our OFA battle.
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Posted: Sat Sep 04, 2010 6:44 pm
kayavient_thundergod I'm not crew but that last one is too OP... And you only made it cuz I pwned you with it in our OFA battle. It's not Op... that is basicly what Sasori does when he is using the 100 puppets, only diference is that the strings come on from a weird chest cavity thing connected to his heart. And it has nothing to do with our OFA, I was actually gonna make it in POTS, but I have a pending RP sample...
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Posted: Sat Sep 04, 2010 6:51 pm
No, he was using chakra strings from an augmentation to his body that he invented bro... but whatever you say
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Posted: Sat Sep 04, 2010 7:07 pm
hikaro: why do you do this to me? do you enjoy my pain and suffering (regarding the long jutsu applications) crying
all approved except for demon's breath demon's breath might be a little strong for a c rank, considering that it causes the opponent pain and, even if they do realize it is an illusion, it will disrupt their strategy for 3 turns, enough to kill them. make it b-rank and i might approve.
besides that, APPROVED! http://www.gifbin.com/bin/1237811519_chuck-norris-approves.gif
now if only other members were as enthusiastic as their clans stare
Akura: eye of the puppet is approved. but the last one is kinda op'd. basically, it gives you control of the target. don't you think thats a little powerful? sorry, but i can't approve this sweatdrop
still, the other one is approved. and thats as important, isn't it? http://www.gifbin.com/bin/1237811519_chuck-norris-approves.gif
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