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 Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2010 12:37 pm
Rpc Name: Atsureki Hyuuga
Village: Kumogakure
Rank: not sure, I may be auto-ranked if my app goes through
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Hyuuga Clan, Byakuga
What you know about the clan/bl: The Hyuuga clan is known for their powerful doujutsu, the Byakugan. The Byakugan gives its user a 360 degree field of vision, with only one blind spot near the base of their skull. In addition the Byakugan allows its possessor to see the Tenketsu, the internal chakra network, which allows them to use their clan's taijutsu style Juken (Gentle Fist). This style of martial arts allows a Hyuuga to attack the Tenketsu directly, allowing them to control chakra flow, Juken is also known for being able to damage the internal chakra producing organs, which are located mostly around the abdomen, directly, making this taijutsu style especially deadly even to the toughest of opponents.
Rp Sample:
Atsureki led his team through the forest, his byakugan allowing him to see what was ahead of them. The target was close, soon their mission would be done. They had been sent on a sabotage mission, tasked with planting charges at and destroying a bridge that the enemy army was using transport supplies to the front line. As they neared the target Atsureki signaled for his team to stop. He quickly scanned the area, trying to see how many enemies were stationed at the bridge. He was able to make out several soldiers stationed on either side of the bridge, nothing his team couldn’t handle.
He signaled the numbers to his squad and they all nodded, Kanzuki drawing a kunai from his holster. Atsureki then signaled for the team to move, he and Kanzuki would take care of the guards while Yamatano planted the explosives. Kanzuki took the near side of the bridge, throwing a light bomb at the enemy to blind them and disorient while he began his attack. Meanwhile Atsureki moved across the bridge to take care of the other three guards. Kanzuki’s attack had of course alerted the other guards, but it would matter little whether they were aware of Atsureki’s presence.
He could see that two of the guards wielded spears while a third held a sword. As the guards closed in on him, Atsureki dropped into the Juuken fighting stance as he readied himself for the guards’ attacks. The first spearmen rushed forward, going for a simple jab aimed for Atsureki’s chest. Atsureki easily side-stepped the blow and caught the spear with his right hand. With and open palmed thrust he broke the tip off of the spear, and then flipped forward as the second spearmen attempted to stab him in the back. Before he even touched the ground he threw the spear tip at the swordsman. It plunged deep into the man’s neck, slicing open his jugular. The man reached up with shaky a shaky hand to touch the few inches of wooden shaft that now protruded from his neck, and then fell to the ground dead.
Atsureki then fell once more into a defensive position as he waited for the spearmen to make their move, his face calm and composed. The two spear-men circled Atsureki, the one with the broken spear now wielding the shaft like a club. Well he gets points for determination, Atsureki thought to himself as he shifted his hands so that he could react more easily to the soldiers next attacks. The second soldier then rushed at him from behind, holding his spear forward to try and plunge it through Atsureki’s spine. At the same time the other soldier attacked from his front, clearly trying to distract Atsureki.
He couldn’t help but smirk as he brought his arms in toward his body, and then spun his body in a counter-clockwise motion while pumping chakra out of every part of his body. Before the weapons could make contact, a dome of pure chakra spread from Atsureki’s body, pushing the weapons away and protecting Atsureki from harm. The soldier who was wielding the broken spear was so close to Atsureki that he was caught in the rotation. The chakra tore at his body and then flung him away, off of the bridge and into the ravine below. As Atsureki came to a stop he muttered to himself, "eight trigrams… palm rotation", then looked up at the final soldier, his byakugan literally seeing right through him to his internal chakra network.
The soldier stared in disbelief and horror at his now destroyed weapon. He began to back away slowly, but before he could get away Atsureki rushed forward, striking the man with an open palm thrust right at his heart, pumping chakra into his hand as he did so to strike directly at the man’s internal chakra network. The man staggered back and then coughed into his hand. When he held his hand away from his face he saw that it was covered in blood. Looking up at Atsureki he whispered, “what… are you?”, and then fell to the ground.
Atsureki walked forward until he was standing next to the body and said, “I am Atsureki Hyugga, the All-Seeing.” With that Atsureki made his way to the other side of the bridge to see how Kanzuki was faring.
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Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2010 3:11 pm
Rpc Name:
Kemuni Kaguya
Village:
Kirigakure - Village hidden in the mist
Rank:
Sannin
Bloodline or Clan applied for:
Shikotsumyakou
What you know about the clan/bl:
‡Due to the Kaguya clans ability and obsession with fighting alone it left them susceptible to mental/genjutsu attacks.
‡Shikotsumyaku is an incredibly rare Kekkei Genkai.
‡Their Kekkei Genkei is not dependent upon any elements.
‡The bones are an extension of the user and may often-case contain Nerves.
Rp Sample:
Throbbing beats filled the air around the males ears; two round surfaces covering them almost completely giving only little room for the slightest sounds to come in. Silver strands locked beneath the metal strap that connected the two round surfaces that stood out due to their onyx coloring. Two red diamonds beneath the zigzagged partition of his scalp that stood out like a beacon signaling his heritage. Two green-hues stared aware of the world around him and more than made up the fact his ears were lost within the music pounding into his ears.
The wind that crept through the air waltzed with the loose fabric of his clothing. The chest loosely exposed while the fabric was tightly held around his waist. The ends of the males pants brushed against the floor hiding the contents below. Due to his personal bloodline he had no reason to conceal any weapons along his thighs or wrists and had more time to train upon his own reflexes and weapon prowess. The wind soon brushed against his nose whispering a small hint of danger as a forlorn scent filled his nostrils. His eyes shot toward the direction the wind was coming in just as two masked cloaked figures lunged through the air.
The wind whispered as the Silver-Haired male slid his body to the left in simplicity, dodging the kunai that split the air so swiftly. The blink of an eye could cost the males life nor any motion, however these obviously had to be chuunin due to their eagerness to jump into battle. The males ears found the silence of the air around them refreshing once he pulled back the metal strap holding them to his ears. His body then shot toward the position of both of the Ninjas. Fists colliding with theirs, until several bones shot outward from his knuckles and burying themselves within either of the others. Once the fists had connected he found himself launching backwards away from the both; Only for the bones connected to his knuckles to break due to the frailty he had accidentally made them.. <********" His words snaked through the air silently due to the fact he gave away his fighting abilities so soon.
The stressed out kaguya member soon felt obligated to end the conflict, reaching his right hand back to wrap his fingers about the extension of his spine that was sliding forth and break his flesh. "Dance of the Steel Wire Flower" He whispered finding words too burdensome for the beauty that can't be described like the elegance of his craft. The males hand launched forward as the columns of his spine shot toward those before him catching them of guard. The swiftness of the expanding columns wrapped about their frames much like a whip. Each spike that was once extending from the column of his vertebrae. Once he pulled the sword back massive amounts of blood began to excrete due to the sheer blender like product of his action. The spikes ripping through the flesh of those before him allowing his sword to come free and launched back to its dormant position.
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Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 2:06 pm
@Lance, Tsubaka, Fear, Hikaro, Spider
ACCEPTED
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Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 2:09 pm
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Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 5:18 pm
A Few edits if you will. I have Become Tsuchikage, and I wish to keep my Sharingan character. Also, I have switched over to Iwa ( Self explanitory ) Just so you know Mistah.
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 4:04 pm
Rpc Name: Kay Rashen ((Kay Rashen-Uchiha if accpeted))
Village: Konoha akatsuki
Rank: at least chuunin
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Uchiha ((Sample with Itachi's version))
What you know about the clan/bl:I know a great deal about Sharingan though I don't ever RP with it. I know the Tomoe's are gained through battling and extreme training, and then the mangekyo's are typically gained through sacifice and copying ninjutsu, genjutsu, and what do ya know? Tai jutsu as well. They can see clearer, and often times block strikes last minute thanks to their high reaction time.
Rp Sample:
((Note, this sample is depicting an itachi style mangekyo implant.))
"I realy wish you guys wouldn't have been so ravenous," Kay said as his summons dissappeared. He was known for being a sumoner, but since he didn't claim the Uchiha name, not many people knew that he could in fact use the sharingan. He sighed doing a single seal as he pulled off his headband, which hid the sharingan eye. It resembled a shuriken with three blades. As the hunters dashed toward him, throwing their senbon, he dodged them all without even moving much. He locked eyes with the first of them, and they seemingly fainted, rolling to a stop near him. The others came around from the sides at him, causing him to have to jump out of the way of their barrage of senbon. He knew this battle would take too long if he tried to toy with his attackers. This battle would have to end quickly, and percisely with him as the victor. From the air, he easily picked out each one, and began forcing chakra to his focal point. Blood trailed down his face, and pain throughout his entire body as he used one the most deadly techniques known to the Uchiha clan...
Amaterasu. The enemy suddenly caught fire, blackflames erupting from him and the tree he was on. Kay fell to the ground with a hard thud, the pain still in his right eye. He shook it off as he stood up, wiping away the blood and watching for movement. He heard footsteps, turning to see an Uryu Banda ((Pi quan quan chuunin attack)) which knocked him off his feet. He bounced back up, and as the ninja came at him again, Kay spun around, his arms like the sails on a boat, and perfectly relpicated the move. What luckKay thought stopping and then performing a heel drop over the ninja's head. Unfortunately another tracker came at him, nearly jabbing his blade into Kay's kidneys. Luckily, the implant in his right eye granted him the nessacery reaction time to weave out of the way and turn his heel drop on his blade, snapping it cleanly in two. He then kicked the tracker away as well, and then did handseals. "Fire ball jutsu!" Kay yelled as a tech he had copied from another ninja flew towards his body. He began to breathe much heavier than he expected as the ground suddenly became closer to his face than it should have. He wobbled to his feet again as the burning tree continued to burn, the tracker already dead, but still on fire. The two trackers were both trained in THe 8 gates and Piquan quan style. This meant Kay would have to pay attention and use his knowledge of the 8 gates styles and what he could copy here today before it was all over.
One could say that three tai masters were fighting, but in truth Kay could only do chuunin leveld techniques. It was the sharingan's increased reaction time that gave him the edge here... if only slightly. As a severe leaf huricane came at him, he saw the opening wehre he was able to Shofuu, kciking his opponent out of the skies in a very violent way. As he landed he was hit by a solid strike that broke his bottom left rib, but he worked through that pain as his eye continued to ail him. He dashed forward, jumping into a 720 and just missing the ninja's head. When he hit the ground he swept the man's leg immediately, then ducked under another strike thrown at him thanks to the sharingan's assistance. He grabbed the ninja by the neck and stomped the other ninja's head into the ground. "Let us see how you fair, inside my TSUKIYOMI!!!" he roared as the ninja's eyes closed.
"Do you believe in ghosts?" Kay's voice echoed as the ninja found himself sitting in a cell. He looked around frantically seeing nothing but this small room. He walked to the gates, looking down the pitch black hall, the only light coming from his own candle, located in his cell, and felt a feeling of dispair. The cell then seemed to moan as the back wall cracked and chipped off. Dead men, lots of dead men were stuck to it, their eyes closed, and their bodies seemingly deteriorating before him. All of them seemingly came to life, and held out their arms. It became clear that these were all ninja the tracker had killed, adn they wanted him to join them. He screamed, the walls oon his sides doing the same thing. Kay suddenly appeared sitting against the back wall, staring at him. "Make no mistake, the ghosts of your past shall have their vengence, you should just accept it, join them, join them..."
"JOIN US, JOIN US," the men and women chanted as the tracker did a seal, expelling winds from his chest to destroy the wall successfully, and jumped out through the wall, falling into infinite darkness...
That poor soul fell to the ground, the ninja under his foot squirming, and then jumping up, meeting his eyes as well. He landed, suprised that he was safe, and then dashed towards Kay with a kunai in his hands. Kay's eyes bled again, but the ninja dodged to the side, Adrenaline pumping as he jabbed the kunai into his heart while flames took the tree behind him. The body suddenly exploded into crows, and Kay came through them with his foot aimed at the ninja's face. Confused, the ninja ducked and took Kay down by sweeping the foot Kay head on the floor. While on the ground, the ninja stabbed his kunai into the man's heart once again, suprised that Kay winced, and then closed his eyes. He stood up triumphant, but saw another Kay dashing towards him. He looked back at the flock of crows flying away from the kunai, and cried out as something pierced his heart instead. But just that fast, he was back to the very beginning of the scenario.
Kay had indeed successfully trapped him in the Tsukiyomi as well. That one moment he had used the genjutsu on him, and Kay covered his Sharingan eye again. His face twisted in pain as he realized he had used too much chakra... and fell to the ground. Luckily, like always the leader came across his unconcious body and observed the dead ninja around him. "Mission completed once again," he said lifintg up Kay and carrying him back home...
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Friendly Conversationalist
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 7:46 pm
Rpc Name: Tenma
Village:Kumogakure
Rank:Sannin
Bloodline or Clan applied for:Uchiha(Sharigan)
What you know about the clan/bl:The Sharigan is not automatically activated in the user by birth. It is unlocked under some stressful or emotional condition. After that the sharigan can be used freely. When the sharigan is first activated it usually has a different number of tomoe. when a sharigan user continues the train they obtain more tomoe around their pupil.
Rp Sample
Tenma and his squad mate Tenjho were rushing to save their third member Kaiko from enemy territory. "We have to hurry and save Kaiko!! who knows what they'll do" said Tenjho. "Shut up I don't want to think about...this mission just can't get any worse" Tenma replied with anger and stress coming from his voice. They both stop in front of the cave where Kaiko is being held to come up with a battle plan. Tenjho pulls out a sheet of paper and draws a battle plan. "Ok I'll go inside and find Kaiko while you'll create a diversion....since you're of the Uchiha I'm sure this wouldn't be a problem." Tenjho said trying to cheer Tenma up which worked as Tenma let out a grin. "Alright lets do this". Tenjho heads for the cave and signal Tenma to get ready. "This seems a little bit to easy and quiet" Tenma was thinking to himself
The minute Tenjho runs inside the cave it explodes. "TENJHO!! NOOOO!!!" Tenma screamed as he watched his friend get killed right before his eyes. A figure appears next to Tenma to kill him butTenma lashes at him with his kunai but the figure dodges and turns invisible. "You b*****d you killed my friends!!" Tenma said in anger swinging wildly hoping that he'd hit something. "Correction your friends killed each other!! Bwahahaha" The evil figure laughed "And now I'm going to kill you!! NOW DIE!!!" the invisible figure dashes behind Tenma to stab him but Tenma turns around with his sharingan activated. Tenma went from seeing nothing but forest in front of him to seeing the man's chakra outline."I don't think so!!" Tenma stabs the figure in the chest. "B-but how?! You shouldn't have seen me!!...wait t-those eyes."The figure coughs up blood and quickly swings at Tenma with his sword. Tenma see's the attack since it appears that its moving slow with his sharingan and counters it by blocking the sword with his kunai and stabs with his second kunai that it kills the shadowy figure. Tenma looks towards the cave to check to see if his friends are still alive by looking for their chakra. But to his dismay their chakra is fading at an alarming rate. "Tenjho....Kaiko....I'm....sorry" Tears begin to fall from Tenma's Sharigan activated eyes down his face from the thought of losing his friends.
As Tenma started wiping his tears he felt a strange presence. It seemed as if he was surrounded. He got up with an angry face and looked around him. He activated his sharingan for the upcoming battle. Even though he had a sharingan he didn't know if it was enough to help him. Tenma began to run away with the other ninjas following. He kept looking behind him to see how many followed, dodging shurikens that were thrown at him. "I'm really not in the mood for this." Tenma said while running. He was looking for an area for the final stand.
Tenma stopped running and pulled out two kunais. Seeing the shuriken with his sharingan his quickly dodged them. "Come on you cowards! Fight me like a man!" Tenma charged at the the enemies head on still dodging the shurikens. He saw two of the ninjas trying to run. "I don't think so." Tenma jump on both of them stabbing them in the back. "Cake walk." Tenma smiled. He turned and saw the last ninja. This one ran at Tenma and started punching wildly. Tenma dodged these attacks with ease and saw all the attacks coming because of his sharingan. He drew his kunai and stabbed the ninja in the stomach. He looks at the random ninja one last time with his sharigan and sees his chakra slowly fade away. Shaking his head Tenma starts to walk away.
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 7:48 pm
I'll accept you, but remember that all RP posts should be in past tense. So say he turned around instead of he turns around.
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A City Of Fools Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 7:50 pm
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 7:55 pm
Your accepted as well, but learn where to use commas and where not to, please.
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A City Of Fools Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 7:57 pm
M o u r n ii n g W o o d Your accepted as well, but learn where to use commas and where not to, please. IM SORRY! commas are my weakness...*Tiddles thumbs and sweat drops* emo
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 7:57 pm
M o u r n ii n g W o o d I'll accept you, but remember that all RP posts should be in past tense. So say he turned around instead of he turns around. if you mean me i'll keep that in mind
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Friendly Conversationalist
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A City Of Fools Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 8:01 pm
@Dorobo: Good. Also be sure to puncuate and capitolize.
@Kay: Its ok. :]
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 8:03 pm
BUt over all how was my sample? I just went fromn the POV of an implant but I want the actual Itachi mangekyo ((Reason for abandonment of the name will be explained...))
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Friendly Conversationalist
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 8:05 pm
k thanks man. it starts at one tomoe no matter what right?
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