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 Posted: Tue Mar 30, 2010 7:12 pm
Please do not fight in the LT hall we are all mature here no? Its a good RP idea and i like it Even though its the sloppy copy.
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Posted: Tue Mar 30, 2010 7:13 pm
no no its ok i should have put the fact that kage hopefully will revise and edit it
and thnx metalfist at least you seem to like it
ok ok this is how it goes since you cant understand it in rp form ill just tell tell you like this
first i was out side training and i went into bankai mode just to go into bankai mode .while i was in bankai mode i felt a spike of rietsu rise from the old shrine of my clans dead warlord . i walked over to the shrine and there was a well there (watering well)so i peered down into the well to see what was down there but didnt se anything so i turned around and started to walk away when i started to walk a huge beam of red or blue rietsu (wich ever i want it to be) shot out of the well then disapeared into the sky and a amulet fell into my hands now being the care free guy i am i put it on (this part i changed ) as i put the mysteriouse amulet on the sky turned black and the moon turned red ( details will be added sooner or later ) the amulet started to glow bright red and red rietsu started to come out of the amulet encasing me in a red ball of rietsu and infusing my body with evil red rietsu . riyo ( my zanpaktou spirit) appears behind me and is also incased in the evil rietsu . as the ball of rietsu grows biger it starts to crack and soon it explode and out pops evil kosetsu the new warlord of takaharu clan.
the amulet plays a big role people becasue it rises dead clan warriors . hurray for zombie soul reapers and clan followers . stare
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Posted: Tue Mar 30, 2010 11:04 pm
Kaicho stands from his chair and makes his presence aware with a loud clap.
" Now Now then, Whats going on here then eh? do i need to report this to your captains ?
You seem to forget that you are in the company of the Central 46 commander, here you are argueing over a sloppy copy of a role play "
Kaicho turns to squad 7 Lieutenant,
" Thank you for not raising your voice in here "
He turns to x_Kosetsu_x with a slight frown,
" You there boy, how on earth do you expect a role play to be approved if it is sloppy eh? If you want a good chance of having it approved then it has to be PERFECT when you show it to the captains, I will ask you to recall it and polish the role play off, Make it look neat and efficient, Not sloppy, Claiming that youve made sloppy work, then shouting at people when they give you constructive critisism doesnt help your record young man, Consider this a warning "
Kaicho turns to the corner and sits down again
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Posted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 4:25 pm
kosetus turns around then looks at the man talking to him " oi i just re- did it ok and i told kage that i was going to make a sloppy copy first and then i would make the real one. beside i just made it 2 days ago so dont worry about it just focus on this one ok. since evryone is so determend to give me advice now is the time to do so since kage just calmed me down ".
kosetsu sits back and waits.
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