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___youwillknownihilism

PostPosted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 11:52 am


Well I have another effect lined up because something told me the effect is too OP to actually be used...
PostPosted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 12:08 pm


how bout now?

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Unrelinquished Despair

PostPosted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 12:19 pm


Seems good to me. Just remember though, five feet is still roughly the size of Sephiroth's blade, if I am correct, so you'll have to use two hands to wield it. No one-handing it.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 12:30 pm


Metaphorically Insane
@Dante: I didn't quite catch the last sentence, explain it better. (Weakness.)

I don't care if your character becomes a monkey with down syndrome, controlling the katon jutsu of your opponent, and being able to devour it for your benefit is OP.


Hmm... point taken.
*edits*

There, I added a side-effect that burns the user after the removal of the weapon, also edited the RP sample accordingly.

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 12:46 pm


Masamune is 9 feet long.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 12:53 pm


kayavient_thundergod
Masamune is 9 feet long.


No, no it's not. It's 6-8 feet depending on what someone believes or something.

@Dante: Still doesn't justify devouring jutsu for chakra benefit. I stand by my decision.

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 12:58 pm


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@Dante: Still doesn't justify devouring jutsu for chakra benefit. I stand by my decision.


M'kay.
*edits again*

Removed the clause that states devouring Katon jutsus gives the user chakra, replaced it by simply converting the fire into heat.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 1:00 pm


Ah yes you are correct, so what if I made the blade four feet? It's supposed to be like dante from devil may cry.


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PostPosted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 1:19 pm


Dante's blade isn't that long... xD

But I suppose, it's fine now. I can say approved to both of your weapons, but it would still be difficult to wield both of them at the same time without sufficient strength/coordination.

@Dante: I actually don't feel confident on making a judgment of your weapon. Maybe you could ask Wood to judge it for you, or something?
PostPosted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 1:56 pm


Metaphorically Insane
@Dante: I actually don't feel confident on making a judgment of your weapon. Maybe you could ask Wood to judge it for you, or something?


Will do then, thanks for helping me balance it.

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 2:45 pm


Lol yeah I know, but if my custom Tai style gets approved I won't have that problemo! twisted
PostPosted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 8:43 pm


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@Demon: I'm actually not quite sure about this weapon, but really, the only harm it can bring about is the poison, which I suppose you'll provide yourself. So, unless someone bothers to overturn my rule...

It's basically a normal sword that can be used to deliver a poisoned strike. But, like most weapons, it can be blocked, turned aside, even broken. Nothing too overpowered ^^

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 02, 2010 3:01 am


User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.Name of weapon: Kōro-kō (高炉鋼 “blast steel”)
Who owns the weapon: Fuun Chiroku
Where it was found: The scroll detailing how to summon it was found inside one of the caves of the Kumogakure mountains
The Range of the weapon: Melee
Weakness: Takes a while to create truly devastating strikes.
Description:
Korou-kou is a pair of similarly design arms and greaves. It is made of tempered steel, and has reasonable weight. It is a Katon based weapon, able to consume part of the user’s chakra and convert it into raw explosive Katon chakra which it emits out from any area on its surface. The minimum amount of chakra in can burn to power its attack is the equivalent of an E rank jutsu. However, if it is allowed to feed off more chakra, its attacks can easily rival an S rank jutsu, if given sufficient time to feed.

The time it takes to feed it up to E rank is three seconds, this result in an attack that carries roughly the equivalent of a standard fireworks rocket. Feeding it up to D rank requires seven seconds, and is the equivalent of a grenade. C rank requires fifteen seconds feeding time and the force generate is the equivalent of a long gun, the cannons used by pirates. The time it takes to feed it until B rank is half a minute, and is the equivalent of a keg of gunpowder. Feeding time is then up to three quarters of a minute to reach an A rank, and is now the equivalent of a TNT blast. Finally, S rank requires a feeding time a full minute, and the stored energy can be released as the equivalent of a C4 explosive.

When the weapon is being fed chakra, it begins to glow a dark red color, once it has reached a rank, it will flash a crimson color indicating its increase in strength. In order for it to be summoned, the user must first touch both of their knuckles against each, while calling out the weapon’s name. The two fists then collide with each other, a small explosion will occur, and once it clears the weapon will have been summoned and equipped by the user. To be un-summoned, the user must repeat the procedure, this time without calling its name, and simply bump their fists against each other.
Rp Sample:
The mountains of Kumogakure are silent and peaceful, the clouds sweep over them lazily as the day goes by. However, this serene calm exists only on the outside ”Ora!” yelled Fuun as he drilled his fist into the rock that blocked his path. But even with the new armored arm he had recently acquired, it seemed that his attacks were not enough. A few minutes earlier, Fuun had just entered the cave in search of a hiding place in his daily game of hide-and-seek. Inside the cave, he found an old stone jar containing a scroll. Out of curiosity, Fuun followed the instructions detailed by the scroll, signing a contract before performing the procedure, and was successful in summoning the weapon Korou-Kou. However, his joy was cut short as the mountain rumbled and Fuun was trapped underground by a thick layer of rock, as if triggered by the weapon’s summoning.

Trapped, Fuun began pounding on the wall, to no avail. Until as he balled his hand into a fist, an urge to sneeze befell Fuun and he tried to hold it in as he held his arm’s stance. Almost immediately, he felt the sensation of chakra being withdrawn from him, as he felt the armored arm grow stronger. Realizing he had just stumbled on his ticket out of the trap, he began pouring his chakra into the weapon, imbuing it with his energy as it began to glow, before flashing. Deciding that it probably wasn’t enough, Fuun continued the ordeal for a full minute, before finally punching the wall, creating a massive explosion that was heard throughout the entire village.

Several scouts were sent to the location to investigate, and all they found was the remains of a sizeable portion of the mountain, and Fuun Chiroku stretched out on a pile of rubble, knocked unconscious by the intensity of his own attack.

[Reworked the entire weapon and removed the Katon jutsu manipulation altogether.]

[Not sure as to the leveling I decided on per feeding time though.]
PostPosted: Thu Sep 02, 2010 9:27 am


I actually like this revamp of the weapon, it seems really cool, just a few problems.

1. How is the user protected from the explosions? Does the weapon make him immune to them?

2. Basing the charges on time is bad, and very hard to pull off without seeming OP. This is because when people are role-playing, they usually don't keep track of how much time in passing in the experience. So, I don't think that would work.

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 02, 2010 4:34 pm


1. The only part that is immune are the arms and legs, the rest of the body is subject to damage-- which is why Fuun was knocked out in the RP sample.

2. Hmm... I see, time is sort of relative during RP. I'll think of something to replace it then.
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