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 Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 12:46 pm
Mildly edited. I decided to be a meany and made her get a cramp in the ribs during the run too. twisted
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Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 12:57 pm
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Rogue Phoenix Fire Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 4:22 pm
Sorry, I know I asked this today, but I've already forgotten. When do you think the other two prologues will be up? (At least this way I can look back here if I need to know again)
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Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 5:14 pm
XD
They'll be up sometime this week if everything works out as it all should. Possibly wednesday.
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Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 2:05 pm
Rawr! Just posting here again...
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 12:14 pm
All for prologues are up!
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 1:22 pm
A black wolf stood close to the small, wooden cabin but far enough away so the woman inside couldn’t see him, but close enough so he could see that she was going to be okay. He’s stance was as tense as he felt, but he was glad she was okay and that the most damage was a bump on the head and a couple of scratches. Nothing like the girl before her. My control hadn’t been tested like that before. He shook his wolfy head. Stop thinking about that! There was nothing you could have done in the state you were in. The picture of the girl, mutilated and covered in blood and black, flowing hair, popped into his head. His anger swelled up. He decided that she would be fine.
He stood and turned away from the cabin and paused. He didn’t want to leave her; something , mostly guilt, was holding him back. Fighting the urged to plant himself outside her window, he ran off into the blackness of the forest. His anger pushed him faster that he’s legs could go, or wanted to. The more distance he got, the heavier he felt. Finally he made it to the cave he called home. It was weird to him, after being inside a normal home like hers. It made him feel much more of the outsider he was. You can’t live like that. You’re a danger to every one, including yourself. You proved that tonight.
Oh be quiet! It was your fault we went after her. He silently shouted in his mind. His body shuddered as his bones snapped and twisted back into human form. He let out a howl that turned into a scream as he changed into the form he was born with. The fur disappeared leaving reformed muscle and skin. The muzzle on his face was replaced with a very handsome face of a young man, no older than 23.
His hands gripped the dirt as they balled up while he was on his knees. The guy’s teeth ground in a sound that was painful to listen to and feel. He slowly stood up, remembering how to use two legs again. He was shaky and dizzy from the resetting of his insides. He braced himself against the cave wall and felt around for his jeans. Being unable to see in the dark with human eyes made it extremely difficult but he eventually found his pants. Putting them on was harder than finding them…
He pressed his forehead against the rock and pounded his fists next to it. “I almost killed her. I came so close to ripping her throat out and ending another life.” But you didn’t. Do you really think she’ll care if you didn’t kill her? She’ll just go one with her pitiful little life like nothing happened and forget us completely, dismiss us as another nightmare. The wolf inside of his head growled. We should just go back and kill her. It saves her torment of the day-to-day insanity she probably undergoes.
“I won’t do that to another girl. I won’t take another human life.” He shut his eyes, and then reopened them. The lighting was better now; his eyes were adjusting well. Not only that, but the full moon had come out from behind the clouds. The wolf inside wanted to hunt more, but he couldn’t do anymore. There was too much phasing and it weakened him significantly. He sat in the mouth of the cave, leaning against a large boulder, staring at the moon. A normal wolf habit, also a habit picked up living the way he did, Away from people and in a cave. He was an odd version of a hermit.
There he stayed, watching the silver circle glide across the sky. He tried to clear his mind and calm himself enough to sleep, but it was no use. All he could think about was the girl. Who is she to you, anyways? The wolf thought. And why was she playing with fire in our territory?
End of chapter 2. Pg23
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 7:59 pm
Blood_Thorn07 A black wolf stood close to the small, wooden cabin but far enough away so the woman inside couldn’t see him, but close enough so he could see that she was going to be okay. He’s stance was as tense as he felt, but he was glad she was okay and that the most damage was a bump on the head and a couple of scratches. Nothing like the girl before her. My control hadn’t been tested like that before. He shook his wolfish head. Stop thinking about that! There was nothing you could have done in the state you were in. The picture of the girl, mutilated and covered in blood and black, flowing hair, popped into his head. His anger swelled up. He decided that she would be fine.
He stood and turned away from the cabin and paused. He didn’t want to leave her; something , mostly guilt, was holding him back. Fighting the urge to plant himself outside her window, he ran off into the blackness of the forest. His anger pushed him faster that he’s legs could go, or wanted to. The more distance he got, the heavier he felt. Finally he made it to the cave he called home. It was weird to him, after being inside a normal home like hers. It made him feel much more like the outsider he was. You can’t live like that. You’re a danger to every one, including yourself. You proved that tonight. You proved that a long time ago.
Oh be quiet! It was your fault we went after her. He silently shouted in his mind. His body shuddered as his bones snapped and twisted back into human form. He let out a howl that turned into a scream as he changed into the form he was born with. The fur disappeared leaving reformed muscle and skin. The muzzle on his face was replaced with a very handsome face of a young man, no older than twenty-three.
His hands gripped at the dirt as they balled up while he was on his knees. The guy’s teeth ground in a sound that was painful to listen to and feel. He slowly stood up, remembering how to use two legs again. He was shaky and dizzy from the resetting of his insides. He braced himself against the cave wall and felt around for his jeans. Being unable to see in the dark with human eyes made it extremely difficult but he eventually found his pants. Putting them on was harder than finding them…
He pressed his forehead against the rock and pounded his fists next to it. “I almost killed her. I came so close to ripping her throat out and ending another life.” But you didn’t. Do you really think she’ll care if you didn’t kill her? She’ll just go one with her pitiful little life like nothing happened and forget us completely, dismiss us as another nightmare. The wolf inside of his head growled. We should just go back and kill her. It saves her torment of the day-to-day insanity she probably undergoes.
“I won’t do that to another girl. I won’t take another human life.” He shut his eyes, and then reopened them. The lighting was better now; his eyes were adjusting well. Not only that, but the full moon had come out from behind the clouds. The wolf inside wanted to hunt more, but he couldn’t do anymore. There was too much phasing and it weakened him significantly. He sat in the mouth of the cave, leaning against a large boulder, staring at the moon. A normal wolf habit, also a habit picked up living the way he did, away from people and in a cave. He was an odd version of a hermit.
There he stayed, watching the silver circle glide across the sky. He tried to clear his mind and calm himself enough to sleep, but it was no use. All he could think about was the girl. Who is she to you, anyways? The wolf thought. And why was she playing with fire in our territory? End of chapter 2. Pg23 Very minor stuff to fix. (I added one sentence! Can you find it?)
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Rogue Phoenix Fire Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 7:06 am
I can't find it actually.
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Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 7:49 am
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 5:46 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 11:23 am
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Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 12:21 pm
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Posted: Mon Mar 29, 2010 3:20 am
Rogue Phoenix Fire Blood_Thorn07 You proved that tonight. You proved that a long time ago.
The first sentence is yours. I just though the second one fit. ^_^ (Leave it to me for a character to feel slightly more tortured right?)
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