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kaenmikoto

PostPosted: Mon Jan 02, 2006 10:19 pm


hm...

combined, they can't form
or

the elements thrive
PostPosted: Tue Jan 03, 2006 7:10 am


Dragon Born
I need help with the last line in this hiecoe(sp).
Fire and water
True poetry in motion

The balance is right

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 03, 2006 1:46 pm


Ya can't kepp the priestess down. I'm back with avengance!!!!!! like I went anywhere... stare
PostPosted: Tue Jan 03, 2006 10:48 pm


please dont call yourself priestess...it makes you sound like a shman.... whee

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 8:47 pm


On many dark nights,
The howl
Pierces the sky,

In the mighty wolf
The howl
Slumbers in wait,

Within the heart
The howl
Is waiting too

To the many Evils
The howl
Means the end of their ways
PostPosted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 9:27 pm


Dragon Born
On many dark nights,
The howl
Pierces the sky,

In the mighty wolf
The howl
Slumbers in wait,

Within the heart
The howl
Is waiting too

To the many Evils
The howl
Means the end of their ways

quite nice...

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kaenmikoto

PostPosted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 10:05 pm


figures... stare
PostPosted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 1:29 pm


Dragon Born
On many dark nights,
The howl
Pierces the sky,

In the mighty wolf
The howl
Slumbers in wait,

Within the heart
The howl
Is waiting too

To the many Evils
The howl
Means the end of their ways

7/10 I like it. First, you associated it with the night, etc., then, it seemed like the mystery is also with the heart. but I don't understand the last stanza... I tried to analyze it, but I can't seem to get it. Care to expound?

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 4:40 pm


The Walking Contradiction
Dragon Born
On many dark nights,
The howl
Pierces the sky,

In the mighty wolf
The howl
Slumbers in wait,

Within the heart
The howl
Is waiting too

To the many Evils
The howl
Means the end of their ways

7/10 I like it. First, you associated it with the night, etc., then, it seemed like the mystery is also with the heart. but I don't understand the last stanza... I tried to analyze it, but I can't seem to get it. Care to expound?

think of the howl is pecgine(sp) to the evil in the poem.
PostPosted: Sun Jan 15, 2006 7:56 pm


^^ I had a poem called "The Lone Wolf Howls"
Although it was all about a wolf and the desert.
:XP:

I do have poetry that is metaphorical and such, however I haven't posted much of it up.
^^
In my guild there is a poem that I wrote and submitted on my friend's account while I was at her house. ^ Apparently people thought it was pretty good. ^^

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 16, 2006 11:44 am


Nice poem puzzles. AND I AM NOT A SHMAN! Thats not even a word...
PostPosted: Mon Jan 16, 2006 3:37 pm


Priestess Killer
Nice poem puzzles. AND I AM NOT A SHMAN! Thats not even a word...

It's "Shaman". It means "Medican man", or an equivilent, depending on the society.

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kaenmikoto

PostPosted: Mon Jan 16, 2006 9:24 pm


no, i meant shman. its a mix between "she" and "man". in other words, an abbreviation for "she-man". i mean come on, you are a guy and you were called "priestess" stare
PostPosted: Tue Jan 17, 2006 2:48 am


...That would just stay "she-man"... And it says he's a Priestess KILLER, not "I'm a Priestess, and, oh, yeah, I kill"

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kaenmikoto

PostPosted: Tue Jan 17, 2006 11:44 pm


if you read our previous conversations, it would be shown that we discussing what people called him. many were to lazy to type "priestess killer" so they all called him priestess. and "shman" is more fun to say. xp
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