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 Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2010 9:33 am
I was talking to you, Jokerman. I'm only going to review profiles once their posted over here.
Isa, i'm going over your profile in a bit. I just gotta finish reading it to see if there's anything needed changing.
Though your picture shows up just fine for me.
For both of y'all:
And, exacly what fairytale is y'alls characters from.
Also, theres something missing in both of y'alls profiles that state y'all read the rules.
Blue Winged, Thats a nice idea, but i feel that it might single people out who prefer anime. On my other RP, i have it obviously listed that i prefer real life, but if you need an anime picture have at it. For me, i dont even join RPs that require anime ales its a really really really good idea. As long as you have a good description, i dont care if you have anime or real life.
Sin, I havnt even looked at your profile because it isnt posted yet. But, i'm glad your taking my suggestions and using 'em. Everyone should read profile reviews and see how you can apply those suggestions to your profile to make it better.
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Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2010 12:59 pm
Isa, I love your profile, and I can’t find anything worth revising. However, I cannot accept you until you reread the rules a tad more closely.
&, disregard the question I asked in the previous post about what fairytale your Character is from. It’s obvious that she’s from Snow White.
&, Jokerman, I’m sure that if I google it I’ll find out where your character is from. Nevertheless, I’d rather you tell me so I can make sure I’m reading the right story.
I’ll accept you once you revise your bio and reread the rules a tad more closely.
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Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2010 8:18 pm
Whoops, sorry! Figured out what I missed and have edited it into my profile. sweatdrop
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Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2010 8:27 pm
Isa, Thank ya darling(: You're accepted.
Everyone: Ima be gone till like Saturday. Hopefully i'll have a chance to get online and check our profiles and stuff. Soo, keep posting 'em and just chatting away. I want a few pages by the time i get back. Dont worry 'bout leaving me in the dust : D !
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 2:42 pm
☪…“ there are no ℓ ø ç к ა to keep out the ʈ ʀ ø ℓ ℓ ა …☪
♫♫
Oh! Oh! This seems like lovely & well thought out idea. I would love to join, though it will most likely take me a while to come up with a satisfying profile.
☆…its your own ɗ ą ʀ к ɳ є ა ა that leads you to the trolls”…☆
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 5:05 pm
Must. Revise. Application.
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2010 6:20 pm
Sooo, i'm back a couple of days early. (:
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Posted: Wed Aug 04, 2010 2:38 pm
All righty, I adjusted the profile accordingly.
I didn't know where to post it, but Schraeder is the King of Thieves from The Arabian Nights.
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Posted: Wed Aug 04, 2010 6:19 pm
Jokerman, i need a hair cut too (:
but yeaaa, your accepted : D
blahh, i need to finish my profile but i have noo energy to. I might as well just delete that post till i finish my profile, because its going to be awhile neutral
yeaaa, ima delete part of that post.
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Posted: Wed Aug 04, 2010 9:00 pm
.::Peter Pan::.  b a s i c i n f o r m a t i o n Hello, My name is
I Have Been on this Earth for About
I am of the
I'm staying in dorm number
I'm currently enrolled in grade number
c o l o r m e p r e t t y
How I Normally Look
Pol likes to wear clothing that she can buy on the cheap, given her lifestyle choices of being a reckless teenager and a rugged individualist , she finds that it's very very stupid to try and wear anything nice, Ever. On any given day she wears cheap tang-tops, Cut offs, filthy dark gray sneakers, and probably some kind of hole ridden tights or leggings. It's not at all professional but then again, she's not going for professional, she's no grown up, and she wants to savor her last few years of being a kid.
The girl's hair is cut short, very boyish in length and style. It's a dark blond almost orange color and uber straight. Her hair never curls no matter the weather. As far as make up goes Polly uses a black eye shadow, mascara, and eyeliner. She has a piercing on her left eye brow, it's just a little silver barbell, nothing that impressive. She did it herself though.
Fairytale Appearance
In her fairytale persona Polly changes a lot more then most of her peers do. She changes gender. The girl didn't have that feminine of a body to start out with so she just had to bind her chest with long bandages, and stuff a sock in her tights. Eventually probably some time this year, the school wants her to start taking Testosterone, but she's putting it off as long as possible. For a costume, Polly wears the iconic green tights, and green tunic, brown leather booties, and green fedora like hat. Her hat has an orange-red feather in it, which looks pretty sweet.
y o u o u g h t t o k n o w
How I am
Childish, youthful, and reckless. Polly acts like she can never die, she acts like she's always acted. Childish. The girl is very rash, she has trouble controlling her impulses... The kid gets into more fights over very stupid things, then she would like to admit. Pol tries to be friendly to the kids who seem like they need a friend though. She can walk up to a stranger and take them by the hand, show them a good time. She likes having fun and would probably die just to have the experience of death under her belt, If she thought it might be fun that is.
How I came to be
Born to two very loving parents in the suburbs of Indianapolis, Polly had an ideal childhood. She ran wild though the neighborhood, terrorizing the yappy dog across the street, climbing trees, building forts. Her parents were very busy, but happy together. It was perfect, there were a few other kids in the neighborhood too, all boys, besides her. Polly formed a crew, a gang, a group. They were together and would explore and play together. The group of kids were inseparable, it was love and admiration that held them together. That was until Polly turned twelve.
Up until her twelve birthday Polly was one of the boys, she was just another trouble making kid. It was June, right after her birthday when her parents divorced and Polly moved to New York with her dad. He was hired as a professor at NYU. The man taught bio Engineering. Polly never cared about her father's work, he was always to busy to bother with her, that was all she knew. Polly couldn't really focus on one thing long enough to learn like her father did. She wasn't a great student, he was. He wasn't at all athletic, she was. And now with her mother gone and all of New York City to explore. They got a little two bedroom apartment in the village. That was the first hint that her dad was super gay. It had never occurred to Pol that her dad was like that until she saw the neighborhood they moved into. it was definitely not like the suburbs...
The girl fell in with another group of boys, but these guys were losers, they were nerds and weaklings, she loved them though; Like she loved all misfits and out of place young adults. It was like they needed her. Polly was one of the guys again. But this time there was no building of forts or running though sprinklers, she was in the big city, They went to comic book shops and hung out in the park. It was beautiful and she couldn't have been more happy. Until she was invited to go to boarding school... Polly didn't want to leave her friends, but her father insisted she go to school and at least try it out, she could come home after the first semester if she didn't like it... That was the last thing he ever said to her, and the worst lie he ever told her. Polly was devastated when she found out what the school really was and in the past three years she hasn't entirely gotten over the fact that she can never go back to her old life. When she was told that she would have to change her body and everything she's ever felt about herself she grew even more rebellious then she had been as a kid.
s o m e o t h e r i n f o r m a t i o n
There's something else you ought to know
Polly has a fear of intimacy. She's never dated and no one has ever asked her out. Every time anyone gets close she scares them away. She's also very bitter about anything that has to do with talking about her past. .::dragonhealer::.
{My hair is blond with pink highlights and styled into a little fo-hawk right now. I need to get it re-colored.}
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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2010 6:17 pm
Dragonhealer, Before I even bother to go over your profile, I think I should discuss a more serious issue.
With my past experiences with you being in my RP, you have never kept active. Sure, you were around for a bit, but you always disappear. With knowing that, I don’t see how I can honestly accept you.
Ales you can honestly say 'I will try my hardest to be active', I won’t even look over your profile. However, if you think you can be active, have at it. Also, don’t just say you'll be active and ditch in the end. I want you to be serious about this.
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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2010 6:24 pm
I will try my hardest to be active.
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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2010 8:46 pm
Mkay, I’ll take your word for it.
Anyways, there are a few things that need some serious reviewing. The main thing is the 'Fairytale Appearance'. I like the whole idea of a girl being Peter Pan it’s very retro. However, the only thing is, it has to be a human thing that happens. There can’t be muscle movement and all that stuff. She’s has to use bandages to get rid of her breast and ‘man it up’ when she was in her costume. Moreover, in the long run, the school would want a more permanent solution. Basically, we're talking she'd eventually have to take testosterone.
Moreover, it’s very obvious that Peter Pan likes Windy (I’m going by the movie, now I may be wrong with the bases of the original story. That’s something I’ll read later), & I’m alright w/ whatever lesbian stuff that would have to happen for that. Nevertheless, plot wise; this is an ancient school and they wouldn’t pick a girl for a guy character. Even if they were okay with same sex relationships, they wouldn’t.
Basically, I think that if you want Peter Pan, you’re going to have to have a guy character. Sorry |:
In addition, I would like a lot more information for your character, whether you keep Polly but with a different fairytale or you change characters completely. I want paragraphs and stuff.
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Posted: Fri Aug 06, 2010 5:38 am
In the book, it's less of a romantic love and more of a need for a mother figure. The movie just makes him look like a playa. And Peter Pan was acted by only women until the 1980s. I feel like traditionally he's really more female then male because he's a kid he doesn't grow up, he doesn't really have a sex drive, he's just a boy.
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Posted: Fri Aug 06, 2010 11:57 am
Okay, with the bases that he was typically played by girls in the beginning, we'll let him have a girl person. Thanks for bringing all that in, i would have eventually found out, but i hadn't done my research yet.
With his fairytale though, there cant be any muscle change. She'll have to wrap up things and 'man it up', alright? So make sure to mention all of those things she has to do to become a guy.
&, again, if you could just add more details to appearance and bio that'd be awesome.
Once you edit that a tab, you'll be accepted.
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