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 Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 10:30 am
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 10:34 am
Mint, you DO watch or read Bleach right? gonk
Anything you need to know, just head over to the guild info subforum--it should be there.
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 10:36 am
yes but i never saw or read a shikai or bankai
i haven't watched bleach or read it in [not saying the number you might pass out] month
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 10:52 am
@ Mint:
Well the info forum is a good place to start.
If you need to know more, the Bleach Wiki is also a good place to catch up on abilities,and names of various things.
@ Zann:
Ha the changes have been made (Do they seem like fair abilites? XD)
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 11:18 am
Aiko Mashiko  Personal Information Name: Aiko Mashiko
Age: 21 and looks childish
Gender: female
Birthday:7/11 General Information Division: 7th
Seat: captain
Specialty: power class?
Personality: sweet,childish at times
Equipment: katana[Zanpakuto]
Biography:in the human world whens he was only 16 her father got angery finding out she was gona move out, he though she was running away so instead of locking her in her room he beat her till she could barely breath. On the way to the hospital she died of lung failure and is now in the soul society as a captain she is still childish as a 14 year old but when near other captains or Leuteniants she is strict and mature Zanpakuto Information  Sealed: a light pink blade almost pale like with the 7th squads symbol on the hilt of the sword. the sheath of the katana is in, is black to blend with the shinigami outfit with a line of white going around it this is actually connected tot he katana as when the katana is in the sheath the white string wraps around the sheath or Aiko does it herself
Shikai: the name of Aiko's sword is onbin pittsa[gentle pizza xD] the spirit is very gentle that's where the onbin comes from the pittsa well....aiko is always hungery and when meeting her spirit found out it was just the same![[ rofl ]] her sword and aiko are very friendly to eachother the spirit? world she saw her swords spirit a more mature spirit then she hoped but even the sword can deal with her childish play when the Shikai is released the sword turned white and thick to hold against stronger attacks the string will change from white to light blue almost like cotton candy. the ability of Aiko's shikai is ice powers[i think it's the right word for it....] or kinda like Toushirou's and hard to explain
Bankai: her bankai is similar to Hitsugaya Toushirou's bankai her swords spirit when released if the form of a[must resist saying giant icecreamxD] snake the snake is pale pink like her sword but has a black line down it's back as a spirit you can see it easily it's the swords white string turned black when the Bankai is released the sword turns bright pink mostly to distract so she can attack and the string on the end changes it's color from white to black Quote: Stats: 30
Speed/Agility: 10
Power/Strength: 5
Stamina/Endurance:5
Reiatsu:10
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 11:26 am
-Reading over it-
Don't stress out you'll be fine. I think it's okay so far.
Just fix the below:
Well your missing your stats or rather "Death Counts"
Divide those 30 points into those 4 stats in a way you think will help your RPC.
Also you might want to re-word your Bankai, since it's not a dragon you can say it's a "Pink Serpent Spirit with a black line down it's spine, and was truly just a reverse of the swords, string" Seeing how you don't need to describe how you got your Shikai or the spirits personality yet either. Your Sealed seems to be fine though.
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 11:33 am
it's early in the morning of course i won't describe gonk and just check over the stuff already filled out>_>
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 11:37 am
@ Mint:
Well it's early afternoon where I am.
Though it's exactly what you did XD describing your spirit and relationship.
neutral Well everything else seems alright thus far. You should be alright a bit later. Though Zann has the final say -shrug-
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A City Of Fools Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 11:39 am
Constipated Emotion Raynen Katzen Personal Information Name: Raynen Katzen
Age: 20. Appears to be 14-15
Gender: Male
Birthday: 12/23 General Information Squad: 2nd
Seat: Captain?
Specialty: Agility
Personality: Raynen is a genius to say the least. He can solve just about anything you throw at him. He always has been able to. When he was six he even did the taxes for the orphanage he was born in. He has a god complex that makes him think of himself above most others, which he is for the most part, considering his immense intelligence. He is a little insane, due to some traumatizing things that happened at his orphanage.
Equipment: Zanpakuto
Biography: Raynen was born in an orphanage. Well… No that’s not right. He was BORN in a hospital. He became conscious for the first time in an orphanage. Miss partridges orphanage for troubled young’uns they called it. What a dreadful place. Raynen hated it with every fiber of his being. He hated it so much he thought of burning it down many times. No one could stop him. He had the mental processing skills of a super computer. He never did, although he ended up doing something much worse. Over the years his hate festered and grew until he could barely contain it. This hell hole he was forced to live in because his parents didn’t want him was just that, a hell hole. Raynen eventually let out his hate and rage. He blacked out for what seemed like hours. He woke up to find himself praying in the dark. It was quite odd, as he believed not in gods, nor deities, or even shinigami. His extremely logical thought process prevented him from such things. He stood up to turn on the lights but found himself tripping over something. He finally made it to the light, but when he turned it on he wished he hadn’t. Bodies everywhere. He was in the main room of the orphanage. Miss Partridge was dead and scattered all about, while the rest of the kids were… well they were all over the wall, In a row of crosses. The image burned into his mind for the rest of his short life. He possessed an incredible skill to hate. He killed himself an hour later. He took the emergency gun and just shot himself through the mouth. Somehow he made it to the sereitei. Apparently he didn’t feel much remorse and him killing himself was simply the product of his own bodies revulsion to the sights it saw. Raynen himself didn’t care deep in his subconscious. Zanpakuto Information 
Shikai: Rain, Leviathan!: The blade Seemingly disappears. The blade becomes gleaming silver gauntlets over Raynens arms. They have spiked knuckles and often release a small strike of lightning on contact. His speed increases twice over as well as his physical strength. The gauntlets have a thin metal plating that extends over his shoulders and down his spine in the form of a metal tail. He can control this at will, like a monkey. [Achieved? Because I'm a captain?]
Bankai: Drown out thine enemies, World Serpent, Ouroboros!: His bankai makes his zanpakuto long and it grows to about 9ft so it covers alot of area and has long range. His brute power goes down a bit from his shikai's form. But, his speed goes to intense levels. He can create sonic booms with a flick of the zanpakuto. His bankai's secret is that his blade has even longer range then you think. It has a wind boundary so it can attack you even if you dodge. Though it will give a small cut to those who dodge it. Because of this ability if he were to fight someone of equal power he would have the upper hand because of it. [Achieved, because I'm a captain?] Quote: Stats: 30
Speed/Agility: 10
Power/Strength: 7
Stamina/Endurance: 8
Reiatsu:5 [[Just so you know Zann, I wasn't actually going to multiply the stats. Haha. It was more like me RPing the speed increase out, but this works just as well. And by intense speeds for the bankai, I mean that his normal movements are only slightly slower than flash step. Is that ok? I'm testing out the limits on this. xD]]
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 11:41 am
Con's is approved, Change Zann asked for was added....though I'm still not sure if you'll have Shikai and Bankai though 0.0
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 11:44 am
ame Here ![User Image](https://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g37/Dark_Prescense/Girl Anime/ninja.jpg<img src="https://graphics.gaiaonline.com/images/s.gif" alt="User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show." title="User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show." class="bbcode-swap-blocked-image" rel="malformed url" />) Personal Information Name: kyomi sonen
Age: 14 looks 10
Gender: female
Birthday: 11/1 General Information Division: 4 Seat/Rank: 5th Specialty: speed Personality: mellow,when fighting very immature Equipment: 2 katana blades both zanpakuto Biography: kyomi lived in a village that gives off a large amount of spirit pressure so some soul reapers come there to regain there power but then hollows started to invade the village and took half of the spirit pressure the hollows killed kyomis parents so then she became a soul reaper out of anger.. Zanpakuto Information  Sealed:kakonto was found by kyomi in a cavern that small hollows protect
Shikai: can cause blast of light but stays the same the only change is the swords turn black and yellow (sword handle is black,sword blades are yellow)
Bankai: the swords both become bigger and longer the light turns into lightning which gives kyomi more speed. Quote: Death Counts: 30
Speed/Agility:30
Power/Strength: 10
Stamina/Endurance: 12
Reiatsu: 7
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 11:45 am
woud you rather it be a giant icecream as th spirit(^_^)? and i finished it fnally xD
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 11:47 am
Ino...Denied, be more descriptive altogether....you like made 1 word sentences that didn't even describe anything.
Mint: You weren't really suppose to describe what your spirit was...more like what the Shikai's appearance was, it's form when you call upon it, not it's spirit, and Bankai your suppose to describe what it looks like when it;s called upon as well....
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 11:50 am
beh i'll do that later and isnt that the same thing what the spirit was and its appearence?
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 11:53 am
@ Con:
I agree with ichengo, did Zann say they were fine? If not the worse case is a edit -nod- Though I don't see them as messed up so I guess your free to move it. If that is not the case, Zann will say something.
@ Mint:
-shrugs- I don't know it's your character. Sound like an amusing concept to me though. It could be a snake made out of ice cream (which would still throw me through a loop) No the spirit is what the sword really is. When they say appearance here they mean (How does the Sword Change Shape if at all? , Example: Rangiku's Shikai turns her sword, into Smoke)
@ ino:
Please ,Edit then submit it again , no need to rush.
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