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 Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 12:58 am
"You 'think' eh...I won't train you if you are not sure." Kagura gave the boy one of the piece of papers. "Focus some of your chakra on that paper." she said to him. That paper would react to the boy's chakra according to its element. If it was doton, it would change into a different kind of paper, covered with dust and somewhat more resistant, but after a few moments it would fall apart as if it was broken. If it was fuuton it would be cut in half. Suiton, it would become suddenly wet. Katon, it would be lit on fire and burn slowly. Raiton, it would become creased because of the electrical charge.
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 1:03 am
Hakura took the piece of paper in his hand and began to focus his chakra on it. He closed his eyes and focused when he opened his eyes the paper had been covered with dust and fell apart. After looking at it for a minute he looked at the teacher. "Does it mean what I think it means?"
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 1:14 am
"Alright now we can start working." she said to the boy. With his element being clearly known makes it easier for her to teach him. "Follow the handsigns with your eyes." she then started making handsigns, slowly so he could follow it with his eyes. "Doton, Tsuchi Gunjikoudou no Jutsu" After she was done, Kagura walked in front of her desk. The floor was not made of wood but of earth, so the jutsu could be taught there. As she walked, her chakra weakened the resistance of the earth she was in touch with, making it look like as if she was entering a pool, but it was the earth instead. After she fully entered the earth, she came back out. She entered the earth as if it was water and didn't even get her clothes dirty. "I hope you can do it." she said.
Academy Student - 3 posts to learn - Doton: Tsuchi Gunjikoudou no Jutsu (Earth Release: Earth Military Movement Technique)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to enter the ground and "swim" in it for a limited time.
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 1:20 am
"Ok if this backfires you'll get me out right?"
Hakura got ready to performed the jutsu. He did the handseals exactly as she had done them at least he though he did "Tsuchi Gunjikoudou no Jutsu" And nothing happened "Hey why didn't anything happen I did everything right, at least I think I did." He hadn't but he didn't quite know it till she showed him again.
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 1:23 am
"Alright that was interesting time to try it again." He got ready again before repeating the handsigns "Tsuchi Gunjikoudou no Jutsu." This time it worked... kind of he was able to get most of himself into the dirt but in end the end he got himself stuck from the waste down. "Ok c'mon I could've sworn I had it that time."
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 1:27 am
After freaking out for a moment he calmed down realizing he'd have to do the jutsu again to get himself out. He performed the handseals "Tsuchi Gunjikoudou no Jutsu." This time however the jutsu actually worked as he began to walk in the earth a litle bit before he walked himself all the way out. "Yup I think I got it." He said as he proudly walked out of the ground.
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 1:28 am
Kagura clapped her hands as the boy had succesfully walked out of the ground. "I hope you are ready for the next jutsu." she said to him and performed more handsigns. "Doton, bunshin no jutsu." she said as from the earth beside her, the earth rose and began to take the form of a human untill it was completely like Kagura. "Your turn." she said.
Academy Student - 3 posts to learn - Doton: Bunshin no Jutsu (Earth Release: Earth Clone Skill)
Description: This jutsu creates one single clone out of the ground. Its defense is incredible, and it's very powerful, but lacks speed. Two hits will destroy the bunshin. (Next time, you could put the three posts in one single post and divide each part using [1/3] , [2/3] and [3/3] or something like that, make things easier and avoid the double post)
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 1:35 am
(Finished editing I'm sorry I just misunderstood and messed up.)
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 1:39 am
(It's alright now, just make sure it doesn't happen again.)
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 1:41 am
Bunshin no Jutsu 1/3
This was definately one of the more interesting jutsu he'd seen Hakura thought as he watched her perform the jutsu. He himself tried to perform it "Bunshin no Jutsu" but it didn't quite work out
he thought he'd saw the earth ris a little bit but that could've been from a random unrelated minor earthquake.
Bunshin no Jutsu 2/3
'Alright no one ever gets it on the first try' Hakura thought to himself as he prepared to do it again. "Bunshin no Jutsu" This time about two-thirds came out of the ground and it was interesting to watch the arm had mostly formed and they looked much liike his own and even the face had mostly formed many of his features on it only they where made of rock. However it crumpled back into the ground before it could be completed. "Ahhh I almost had it."
Bunshin no Jutsu 3/3
"Ok this time I'm going to make it work." He said to himself as he performed the hand seals this time however he said the jutsu much more quietly than he had before but it still worked and he watched in amazement as an exact copy of himself came out of the ground. It came out slowly at first slowly taking his features as it did so until it was the same height as him and looked exactly like him in every way. He was so excited that it worked he gave the copy a high-five. "Owww!" He said he had forgotten that the clone was made of rock and hurt his hand. "Ok despite my ingured hand I think I got it."
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 6:03 am
(( Try to describe the technique a bit more thoroughly. It helps you understand what the jutsu is really doing, and makes you look like a better writer too. Show the reader what it looks like to see a clone forming from the earth.
Also, you should refrain from trying to control other people's characters, such as your post about the other girl laughing at you. She doesn't seem like the type to laugh at much to me. And it's not your character to control. ))
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 10:30 am
Akahana pondered to herself for a moment. She remembered that during her training with her parents that she had been given the same kind of paper. The paper made from a special tree that would react accordingly to the person who touched it. Akahana remembered that when she took hold of the paper it beganto crease and shrivel up in her hands. "Yes Ma'am, I remember my own Element. It was Raiton, the lightning element." Akahana replied. She watched Kagura train Hakura in Earth style Jutsu, waiting patiently for it to be her turn for training.
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 12:05 pm
"Alright boy, sit back for now." she said to Hakura and then turned to Akahana. "At least one of the students is sure of her own element. Well if you are a raiton user then..." she said and then began to perform handsigns at a pace she would be able to follow with her eyes. As she finishes the handsigns, her chakra produces an electrical charge that takes begins to take form of her body in front of her, turning into an electrical charged clone. "Raikou, Bunshin no jutsu."
Academy Student - 3 posts to learn - Raikou Bunshin no Jutsu (Lightning Clone Technique)
Description: This technique makes a simple clone of the shinobi however unlike the standard bunshin, which is a genjutsu, this bunshin takes an actual physical form through the use of electrically charged chakra. One can easily touch and hold this clone like it was in fact an actual person, however when it is attacked it quickly disperses into smoky, hot air. It is also able to attack using taijutsu, however it's ability to attack is around 1/10 in perspective to the user, in return for this weakness it's attacks deliver shocks of electricity to the opponent's body.
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 10:24 pm
Akahana watched Kagura-sensei's hands carefully. When Kagura had finished with the release seal, her chakra began to produce an electrical charge. Akahana watched as Kagura-sensei's electricity began to take the form of Kagura, making a perfect clone of herself. Akahana smiled. A jutsu that would have many uses to her in upcoming missions. Akahana would make full use of her Jutsu arsenal. She stood from the desk she had been sitting in, eager to get started.
[1/3] Akahana took a stance, her hands pressed together in a seal. She began to circulate chakra through her body, and slowly she made the different hand signs, however she held off on releasing the jutsu. Akahana would do this a few more times until she was able to make the hand signs more rapidly.
[2/3] After she was comfortable with the hand signs, Akahana quickly made them one last time, finally releasing the jutsu. "Raikou, Bunshin no jutsu." She chanted. Electricity ejected from her body and began to form in front of her. Akahana pushed the electricity out from her body to the focused point. The electricity began to take shape of the young girl as it slowly materialized in front of her from the ground up.
[3/3] Akahana only pushed a little further, when finally the clone had appeared in it's full form. A perfect replica of the young girl. She looked at the clone as if it were a mirror, having it reflect her own motions. "You look good." She mused. She flicked the clone in the head to have it disappear. It disappeared into a cloud of hot smoky air, however she had forgotten that the clone was made out of electricity. The girl was electrocuted, her hair shooting starting to 'frizz' as it stood on end.
The shocking had finally subsided. Akahana coughed a little, a char of smoke escaping her mouth. "Ow..."
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